英语作文分析（1）
星期三，我来到学校发现英语试卷在抽屉里放的，我便看自己的错误。
首先，我听力错了三道，扣了6分，唉，真不该！然后第6题A.making B.running C.dance(选出不同类），我选了A，应该是C，这道题扣了1分；第7题What_____the bird doing?(选择）A.am B.is C.are，我选择了C.，应该是B.，还有一道题，Look at_____girl. A.this B.an C.these，我选择了C.，应该是A.，这道题扣了4分。
这么说来，我考了89分，要是我听力没错保准我能考个90多分。
我要把英语学好！
英语作文分析（2）
无论是身处学校还是步入社会，大家都写过作文，肯定对各类作文都很熟悉吧，借助作文人们可以实现文化交流的目的.。相信写作文是一个让许多人都头痛的问题，以下是小编收集整理的关于考试分析的英语作文，供大家参考借鉴，希望可以帮助到有需要的朋友。
Resultsis more important now.But it is difficult for many students to study it.Now I make some suggestion,maybe can help you.First,you should take notes and take them here and there.When you’re free,you can take them out and read it.Next,you should read Results loudly.Many students know many grammars,but talking with others is hard.
So reading is very important.It can make progress in your talking and listening,and it can also make you get excited,let you have a nice day.Then,talk with people in it’s interesting and very used.Finally,most importantly,try your best to learn English.No Resultspains,no gains.I hope you can improve your LearnGood luck!
英语作文分析（3）
在平平淡淡的学习、工作、生活中，大家对作文都不陌生吧，借助作文人们可以实现文化交流的目的。怎么写作文才能避免踩雷呢？以下是小编收集整理的中考英语作文十大常见错误分析，仅供参考，欢迎大家阅读。
1.审题不清
如20xx年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。
2.拼写错误
拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。
3.名词单复数问题：
误Myfatherandmymotherisallteacher.
正Myfatherandmymotherarebothteachers.
4.缺少动词
在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：I'mtired.
误IhappyIcancometoBeijingZoo.
正IamhappyIcancometoBeijingZoo.
误Theapplescheap.I'lltakesome.
正Theapplesarecheap.I'lltakesome.
5.缺少介词、冠词等
还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。
误Becauseheavyrainwecan'tholdthesportsmeeting.
正Becauseoftheheavyrainwecan'tholdthesportsmeeting.
6.代词的误用
英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。
误ImotherandIwenttotheshoptobuyapresentforIfather.
正MymotherandIwenttotheshoptobuyapresentformyfather.
7.句子不完整
有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。
误Manystudentshaveahardtimepassingalltheteststogetintocollege.Forexample,myfriendinhighschool.
(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的'错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)
正Manystudentshaveahardtimepassingalltheteststogetintocollege,forexample,myfriendinhighschool.
8.前后不一致
所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等.
例1.Whenonehaveknowledge,hecandowhathewanttodo.
(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么.)
剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致.
改为Whenonehasknowledge,hecandowhathewants(todo)
9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误
汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：
误WhenIgettothestationthetrainleave.
正WhenIgottothestationthetrainhadleft.
10.综合性错误：
综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。
英语作文分析（4）
The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in In the meantime, the structure of the average family e_penses has changed, These graphs show the change
The biggest part of the average family e_penses is In 1998, the average family spent 25 percent of its income on In 2880, e_penses on housing rose to 42 Food and drink are the second biggest part of the average family In 1998, about 18% of the average income was spent on this In 20__, the figure grew to 30%. As a result of such increase in the e_penses on housing and food, e_penses on other items have been reduced from 57% in 1998 to 28%in
Thus, a conclusion can be drawn that as income increases, people can improve their living But still the average family has to spend a large part of income to meet the basic
【译文】
在我们康明城市家庭平均收入从8000元，每年1998至20__年的20,000元。在此期间，平均家庭支出结构也发生了变化。这些图形显示了明显的变化。
而一般家庭开支的最大部分是住房。 1998年，平均每个家庭花费了其对房屋的收入百分之25。在2880，关于住房支出上升到百分之42。食品和饮料是平均家庭开支第二大的一部分。 1998年，大约18%的平均收入是用于这一项目。 20__年，这一数字增长到30%。由于在费用等增加住房和食物，结果在其他项目的费用已经减少到1998年的57%，至20__年的28%。
因此，可以得出一个结论，随着收入的增加，人们可以改善他们的生活步骤。但仍是一般家庭要花费很大一部分收入，以满足基本需要。
英语作文分析（5）
新四大发明--移动支付
【题目要求】
随着微信，支付宝、银行APP等的发展想必大家都爱用他们支付购买。那么，通过网络进行的货币支付或资金流转给我们的生活带来了哪些好处呢?请你以移动支付的好处为主题写一篇英语短文。
【优秀范文】
The Advantages of Online Payment
Online payment has been advocated around the world, which is the future way to pay In China, Alipay is popular everywhere, even the small business can be finished by this advanced People play the joke that they don’t need to worry about the lack of The advantages of online payment are
Firstly, it saves people’s time to pay The use of online payment is carried out with a smart Especially when we go to the supermarket, there are always a lot of people waiting in the long The process of costing customers’ time is to take out the cash or use the credit card, because both customers and cashiers need to count the money or check the But now the cashier can just scan the phone and the bill will be paid and the customer can check
Second, people don’t have to worry about getting the fake Many years ago, people were easy to get fake money as they received the But now, as the cash have been used less, people won’t receive the fake cash without paper With the development of new applications, our life will be much
英语作文分析（6）
与父母相处
伴随着身心的日益发展，如何与父母相处是初中生必须要面对和解决的问题，这个话题经常会出现在平时的写作中。
【预测题目】
假如你是Han Mei，下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail，请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。
提示词语：listen to，mother’s love，care about，communicate with，get along with，smile
写作要求：语句通顺，书写工整;可用所给提示词语，也可以适当发挥;词数在60-80左右.
