雅思9作文（1）
雅思作文通常给出一种现象,需要考生分析这种现象出现的原因,带来的影响或者提出解决的办法。下面小编为您搜集了雅思人口作文，欢迎查看!
雅思人口作文【1】
The aging population is going to become a major concern particularly in more developed countries, but this should not be viewed as something threatening to society. It is a blessing for any individual to live a long and healthy life, only that it could indicate that the responsibilities of caring for the elderly in the future may partly fall on the younger generation. The questions refer especially to how the younger generation could provide answers that are able to move society forward, taking into account a number of social and economic effects on the nation as a whole.
As the proportion of older people is steadily increasing, there are doubts over changes regarding the structure of a modern society. A possible change may the distribution of years of expected lifespan on the social scale, now that the family planning program is in fashion. Then, what will this dramatic shift mean for social services, such as health caring and pension on retirement? Overall effects, however, are not clear enough; for instance, how older peoples prolonged lives are to be arranged in the social context? At this point, it is interesting to know how todays younger generation would re-think their roles in society if they might live 100 or more and be in good shape? And should working people in society continue to be retired as usual at 60 and 65 ?
雅思人口作文【2】
The two charts give information about single-occupant households in England in the year 2011. The bar chart compares figures for occupants' age and gender, and the pie chart shows data about the number of bedrooms in these homes.
Overall, females made up a higher proportion of people living alone than males, and this difference is particularly noticeable in the older age categories. We can also see that the most common number of bedrooms in a single-occupant home was two.
A significant majority of the people aged 65 or over who were living alone in England in 2011 were female. Women made up around 72% of single occupants aged 75 to 84, and 76% of those aged 85 or over. By contrast, among younger adults the figures for males were higher. For example, in the 35-49 age category, men accounted for nearly 65% of people living alone.
In the same year, 35.4% of one-person households in England had two bedrooms, while one-bedroom and three-bedroom homes accounted for 28% and 29.8% of the total. Under 7% of single-occupant homes had four or more bedrooms.
雅思人口作文【3】
Is it a good idea to control the world's population growth?
Arguments
1. In modern times, a family with few children, or even with no children at all, is still a happy family.
2. With fewer children in a family, parents spend less time on household chores and concentrate more on their own interests, and their children enjoy better material and educational opportunities than those in bigger families.
3. The most pressing problem created by the rapid increase in population is a shortage of food. At present a large proportion of the existing population is not getting enough of the right kind of food.
4. The rapid rise in world population is creating problems for all countries on earth because there simply aren't enough resources.
5. Both rich and poor countries of the world should take united action to deal with the population explosion. Otherwise, there will be more people fighting for less land and fewer resources, and the future will bring poverty, misery and war to us all.
6. Population increase in developing countries has wiped out the material benefits that they have achieved.
7. Statistics show that where the population rate is high, people's living standards are Jow. This means, people's living conditions cannot improve unless there is a reduction in the increased rate of population.
8. Overpopulation creates a shortage of schools, teachers, hospitals and doctors.
9. Overpopulation causes problems in housing and employment, especially in cities.
10. Just imagine how much better life would be if the world population were cut by half!
Counter-arguments
1. People in agricultural areas need more children to help them with the work in the fields.
2. Whether to have children or not is a private matter and nobody should interfere with it.
3. It is unfair to blame all the problems on the increase in population. It is those greedy manufacturers and businessmen in developed countries that make the heaviest demands on the world's resources and cause the most pollution.
4. If population control were a must, it should be carried out in developed countries as well because a baby born in USA will use in his lifetime 30 times more of the world's resources than a baby born in India.
5. Children are the most important in life. With fewer children around, life will be dull, meaningless and unhappy. It is incredible for a couple to have no children at all.
6. Children in a family give the parents a sense of responsibihty and pride. They are very important to the stability of a family.
7. Population control does greater harm than we realize. For instance, if the one-child pohcy is still in practice in 100 years, people then will have little idea of kinship~ ties, for most of them will have no brothers, sisters, uncles, aunts, or cousins.
8. With the govermnent's family planning policy in operation we now have a generation of "only child" families: most of them are arrogant, selfish, and spoilt.
9. A big family offers children a chance to learn how to cope with and care for other people.
10. Children in big families have the chance to compete with each other, in terms of their manners at home, their study at school, their performance at their place of work, etc. Older children usually have a great influence on the younger one.
雅思9作文（2）
这名学生的例子——起初对雅思作文一无所知，两周之内能够拿到一个好的分数，说明短期突破确实可能。然而，前提是学生必须满足一些条件：1，有一定的语言基础，譬如说语法和词汇；2，见多识广，可以迅速想出观点；3，能够避免一些常见语法错误，快速掌握一些常用句子。
很明显，很多中国学生是不具备这些条件的。特别是从来没有接触社会的学生，对一些雅思题目基本上是一筹莫展。大家可以看看以下这些今年考过的作文题目：
题目1：社会需要关注“现在”，还是“未来”？
An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious.”
Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present. Do you agree or disagree?
题目2： 年轻人数目增多的影响
Some countries have an ever-increasing proportion of population who are aged 15 and younger. What is your opinion of the current and future effects it may have in those countries.
题目3：国际旅游使人有偏见，还是心胸开阔？
Some people think that international travel makes them prejudiced rather than broad-minded. Give the reason why people cannot benefit from travel and how to improve the understanding of countries you visit.
