雅思6作文（1）
这名学生的例子——起初对雅思作文一无所知，两周之内能够拿到一个好的分数，说明短期突破确实可能。然而，前提是学生必须满足一些条件：1，有一定的语言基础，譬如说语法和词汇；2，见多识广，可以迅速想出观点；3，能够避免一些常见语法错误，快速掌握一些常用句子。
很明显，很多中国学生是不具备这些条件的。特别是从来没有接触社会的学生，对一些雅思题目基本上是一筹莫展。大家可以看看以下这些今年考过的作文题目：
题目1：社会需要关注“现在”，还是“未来”？
An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious.”
Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present. Do you agree or disagree?
题目2： 年轻人数目增多的影响
Some countries have an ever-increasing proportion of population who are aged 15 and younger. What is your opinion of the current and future effects it may have in those countries.
题目3：国际旅游使人有偏见，还是心胸开阔？
Some people think that international travel makes them prejudiced rather than broad-minded. Give the reason why people cannot benefit from travel and how to improve the understanding of countries you visit.
以上三个题目，分别涉及文化学、社会学和旅游学。这些题目，不要说考生，即便是雅思老师，如果不仔细思考，或者没看过相关的文章，都不可能短时间想出好的观点。我自己闲时常看各个学科的`教科书，才可以大概把握住题目的中心，和相关的观点。而其他的老师，大部分都是语言学出身，只是设计一些所谓的模板，就可以帮助学生考过雅思？难让人信服。因此，所谓的“十天突破雅思作文”，不过是吸引眼球的噱头——毕竟任何的考生，在基础很差的情况下，不可能十天之内突破任何一篇以上的文章。考生生搬硬套模板，仿佛效果立竿见影，可以凑足250字；然而，考官不在乎你的文章“看”起来怎么样，而是在乎你的文章“写”的怎么样。正如我在书中所说，雅思作文考察四个标准：
1， 语法（syntax）；
2， 词汇(lexical source)；
3， 应题(task response)；
4， 连贯性(consistency)；
我不相信,世上有那么妙法,可以帮助学生短期突破这四个标准的任何一个。如果有，我倒愿意回国一学。因此，我真诚地建议各位考生朋友，好好复习，抓好基础，放弃那种不劳而获的妄念。否则，你只会一次又一次地给雅思考试中心送钱。总有一天，当你们进入大学的时候，你们才知道所谓的“作文”，大概是怎么回事！
细节一：标点“独行侠”问题
按英文书写规定，标点应紧挨着它的附着意群进行标注，与另一个意群要以一个字符的空格隔开。
但是在实际作文中经常发现学生部论什么标点都会当作一个单词来对待，即标点前后都空下空格，结果给人以标点满天飞的感觉，影响了文章的美感。有例为证：
First , energy and other natural resources have become more abundant , not less so , since the book ‘ The Limits to Growth ’ was published by a group of scientists .
可以看出，标点像独行侠一样出现在句子中，会给人以喧宾夺主的感觉。所以大家平时练习时就要注意正确书写标点。
细节二：句首单词首字母大小写问题
通常情况下，同学们只要感觉是个句子就都把句首单词首字母大写了，但是在实际写作中情况如何呢？下面我们来看个例子。
Some corpora attempt to cover the language as a whole; others are extremely selective.
