雅思作文高分范文（1）
It is shown that many criminals have a low level of Some people argue that the best way to reduce crime is to educate criminals in prison to help them find jobs when they leave Do you agree or disagree?
题目分析：
题目类型：犯罪类
提问方式：同意与否类
Crime from the juvenile to the adults, obviously, has become an serioussocial problem, which cannot be Gradually, more people focus on the future of criminal released from the prison, and believe that to provide them educational opportunities does help the reduction of crime; as for me, I am an advocate of this
As the major reason of high crime rate in today's society, low education level has been People without receiving enough education would be attempted easily, and do not have the equal and excellent skills to compete with others when looking for a job; besides, lacking sufficient moral knowledge to distinguish right from wrong contributes to go astray on their way to pursue the It is worth providing the prisoners, especially committing minor crimes, with education opportunities before free, which not only can give them another chance to learn some practical skills and accumulate certain knowledge to find a job and start again after the sentence, but also decline the risk that they would turn to crime
On the other hand, educational opportunities in prison cannot be the universal solution of all the problems the prisoners The huge life pressure and the attitude from other citizens could lead them to go back to the old lifestyle, or even cause more serious problems to both the society and the individuals financially and However, no one can doubt the function of education as the basic mean to provide people and the society a brighter future; thus, though education cannot solve all the problems at once, it is necessary for a long
In conclusion, in spite of many causes in high crime rate, our society should realize the importance of education, and give all the criminals the second chance to do something right and have a better development in the future
雅思作文高分范文（2）
Task：Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of a three-year-old child to see whether they will grow up to be To what extent do you think the human nature produces crimes? And how can we prevent children from growing up to be criminals?
参考范文：
Does a child’s performance at the age of 3 decide whether he or she would be a criminal in the future? Personally, I partially agree that gene defects in some cases indeed cause some illegal actions, while it is unwise to attribute all crimes to the gene problem, and my reasons will be explored as
Admittedly, to the extent of Geneticism, this assertion is reasonable, because some of human behaviors, attitudes and characteristics are determined by DNA, and there is always homeotypical continuity from inappropriate behaviors in childhood to criminality in For example, symptoms of gene-based psychological abnormality, which stems from the imbalanced secretion of hormones in brain, can be reflected in the very young age as inattention, restlessness, apathy, the lack of guilt about wrongdoings, and unkindness to other In adulthood, there is a high possibility that these morbid emotional traits evolve into anti-social minds--specifically, disregarding of rights of others or rules of society, irresponsibility, aggressive personalities and misperceptions about the right and
However, I strongly believe this assertion is problematic, for the reason that it completely underestimates more fundamental influences of other aspects on children after their Firstly, parents always play a key role in children’s formative education that directly shapes behaviors, minds and values of For example, poor parenting skills in daily life, such as violence and corporal punishment, tend to make personalities of children aggressive and rude, even irritable, which might turn into dangerous behaviors and anti-social minds in
Besides, violent contents on the internet, TV programs and video games are also responsible for juvenile It is because youngsters, unlike adults, are lack of abilities to distinguish right from Therefore, too much violence in the virtual world could twist the social values of young As a result, they, more often than not, consider violence as the main or even only way to solve problems, thereby leading to
In conclusion, there are more factors that might result in delinquencies of the youth than genes, and the impacts from parents and media on children’s growth are bigger than that from
雅思作文高分范文（3）
Task：Crimes committed by young people are increasing in major cities throughout the Discuss the causes and how to solve this problem?