以上三个题目，分别涉及文化学、社会学和旅游学。这些题目，不要说考生，即便是雅思老师，如果不仔细思考，或者没看过相关的文章，都不可能短时间想出好的观点。我自己闲时常看各个学科的教科书，才可以大概把握住题目的中心，和相关的观点。而其他的老师，大部分都是语言学出身，只是设计一些所谓的模板，就可以帮助学生考过雅思？难让人信服。因此，所谓的“十天突破雅思作文”，不过是吸引眼球的噱头——毕竟任何的`考生，在基础很差的情况下，不可能十天之内突破任何一篇以上的文章。考生生搬硬套模板，仿佛效果立竿见影，可以凑足250字；然而，考官不在乎你的文章“看”起来怎么样，而是在乎你的文章“写”的怎么样。正如我在书中所说，雅思作文考察四个标准：
1， 语法（syntax）；
2， 词汇(lexical source)；
3， 应题(task response)；
4， 连贯性(consistency)；
我不相信,世上有那么妙法,可以帮助学生短期突破这四个标准的任何一个。如果有，我倒愿意回国一学。因此，我真诚地建议各位考生朋友，好好复习，抓好基础，放弃那种不劳而获的妄念。否则，你只会一次又一次地给雅思考试中心送钱。总有一天，当你们进入大学的时候，你们才知道所谓的“作文”，大概是怎么回事！
细节一：标点“独行侠”问题
按英文书写规定，标点应紧挨着它的附着意群进行标注，与另一个意群要以一个字符的空格隔开。
但是在实际作文中经常发现学生部论什么标点都会当作一个单词来对待，即标点前后都空下空格，结果给人以标点满天飞的感觉，影响了文章的美感。有例为证：
First , energy and other natural resources have become more abundant , not less so , since the book ‘ The Limits to Growth ’ was published by a group of scientists .
可以看出，标点像独行侠一样出现在句子中，会给人以喧宾夺主的感觉。所以大家平时练习时就要注意正确书写标点。
细节二：句首单词首字母大小写问题
通常情况下，同学们只要感觉是个句子就都把句首单词首字母大写了，但是在实际写作中情况如何呢？下面我们来看个例子。
Some corpora attempt to cover the language as a whole; others are extremely selective.
分号的作用是对关系非常紧密的句子进行分隔，所以后一个句子只是前一个的附属，并不是一个独立的新句子，所以首字母仍然要小写的。这个现象同样适用于冒号、破折号、括号。
细节三：书写过于随意
每个人都有自己的书写习惯，但是雅思考试毕竟是要给外国人看的，所以大家如果能够在书写习惯上贴近老外，肯定会给人以亲切的卷面印象。比如不要书写得过于密集，以免让人看不清单词，影响理解。也不要写得过于稀疏而让人无法在eye span 范围内看到完整的意群，从而影响考官阅读。字不要写得太大，也不要太小。尽量不要连写以免造成l,r,n,m等混淆不清，造成考官阅卷障碍。
细节四：写作格式混乱
英文写作格式主要有齐头式和缩进式。通常齐头式因为顶头书写且段与段之间空出一行，所以会给人以整洁的感觉，推荐大家使用这种格式。缩进式和中文的写作格式相似，即每一段的开头句缩进，但是段落之间没有空行，所以不是很受欢迎。经常在作文中看到同学们用的是“齐头式+缩进式”，即段首句缩进+段落之间空行，给人以不伦不类的感觉，同学们一定要注意。
细节五：总结段缺失
很多学生在作文时因为时间不充裕无法写出总结段，于是给阅卷者每完成任务的感觉。建议考生尽量要写最后的summary，无论是task1还是task2。因为同学们可以利用最后一段来点题、归纳，这样可以最大限度地避免因为语言功底不深而导致的文章结构不明晰，说服力不强等问题，即用形式来弥补内容上无法克服的困难。
另外，因为开头结尾段是我们平时练习得比较熟练的部分，所以我们很容易就搞定的，为什么放着拿分的部分不写呢？
雅思9作文（3）
1、According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that 通过第一个曲线图，我们可以知道____,也说明了结果是___
2、There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this： 一张有趣、有教育意义的、(内容)的图片(这句模板在雅思小作文中的应用非常的广泛。)
3、Nowadays there is a growing concern over Many people like ______________, while others are inclined to 当前有一张涉及______的增长曲线图，许多人______，然而其他人倾向于___
4、Nowadays, it is common to Many people like______________ because Besides, 目前，共同之处是_________,许多人喜欢______因为_______除此之外还由于_____
5、Just like many other things, are preferred by While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider They point that (图表所示)_____，就像许多其他事物，被____更加喜爱，然而这一观点正被________所抨击，一些人认为_________，他们指出___________ ______________,
6、Everything has two sides and ______________ is not an exception, it has both advantages and 每种事物都有两面性和________，是没有异议的，包括利和弊
7、For years ______________ had been viewed as But people are taking a fresh look at it _____作为_____被观察了许多年，但是人们现在像发现新大陆一样注视着它
8、It has stipulated by the government that To this stipulation, many people respond actively because 政府保证________，对于这份保证，大多数人做出了强烈地回应，因为_____
9、___________ is a common occurrence in our daily Whatever we do, ______________ can't be _______出现在我们日常生活中是很平常的，无论我们做什么，_______都是不可避免的
10、___________ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their _____在人群中已经成为热门话，特别是在年轻人中，激烈的争论无休止