分号的作用是对关系非常紧密的句子进行分隔，所以后一个句子只是前一个的附属，并不是一个独立的新句子，所以首字母仍然要小写的。这个现象同样适用于冒号、破折号、括号。
细节三：书写过于随意
每个人都有自己的书写习惯，但是雅思考试毕竟是要给外国人看的，所以大家如果能够在书写习惯上贴近老外，肯定会给人以亲切的卷面印象。比如不要书写得过于密集，以免让人看不清单词，影响理解。也不要写得过于稀疏而让人无法在eye span 范围内看到完整的意群，从而影响考官阅读。字不要写得太大，也不要太小。尽量不要连写以免造成l,r,n,m等混淆不清，造成考官阅卷障碍。
细节四：写作格式混乱
英文写作格式主要有齐头式和缩进式。通常齐头式因为顶头书写且段与段之间空出一行，所以会给人以整洁的感觉，推荐大家使用这种格式。缩进式和中文的写作格式相似，即每一段的开头句缩进，但是段落之间没有空行，所以不是很受欢迎。经常在作文中看到同学们用的是“齐头式+缩进式”，即段首句缩进+段落之间空行，给人以不伦不类的感觉，同学们一定要注意。
细节五：总结段缺失
很多学生在作文时因为时间不充裕无法写出总结段，于是给阅卷者每完成任务的感觉。建议考生尽量要写最后的summary，无论是task1还是task2。因为同学们可以利用最后一段来点题、归纳，这样可以最大限度地避免因为语言功底不深而导致的文章结构不明晰，说服力不强等问题，即用形式来弥补内容上无法克服的困难。
另外，因为开头结尾段是我们平时练习得比较熟练的部分，所以我们很容易就搞定的，为什么放着拿分的部分不写呢？
雅思6作文（2）
Band 4
Topic:
Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree of disagree?
According to universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. Therefore, this essay will show some reasons of argument for and argument against.
Firstly, I will discuss about two reasons of argument for to begin with universities should accept equal numbrs of male and female students in every subject because it will be balance of idea while studying. In general, there usually are different ideas between man and woman. These lead to new ideas from different vision will happen. Another reason is it display that have equal of society not eccept in each side. In addition, nowadays, the most societies become to accept ability of both in any way.
Secondly, I will discuss about one reason of arguments against that is some subjects not suitable for each other. for example, some subjects of sports such as weight putting. It is not suitable for female because there are different of body between male and female.
In conclusion, I agree with universities should accept equal numbers of male an female students in every subject. Moreover, it depend on what the subjects that the students want to study, they can choose by themselves because I believe that if the students like to study their subjects, they will do it well so that I strongly agree with this topic.
雅思6作文（3）
雅思小作文多图写作是一个大的趋势，越来越多的组合图出现更加证明了这一点。在此，我们先来介绍最常见的一种组合图，线图+饼图的写作构思及例题示范，帮助大家顺利攻克雅思小作文。
看到题目是由线图和饼图组成的多图组合，我们可以按以下3个思路构思：
1. 饼图和曲线图各自展示了什么数据在哪个时间点或段的`变化特征?
2. 在饼图中，数据总值为多少?它由几部分组成?每一部分各代表什么?各自所占百分比又是多少?百分比从大到小如何排列的?谁最大?谁最小?
3. 曲线图有何特征?根据特征，曲线可以分成几段来描述?起点值、终点值、峰值、谷值多少?各自对应的时间点又是什么?
现在，我们再来看一道例题：
WRITING TASK 1：
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
范文：
The pie chart shows the worldwide distribution of sales of Coca-Cola in the year 2000 and the graph shows the change in share prices between 1996 and 2001.
雅思6作文（4）
Scientific research is promised to identify and unravel mysteries about the existence of human beings and some urgent issues ranging from tangled complexity of the brain system to the ultimate truth about the existence of the However, it is beyond dispute that there are issues that do plague human beings as a race such as poverty and Therefore, I am convinced that the colossal amount of time and money could definitely be applied to address more pressing problems at hand such as famine and
科学研究被许诺去发现和解开关于人类存在的奥秘，以及一些紧迫的问题，从复杂的大脑系统到关于宇宙存在的终极真相。然而，无可争议的是，有一些问题困扰着人类，就像贫穷和文盲一样。因此，我相信，大量的时间和金钱可以用来解决更紧迫的问题，如饥荒和无知。
Admittedly, cutting-edge innovations have tremendously transformed the way of our People all benefit from the advances made possible through medical research, from more effective chemotherapy, to vaccines that protect against deadly disease and to increased knowledge about nutrition and healthy However, there is little value if we invest too much on some researches that barely lead to new information about nature, the human body, or
无可否认，尖端的创新已经极大地改变了我们的生活方式。人们都受益于通过医学研究，从更有效的化疗，到预防致命疾病的疫苗，以及增加对营养和健康生活方式的知识的进步。然而，如果我们在一些研究上投入太多，而这些研究几乎不能带来关于自然、人体或医学的新信息，那就没有什么价值了。