Dear Han Mei。
I’m afraid I’ve got a big problem My mother talks too much to She always tells me," Be careful while crossing the ”“Put on more ”“Did you do a good job at school?” And so I’m annoyed(烦恼). What shall I do?
Alice
【参考范文】
Dear Alice。
As a teenager,I met the same problem as But now I can get along better with my Here are some ideas for
Your mother talks much, because she cares about Maybe it’s not a good way, but it shows your mother’s So I think you should listen to If your opinions are different from your mother’s，you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking If your mother doesn’t take your advice，just keep silent and give her a
I hope what I say here can help you a
Yours
Han Mei
英语作文分析（7）
假如你是英才中学的学生李华,准备申请美国的一所大学,请根据以下提示写一封自荐信。内容包括:
在校表现;
获奖经历;
性格特点。
注意词数100左右;
可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua from Yingcai High I want to apply for the offer of your
Looking forward to your early
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Hua from Yingcai High I want to apply for the offer of your
As a student with many hobbies such as reading books, playing basketball and chess, I keep a balance among all the subjects, which makes me e_cellent in our Besides, I have a talent for English, and I won first prize in the English Speech Contest in my province last In addition, I’m easy to get along with and ready to help others in I believe I can adjust myself to the new environment
It has been my dream all the time to study in your university, which is famous for its academic I’d appreciate it if I could be
Looking forward to your early
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
英语作文分析（8）
一basic rules (写作规则)
1.信息提取—找全信息2.信息加工–- 重组信息 （适当的加入细节）
3.列提纲—确定句式，关联词，过渡词，较高级的句型和词汇
方法一:善用词汇 甚至善用高级词汇
A.They listened to the music on the beach.
B .They enjoyed the music on the beach.
A I wish you can help me.
B I’m looking forward to your help.
A They arrived early.
B They arrived as early as they could.
A His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised.
B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.
A I think learning English is interesting.
B I find it really fun to learn English .
A We should protect the environment.
B It’s our duty to protect the environment.
方法二:活用多种句型
A She is very young.
She can’t carry the heavy box.
B She is too young to carry the heavy box.
C She is so young that she can’t carry the …
D She is not old enough to carry the…
表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more not only…but also, neither…nor
2.表示选择: or, either…or
3.表示转折: but,however,although hough,after all,anyway
4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result
5.表示条件: if , unless
6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way, on the one hand…on the other hand
7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth
8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end
9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact
10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short
用恰当的连词，连接下面各句。
How do people spend their vacationWe made a survey and here is our report.
According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
增加连接词：How do people spend their vacationWe made a survey and here is our report.According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
美文赏析： We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to
visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
增加谚语后的效果。
According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. However, a few people have to work. As the saying goes, ―All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.‖ Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
谚语总结：
However, a few people have to work. ____________________________________________
As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes____________________________________________
Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People____________________________________________
who relax well work well. ____________________________________________
方法四:妙用引文和例子（多用于―第二段‖）
We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.
I often help my parents do housework, such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.
方法五 结尾：提出倡议或号召
Let’s …
Do it now ! / Don’t do it again!
As students, we should start from ourselves.
Don’t wait. Join us now!
Start to join us now!
Don’t put it off! Become a volunteer today!
How amazing! I can’t wait!
Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet!
Don’t hesitate(犹豫). It will be great fun!
怎样保护动物的优美语句
1. we shouldn’t eat wild animals.We should keep them away from our dinner. In this way,there will not be wild animals on sale. I think the hunters and killers will become fewer and fewer.
2 We need to protect animals better.We should give them fresh water to drink.We should make the forests bigger for animals in danger to live in.We should advice people not to kill animals beacause they are our friends!
3 we should protect the environment.We should stop people from cutting trees down. Without trees, wild animals will lose their home. And we will lose our animal friends. All of us should try our best to protect animals.
有关音乐的优美语句
1. Almost everyone is fond of music.I am a music lover.
2. Listening to music is a hobby in my life.
3.Listening to music will make me feel relaxed.
4.Whenever I feel sad, I can just turn on the radio and listen to some music.
5.Music can cheer me up when I am sad.
6.feelings of country people. Pop music can make us excited and happy.
7.I am willing to share their happiness and trouble. 8.Music comes from the heart and flows into the heart.
9.Music is a kind of language that all the people in the world can understand it