雅思9作文（4）
16、thissideup此面向上
17、introductions说明
18、onestreet单行道
19、keepright/left靠左/右
20、busesonly只准公共汽车通过
21、wetpaint油漆未干
22、danger危险
23、lostandfound失物招领处
24、giveway快车先行
25、safetyfirst安全第一
26、fillingstation加油站
27、nosmoking禁止吸烟
28、nophotos请勿拍照
29、novisitors游人止步
30、noentry禁止入内
雅思9作文（5）
31、noadmittance闲人免进
32、nohonking禁止鸣喇叭
33、parking停车处
34、tollfree免费通行
35、f。f。快进(注：fastforward)
36、rew。倒带(注：re-wind)
37、ems(邮政)特快专递
38、inserthere此处插入
39、openhere此处开启
40、splithere此处撕开
41、mechanicalhelp车辆修理
42、aafilm十四岁以下禁看电影
43、donotpass禁止超车
44、nou-turn禁止掉头
45、u-turnok可以u形转弯
雅思9作文（6）
如果说有什么方法可以提高雅思写作成绩，我想从根本上提高的唯一办法就是转变思维方式，也就是把中式思维向英式思维靠拢，只有这样才能符合雅思考官的喜好，才能得高分。本文中，将具体介绍一下中式思维和英式思维的区别，以及怎样才能写出更符合雅思考官要求的作文。
事实上，如果脑袋里有一个中文的概念或者想法，要用英文来表达的时候总是免不了紧张，因为由于中英两国的文化不同，很多东西无法表达----非常可能不是因为考生的语言问题，而是因为这个中国的概念在英文里面根本就不存在。有数字统计过中英两国语言的词汇量只有40%能互通(所谓的equivalent)，而这就意味着剩余的60%的表达肯定是和原文有很大出入的。
甚至很多我们生活中经常使用的语言，不假思索就能说出的概念，在英语文化里很可能根本就没有对应的表达，例如“热闹”这个词，考生们可以试试能否在英文单词中找到让你满意的对得上号的词。“这个地方很热闹”这句话，根据语境可以有不同的翻译，但是总体而言，“热闹”作为一个词来说，在英文里几乎是没有对应的。
正因为如此，我们才强调，写英语作文，说英语口语，要用英语思维，不要用中式思维。这对于很多人来说是个很空洞的概念，只有当你真正用英语与外国人交流的时候才会体会到英式思维的重要性。
这的确很难，因为我们在中式思维里面扎根的太深了。事实上，这也和两国语言本身的特点有关。鲁迅就说过，中文和外文比，吃亏就吃在不够精确，具体到单词水平，就是“词汇量少”。因为词汇量少，因此中文特别讲究“上下文”，一个模糊的词只有在一个特定的语境里面才能让读者感到一个特定的意思。
相比而言，英文在这方面就不是这样，具体的说，大部分英语词都是有着非常确定的意思的，因此，那些在中文里面需要联系上下文才能端倪出的细微差别，也许在英文里面只是另一个单词而已。记住这点，笔者下面所说的也许会对诸位有用，在这里，笔者提供一个方法，就是如果你脑袋中有一个想法的话，仔细想想你到底想精确说的是什么意思。比如，当你想说某一个命题错误的时候，你最好想清楚它到底错在哪里，“illogical, irresponsible, biased, prejudice, fallacy, untrue”这些词之间都有着或大或小的差别，所以主要想看你到底想说的是什么。
所以，诸位想锻炼写作的话，建议要做的第一样功课，就是求精细。只有你自己求精细了，才能发现报刊、书籍中对相近的概念的不同表达法的精妙之处，才会由衷地为某篇文章的一个用词会心一笑。写作就是思维表达的一种形式。西方人直线式的思维方式体现在语言上就是西方人说话写文章喜欢开门见山，把关键性的话放在开头，然后再论及其它次要的内容。
而写作涉及到语言的方方面面，从语言的结构上来说最基本的因素包括遣词、造句和篇章。螺旋与直入的思维差异就会影响到这些方面，具体包括修饰语与中心词、句子和篇章。
修饰语与中心词
英语的修饰语，如介词短语、动词不定式、分词、定语从句等皆放在被修饰语的后面;而汉语的修饰语无论长短、繁简，皆置于被修饰语的前面。体现了直入与螺旋的不同的思维方式。例如：
The scientists everywhere in the world are looking for the efficient methods to make the air clean and protect it from the pollution by all kinds of industrial harmful waste
汉语“全世界的科学家”，修饰语在前，中心词在后，而英语则是中心词在前，修饰语在后。“净化空气、防止空气受到各种有害工业废气污染的有效方法”同样是修饰语在前，中心词在后，而英语则相反。
We appreciate your words about the relations between our two
汉语“有关我们两国关系的谈话”，修饰语在前，中心词在后，而英语则是中心词在前，修饰语在后。“有关我们两国关系”，同样是修饰语在前，中心词在后，而英语则相反。
The hungry boy ate up everything he could have his hands on from the
“他从冰箱里所能拿到的吃的东西”，修饰语在前，中心词在后，而英语则是中心词在前，修饰语在后。
The problem arose of how to fairly distribute the world natural
比较而言，该句主语太长，谓语太短，构成了不连续性修饰语，不过还是有些突兀，但修饰语还得后置。而汉语“怎样合理分配世界自然资然的问题”仍是修饰语在前，中心词在后。
句子
英语句子开门见山，其主谓结构是全句的“纲”，其余成份是“目”，一般先下结论，后叙事，从近到远，新近发生的事先出现，重心落在句首。汉语句子一般以逻辑关系和时间的先后顺序排列，一般先叙事，后下结论，由远及近，重心落在句尾。这种差异体现了直入与螺旋的不同的思维方式。
中国学生在英语写作时往往会受汉语思维的影响，写出下面的句子：
When I stayed in Guangzhou last month, you helped I am grateful for
Tom’s mother died when he was only two years old, so he did not remember
After we left China in 1959, the natural calamities happened one after another for three years in the While we read about it at home, we had been