Authorities’ investment should not be confined within the boundary of scientific researches To be more specific, more than half of the world population are still living under the poverty line while an overwhelming amount of resources is drained to figure out how to send a spaceship to the Under such cases, what benefits the outer space would bring to a poor mother whose child starves and suffers from malnutrition? These problems will not likely be solved by the evolution of inventions and space exploration alone, but through joint efforts and financial funding from international aid agencies and charity
有关部门的投资不应仅局限于科学研究的范围内。更具体地说，世界上超过一半的人口仍然生活在贫困线以下，而大量的资源被排干，以弄清楚如何将一艘宇宙飞船送到金星。在这种情况下，外部空间会给贫穷的母亲带来什么好处，而她的孩子却因营养不良而挨饿?这些问题不可能仅靠发明和空间探索的演变来解决，而是通过国际援助机构和慈善组织的共同努力和资金资助来解决。
Furthermore, money should be directly allocated to alleviate illiteracy in underdeveloped It is a common sense that a more favourable intellectual support is helping to improve economic Compared with the costs totally funded by individuals, if governments account relevant obligations, individual economic pressure will be relieved to a large
此外，应直接分配资金，以减轻欠发达地区的文盲。人们普遍认为，更有利的智力支持有助于改善经济前景。与完全由个人资助的成本相比，如果政府承担相关义务，个人经济压力将在很大程度上得到缓解。
To sum up, the allocation of funds are to be allocated to other sectors beyond scientific researches, which contributes to the boon of the society as a
总而言之，资金的分配将被分配到科学研究之外的其他领域，这有助于整个社会的福祉。
雅思6作文（5）
With computers and Internet, people can study and work without going to school or Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
范文：
When it comes to the issue about the Internet, some people argue that their efficiency will be lower if they could study or work at home using the Internet, but I cannot agree with this
Initially, using the Internet could serve as an efficient contributing factor to save more time for For those who live in a metropolis, it is common for them to spend two or even three hours on the way to schools or companies and back However, distance learning or working assists them to avoid the possible traffic congestion they may meet during the commuting Thus, because of the existence of Internet, learners or workers are potent to distribute more time to their study or
Furthermore, it is beneficial to study or work at home because people could arrange their schedules more Some students or workers have the higher efficiency during daytime while others may be more efficient at Studying or working at home enables individuals to allocate their time to different tasks according to their For example, for some art subjects, inspiration could be sparked better during a silent night, but not common working
But the refuting voice may come from the opponents that working or studying alone at home may deprive people of the chance of communication; however, they oversimplify this It is true that most employees or learners do tasks at home by themselves, but the fact is that they still have various methods to communication with peers or workmates, and it is the Internet that also provides them with convenient ways of keeping in touch with other
In conclusion, people could benefit more if they adopt the way of working or learning by Internet, considering that they could save more time and have a free
雅思6作文（6）
今日学习主题
一种语言的消失是否值得挽救
主题解读
关于一种语言的消失是否值得挽救的话题，实际上涉及到两个雅思写作中比较重要的考点：1、语言相关的话题，可以从不同角度来出题。2、救不救的问题，包括动物救不救，植物救不救，文化救不救，语言救不救等，大家学习时要善于从“考点”的角度来看待素材，使备考更加具有针对性。
英文句子
Losing a language forever is obviously regrettable, so it may be worthwhile for a government to intervene with funding to keep it alive, depending on the future prospects of the particular
一种语言永远消失显然是令人遗憾的，因此依据这一特定语言的发展前景，政府通过拨款使其继续存在或许是值得的。
雅思写作语言点精讲
本句可以作为观点句使用，首先说明一种语言永远消失不是什么好事，但表述也并不绝对，因为在句尾补充到“要看这一特定语言的前景如何”
losing a language forever，动名词做主语，表示“一种语言永远消失”
regrettable，表示消极意义的形容词，意思是“令人遗憾的”，“可惜的”，之前使用副词来修饰形容词，obviously表示“很显然”，“明显地”。日常写作中应该不断增加表示积极或消极意义形容词的积累
so 表示因果关系，属于句内衔接
it may be worthwhile for to do 常用句型需要积累，同时注意may be属于非绝对化表达，雅思写作的议论文中不会有太多非黑即白的观点，因此很多时候表达中需要“留有余地”
intervene with funding，干预，干预用的手段是funding，即“提供资金”，同时需要注意介词with不要用错，补充：to hope for government funding 希望获得政府资助。
keep it alive，表示“使之继续存在”，注意keep+n+adj的用法
on 表示“取决于…”，“根据…”，此处用作状语
the future prospects 表示“前景”
the particular language 表示“特定语言”
今日练习
除了句中出现的regrettable，整理表示积极和消极含义的形容词各3个，并造句，注意在语境下是否适用，不许使用good / bad -_-!