参考范文：
Nowadays, it has been reported that there has been an increasing number of crimes committed by youngsters in major cities all over the What causes this phenomenon and what people could do to resolve the problem have been widely In this essay, I would investigate the reasons and suggest some possible solutions
There are two main reasons why this kind of crimes is on the Firstly, violence on the internet, TV programs and video games is responsible for this It is because youngsters, unlike adults, are lack of abilities to distinguish right from Therefore, too much violence in the virtual world could render young people As a result, they, more often than not, consider violence as the main or even only way to solve problems, thereby leading to Secondly, low employment rate in many big cities around the world could be another major Most countries are experiencing economic plateau or even backwards due to global economic crisis occurring a few years Consequently, many businesses and factories have decided to cut off their staff or ten d to employ experienced workers over young This means some youngsters become jobless spontaneously once they Some of them even turn to commit crimes to make a living or get revenge on
In order to solve the problem, some main methods are advised The first solution is to apply censorship and classification in issuing This means governments or non-governmental organizations should censor the violent and prostitute contents of programs and label them such as “adult only” or “viewers excluded below 14” before programs are This would help to keep youngsters from too much violence on programs Another method is to carry out free job training programs designed closely related to the demand of the job After training, youngsters, more of ten than not, can expect better chances of being Other ways could include tax-reduction policy for university graduates self-employment, providing paid social service positions for youngsters,
To conclude, methods such as censorship on programs and free job training for youngsters are strongly recommended too much violence on programs and low
雅思作文高分范文（4）
以下是一篇Band 的学生习作，及其修改过程，我们借以深刻理解并学会根据以上的评分标准来约束并提高自己的写作实力。
题目：20XX年06月13日(题目本身信息难度不大)
The charts show the information about the water consumption and water residential use in Australia in
The charts include the information which represent the Australian water consumption and residential use in
The residential cost +of water is divided into two parts,》: one is +for house and another one》the other is +for The house one》The former accounted for the most part which is》was 57 As for the apartment, one》itis much less than +the water use inside the house, which is only 13 There are also several other fields, including industry, business, government and but compare with the residential use , their total cost is only a small others take 3 percent which is the smallest government is the second smallest which only occupied 6 the business and industry are respectively 10 percent and 11
》》将以上句子进行合并：
Compared with the residential water usage, several other fields consumed only a small section of water, including industry, business, government and others, the amount of which are 11[[[%]]], 10[[[%]]], 6[[[%]]] and 3[[[%]]] (提高句子表达效率和效果)
讲解：通过本段可以看出，该生信息描述不够准确，语言比较重复，而且标点符号错误率很高。
In addition, there are five parts will have》need water consumption inside a home,》. They are bathroom, toilet, washing clothes, kitchen and >, each accounting for 28[[[%]]] 15[[[%]]] 20[[[%]]] 10[[[%]]] and 27[[[%]]]
讲解：标点问题直接引发语法问题，而且对于动词时态的把握也有失偏颇。
全文缺少overview，所以导致字数严重不足。
来看老师给出的参考例文：
The charts show the information about the water consumption and water residential use in Australia in ——改写
The pie chart compares the amount of water consumed in some different areas in the year 20XX in The table shows how much water was consumed in Australian
It is clear that most of water was used in the domestic sector, while outdoor water use accounted for a big ——overview
We can see from the pie chart that water exerted a big role in the local family since 70[[[%]]] of water was consumed indoors, with 57[[[%]]] in residential houses and 13[[[%]]] of it used in residential apartments, while然而 governments and businesses needed lots of water, at around 10[[[%]]] ——饼图