It looked rain that evening, yet Dad came all the That made us very
如果按英语直入的思维方式，以上几句要改写成：
I am very grateful for your help to me during my stay in Guangzhou last
Tom did not remember his mother who died when he was only two years
We had been dismayed at home while reading of the natural calamities that happened one after another for three years after we left China in
It looked rain that evening, yet to our great joy, Dad came all the
这种思维方式的转换要是更复杂一点，对中国学生来说，是需要操练的。例如：
我认为如果他们初次相识时，她很穷，他未必会爱她。这位女性由于对他有好感而帮助他，使他心存感激，这种感激之情很容易发展成为真挚的爱情。
I do not suppose he would have loved her if she had been poor when he first knew her, but the gratitude which he felt for the help which he owed to her kindly interest in him easily developed into a sincere (条件关系和多层因果关系的转换)
她去深圳参加一个会议，会议结束后，她就到香港去购物，昨天才回来。
She came back yesterday from Hong Kong where she had gone shopping after the meeting in (时间顺序的转换)
段落篇章
总体而言，英文篇章，一般都采用直线型的形式，尤其是说明文和议论文，更是一般——具体式的。英语篇章是a writer-responsible pattern, 即作者在篇章中有责任、有义务向读者交代其主旨或目的。为使读者省时高效，英语篇章开门见山，一开头就直接点明段落的主题句 (topic sentence) 或全文的中心思想 (thesis statement), 即亮明作者的观点、态度、看法等;或者以引言开门，即“首先用一个熟悉的事实、观点、故事、引言等开头，然后直接见到作者全文的观点思想”。
由以上分析可知，西方人的直线式思维和中国人的螺旋式思维存在明显的差异，体现在语言中，几乎渗透到语言的各个单位，包括词汇、句子、段落和全篇。当然，笔者无意说思维模式孰好孰坏，正如我们不能断言文化模式孰好孰坏一样。但作为学英语的中国人，学原汁原味的语言是我们要达到的最高境界。自然，这里的语言也应包括discourse或text。
因此考生们要知道，一种思维是一种文化长期的积淀，它已进入该民族的潜意识，根深蒂固，如果只学语言本身，不会知其所以然，一旦到了使用语言时，汉语思维自然突现，写出Chinglish, 浑然不知。此外，建议考生多背诵和模仿英语经典文章，如《新概念英语》第三册上的文章，笔者认为皆为语言的精华，不但文词优美，每课都是一篇范文，原汁原味，多读这样的文章，一定会有所启发。由此看来，老生常谈而又令人费解的“学会用英语思维”，倒不如换个说法——学会英汉思维转换，即懂得英汉思维的差异，在平时读书的时候去真实地领悟，久而久之，就能写出地道的英文来，至少不会写出那么多的Chinglish。
综上所述，想要取得雅思写作7分甚至更高的分数，单靠所谓的模板和复杂的句式是做不到的，只有从写作思维模式上进行改变，才有可能取得好的写作成绩。而中式思维的根深蒂固必定会对正确的英语写作思维产生阻力，因此，临摹英式思维的文章以及阅读海外学术著作对于转变写作思维有着至关重要的作用。
雅思9作文（7）
表示因果
Since/As/Because/For+句子
As a result of /As a consequence of /Because of/Owing to sth /By virtue of sth/On account of+短语
For this reason。
For one reason or another,
For one thing,
On this/that account
The reason why+结果/ that+原因
Accordingly,
Consequently,
As a consequence
表示对比
Conversely,
In contrast,
In contrast to this,
Nevertheless,
Nonetheless,
Similarly,
Likewise,
Identically,
Equivalently,
On the other hand,
By/In comparison/contrast
Alternatively,
Compared with/to
表示递进
Additionally,
Further
Furthermore
Besides,
Moreover
In addition to sth,
In addition,
What’s more
表示证据
Contradictory to this,
In support of this,
The evidence for···is,
This is supported by,
To affirm this,
表示解释
In other words,
That is,
That is to say,
Namely
Which means that
表示强调
Above all,
As a matter of fact,
In particular,
Indeed,
Obviously,
表示举例
As an illustration,
In particular,
In support of this,
To demonstrate,
To elaborate,
To exemplify,
To highlight,
To illustrate,
表示让步
Admittedly,
Albeit,
Although it is true that,
Granted,
It may appear that,
表示转折
However,
Whereas
Conversely
Nevertheless
Otherwise,
On the contrary
Instead,
Contrarily
Inversely
Contrariwise
Oppositely,
表示结论
Accordingly,
All in all,
As a result,
As indicated earlier,
As mentioned,
Consequently,
So we can conclude that ….
