雅思5作文（1）
雅思作文通常给出一种现象,需要考生分析这种现象出现的原因,带来的影响或者提出解决的办法。下面小编为您搜集了雅思人口作文，欢迎查看!
雅思人口作文【1】
The aging population is going to become a major concern particularly in more developed countries, but this should not be viewed as something threatening to society. It is a blessing for any individual to live a long and healthy life, only that it could indicate that the responsibilities of caring for the elderly in the future may partly fall on the younger generation. The questions refer especially to how the younger generation could provide answers that are able to move society forward, taking into account a number of social and economic effects on the nation as a whole.
As the proportion of older people is steadily increasing, there are doubts over changes regarding the structure of a modern society. A possible change may the distribution of years of expected lifespan on the social scale, now that the family planning program is in fashion. Then, what will this dramatic shift mean for social services, such as health caring and pension on retirement? Overall effects, however, are not clear enough; for instance, how older peoples prolonged lives are to be arranged in the social context? At this point, it is interesting to know how todays younger generation would re-think their roles in society if they might live 100 or more and be in good shape? And should working people in society continue to be retired as usual at 60 and 65 ?
雅思人口作文【2】
The two charts give information about single-occupant households in England in the year 2011. The bar chart compares figures for occupants' age and gender, and the pie chart shows data about the number of bedrooms in these homes.
Overall, females made up a higher proportion of people living alone than males, and this difference is particularly noticeable in the older age categories. We can also see that the most common number of bedrooms in a single-occupant home was two.
A significant majority of the people aged 65 or over who were living alone in England in 2011 were female. Women made up around 72% of single occupants aged 75 to 84, and 76% of those aged 85 or over. By contrast, among younger adults the figures for males were higher. For example, in the 35-49 age category, men accounted for nearly 65% of people living alone.
In the same year, 35.4% of one-person households in England had two bedrooms, while one-bedroom and three-bedroom homes accounted for 28% and 29.8% of the total. Under 7% of single-occupant homes had four or more bedrooms.
雅思人口作文【3】
Is it a good idea to control the world's population growth?
Arguments
1. In modern times, a family with few children, or even with no children at all, is still a happy family.
2. With fewer children in a family, parents spend less time on household chores and concentrate more on their own interests, and their children enjoy better material and educational opportunities than those in bigger families.
3. The most pressing problem created by the rapid increase in population is a shortage of food. At present a large proportion of the existing population is not getting enough of the right kind of food.
4. The rapid rise in world population is creating problems for all countries on earth because there simply aren't enough resources.
5. Both rich and poor countries of the world should take united action to deal with the population explosion. Otherwise, there will be more people fighting for less land and fewer resources, and the future will bring poverty, misery and war to us all.
6. Population increase in developing countries has wiped out the material benefits that they have achieved.
7. Statistics show that where the population rate is high, people's living standards are Jow. This means, people's living conditions cannot improve unless there is a reduction in the increased rate of population.
8. Overpopulation creates a shortage of schools, teachers, hospitals and doctors.
9. Overpopulation causes problems in housing and employment, especially in cities.
10. Just imagine how much better life would be if the world population were cut by half!
Counter-arguments
1. People in agricultural areas need more children to help them with the work in the fields.
2. Whether to have children or not is a private matter and nobody should interfere with it.
3. It is unfair to blame all the problems on the increase in population. It is those greedy manufacturers and businessmen in developed countries that make the heaviest demands on the world's resources and cause the most pollution.
4. If population control were a must, it should be carried out in developed countries as well because a baby born in USA will use in his lifetime 30 times more of the world's resources than a baby born in India.
5. Children are the most important in life. With fewer children around, life will be dull, meaningless and unhappy. It is incredible for a couple to have no children at all.
6. Children in a family give the parents a sense of responsibihty and pride. They are very important to the stability of a family.
7. Population control does greater harm than we realize. For instance, if the one-child pohcy is still in practice in 100 years, people then will have little idea of kinship~ ties, for most of them will have no brothers, sisters, uncles, aunts, or cousins.
8. With the govermnent's family planning policy in operation we now have a generation of "only child" families: most of them are arrogant, selfish, and spoilt.
9. A big family offers children a chance to learn how to cope with and care for other people.
10. Children in big families have the chance to compete with each other, in terms of their manners at home, their study at school, their performance at their place of work, etc. Older children usually have a great influence on the younger one.