关于今天的主题，写一个自己的观点句，写不出来就把今天这句话背下来
雅思6作文（7）
1、businesshours营业时间
2、officehours办公时间
3、entrance入口
4、exit出口
5、push推
6、pull拉
7、shut此路不通
8、on打开(放)
9、off关
10、open营业(注：多用于商店等营业场所)
11、pause暂停
12、stop关闭
13、closed下班、打烊(注：同10)
14、menu菜单
15、fragile易碎
雅思6作文（8）
16、thissideup此面向上
17、introductions说明
18、onestreet单行道
19、keepright/left靠左/右
20、busesonly只准公共汽车通过
21、wetpaint油漆未干
22、danger危险
23、lostandfound失物招领处
24、giveway快车先行
25、safetyfirst安全第一
26、fillingstation加油站
27、nosmoking禁止吸烟
28、nophotos请勿拍照
29、novisitors游人止步
30、noentry禁止入内
雅思6作文（9）
drink 饮料
mineral water 矿泉水
orange juice 桔子原汁
orangeade, orange squash 桔子水
lemon juice 柠檬原汁
lemonade 柠檬水
beer 啤酒
white wine 白葡萄酒
red wine 红葡萄酒
claret 波尔多红葡萄酒
cider 苹果酒
champagne 香槟酒
cocktail 鸡尾酒
liqueur 白酒,烧酒
shaohsing wine 绍兴酒
yellow wine 黄酒
Kaoliang spirit 高粱酒
Wu Chia Pee 五加皮
vodka 伏特加
whisky 威士忌
brandy 白兰地
cognac 法国白兰地
gin 琴酒
gin flzz 杜松子酒
martini 马提尼酒
雅思6作文（10）
Task：Is it a good thing for the senior managers to have better salaries than other workers in a company or organization?To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Sample answer：
If Karl Marx was still alive in the word, chances are that he would frown upon the widening disparity between the well-paid senior staff, who are in charge of lifeblood of the company and other workers who are heavily exploited of the view that the salary should be in line with the hierarchy of staff in their
The staff who are in the relatively high level in companies assume more accountability of the operation of companies, which justifies the status qua that are supposed to be better The senior members' responsibilities do not only confine in the office trifles such as printing the files for the meeting, or work out a balance sheet for the financial Instead, they are under the massive pressure to be insightful policy makers who are seemingly at ease with daunting tasks, because one of the their minor mistakes is likely to trigger a blunder, bringing inevitable financial loss to their
On the other hand, the high salary of the senior staff can also serve as incentive to their Monetary reward, materialistic as it might be, can stir more motivation of staff, because it is a conspicuous fact that a decent salary is the foundation of the daily With the seductive payback, workers are more willing to fulfill their duties with higher quality and the talent of the able would be fully tapped to the benefit for companies and
Of course, the dark sides cannot be neglected due to its advantages the high salary Certain senior members share the lion’s share of benefit and the rest of it is then allocated to majority of junior This income gap is a dormant factor that can damage the rapport of the members and undermine the overall moral and collaboration of different levels of
In conclusion, the principle of “no pain no gain” still works as a maxim in the modern Egalitarianism is only a Utopian depiction, while utilitarianism has the final
雅思6作文（11）
表示因果
Since/As/Because/For+句子
As a result of /As a consequence of /Because of/Owing to sth /By virtue of sth/On account of+短语
For this reason。
For one reason or another,
For one thing,
On this/that account
The reason why+结果/ that+原因
Accordingly,