In brief/in summary/conclusion
To summarize
以上列举出的各类衔接词，都是我们在雅思写作中可以多多利用的表达方式。希望各位考生牢记且掌握以上用法及句型，从而更有效的提高雅思写作能力。
雅思9作文（8）
Nowadays, the general trend seems to be that more and more young people go to college and receive higher In china alone, for example, about 7 million out of million high school students were accepted by universities in 20XX, while only 35 years ago, only 5% high school students went to This rapid increase of the number of university students, though supported by almost all governments throughout the world, has given rise to doubts among some people who insist that there is close interrelationship betweenthe large number of university graduates and the high unemployment
现在，越来越多的年轻人能去上大学，接受高等教育，这似乎是大势所趋。仅仅以中国为例，20XX年940万高中生中有700万的人被大学录取，而在35年前，仅5%的高中生能继续上大学。大学生人数快速增长虽然得到了世界各地政府的大力支持，但还是引发了一些人的质疑，他们坚持认为众多的大学毕业生和高失业率有密切的相互关系。
开头引出大学生数目增加的话题，并指出有人认为这和高失业率相关。以中国的数据为例，所以“考鸭”们平时可以多留意和收集一些这样的数据，使文章更加详实。
give rise to doubts (among) 在…中引起质疑
is close interrelationship between (…and…) 在…和…之间有紧密的相互关系。
雅思9作文（9）
1 according to the
2 the date lead us to the conclusion
3 the date
4 the tree diagram reveals
5 the figures
6 this is a cure graph which describes the trend
7 the pie graph
8 the graph provides some interesting date
9 the table shows the changes in the number over the period
10 as is shown in the
11 the percentage remained steady
12 the percentage slightly large than that
13 there is not a great deal of difference
14 the graphs show a threefold increase in the number
year by year increased
16 there is an upward trend in the number
17 a considerable increase occurred
18 rate of decrease
19 from this year on, there was a gradual decline reduction in the
a figure
20 be similar the same as
21 there are a lot similarities
22 the difference between X and Y lies
雅思9作文（10）
table illustrates the changes in the number the period
该表格描述了在年之年间数量的变化。
bar chart illustrates 该柱状图展示了
graph provides some interesting data
该图为我们提供了有关有趣数据。
diagram shows (that) 该图向我们展示了
pie graph depicts (that) 该圆形图揭示了
a cure graph which describes the trend
这个曲线图描述了的趋势。
figures/statistics show (that) 数据(字)表明
tree diagram reveals
该树型图向我们揭示了如何
data/statistics show (that)
该数据(字)可以这样理解
the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion
这些数据资料令我们得出结论
as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the
如图所示
according to the 根据这些表(数字)
as is shown in the 如表格所示
as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place
从图中可以看出，发生了巨大变化。
from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly it is clear/apparent from the chart
从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到
this is a graph which
这个图表向我们展示了
this table shows the changing proportion of a& b
该表格描述了年到年间a与b的比例关系。
the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend
该图以圆形图形式描述了总的趋势。
this is a column chart 这是个柱型图，描述了
as can be seen from the graph, the two curves show the fluctuation
如图所示，两条曲线描述了的波动情况。
there is not a great deal of difference
与的区别不大。
the graphs show a threefold increase in the number
该图表表明的数目增长了三倍。
year by year
逐年减少，而逐步上升。
the situation reached a peak(a high point at) of [%].
的情况(局势)到达顶(高)点，为百分点。
the figures/situation bottomed out
数字(情况)在达到底部。
the figures reached the bottom/a low point/hit a
数字(情况)达到底部(低谷)。
a is as much/many as a是b的倍。
a increased a增长了
a increased a增长到
high /low /great /small / 比低高(低)
there is an upward trend in the number 数字呈上升趋势。
a considerable increase/decrease occurred 到发生急剧上升。
rate of decrease slow 从到，下降速率减慢。
from this year on，there was a gradual declined reduction in , reaching a figure
从这年起，逐渐下降至
be similar 与相似
be the same 与相同
there are a lot similarities/differences 与之间有许多相似(不同)之处
a has something in common with b a于b有共同之处。
the difference between a and b lies a与b之间的差别在于
(year)witnessed/saw a sharp rise 年急剧上升。
雅思9作文（11）
The shared bikes like Mobike and Ofo bring great convenience to You needn’t lock them by simply using your smart They can take you where the subway and bus don’t And they can be left anywhere in public for the next , bad things Some people damage the QR code on the bike, or use their own lock, which causes trouble to other my opinion, it’s difficult to turn these people’s ideas in a short Therefore, bike-sharing companies like Mobike and Ofo need to do For example, those who damage the bike should pay for their Also, because people use their real name to register as a user, it’s a good way to connect to one’s personal the end, what I want to say is to take good care of public
【参考译文】共享自行车像MOBIKE的偿还给人们带来很大的方便。你不需要通过简单地使用智能手机来锁定它们。他们可以带你去地铁和公共汽车不去的地方。他们可以在公共场所为下一个用户留下。然而，坏事总会发生。有些人在自行车上损坏QR码，或者使用自己的锁，这给其他用户造成麻烦。在我看来，很难在短时间内改变这些人的想法。因此，自行车共享公司像MOBIKE的偿还需要做些什么。例如，那些损坏自行车的人应该为他们的行为付出代价。此外，因为人们使用实名注册用户，这是连接个人信用的好方法。最后，我想说的是好好照顾公共服务。
共享单车雅思作文4
Bicycle Sharing
With the development of technology, bicycle sharing comes into people's It becomes more and more popular and much news reported At the same time, we should see that there are some problems caused by bicycle one side, bicycle sharing makes it very convenient of people You can find a bicycle anywhere at any time when you want to go out for a cycling, and the price of one trip is very It cansave time for On the other side, its management is not Even kids can open the lock and ride the bicycle, there is no doubt that such behavior is very What's more, many people deliberately break it, like throw it to the river or destroy the code above my opinion, we should take a developing view about bicycle It is obviously helpful to human beings as a high-tech The government should introduce relevant provisions toregulate this market to avoid its
【参考译文】共享单车
随着科技的发展，自行车共享进入人们的生活。它变得越来越受欢迎，许多新闻报道了它。同时，我们也应该看到自行车共享带来的一些问题。一方面，自行车共享使人们出行非常方便。你想出去骑自行车的时候，随时都可以找到自行车，一次旅行的费用很低。节省时间的人。另一方面，它的管理并不完善。孩子们甚至可以打开锁，骑自行车，毫无疑问，这种行为是非常危险的。更重要的是，许多人故意破坏它，比如把它扔到河里或者破坏上面的代码。在我看来，我们应该以发展的眼光看待自行车共享。这对高科技产品显然是有益的。政府应该出台相关规定，规范这个市场，避免它的缺点。