雅思5作文（2）
社会经济类
穷人The poor/impoverished
贫穷impoverishment/poverty/pauperism
有需要的人the needed
残疾人the disable
弱势群体the weak
病者the sick
富人the rich/affluent
经济的快速发展the rapid development of economy
人民生活水平的显著提高/稳步the remarkable improvement/steady growth of people’s living standard
生存情况livelihood
工资salary
收入income
养老金pension
补贴allowance
保险insurance
退休retirement
职业occupation
体面的工作decent jobs
高薪的工作well-paid jobs
穷人越穷富人越富the poor poorer, the rich richer
财富分化wealth disparity/ gap
社会经济地位socio-economic status/position
歧视discrimination
偏见 prejudice
社会分层social hierarchy/stratification
不平等Inequality
不公正injustice
不公平unfairness
政府要公平分配社会财富(通过增加给穷人和弱者的福利，例如退休金和补贴等)government should distribute the social wealth fairly by improving the welfare ( retirement pension and allowance) to the poor and the
科技环境类
先进的科学技术 advanced science andtechnology
面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges
科技的飞速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology
方便快捷 convenient and efficient
可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information
因特网 the Internet (一定要由冠词，字母I 大写)
环保(的) environmenta lprotection/environmentally friendly
宝贵的自然资源valuable natural resources
社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result o fsocial development
社会进步的体现 asymbol of society progress
教育文化类
经济/心理负担 financia lburden/psychological burden
为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society
打下坚实的基础 lay asolid foundation for…
综合素质comprehensive quality
责任感/成就感 sense of responsibility/sense of achievement
竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation
开阔眼界 widenone’s horizon/broaden one’s vision
学习知识和技能acquire knowledge and skills
雅思5作文（3）
sea 海
high seas, open sea 远海
ocean 大洋
inlet 小湾
bay 海湾,湾
gulf 海湾
cove 湾
cape 海角
promontory, headland 海角,岬
cliff 悬崖峭壁
port, harbour 港 (美作:harbor)
bay, roadstead 碇泊处
sandbank 沙滩
beach, shore 海滩
strait 海峡
isthmus 地峡
reef 礁石
key 暗礁
sandbar 沙洲
tide 潮
wave 浪
undertow 回头浪
tempest 风暴
ground swell 涌浪
seaquake 海震,海啸
low water 最低水位
territorial waters 领海,领水
ice floe 冰川
iceberg 冰山
shore 海岸
bank 河岸
estuary 湖港区
delta 三角洲
mouth, ria 河口
flord 峡湾
current, watercourse 水流
stream, brook 小溪
torrent 湍流山溪
rapids 急流
source 源头
spring 泉
bed 河床
flood 洪水
flow 泛滥
swelling, freshet 河水猛涨,涨水
basin 流域
waterfall, falls, cascade 瀑布
cataract 大瀑布
tributary 支流
confluent 汇合点
meander 河曲
canal 运河
wadi, wady 干谷
雅思5作文（4）
如果说有什么方法可以提高雅思写作成绩，我想从根本上提高的唯一办法就是转变思维方式，也就是把中式思维向英式思维靠拢，只有这样才能符合雅思考官的喜好，才能得高分。本文中，将具体介绍一下中式思维和英式思维的区别，以及怎样才能写出更符合雅思考官要求的作文。
事实上，如果脑袋里有一个中文的概念或者想法，要用英文来表达的时候总是免不了紧张，因为由于中英两国的文化不同，很多东西无法表达----非常可能不是因为考生的语言问题，而是因为这个中国的概念在英文里面根本就不存在。有数字统计过中英两国语言的词汇量只有40%能互通(所谓的equivalent)，而这就意味着剩余的60%的表达肯定是和原文有很大出入的。
甚至很多我们生活中经常使用的语言，不假思索就能说出的概念，在英语文化里很可能根本就没有对应的表达，例如“热闹”这个词，考生们可以试试能否在英文单词中找到让你满意的对得上号的词。“这个地方很热闹”这句话，根据语境可以有不同的翻译，但是总体而言，“热闹”作为一个词来说，在英文里几乎是没有对应的。
正因为如此，我们才强调，写英语作文，说英语口语，要用英语思维，不要用中式思维。这对于很多人来说是个很空洞的概念，只有当你真正用英语与外国人交流的时候才会体会到英式思维的重要性。
这的确很难，因为我们在中式思维里面扎根的太深了。事实上，这也和两国语言本身的特点有关。鲁迅就说过，中文和外文比，吃亏就吃在不够精确，具体到单词水平，就是“词汇量少”。因为词汇量少，因此中文特别讲究“上下文”，一个模糊的词只有在一个特定的语境里面才能让读者感到一个特定的意思。
相比而言，英文在这方面就不是这样，具体的说，大部分英语词都是有着非常确定的意思的，因此，那些在中文里面需要联系上下文才能端倪出的细微差别，也许在英文里面只是另一个单词而已。记住这点，笔者下面所说的也许会对诸位有用，在这里，笔者提供一个方法，就是如果你脑袋中有一个想法的话，仔细想想你到底想精确说的是什么意思。比如，当你想说某一个命题错误的时候，你最好想清楚它到底错在哪里，“illogical, irresponsible, biased, prejudice, fallacy, untrue”这些词之间都有着或大或小的差别，所以主要想看你到底想说的是什么。
