届高考英语二轮复习书面表达针对练六推荐信

2018届高考英语二轮复习书面表达针对练六推荐信本文简介：书面表达针对练(六)推荐信题目要求(2017·陕西省重点中学协作体高考适应性考试)假设你是李华，计划今年暑假去美国旅游两周，请给你的美国朋友David写一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：1．提出你对旅游地点的要求并请David推荐地点；2．你对住宿和交通的要求；3．请他代为预订宾馆并对他表示感谢。注意：1

2018届高考英语二轮复习书面表达针对练六推荐信本文内容：

书面表达针对练(六)

推荐信

题目要求

(2017·陕西省重点中学协作体高考适应性考试)

假设你是李华，计划今年暑假去美国旅游两周，请给你的美国朋友David写一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：

1．提出你对旅游地点的要求并请David推荐地点；

2．你对住宿和交通的要求；

3．请他代为预订宾馆并对他表示感谢。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear

David，

____________________________________________________

____________________________________________________

____________________________________________________

____________________________________________________

____________________________________________________

Best

regards!

Yours，

Li

Hua

四步作文法

第一步

审题谋篇

1．体裁

推荐信

2．时态

一般现在时

3．人称

第一人称为主

第二步

要点要全

1．一想到假期里要去美国旅游我感到很兴奋。

I

feel

very

excited

at

the

thought

that

I_am_going_to_visit_America_in_the_holiday.

2．对我来说，这是第一次独自出国旅行，所以我需要你的帮助。

It

s

the

first

time

for

me

to

travel_abroad_on_my_own,_so

I_need_your_help.

3．我想游览一些有美景的地区，如高山、峡谷、河流和森林，在那里我可以享受大自然的美。

I

d

like

to

visit

some

areas

of

scenic

beauty,such_as_mountains,_valleys,_rivers_and_forests.

There

I

could

enjoy_the_beauty_of_nature.

4．我更喜欢住在宾馆，我希望周围的交通不太拥挤，我要租一辆车开始我的旅行。

I

prefer_to_live_in_the_hotel

and

I

hope

the_traffic_around_isn

s_too_heavy.

I

m

going

to

rent_a_car_to_start_my_travel.

5．请帮我预订一个宾馆。

Please

help_me_book_a_hotel.

第三步

句式要美

1．句3合并升级为where引导的定语从句

I

d_like_to_visit_some_areas_of_scenic_beauty,_such_as_mountains,_valleys,_rivers_and_forests,_where_I_could_enjoy_the_beauty_of_nature.

2．句4合并升级为because引导的状语从句

I_prefer_to_live_in_the_hotel_and_I_hope_the_traffic_around_isn

t_too_heavy_because_I

m_going_to_rent_a_car_to_start_my_travel.

第四步

衔接要顺

用适当的衔接词串句成文

Dear_David，

The

summer

holiday

is

drawing

near.

I

feel

very

excited

at

the

thought

that

I

am

going

to

visit

America

in

the

holiday.

It

s

the

first

time

for

me

to

travel

abroad

on

my

own,so

I

need

your

help.

I

d

like

to

visit

some

areas

of

scenic

beauty,such

as

mountains,valleys,rivers

and

forests,where

I

could

enjoy

the

beauty

of

nature.

Please

recommend

several

places

to

me.

Besides,I

prefer

to

live

in

the

hotel

and

I

hope

the

traffic

around

isn

t

too

heavy

because

I

m

going

to

rent

a

car

to

start

my

travel.

Please

help

me

book

a

hotel.

Thanks

a

lot.

I

m

expecting

to

hear

from

you,and

I

m

looking

forward

to

meeting

you.

Best_regards!

Yours，

Li_Hua

改写两用

这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中有10处错误，请改正。

Dear

David，

The

summer

holiday

is

around

the

corner

and

my

dream

of

travelling

to

America

is

to

come

true,which

makes

me

to

feel

excited.

Which

you

know,this

is

my

first

visit

to

your

country,so

I

have

a

request

you

(should)

do

me

a

favour.

I

would

visit

some

places

of

great

interests,which

can

stand

by

the

characteristic

of

your

country.

Would

you

please

recommend

my

some

scenic

spots?

As

for

accommodation,I

d

like

to

live

in

a

peace

place,around

which

the

traffic

should

not

be

too

heavy,for

I

would

rent

an

mountain

bike

for

convenience.

Please

help

me

book

so

a

hotel

in

advance.

Much

thanks!

Looking

forward

to

your

early

reply.

Best

regards!

Yours，

Li

Hua

答案：

Dear

David，

The

summer

holiday

is

around

the

corner

and

my

dream

of

travelling

to

America

is

to

come

true,which

makes

me

feel

excited.

you

know,this

is

my

first

visit

to

your

country,so

I

have

a

request

you

(should)

do

me

a

favour.

I

would

visit

some

places

of

great

，

which

can

stand

the

characteristic

of

your

country.

Would

you

please

recommend

some

scenic

spots?

As

for

accommodation,I

d

like

to

live

in

a

place,around

which

the

traffic

should

not

be

too

heavy,for

I

would

rent

mountain

bike

for

convenience.

Please

help

me

book

a

hotel

in

advance.

thanks!

Looking

forward

to

your

early

reply.

Best

regards!

Yours，

Li

Hua