Consequently,
As a consequence
表示对比
Conversely,
In contrast,
In contrast to this,
Nevertheless,
Nonetheless,
Similarly,
Likewise,
Identically,
Equivalently,
On the other hand,
By/In comparison/contrast
Alternatively,
Compared with/to
表示递进
Additionally,
Further
Furthermore
Besides,
Moreover
In addition to sth,
In addition,
What’s more
表示证据
Contradictory to this,
In support of this,
The evidence for···is,
This is supported by,
To affirm this,
表示解释
In other words,
That is,
That is to say,
Namely
Which means that
表示强调
Above all,
As a matter of fact,
In particular,
Indeed,
Obviously,
表示举例
As an illustration,
In particular,
In support of this,
To demonstrate,
To elaborate,
To exemplify,
To highlight,
To illustrate,
表示让步
Admittedly,
Albeit,
Although it is true that,
Granted,
It may appear that,
表示转折
However,
Whereas
Conversely
Nevertheless
Otherwise,
On the contrary
Instead,
Contrarily
Inversely
Contrariwise
Oppositely,
表示结论
Accordingly,
All in all,
As a result,
As indicated earlier,
As mentioned,
Consequently,
So we can conclude that ….
In brief/in summary/conclusion
To summarize
以上列举出的各类衔接词，都是我们在雅思写作中可以多多利用的表达方式。希望各位考生牢记且掌握以上用法及句型，从而更有效的提高雅思写作能力。
雅思6作文（12）
Nowadays, the general trend seems to be that more and more young people go to college and receive higher In china alone, for example, about 7 million out of million high school students were accepted by universities in 20XX, while only 35 years ago, only 5% high school students went to This rapid increase of the number of university students, though supported by almost all governments throughout the world, has given rise to doubts among some people who insist that there is close interrelationship betweenthe large number of university graduates and the high unemployment
现在，越来越多的年轻人能去上大学，接受高等教育，这似乎是大势所趋。仅仅以中国为例，20XX年940万高中生中有700万的人被大学录取，而在35年前，仅5%的高中生能继续上大学。大学生人数快速增长虽然得到了世界各地政府的大力支持，但还是引发了一些人的质疑，他们坚持认为众多的大学毕业生和高失业率有密切的相互关系。
开头引出大学生数目增加的话题，并指出有人认为这和高失业率相关。以中国的数据为例，所以“考鸭”们平时可以多留意和收集一些这样的数据，使文章更加详实。
give rise to doubts (among) 在…中引起质疑
is close interrelationship between (…and…) 在…和…之间有紧密的相互关系。
雅思6作文（13）
table shows the changes in the number the period 该表格描述了在年之年间数量的变化。
bar chart illustrates 该柱状图展示了
graph provides some interesting data 该图为我们提供了有关有趣数据。
diagram shows (that) 该图向我们展示了
pie graph depicts (that) 该圆形图揭示了
is a cure graph which describes the trend 这个曲线图描述了的趋势。
figures/statistics show (that) 数据(字)表明
tree diagram reveals 该树型图向我们揭示了如何
data/statistics show (that) 该数据(字)可以这样理解
data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion 这些数据资料令我们得出结论
is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the 如图所示
to the 根据这些表(数字)
is shown in the 如表格所示
can be seen from the diagram,great changes have taken place 从图中可以看出，发生了巨大变化。
the table/chart/diagram/figure,we can see clearly it is clear/apparent from the chart 从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到
is a graph which 这个图表向我们展示了
table shows the changing proportion of a &b 该表格描述了年到年间a与b的比例关系。
graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend 该图以圆形图形式描述了总的趋势。
is a column chart 这是个柱型图，描述了
can be seen from the graph,the two curves show the flutuation 如图所示，两条曲线描述了的波动情况。
the period 在至期间，基本不变。
the year 在年到期间