所以，诸位想锻炼写作的话，建议要做的第一样功课，就是求精细。只有你自己求精细了，才能发现报刊、书籍中对相近的概念的不同表达法的精妙之处，才会由衷地为某篇文章的一个用词会心一笑。写作就是思维表达的一种形式。西方人直线式的思维方式体现在语言上就是西方人说话写文章喜欢开门见山，把关键性的话放在开头，然后再论及其它次要的内容。
而写作涉及到语言的方方面面，从语言的结构上来说最基本的因素包括遣词、造句和篇章。螺旋与直入的思维差异就会影响到这些方面，具体包括修饰语与中心词、句子和篇章。
修饰语与中心词
英语的修饰语，如介词短语、动词不定式、分词、定语从句等皆放在被修饰语的后面;而汉语的修饰语无论长短、繁简，皆置于被修饰语的前面。体现了直入与螺旋的不同的思维方式。例如：
The scientists everywhere in the world are looking for the efficient methods to make the air clean and protect it from the pollution by all kinds of industrial harmful waste
汉语“全世界的科学家”，修饰语在前，中心词在后，而英语则是中心词在前，修饰语在后。“净化空气、防止空气受到各种有害工业废气污染的有效方法”同样是修饰语在前，中心词在后，而英语则相反。
We appreciate your words about the relations between our two
汉语“有关我们两国关系的谈话”，修饰语在前，中心词在后，而英语则是中心词在前，修饰语在后。“有关我们两国关系”，同样是修饰语在前，中心词在后，而英语则相反。
The hungry boy ate up everything he could have his hands on from the
“他从冰箱里所能拿到的吃的东西”，修饰语在前，中心词在后，而英语则是中心词在前，修饰语在后。
The problem arose of how to fairly distribute the world natural
比较而言，该句主语太长，谓语太短，构成了不连续性修饰语，不过还是有些突兀，但修饰语还得后置。而汉语“怎样合理分配世界自然资然的问题”仍是修饰语在前，中心词在后。
句子
英语句子开门见山，其主谓结构是全句的“纲”，其余成份是“目”，一般先下结论，后叙事，从近到远，新近发生的事先出现，重心落在句首。汉语句子一般以逻辑关系和时间的先后顺序排列，一般先叙事，后下结论，由远及近，重心落在句尾。这种差异体现了直入与螺旋的不同的思维方式。
中国学生在英语写作时往往会受汉语思维的影响，写出下面的句子：
When I stayed in Guangzhou last month, you helped I am grateful for
Tom’s mother died when he was only two years old, so he did not remember
After we left China in 1959, the natural calamities happened one after another for three years in the While we read about it at home, we had been
It looked rain that evening, yet Dad came all the That made us very
如果按英语直入的思维方式，以上几句要改写成：
I am very grateful for your help to me during my stay in Guangzhou last
Tom did not remember his mother who died when he was only two years
We had been dismayed at home while reading of the natural calamities that happened one after another for three years after we left China in
It looked rain that evening, yet to our great joy, Dad came all the
这种思维方式的转换要是更复杂一点，对中国学生来说，是需要操练的。例如：
我认为如果他们初次相识时，她很穷，他未必会爱她。这位女性由于对他有好感而帮助他，使他心存感激，这种感激之情很容易发展成为真挚的爱情。
I do not suppose he would have loved her if she had been poor when he first knew her, but the gratitude which he felt for the help which he owed to her kindly interest in him easily developed into a sincere (条件关系和多层因果关系的转换)
她去深圳参加一个会议，会议结束后，她就到香港去购物，昨天才回来。
She came back yesterday from Hong Kong where she had gone shopping after the meeting in (时间顺序的转换)
段落篇章
总体而言，英文篇章，一般都采用直线型的形式，尤其是说明文和议论文，更是一般——具体式的。英语篇章是a writer-responsible pattern, 即作者在篇章中有责任、有义务向读者交代其主旨或目的。为使读者省时高效，英语篇章开门见山，一开头就直接点明段落的主题句 (topic sentence) 或全文的中心思想 (thesis statement), 即亮明作者的观点、态度、看法等;或者以引言开门，即“首先用一个熟悉的事实、观点、故事、引言等开头，然后直接见到作者全文的观点思想”。
由以上分析可知，西方人的直线式思维和中国人的螺旋式思维存在明显的差异，体现在语言中，几乎渗透到语言的各个单位，包括词汇、句子、段落和全篇。当然，笔者无意说思维模式孰好孰坏，正如我们不能断言文化模式孰好孰坏一样。但作为学英语的中国人，学原汁原味的语言是我们要达到的最高境界。自然，这里的语言也应包括discourse或text。
因此考生们要知道，一种思维是一种文化长期的积淀，它已进入该民族的潜意识，根深蒂固，如果只学语言本身，不会知其所以然，一旦到了使用语言时，汉语思维自然突现，写出Chinglish, 浑然不知。此外，建议考生多背诵和模仿英语经典文章，如《新概念英语》第三册上的文章，笔者认为皆为语言的精华，不但文词优美，每课都是一篇范文，原汁原味，多读这样的文章，一定会有所启发。由此看来，老生常谈而又令人费解的“学会用英语思维”，倒不如换个说法——学会英汉思维转换，即懂得英汉思维的差异，在平时读书的时候去真实地领悟，久而久之，就能写出地道的英文来，至少不会写出那么多的Chinglish。