Although outdoor water use, such as gardening, made up approximately 30[[[%]]] of household use, the rest of themwas》were used in the 28[[[%]]] of water was used for shower, followed by washing clothes (20[[[%]]]). Toilet and kitchen seemed to consume the least water in the bar ——柱图
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对于题目主干信息的表达多样性，是非常值得我们借鉴和学习的：
(1)家庭：
house——household
domestic sector
local family
(2)用水：
water consumption
water was consumed
water use
needed lots of water
water was used for shower
consume the least water
ps：虽然貌似词汇有限，但是多样性表达还是真真切切地做到了。此外，“使用”还可以表达为“utilise”或“utilisation”
该例文可以达到8 分水平：
(1)文章内容健全。
(2)组织合理：段落分布清晰，句子连接紧密而且逻辑自然通顺;
(3)单词充足且基本准确，但是局部单词使用不够精准，比如第二个图不能同table来表示，用bar或者column更加准确;
(4)语法方面，the rest of them was显然主谓不一致，应该改成were，但是这些问题并不影响理解。
(考试状态下如果能发挥到这种程度，小作文也就没有遗憾了。)
雅思作文高分范文（5）
1 掌握技巧，摒弃模板。之前我也有点依赖模板，觉得这样在考场上能保证按时完成作文，不用花太多时间在构思句式上面。但是模板套句用得多了滥了，考官也厌烦了，拿到一个比较高的分数的可能性也就不大。并且它也很容易限制我们的思维，自己想到的很多观点都被模板束缚了。所以我改变了写作的策略，不再依赖模板，而是把握好技巧。比如小作文，不少人在整个雅思写作的复习中都没有好好看过题目，main features也不知道指的什么，也忽略了题目要求的“比较”，这样基本性的东西都没掌握的话，提高分数无异于天方夜谭。大作文也是一样，其实我们往往忽略题目，殊不知磨刀不误砍柴工，一字一句分析完题目再去写，要比写了一半忽然发现有离题嫌疑再去修改要来得容易。所以我的经验是不要为了省一点点时间去冒险。
2 多背多记多练习。语言学习没有捷径可以走，从单词到句子，都得发功夫去背记。在背记的过程中，我们的语感会自然而然地增强，它这种潜移默化的作用可能在短期内效果不太明显，但只要坚持两三个月，就会感到英语也不是那么爱和自己叫板，自己还是有点语言天赋的。多背多记之后，还是得多写作多练习。把自己在课堂上的东西先掌握，然后尽量在练习的文章中使用出来，这样才是真正的属于自己的东西。
3巧妙分配时间，合理进行规划。雅思写作一共就是1个小时，按照要求是大小作文分别40分钟和20分钟。这个是我们自己可以调整的。在备考时，如果急于出成绩，我先前把精力大量放在大作文上面，而在考前的两个个礼拜里面，我侧重小作文的练习，因为短期里面，小作文拿分比大作文拿分是相对容易一点的。这在第一节课中我便了解了，也是从那时候开始对自己的复习进行的系统规划。除了作文，我也把听、说、读进行了调整，我觉得后期应该对口语进行突破，便加了几节口语课，把写作课提前上。可以按照自己的需要，在老师的建议下对课程进行调整，优化自己的复习准备。
4 作文批改。如果一味的输出信息，即使天天写作，也不一定有什么进步。我之前的一个误区就是作文只是需要多练习。练习之后的老师批改也是极其重要的。因为我们写作出来之后，自己去看文章，很难找出问题。而只要老师稍微指点，发现自己的问题，之后进行归纳总结，看看容易出错的地方在哪儿，是主谓一致的搭配，或者拼写错误，等等。这样在以后的写作中就会着重检查这些问题，一直到最后避免此类问题的出现。在整个上课和备考的过程中，我写了很多篇作文，虽然刚开始错误百出，但是很明显的是常犯的错误在减少，这也和老师纠错有着紧密关系。
5 培养兴趣，找到症结，增强自信。“兴趣是最好的老师”，这是当大家第一次接触英语就听到的一句话，虽然近乎变成陈词滥调，但是不失为一句真理。带着兴趣去学习，效率高并且不会感觉被动。而信心又是进步的基石。我在刚开始上课时，由于受到前两次考试失败经历的影响，总觉得自己的写作特别差。在老师的帮助下，我慢慢意识到自己在英语方面还是有很多优势的，比如大学期间积累了很多词汇，这也是能提高成绩的一个关键，因为没有词汇作为基础，其他的都是纸上谈兵。同时，我也发现了自己的很多弱点，单词虽然知道认识，但是写下来就会错误百出，要么丢掉一个字母要么拼写错误。认识到这点，在之后的复习中我便刻意注意这些单词的拼写。渐渐的，错误少了，我的自信也建立起来了。
雅思作文高分范文（6）
题目：剑桥雅思官方指南中Test 7 Task 1的作文，原题目是The map below shows the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in
从题目可知，该题为地图题，主要有两张地图组成，属于地理变迁类。题目描述的是Stokeford村庄在1930年和20XX年的发展变化。地理变迁题的写作，考生要根据时间以及空间顺序来写，小作文的写作还要格外注意时态与语态。
从图中得知，没有变化的是横跨河流的桥梁以及邮局的位置，而有所变化的是商店，农场没有了;新增几条支路以及很多住宅;花园被改建成了养老院;学校的规模也扩大了。因此，从变化中，我们在写主体段的时候可以分别描述这个村庄在1930年和20XX年的发展变化较好写一些。
下面，我们来具体看看每个段落的详细内容以及进行分析。
第一段描写的是第一张地图的内容：
先整体描述在1930年，River Stoke贯穿了Stokeford村庄的东北角到西南角，地图上显示有一座桥，连接河流两岸地区。
In 1930, the River Stoke crossed through the Stokeford from northeast corner to southwest corner and a bridge in the top was over this river for providing the path for the road in this
第二段主要描述的是第二幅图的内容，即70年后该村庄的发展变化。
最后，小编将范文分享给大家，考生们可以参照学习学习。
In 1930, the River Stoke crossed through the Stokeford from northeast corner to southwest corner and a bridge in the top was over this river for providing the path for the road in this It is obvious that there is nothing in the west side of the Moving to the eastside of the river stoke, the primary school was right in the center of the maps well as next to the To the south side of the primary school was the gardens with a large Besides, along the road from north to south, several buildings, shops, post office and farmland were located in the west side of
After 70 years, as can be seen from the map of 20XX, there was no change happened in the west side of the river and about the post office, but all of the farmlands and shops had been Moreover, the primary school had been expanded with two buildings and to the south of which, the original gardens had been reduced and developed as the retirement
Lastly, several branches of the road had been constructed with plenty of houses, which had been established along
雅思作文高分范文（7）
The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where at least 150
参考范文