雅思9作文（12）
Being able to concentrate and focus for sustained periods is a skill that children will need to develop in order to make the most Of their While most children will naturally develop a greater attention span as they grow older and get used to the school environment and expectations, some continue to struggle to focus on a task or an
In this digital age of smart phones and social me a, there are plenty of distractions to tempt the wandering mind where study tasks are From surfing the webpage to instant messaging, constant distractions compete for children's It is not uncommon to witness a child listening to his iPod while doing his With so many potential interruptions, can be difficult for children to stop and focus on the task at
There are some practical and manageable tips teachers and parents can use to help their children focus, complete their task both at school and home and ultimately Initially, setting early expectations is an essential start, such as explaining to children their priorities at school and home and in the The earlier teachers and parents set expectations and establish a routine for studying, the easier it will be to Additionally, managing the number Of distractions that can pull a child's focus away is another,important parents can help their children by insisting that certain responsibilities are met before privileges are That is because young people sometimes have a tendency to proritize short-term needs and wants over longer-term
To conclude, helping children develop self-discipline, effective focus strategies and concentration skills at an early age is a basis for long-term success in high school, college and the professional working Therefore, teachers and parents should put more consideration into the
雅思9作文（13）
Task：Some people who have been in prison become good citizens Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the danger of committing a To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Sample answer：
A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills It has always included teaching the next generation how to become law-abiding While some people claim that those ex-prisoners are the best teachers to raise the awareness regarding laws, I believe that other measures are equally
Obviously, ex-prisoners play a vital role in cutting youth This is because those released prisoners have witnessed the horrors happened in the jail and they may also experience some of At the same time, they can share the tears and sorrows they suffered in the jails and the harm they have brought to the victims and their family This is more impressive than the traditional lectures given by By listening to a wide range of real cases in person, young generation will realize the consequence of the irresponsible behavior deeply and discipline themselves strictly in the
Nevertheless, I believe other alternatives should be taken into consideration as It is common for people to have a fear towards criminals, especially those who have committed violent crimes and therefore face-to-face conversation between the young and people with a criminal record might be inappropriate in some By contrast, policemen normally have a good impression among youngsters and they can become the active voice in reducing juvenile Apart from them, parents can certainly be the first to help children learn the differences between right and wrong since they are the people who know their children best in the
In my opinion, it is the responsibility of every member of a society to help the young generation to become good
雅思9作文（14）
Climate change has become a worldwide issue in recent The Earth, according to some scientists, is becoming warmer and warmer and this is an alert signal for the future safety of the For these scientists, we must do something to prevent the climate from becoming Meanwhile, there are also scientists who do not think much of the climate change and therefore suggest that we do nothing but find a way to live with For my part, I agree with the second group of
To reverse the climate change is never an easy The widely acknowledged causes of climate change include the automobile gas emissions, factory pollution, deforestation, among If we wish to prevent the climate change, we will have to significantly reduce the use of cars and airplanes, close most of the factories and stop people from cutting This means that, in order to make the Earth become cooler by one or two centigrade degree, our normal life will have to This is a cost most of us would never want to pay, although we have been repeatedly told of the benefits of doing so to the future
Then, in face of climate change, rather than trying to prevent it, we'd better try to find a way to live with For instance, when the hotter climate makes it impossible to grow a certain vegetable in summer, we can grow it earlier than now, store it and then eat it when the weather becomes too Also, we can develop new technologies to grow the vegetable we need even when the climate has Furthermore, when it is necessary, we can make adjustments about our work If the weather has become intolerably hot, we can have a few days off and make up when it gets back to Such flexibilities will help us solve the climate change problem and at the same time will not bring down our
Climate change is not a good thing, but for the time being, I do not think we should take expensive and costly measures to prevent Rather, I believe we should find a way to live with
雅思9作文（15）
Task：The natural resources such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming What problems does it cause? How can we solve these problems?