综上所述，想要取得雅思写作7分甚至更高的分数，单靠所谓的模板和复杂的句式是做不到的，只有从写作思维模式上进行改变，才有可能取得好的写作成绩。而中式思维的根深蒂固必定会对正确的英语写作思维产生阻力，因此，临摹英式思维的文章以及阅读海外学术著作对于转变写作思维有着至关重要的作用。
雅思5作文（5）
题目：Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are
Discuss both these views and give your own
A problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in the general
population, with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying
通过代词this的使用使得“现象”与大众对现象的看法产生了衔接，清晰简洁，不留痕迹做到了评分准则中的“uses cohesion in such a way that it attracts no attention”
One possible solution is to provide more sports facilities to encourage a more
通过 “one possible”写出了后文还会提到提到其他的解决方案，从而体现了后文在分段和内容上与总观点的对应，即评分准则中的”skilfully manages paragraphing“
Advocates of this believe that today’s sedentary lifestyle and stressful working
通过this的使用把主体段与“首段”紧密联系起来
conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of either our work or our
leisure If there were easy-to-reach local sports centres, we would be more
通过对于关键词的修饰进一步论证了论点中涉及的关键重心内容，体现了内容的深化，论据与观点的衔接(即增多“sports facilities”的第一个原因：需要让大众更方便做运动)
likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of a screen every The variety of sports that could be offered would
作用同上“通过对于关键词的修饰进一步论证了论点中涉及的关键重心内容，体现了内容的深化，论据与观点的衔接”(即增多“sports facilities”的第二个原因：需要满足更多人的需求)，两个原因之间并没有生硬的使用“Firstly, Secondly”
cater for all ages, levels of fitness and interests: those with painful memories of PE at school might be happier in the swimming pool than on the football
However, there may be better ways of tackling this Interest in sport is
通过代词”this ”的使用，是的此段观点与题目相联系(即在此段会写出“other possible ways”),并且与上一段形成并列关系
not universal, and additional facilities might simply attract the already fit, not
those who most need Physical activity could be encouraged relatively
cheaply, for example by installing exercise equipment in parks, as my local council has This has the added benefit that parents and children often use them
“This”代替前面的措施，前后句之间因此产生紧密联系
together just for fun, which develops a positive attitude to exercise at an early
“which”代替前面所描述的“增加equipment”的直接影响，使主句和从句，直接影响和间接影响产生联系
As well as physical activity, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food
products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these
(普通连接词“as”后接原因) (“these”代词的使用加强主从句之间的联系)
contributes to poor Even improving public transport would help: it takes
longer to walk to the bus stop than to the
In my opinion, focusing on sports facilities is too narrow an approach and would
not have the desired People should be encouraged not only to be more
physically active but also to adopt a healthier lifestyle in
通过以上的分析可以看出，考官是极少使用明显生硬的连接词的，而是通过紧扣论点的论据分类，代词的准确应用以及论点与分论点的内容呼应达到“不留痕迹，分段得体”的状态的。同学们要做到“连贯与衔接”的完美展现，谢爽老师建议大家掌握 “代词”的灵活应用和内容的彼此联系才是真谛。
雅思5作文（6）
连贯性是雅思写作很重要的一个评分标准。连贯性要怎么理解呢?英文原文是coherence,意思是the situation in which all the parts of something fit together well，即各个部分良好结合在一起的状况。因此，我们可以这样理解连贯性：作文的各个段落之间紧密联系，共同支撑文章观点;段落的句子间逻辑清晰，很好地支持段落大意;整篇文章以作者的想法为中心展开。
这样说似乎还是比较抽象。我们来看看雅思写作的具体分数段标准吧。
在雅思写作评分标准中，连贯性和衔接是放在一起的。连贯性着重考察文章的段落结构;而衔接着重考察连接词的使用。我们今天就看看连贯性标准到底是怎么说的。
我们先看看这个评分标准的两端。在1分的标准中，评分标准这样说：“没有传达任何信息。”而作为9分标准的描述则是：“非常有技巧地进行段落组织”。从这有着天壤之别的描述中，我们可以获知：