the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1995年至1998三年里
then on/from this time 从那时起
number steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year). 月(年)至月(年)的数量基本不变。
雅思6作文（14）
首先：关于犯罪的成因。无论是青少年犯罪或者成年人犯罪，首先应该想到的是经济问题，经济问题会影响社会的稳定，如失业率的提升，失学、食物匮乏、家庭负担加重甚至破产，这时就会滋生犯罪。而贫穷落后地区的儿童往往面临失学问题，也是造成青少年犯罪的重要原因。
由经济层面进入教育层面，大部分暴力犯罪者的受教育程度比较低，他们因为贫穷过早的进入社会，或者失业导致流落街头，这类人群冲动易怒，易发生冲突。
心理健康问题，这是比较容易忽略的问题。校园暴力者本身会存在心理问题，甚至场景是校园暴力，家庭暴力的受害者。
这里有一些特殊的犯罪比如网络诈骗、经济犯罪这些则是其他原因，要单独说。由于信息技术发达，个人信息安全遭到窃取，给网络诈骗可乘之机。还有就是一些机构腐败滋生。高科技犯罪者本身的受教育程度可能很高，智商也高，这时候我们要转换思路，这类高科技犯罪背后的原因是法律意识淡薄。
犯罪情节由轻到重包括：校园暴力、盗窃、杀人，经济犯罪、网络诈骗等。近年来青少年犯罪的相关新闻比较多见，建议考生多关注相关报道，新闻中会给出相关的事件分析。
分析完成因，后面就要考虑如何降低犯罪，按照情节的严重程度做不同的处理。情节轻微的，小惩小戒，情节严重者就要毫不留情的处罚，甚至拘禁。
面对青少年犯罪，对于情节较轻的一般采取纠正引导。情节严重的如盗窃、伤人，那么就需要采取一定处罚措施，情节严重到伤人的，则应该依法采取措施。有严重暴力倾向，反人类的行为的青少年，建议采取心理治理和法律约束。同时对被害人也需要进行心理治疗。
然而预防青少年犯罪才是从根本上减少或降低犯罪伤害的有效措施。来自学校，管教所和家庭的教育很重要。最后，为了避免再次误入歧途，视情况为青少年罪犯提供必要的帮助和就业指导等。
最后，如何有效地降低犯罪或抑制犯罪，当然是提高就业率和加强国家的安全意识。
关于反复犯罪，并不能完全依靠监狱解决，监狱能关住的只有严重暴力倾向的罪犯，而大部分初犯者，他们的人生还很长，需要社会的重新接纳。
雅思6作文（15）
例题：Staying healthy by playing sports and eating well should be an individual’s duty to society rather than a habit for personal Do you agree or disagree? 保持健康是个人对于社会的责任，但是，不是使个人受益的良好习惯，是否认同?
写作大纲：
首段：表明作家立场：个人保持健康即是对于社会的责任，更是对于个人有益。
让步段：保持健康为何是尽到了社会责任
个人保持身体健康是个人履行社会责任的体现，因为个人减少了对于国家医疗资源的消耗。
个人保持心理健康是个人履行社会责任的体现，因为个人较少做出反社会行为。
反驳段：保持健康为何是良好的个人习惯，对于个人有利
对于个人的利好：增加自信，减少忧虑，人生态度更加积极乐观。通过运动可以结实好友，这就意味着快乐的源泉更多。
对于家庭的利好：可以想象，个人健康状况令人担忧，家人必然痛苦和担忧(例如企业家和文体明星)，因此个人健康可以乐观地实现家庭的和谐。
对于事业和学业的利好：个人健康可以提高学习效率，使人精力充沛地实现事业的挑战。
语料：
keep fit = keep wholesome = remains healthy 保持健康
Happiness, lies, first of all, in health 健康是幸福人生的本源。
Health could, to large extent, empower one to face up to career challenges enthusiastically and harmonize family life 健康在很大程度上使人精力充沛地应对事业的挑战以及乐观地实现家庭的和谐。
……instill confidence into one’s heart 增强人的自信
indoctrinate self-confidence into one’s heart 增强人的自信
to see the sunny side 积极乐观
拓展：be resilient = to be positive = be optimistic 很乐观
雅思6作文（16）
考鸭们都知道，20XX年的雅思作文真题都来自于历史题库。本文就为大家梳理历年雅思写作真题范文——教育类话题：Some people think living in big cities is bad for people's To what extent do you agree or disagree?(20XX年3月1日)
题目讲解
题型类别：议论文
审题要点：大城市的生活是否会对人们的健康造成破坏
思路分析：文章架构可以选择单边倒，倾向一边或中立，城市发展和健康类的很多素材稍作改动都可以很好地支持论点。
同意：
整个自然环境遭到严重破坏，如空气污染，导致人们的健康遭到威胁;
生活节奏快，在大城市生活的人们往往精神压力大，心理不健康
不同意(让步段)：
城市健身设施完备，很多人也积极参加锻炼，但尽管如此，只要人们生活的自然环境没有得到改善，生活节奏过快，人们还是很难维持健康。
雅思写作大作文范文
In many countries today, big cities seem to be stubbornly appealing to the mass population, along with which there arises the question as for whether living in a city will damage people’s For me, the answer is definitely
在今天的许多国家，大城市似乎一直在顽固地吸引着大量人口，同时也出现了一个问题，那就是居住在城市是否会损害人们的健康。对我来说，答案是肯定的。
On one hand, the environment of most major cities, especially those in developing and underdeveloped countries, has been severely destroyed due to the overly quick Take air pollution as an example, the speed of vehicles’s injecting tail gas and erect chimneys’ vomiting forth clouds of smoke is so fast and the volume so considerable that the atmosphere long before has failed to degrade the Consequently, haze become a new natural hazard in many metropolises in the long run, with the PM density in some reaching several times the national