Sample answer：
The universal phenomenon of excessive consumption of natural resources actually remains a subject of public interest and The objective of this essay is to outline both the potential problems of this negative tendency and appropriate ways of dealing with
Consuming considerable resources will cause inevitable environmental The low efficiency of resources use in factories may aggravate this One of the best solutions may be encouraging companies to adopt more eco-friendly equipment, making optimal use of Meanwhile, local governments can enact stricter environment-protection standards to normalize the enterprise
In addition, since available natural resources are quite limited on the earth, the overuse of these restricted resources will worsen the shortage of natural materials and lower people’s standard of living It is well-recognized that only a few natural resources can be used directly in our daily For example, the drinkable water accounts for just less than 1% of all the world water Also, to meet the basic needs of people, some alternative materials have been invented when some resources are in a short For instance, artificial cotton, a material which is made from rice straw, has replaced cotton in clothing industry in recent However, the clothes made of artificial cotton are definitely not as comfortable as the natural Wearing these clothes means a lower life quality to some people to some To address this problem, people should develop a more active attitude towards economizing resources, leading a low carbon
To summarize, consuming natural resources at an increasing rate may pose a threat on environment and people’s Business, governments and society should work together to solve these
雅思9作文（16）
例题：Staying healthy by playing sports and eating well should be an individual’s duty to society rather than a habit for personal Do you agree or disagree? 保持健康是个人对于社会的责任，但是，不是使个人受益的良好习惯，是否认同?
范文：Health is to every individual what perfume is to However, people have been pondering, for many years, the significance of maintaining personal health without reaching any definite A popular belief is that personal health only serves the good of the As I see it，optimizing personal health could not only benefit the society，but importantly，conduce to individual life, family harmony and career
Indeed, I have to concede that keeping fit could be of great benefits for a nation and therefore be deemed as the personal obligation to the In other words, As for the country，the increased proportion of wholesome citizens could greatly diminish the consumption in terms of the public medical Also, health indicates good mentality and vigorous It is conceivable that the increase of healthy social citizens can help create immense social value and thus inject new vitality into the further prosperity of a
Nevertheless，every individual could become the beneficiary of keeping fit First, a man with sound physique and mentality succeed better at work，respond better to stress, suffer less depressive mood and achieve more personal Secondly, health could, to a large extent, enable one to brave career enthusiastically and harmonize family For example, many entrepreneurs or super stars usually suffer from various health-related problems due to excessive workload and huge mental It is conceivable that one’s poor health condition will inevitably bring a sea of agonies to the family Last, remaining health enables one to regenerate energy, refresh mind and thus improve the efficiency of work and
In closing, I re-affirm my conviction that keeping fit is not only related to social responsibility but also links to personal happiness, which is more Therefore, embarking on a healthier lifestyle should a lifelong habit for every one of
雅思9作文（17）
雅思写作常见话题：Today consumers are facing an increasing amount of advertising from competing To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?
雅思写作常见话题讲解：
此类雅思写作题目是典型的blended essay的写法，开头结尾相对容易，body paragraphs分为两段展开，按照雅思写作题目提问的先后顺序：首先，第一问可以写广告所带来的诸多benefits，比如：广告让我们更加清晰了解产品特点getting a better understanding of how the products work;成为大多数企业的收入来源sources of revenue;部分广告向人们宣传健康生活方式，让人们生活更加幸福快乐more contented。当然也可以写drawbacks，例如：很多商业广告的虚假宣传误导了消费者消费misleading customers;部分广告内容低俗，对青少年的身心发展不利negative effects on mental health;广告泛滥使广告形象大打折扣contribute to a bad self-image。其次，针对问题提出解决的solutions，这里可以从政府的角度切入，广告利弊兼有，政府应当积极引导，以便广告更好地服务于民众。
雅思写作常见话题范文：
First thing first, accept that sending criminals to prison is an effective, if not the only way, to protect Stop thinking in terms of education as "punishment" for a moment and instead think about safeguarding innocent people from incorrigible violent sex offenders, trigger-happy drug dealers, and cold-blooded Education does reduce crimes to some extent; however, it is doubtful if most of them would choose to live a life that is
人们受广告影响的程度可以用大众消费品的高销量来衡量，其中许多是不必要的或完全没有用的。主要通过媒体，产品和服务上的广告能够半真半假地渗透到公众头脑中。在许多情况下，消费者变得如此贪婪，以至于他们不仅购买他们真正不需要的东西，而且花掉他们没有的钱。
Since most inmates eventually return to the community, it seems not a bad idea to help them learn a trade and gain skills to make a decent And that is why training programs are often believed to be positive in changing criminal Nevertheless, most statistics tend to tell a different As it is, rather than becoming productive members of society, they turn themselves into more skilled So it is one thing that rehabilitation offers opportunities; it is quite another whether career criminals make good use of their prison In most cases, after serving their terms they continue commiting offences of a more sophisticated
虽然广告给人们作为消费者的机会，但实际上大多数广告往往使他们渴望一些毫无价值的东西。在这种情况下，很容易把人们的需求变成贪婪。因此，他们经常被鼓励想要东西——想要这个，想要这个。这种人类行为受到来自各个方面的媒体的困扰：广播、电视和网络，更不用说报纸和杂志等印刷发行物。显然，许多“冲动”的买家被说服了，他们以为新产品或服务可以改变他们的生活。尽管自由市场经济带来了种.种好处，但不可靠广告的影响尤其消极，因为广告的力量不能反映销售产品和服务的社会的实际需要。
Education is more a romantic option than an effective solution for crime At this point, it must be made clear that the argument is not against education in correctional facilities, considering that most inmates are Rather, the case is concerned about a control policy to strictly supervise specific released prisoners for at least two years to observe what might happen to Here, skeptics claim that, in many cases, prison education produces nothing more than "better-educated criminals", only more That the violent crime wave is raging while most prisons are over-crowded certainly does not reflect a significant decrease in It merely shows the fear and impotence of innocent people in the
更糟糕的是，许多消费者被说服浪费他们没有的钱。在广告的包围下，人们太不明智，无法在收入和支出之间起平衡的作用。似乎对经济有利的东西开始逐渐起反作用，因为广告深深地误导消费者，使他们陷入商业债务，他们可能无法按时偿还。因此，广告可以取代现代人的生活，而被视为一种“必要的恶”。此外，随着制造业和服务业公司争夺更大的市场份额，几乎不可能指望媒体减少不诚实广告的数量。此外，当涉及到赚钱的时候，公司和媒体在同一个宗教中。
The point is that sending criminals to prison is effective, if only by moving them away from the On the other hand, to regard prison education as an effective "punishment" is simply wishful-thinking, in view of relevant evidence that underlies In all events, education provides opportunities, however limited, but it depends on the way those repeat offenders see these opportunities, the rest being pure
毕竟，贪婪是人类的本能，消费者只因他们愚蠢的广告而受到责备。既然禁止商业广告是不可能的，人们应该教育自己在购买和消费行为上更加谨慎。至于消费者，除了自我控制之外，还有什么更好的措施来保护自己呢?