1、连贯性是文章能够传达信息的关键。1分对应的连贯性是几乎没有连贯性。丧失了连贯性的文章没有组织结构，没有内在逻辑，因而出现“不能传达任何信息”的描述。这很好理解，因为没有组织的文章，并不能完整地表达一个意思;文章各个部分之间，甚至可能是互相冲突的。我们能够进一步推知，认为雅思写作只考语言不看内容的想法是错误的;至少写作的评分标准当中强调了文章要表达一定的观点，这不是仅仅靠几个连接词就可以做到的。
2、段落组织是实现连贯性、进而取得写作高分的重要任务。9分的标准是“非常有技巧地进行段落组织”，这话有点不太好理解，因为段落组织和有技巧地都太过抽象。但是基本的任务我们是明确的：就是要组织段落，表达和支持一个观点和意思。如果对这个组织有什么要求的话，那就是这些段落的组织要遵从一定的逻辑顺序，例如并列，递进，或者背反，等等。
为了进一步弄清连贯性的内涵，我们继续看看中国考生最经常得到的5分和6分的描述。
5分：有一些组织，但整体推进欠缺;文章不以段落的形式出现，或者分段不合适。
6分：连贯地安排信息和观点，并且有总体的推进;有段落安排，但并不总是有逻辑。
我们看到这里主要有两条标准：一是文章整体的组织和推进;一是文章的分段和段落之间的逻辑关系。
文章整体的组织说的是文章能不能完整地表达一个观点。换句话说，文章是否有明显的观点，这些观点能否得到支撑。这里尤其要注意的是推理的环节。中文的逻辑是演绎的，我们只需要摆出证据和结论，中间的逻辑联系似乎一目了然。但是在英文中，证据和结论之间的关系要通过推理来证明。如果没有推理过程，那么显然这篇文章在连贯性，或者至少在文章组织方面是得不到高分的;因为没有推理的文章看起来是观点的罗列。
文章的分段和段落之间的逻辑关系牵涉到英语写作中的一条重要原则，即one paragraph, one point。一段表达一个意思。首先文章必须要分段;其次，分段的标准在于一个意思是否已经表达清楚。除此之外，还必须考虑两段的观点之间是否互相抵触，或者交叉，或者重复。如果有这样的情况，那就必须要将内容进行重新安排。
雅思5作文（7）
1 according to the
2 the date lead us to the conclusion
3 the date
4 the tree diagram reveals
5 the figures
6 this is a cure graph which describes the trend
7 the pie graph
8 the graph provides some interesting date
9 the table shows the changes in the number over the period
10 as is shown in the
11 the percentage remained steady
12 the percentage slightly large than that
13 there is not a great deal of difference
14 the graphs show a threefold increase in the number
year by year increased
16 there is an upward trend in the number
17 a considerable increase occurred
18 rate of decrease
19 from this year on, there was a gradual decline reduction in the
a figure
20 be similar the same as
21 there are a lot similarities
22 the difference between X and Y lies
雅思5作文（8）
My Views on Bicycle-sharing
Presently, in big cities like Shanghai and Guangzhou, bicycle-sharing system has becomeincreasingly A large number of shared bikes can be found and rented at a low , you can park the bike almost anywhere you Urban transportation has thus been made much more convenient and even , along with its rapid development, bicycle-sharing system also brings some problems, including random parking, vandalism and possession of shared bikes, solve these problems, there are some measures for the authorities to Firstly, the government could implement more strict laws and rules to regulate the operation and management of bicycle-sharing Secondly, the public should raise their awareness of using shared bike Lastly, urban transportation system should be upgraded and improved to accommodate automobiles, bikes and conclude, a sensible attitude should be held toward bicycle-sharing With effectiveand efficient measures taken, and efforts made by those involved, it can be expected that bicycle-sharing system will play a contributive and constructive role in urban public
【参考译文】共享单车之我见
目前，在上海和广州这样的大城市，自行车共享系统已成为越来越受欢迎。大量的共享自行车可以找到并出租，价格低廉，而且你可以把自行车停放在你喜欢的任何地方。城市交通因此变得更加便利，甚至革命化。然而，随着自行车交通的迅速发展，自行车共用系统也带来了一些问题，如乱停车、故意毁坏公物、共用自行车等。为了解决这些问题，当局采取了一些措施。首先，政府可以执行更严格的法律法规，规范自行车共用系统的运营和管理。第二，公众应该提高合理使用共用自行车的意识。最后，城市交通系统应升级改造，以适应汽车、自行车和行人。最后，应该对自行车共享计划采取明智的态度。以有效地采取措施，通过人的努力，可以预期的是，自行车共享系统将在城市公共交通中发挥积极和建设性作用。
雅思5作文（9）
例题：Staying healthy by playing sports and eating well should be an individual’s duty to society rather than a habit for personal Do you agree or disagree? 保持健康是个人对于社会的责任，但是，不是使个人受益的良好习惯，是否认同?