一方面，大多数主要城市的环境，特别是发展中国家和欠发达国家的环境，由于过度的工业化而遭到严重破坏。以空气污染为例，车辆注射尾气的速度和竖立的烟囱吐烟的速度是如此之快，体积如此之大，以至于以前的空气质量都没有降低污染物的浓度。因此，从长远来看，雾霾在很多大城市都是一个新的自然灾害，的浓度达到了国家极限的几倍。
Apart from the threat posed to the physical health of city dwellers, the ever-accelerated living tempo, tuned with their competitive mind-set, is doomed to do damage to people’s mental health as It is not uncommon that blue-collar and white-collar workers as well spend any more hours in workplace than in their home, not to mention enough time squeezed for relaxation and An extreme and tragic case in point is the soaring number of suicides in bog
除了对城市居民身体健康造成的威胁之外，不断加速的生活节奏，与他们的竞争心态相协调，注定会对人们的心理健康造成损害。蓝领和白领们在工作场所的时间比在家里花的时间还要多，更不用说还有足够的时间来放松和娱乐了。一个极端和悲剧性的例子就是在沼泽城市里自杀的人数激增。
Nevertheless, it has to be admitted that health facilities in big cities are increasingly available and in full set and not a few people are making efforts to keep In the morning the young and old can be seen jogging around parks and after dinner women gather and dance on Many companies and public institutes also organize activities to encourage their members to do But despite all the convenience, few people can maintain their health as long as the air we breathe is still severely contaminated and the workload remains
然而，必须承认的是，大城市的卫生设施越来越多，而且越来越多，而不是少数人在努力保持健康。在早晨，人们可以看到年轻和年老的人们在公园里慢跑，饭后妇女们在广场上跳舞。许多公司和公共机构也组织活动，鼓励他们的成员进行锻炼。但是，尽管有这么多便利，只要我们呼吸的空气仍然受到严重污染，工作负担仍然无法承受，几乎没有人能维持他们的健康。
To sum up, theoretically, at least for now and in the near future, it is of faint possibility for the basic living environment to restore its purity and the society to cease to pursue the unsustainable development; therefore, pathetically, the health conditions of most city dwellers will still
总之，从理论上说，至少在现在和不久的将来，基本的生活环境恢复其纯粹性和社会停止追求不可持续发展的可能性是微弱的。因此，大多数城市居民的健康状况仍将恶化。
雅思6作文（17）
Describe a kind of You should say:
Whether you like music or
What kind of music you like
What role music plays in people’s
) If I had to describe a kind of music that I like, I would say that it is pop
b) I am sure you are familiar with that kind of music
) I like music very
b) That is to say, I cannot imagine what my life would be like without
) I believe music plays an important part in people’s
b) For example, we can use it to sooth our minds after a hard day at work, or it can provide us with the rhythm to dance
There are several reasons as for why I would like to talk specifically about pop Allow me to explain by mentioning some of them
) First of all, pop music is lively, and suits me at my
b) What I mean to say is that us youngsters like to listen to music that fits in with the way we feel
) Secondly, usually has a good
b) For instance, it is suitable for us to dance to in the
) Lastly, pop music is simple to
b) That is to say, I like it because it does not have complicated lyrics, and it helps me to relax after I have been studying hard for some
So, those were some thoughts on my favorite type of
雅思6作文（18）
Picture this. You have a job that pays okay. But you don’t really like it. Well, let me put it this way: You like the money, but you wouldn’t do that job if there was no money involved.