雅思9作文（18）
advertisement = advertising n 广告
TV commercial n 电视广告
public-service ads = public –interest ads n 公益广告
advertisement campaign n 广告宣传
wise consumers = wise buyers n理性的消费者
censorship of ads n广告审查
wise buying n 理性消费
ads produced by super stars n明星做的广告
makeup ads n化妆品广告
medicine ads n药品广告
谈及广告的利好：
Under no circumstances can we uunderestimate the indispensable roles of ads
in our 我们不能忽视广告在生活中的作用。
witty slogan 智慧的宣传语
eye-catching pictures n 精美的图片
exert a subtle influence on v对于 …… 有微妙的影响
…… play the role of educator v 扮演教育者的角色
…… is a significant source of information v是信息的源泉
…… bring huge convenience to consumers v 给消费者带来便利
…… serve the function of entertainment v 有娱乐功能
promote the sales of the relevant products v 提高相关产品的销量
…… is a kind of indispensable industry that create a number of job opportunities and promote the prosperity of relevant industries such as …… 是不可缺少的产业，可以解决就业以及促进相关产业的繁荣例如……
谈及广告的弊端：
However, we can never ignore the negative influence induced by advertisement 然而，我们不能忽视由于广告引起的弊端。
Many advertising companies produce advertisements with famous and popular actors or singers 很多的广告公司会雇佣歌手以及明星代言商品。
fake and illegal ads n虚假的非法的广告
…… are full of flowery phrases and empty promises …… 充满了花哨的宣传语以及空洞的承诺。
buy goods without consideration = purchase goods impulsively v冲动购物
endanger the consumers’ interests v 威胁到消费者的利益
impose much pressure upon consumers economically v 增加消费者的经济负担。
consumers are affected by = consumers are influenced by = consumers are swayed by …… v消费者被…… 影响
poorly educated children in the remote rural areas n偏远农村地区的文盲儿童
点评：illiterate = poorly educated adj 没有受到良好教育的。
irrational buyers = unwise buyers n非理性的消费者
如何解决广告的弊端：
strengthen the censorship of counterfeited or illicit ads v 加强对于非法广告和虚假广告的审查力度
Consumers could be away from those detrimental 消费者可以远离有害广告的影响。
Ads stars enhance their lawful awareness and assume more social responsibilities 广告明星应该增强守法意识以及承担更多的社会责任
foster rational consumption habit v培养理性的消费习惯
collect some information of other consumers before buying a product v 在买商品前收集一些信息
雅思9作文（19）
题目：Some people think the main benefit of international cooperationis in protection of the environment, while others think that the main benefit is in the world Discuss both views and give your
范文：
There is no doubt that international cooperation, from private enterprisesto governments, has become increasingly prevalent (= more popular these years). It is on account of growingly global economy, and it is beneficial for almost every country in the
近年来，私企和政府间的国际化合作变得广泛而流行。这是由于经济全球化的趋势和世界各国的利益共同导致的。
People firmly believe that the international cooperation is good for environment It is well awarethat every country has its unique way to protect For example, the Dutch do well in disposing of They point out that if their advanced technology can be introduced into the developing countries that are hardly to invent such good technology, not only some countries or groups but also all of the people living on the earth will benefit a Of course, the countries that have invented these technologies will have to suffer from the damage in economy more or
一些人认为国际间合作有利于环境保护。各国在环保方面都有自己独特的技术和方法。欧洲就非常善于使用再生资源，例如：荷兰的垃圾处理。这些人指出如果能够把这些先进的技术引入到那些没有充分研发能力的发展中国家，受益的将不仅仅是某个国家或团体，而是所有居住在地球上的人类。当然，发展这些技术的国家将在经济方面或多或少的遭受一定的损失。
On the other hand, the view taken by other people is that the main advantage of internationalcooperation is in terms of It is true that the imports have been sold everywhere in my To illustrate, a modern car often consistsof different components from various In the meanwhile, some necessary goods are always imported from other However, the competition between local businesses and exoticones is going more
另一些人提出，国际合作最大的受益者是商业。今天，在我的国家里进口商品随处可见。例如，一辆汽车往往由几个国家生产的配件组装而成。而且，一些生活必需品也需要进口。然而，本地商品与进口商品之间的竞争也日益激烈。
In my opinion, the meritsof international cooperation are in both environment and the Also, people ought to make the best use of international cooperation to solvethe serious worldwide problems such as global
我的观点是：无论是商业还是环境保护都将获益于国际间合作。此外，人们应该更好的利用国际间合作去解决一些严峻的世界性问题，如全球变暖。