相关提问：
Some people believe that the government has the duty to ensure its citizens have a healthy diet， while others believe it is individuals’ Discuss both views and give your own 有人认为政府有责任保障人们的健康饮食，有人认为健康饮食是个人的责任，讨论两种观点，给出你的意见。
Some people believe that improving public health should increase the number of sports But others believe that it has little effects and needs other measures should be Discuss both views and give your own opinion 有人认为提高公众健康应该提高体育设施的数量，有人这种做法效果有限，应该采取其他方式，讨论两种观点，给出你的意见。
写作大纲：
首段：背景介绍 争议焦点 作家立场：保持健康是个人和政府的责任，但是，个人应该承担更多的责任
二段：让步原题观点的合理性
三段：反驳原题观点之不合理
尾段：再次亮明观点 (总结理由)
思路拓展：
为何保持健康是履行社会责任：
① 保持身体健康是个人履行社会责任的体现，因为这减少了对于国家医疗资源的消耗，国家就有财政预算解决其他民生问题。
② 如果个人的健康没有保障，难以胜任工作挑战，亦无法为社会发展做出应有贡献。相反，健康的公民可以创造社会财富，为国家发展注入新鲜活力。因此，是个人社会责任的体现。
为何保持健康是良好的个人习惯：
① 对于个人的利好：增强自信，减少忧虑，培养乐观人生态度。健康者通常为热爱运动者，通过运动可结实好友，这就意味着快乐源泉之增加。
② 对于家庭的利好：可以想象，个人健康状况令人担忧，家人必然痛苦和担忧(例如企业家和文体明星)，因此，个人健康可以使人乐观地实现家庭的和谐。
③ 对于事业、学业的利好：个人健康可以提高学习和工作效率，使人精力充沛地应对事业的挑战。
语料：
keep fit = remain healthy = stay healthy 保持健康
have a reasonable health management 有良好的健康管理
…… can instill confidence into one’s heart = build up one’s self-confidence …… 可以增强人的自信
strengthens one’s immune system 增强人的免疫系统
enhance one’s health index 提高人的健康指数
Happiness lies，first of all，in health 健康是幸福人生的本源。
If citizens can strengthening physical exercise and keep a wholesome dietary habit, then their perfect health index can be In this sense, it will greatly diminish the consumption of social health medical 如果公民可以加强体育锻炼，保持健康饮食，他们可以保持良好的健康指数。从这个意义上讲，这会减少社会医疗资源的消耗。
Keeping fit is indispensable factor for improving people’s quality of 保持健康对于提高人们的生活质量而言，是不可缺少的因素。
It is unshakable duty of every individual to embark on a healthier lifestyle 开始健康的生活方式, 是人人不可推卸的责任。
Health makes one brave career challenges energetically and harmonize family life 健康使人经历充沛地应对事业的挑战，乐观地实现家庭和和谐。
雅思5作文（10）
题目：
Some people think international cooperation has brought benefits to world environment protection, while some people think more benefits have been brought to international Discuss both views and give your own
国际合作到底带来了什么?
范文：
Nowadays, countries like to maintain a strong and healthy relationship with each other for several Many people argue that environment issues such as global warming, preservation of natural habitat of rare species and detrimental effects of nuclear energy could only be solved with mutual Others claim that nations join hands in order to achieve lucrative business opportunities around the
如今，国家之间保持一种强大而健康的关系有几个原因。许多人认为，诸如全球变暖、珍稀物种自然栖息地的保护和核能的有害影响等环境问题只能通过共同努力才能解决。另一些人则声称，为了在全球范围内获得有利可图的商业机会，各国携手合作。
There is no denying that global warming is the biggest threat to the That should be tackled on an emergency basis, one of the reason is that a large number of people are exploring and exploiting natural resources for the sake of their own benefits, which is damaging the environment on larger Many countries have set up organisations that are researching on the causes and will proposed solutions to the They are expecting to form some standards and legislation based on their research that would help on depletion of such
无可否认，全球变暖是对环境最大的威胁。这需要在紧急的基础上解决，原因之一是大量的人为了自己的利益而勘探和开发自然资源，这在更大程度上破坏了环境。许多国家已经建立了组织，研究原因并将提出解决问题的办法。他们希望在他们的研究基础上形成一些标准和立法，以帮助减少此类问题。
On the other hand, many international food and hotel chains are expanding worldwide that are the source of employment for many people in developing Another big advantage is to get potential labours in cheap rate, for example, the biggest giant of information technology ‘Apple’ has all its production in China because of low wages of workers and free if cost electricity provided by the Chinese government, thus tremendously helping both countries, as apple has low production cost and thus have huge profit margins, while people of china are getting jobs and their government are enjoying tax on the development and sales of each item of products,.
另一方面，许多国际食品和酒店连锁正在世界范围内扩张，这是发展中国家许多人的就业来源。另一大优势是廉价的潜在劳动率,例如,信息技术的最大的巨头“苹果”已经全部在中国生产,因为低工资的工人和免费的电力,因此极大地帮助这两个国家,像苹果生产成本较低,因此有巨大的利润空间,而中国的人们获得就业机会,政府获得税收。
To sum up, I would like to say that international cooperation is essential for the mutual benefits of countries, thus has significant positive effects on their economy and also create a new horizon of opportunities for their
综上所述，我想说的是，国际合作对各国的共同利益至关重要，因此对各国经济产生了重大的积极影响，也为各国人民创造了新的机遇。
雅思5作文（11）
雅思大作文题目
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Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these Discuss both views and give your own
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本周写作的话题是：年轻人是否适合在政府担任要职?