“Screw it, I need money to have a life!” You might think.
We all have bills to pay, people to take care of, and important tasks to complete. We do these things because if we don’t, we might get fired and lose our income.
And without income, we can’t pay for our house, clothes, vacations, etc.
I’m describing a “normal” life. I call this normal because this is how 99% of all people that I know live.
After years of living a normal life, you get the hang of it. You know what to say and do to keep your job. You also know what time you can wake up so you can barely make it on time to work.
I know because those thoughts went through my mind when I had a job I didn’t like. And every week, I’d set the alarm a little later. I was also ready to leave work when that clock hit 5PM on the dot.
Human beings are smart. We adapt quickly.
And that’s exactly our biggest problem. We easily get trapped into what I call the “excitement and acceptance cycle.” Most of my life went like this:
A new “thing” can be anything: A new job, goal, desire, relationship. You get excited about something, but after a while, you always get into an acceptance phase.
And that’s what I want to avoid because acceptance means stagnation, which means a lack of progress.
“Is stagnation bad?”
Most people probably don’t mind stagnation. They just fill up their life with pleasure and entertainment.
Who cares, right? Just accept where you are in life. Protect the status quo. Keep your job. Put in the minimum amount necessary to keep your business afloat. And just cruise.
You can easily go through life without personal growth. There’s nothing wrong with that.
But that doesn’t work for me, personally, for one reason: I think a life of only entertainment is useless.
But still, I’ve stagnated many times in life. And I’m sure I will stagnate again at some point. But here’s the thing: If you stay put for too long, your situation gets worse.
There’s no such thing as protecting the status quo. The famous actress and philanthropist, Helen Hayes, who was one of only 12 people who have won an Emmy, a Grammy, an Oscar and a Tony Award, said it best:
“If you rest, you rust.”
Those five words capture the essence of progress and why it matters. And if look at my own life, I can give you many examples to demonstrate that.
When I started my first business, I learned a lot during the first two years, but my growth stopped after that because I didn’t understand this concept. I just stopped pushing hard. Did I get tired? No, not really. I don’t know why I started taking things easy. It just happened.
Same is true for my blog. I’m now moving into my third year. But earlier this year, I kind of stopped coming up with new ideas and concepts. Again, I don’t know why. I guess it’s human nature.
But not for everyone. And fortunately, we can study other people and learn from them.
Progress is about moving forward. Success comes after that.
Take Kobe Bryant, one of the best basketball players of all time. For the past few years, I’ve been fascinated by his mindset. His obsession with practicing is unheard of.
He was always the first person in the gym and the last one out. In the summer 1999, when everybody was resting, Kobe was making 100,000 shots. Not taken. He made 100,000 shots during that summer. He made progress while most of his peers were not.
And in 20xx, 20xx, and 20xx, he won championships with the Lakers. Coincidence? I don’t think so.
Kobe Bryant didn’t rest or stagnate. He could have easily thought: “I can just take 100,000 shots.” But instead, he strived for making them. Because that’s what mattered to him.
It’s about getting better every day and moving forward. It’s about progress. Look at it this way. What’s the other option? Sitting back in your beach chair? Giving up?
Accepting the “realities” of life? Screw that. If you want something, go after it.
To me, there is no other option. I’m not here to rest OR rust. I remind myself of that all the time.
So, onwards we go. Care to join me?