The two maps demonstrate the changes made to an island after it was turned into a tourist
The holiday resort which occupied about three quarter of the island consists of a reception building, a restaurant, and numerous chalets; all located within a walking In addition, the reception area is also connected directly to a newly built pier which made it more accessible by For the convenience of the guests, a vehicle track that connects the pier, the reception and the restaurant was also
To further promote the island as a holiday attraction, various spots of the island have been upgraded for recreational For example, swimming is now available at the beach near the west end of the island and sailing can be done near the pier of the
Overall, the transformation of the island into a vacation spot has brought much improvements to the island without any As a matter of fact, there are now more trees in the island than
雅思作文高分范文（8）
话题：The map shows the village of Chorleywood showing development between 1868 and 1994
范文
The map shows the growth of a village called Chorleywood between 1868 and
It is clear that the village grew as the transport infrastructure was Four periods of development are shown on the map, and each of the populated areas is near to the main roads, the railway or the
From 1868 to 1883, Chorleywood covered a small area next to one of the main Chorleywood Park and Golf Course is now located next to this original village The village grew along the main road to the south between 1883 and 1922, and in 1909 a railway line was built crossing this area from west to Chorleywood station is in this part of the
The expansion of Chorleywood continued to the east and west alongside the railway line until At that time, a motorway was built to the east of the village, and from 1970 to 1994, further development of the village took place around motorway intersections with the railway and one of the main
雅思作文高分范文（9）
The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown at least 150
参考范文:
The two maps show the layout of the same seaside village in 1995 and at
Overall, it is evident that the infrastructure for housing and recreation has increased at the expense of agricultural land and commercial
The most notable changes are the disappearance of the fishing port and adjacent fish market, as well as the creation of a golf course and tennis courts in the north-east, where farmland and a forest park were still found in Furthermore, a new housing development containing apartments is now found on the waterfront at the former site of the fish market, and a number of restaurants have been built on the opposite side of the road where shops used to
There was also an increase in the total number of houses, from 12 in 1995 to 16 at In addition, the road encircling a small housing development west of the main road has been extended further
The hotel and cafe in the south-east have remained as A new car park has been added next to the
雅思作文高分范文（10）
The maps illustrate how Meadowside village and Fonton, which is a neighbouring town, have developed over three different time periods (1962, 1985 and the present).
范文：
Overall, Meadowside village increased in size and has become Meadowside Suburb as it merged together with Furthermore, there have been significant changes in infrastructure, housing and facilities over the period
In 1962, both Meadowside and Fonton were completely separate with no roads or rail connecting While Fonton had a railway line running through it to the north, Meadowside, located to the west of Fonton, only had a small road from the
By 1985, there was a considerable growth in the size of Meadowside village and The small road in Meadowside village had been converted into a main road and was also extended to the east to connect with Meadowside, moreover, had also developed a housing estate in the west, a leisure complex and a supermarket in the
Currently, both Meadowside, which is now a suburb, and Fonton are The railway line, which runs through Fonton, has been extended to the west where a train station has been To the north of the station, a hotel has been constructed and opposite the station, to the south, there is now a business