有些人认为是可以的，有些人认为不可以，题目要求我们讨论双方观点，并给出你自己的观点。本题是20XX年7月10日的原题再现(是不是太久远了?)，另外，20XX年1月1日的考题(年轻人是否适合在机构担任领导?)也与本题非常接近。
年轻人是否适合在政府担任要职呢?这个题目当然应该关注“年轻人”、“政府”、“要职”这些关键词，应该讨论政府要职有哪些要求，年轻人有哪些特点，这些特点是否适合他们在政府中发挥作用，等等。注意我们在思维的时候不要过于复杂，要尽量简洁直接。比如政府要职的要求，如果要复杂地思考那就要考虑很多东西了(比如管理能力，正直，处理人际关系，素质等等)。我们要从众多思维中选择与年轻人相关的东西来讨论。
担任政府要职需要经验，这是年轻人缺乏的，因此年轻人不适合担任【反对】。
担任政府要职需要改变精神，这是年轻人擅长的，因此年轻人适合担任【赞同】。
我的观点：有些政府要职更注重经验，最好不要年轻人担任，但另一些要职更需要激情，年轻人完全可以担任【一分为二的结论】。
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As we can see on television, the important positions in the government are often held by gray-haired menand While it is assumed by many that the elderly people are more experienced and capable, I would say that some important government positions should also be open to young
我们可以在电视上看到，政府重要职位通常是由头发花白的男人和女人担任。虽然很多人认为，老年人更富有经验和能力，但我想说，政府的一些重要职位也应开放给年轻人。
解析
(1)本段为引入段，提出现象和自己的观点。
(2) gray-haired man 头发花白的人
(3) assume 假设，认为
(4) capable 有能力的
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Undoubtedly, experience is of utmost importancefor many government These positions have to deal with a great number of people every day and crisis may emergeany For example, a foreign affairs minister has to make quick responsesto the problems that may come from all over the world every Without the rich experience collected from his long-time service in this field, it would be unlikely for him to fulfill his Young people, therefore, are not really suitable for this type of government
毫无疑问，对许多政府职位来说，经验是最重要的。这些职位每天必须与大量的人打交道，危机随时可能出现。例如，外交部长必须对世界各地每分钟可能出现的问题迅速做出反应。没有他在这一领域长期服务所积累的丰富经验，他不可能履行他的职责。因此，年轻人真不太适合这种政府职位。
解析
(1)本段论述某些政府职位需要经验，不适合年轻人，用外交部来举例。
(2) of utmost importance 极其重要 (= extremely important)
(3) emerge 出现
(4) response 反应
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However, young people should be given the opportunity to hold those government positions which call formore passion than Young people who are more open-minded and receptiveto new idea than the elderly, are more likely to solve problems in an innovative way, and to put theiroriginalideas into action, which may lead to unexpected As far as I understand, the national ministry of education as well as the primary schools and middle schools should be led by young people who are more inspiringand
然而，应该给年轻人机会担任那些需要更多激情而非经验的政府职位。年轻人比老年人更开放，更接受新想法，因此更有可能以创新的方式解决问题，并把自己新颖的想法付诸行动，这可能会带来意想不到的好处。在我看来，国家部教育以及中小学应该由更具启发性和创新性的年轻人来领导。
解析
(1)本段论述某些政府职位(比如教育部和中小学)应该由年轻人来担任。
(2) call for 要求
(3) receptive 包容的
(4) innovative 革新的
(5) original 新颖的
(6) inspiring 启发性的
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It is, therefore, difficult to draw a general conclusion about whether young people should hold important government For some positions which are more experience-based, the elderly people are more suitable candidates, yet for other positions which require more passionate spirit than experience, young people can perhaps do a better job than their elderly
因此，很难对年轻人是否应该担任重要政府职务做普遍结论。对于一些更基于经验的职位，老年人是更合适的人选，但对于其他需要更多的激情而不是经验的职位，年轻人或许可以比他们的老年同行做得跟好。
解析
(1)本段提出自己的观点：有些职位需要老年人担任，有些职位需要年轻人担任。
(2) candidate 候选人
(3) ounterpart 相对应的人(物)
雅思5作文（12）
套用模板式话语。结果，没有任何词汇和语法错误的文章却被考官降低分数等级，原因在于抄袭痕迹太重，原创成分过少。
以“人与宠物”作文一题为例，相当一部分考生提笔就写宠物是人类的朋友、人类应与之平等相处等，这样的作文因缺乏个性，难得高分。“大框架可借鉴优秀范文，但具体内容一定要添加个性化见解和事例”。
类似情况也出现在雅思口语考试中。雅思口语考试第二部分要求考生单独说话两分钟，很多考生就背作文，缺乏和考官的交流，这同样会让考分大打折扣。
建议考生在写作和口语考试中，一定要鲜明亮出自己的观点，并多用自己熟悉和生动的事例来佐证，这样的文章才能得高分。
雅思5作文（13）
问：在雅思作文中使用名言和谚语可取吗?写图表作文的技巧是什么?你怎么看待雅思作文模板?范文应该怎么用?要背吗?
老师：在雅思作文中，如果使用名言或是谚语，将会被扣分。雅思作文要求写的是你的观点，你是如何想的，而不是考核你背诵名言警句的能力。模板则是个两刃剑，对于基础比较差的同学，模板有助于写作结构的搭建和迅速上手，但对于想拿高分的同学来说，模板使用过多，尤其是那些比较僵化的模板，无助于分数的提高。范文，需要的是仔细分析和学习，背诵当然是学习的方法之一，但如果考试时把背的范文原封不动照搬，则会扣分。我们提倡的是对于范文的创造性使用。
雅思5作文（14）
Recently, the debate over whether people who have been in a foreign country should accept the new culture or form a separate minority with different values and lifestyle has aroused wide concern. People retain diverse attitudes towards this hot issue. Before presenting my view, I intend to explore both sides of the argument.
Many people claim that people living in a new country should accept the new culture and adapt to their new environment. To begin with, by accepting the new notions and lifestyle, you can easily survive and enjoy a comfortable life and be well adaptable. Moreover, it is a necessity for overseas students to adapt to the new culture and society, because it may impose an adverse influence on their living and study if they cannot be socially adaptable. Furthermore, to form a separate minority may bring out negative outcomes such as hostility and resentment. It will undoubtedly exert a negative impact on relationship between people from different nations.
Some other people, however, strongly hold that it is necessary to form a group with their own values and lifestyle for several sound reasons. Firstly, they are in a foreign country and are actually a minority with little power, many of which even have no equal rights. Therefore, it is wise for them to join together to enhance their strength to cope with social problems. Secondly, by helping each other in the group, people can more easily adapt to the new community and society and lead a better life. Thirdly, students in a new environment may more or less have physical or psychological problems, so it is helpful for students to get together to help each other.
雅思5作文（15）
This graph/pie chart/table/bar chart reflects the (rate/percentage/proportion/number …) of (对象) in(place/country)from …to…
According to the figure ， it is not surpring findings that there was/were 总体趋势的描述(the overall trend tended to indicate…/the general trend is…/其他)
结尾
In conclude ， the overall trend tended to illustrate ……during this -year period
雅思小作文模板——线状图
1.先(上升/下降)后(下降/上升)，之后便平稳
According to the data ， the years from …to…saw/winess a rise/climb/drop in the number/rate/percentage/proportion of 对象 from数据to数据，which was followed by a rapid decrease/reduce/increase over the years.
The number/rate…droped/went up again from…in year to…in year and then went up/clined gradually until year ，when there was a leveling off/leveling out at 数据 for 一段时间。
2.对峰值和低谷的描述
Also it can be noticed that in year ，the number/percentage … reached the buttom . However/on the contrary，**year saw the peak during this period.
……时间点 ，when the number/percentage reached(amounted to)to a peak of… / a high point at …
……时间点，when the number/percentage bottomed out (at…)
3.趋势相同描述
The proportion/number of 对象 in the and are similar and follow the same trend.In the figures were % and % respectively，rising to % and % respectively in ，after dipping to % and % respectively in .(总体的趋势介绍)Thereafter，分开介绍即可
4.对未来的表述以及转换词
…is projected to…… as to
…is expected to…… as for
…is forcasted to …… …is estimated to…
5. 对波动的描述
as can be seen from the graph，the two curves show the flutuation of…
如图所示，两条曲线描述了…的波动情况。
……fluctuated dramatically between % and % during …period .
此外，在描述过程中还有很多的conjunctional words/sentences，最常用的固定搭配如下：
并列： as well as(句首/中)， also， as well(句尾)， either， neither， too， moreover， furthermore， in addition， additionally， besides， what’s more， apart from …
举例： for example， for instance， to illustrate， as an illustration， in particular， particularly， especially
事实： as a matter of fact， in fact， actually， as long as， so long as …
雷同/近似：similarly， likewise(句首/尾)， at the same time， equally …
转折： however， whereas， nevertheless， nonetheless， though， although， even though， while， yet， on the contrary， contrarily， in contrast， conversely， on the other hand， unlikely， instead (of)， in spite of， despite of …
雅思小作文模板——饼状图
1.描述
It is clear that the most (adj.) is A， which accounts for m% of all x . B is the next largest(adj.) ，n% lower than A of all x and followed closely by C . The above three items of take uo about o% of the x%
By contrast D E andF make uo the smallest percentage of total x ， which are p% q% and r% ，respectively.
The regions can be divided into two groups-one where … and the other where the reverse is the case.
2.比较，占据，百分数
Form， comprise， make up， occupy
Constitute， cover， represent， account for
Be shared by
In 1950， the urban population represented less than 13% of the total. It is now about 40% and is expected to reach 60% by 2030. (摘自BBC)
3.比例，倍数
A quarter of…
Half of…
A majority of…
A has something in common with b
A shares some similarity with b
The difference between a and b lies in…
Double， triple， quadruple (v， n， adj)
原来的2倍-double， 50→100
原来的3倍-triple， 50→150
原来的4倍-quadruple， 50→200
The value of the house has increased fourfold (=it is now worth four times as much as before).
…be twice as adj. as …..
…more than times as adj. as …..
雅思小作文模板——柱状图
柱状图和线型图写法一致，并且结合饼状图来写!
表格题
1. 找出最大值，最小值，以及一般值
2. 进行分析比较，找出近似值和相差很大的数值
常用句式
1.a is nearly /more than…times as much/many/large as b.
a是b的…倍。
3. be the same as…
与…相同
4.表原因的句子：
(1). cause-effect (较常用) ： lead to / bring about / result in/ account for … (一个句子/shared the same tendency)， therefore / thus / hence / as a result / consequently / (and) so …
(2). effect-cause (较常用)
be caused by / result from / be the result of / be the effect of / be the consequence of … (一个句子/shared the same tendency)， because …
it is adj. that …
it is unimaginable that …
it is undeniable that …
it is interesting to discover that …