作文高分 英语（1）
Dear parents。
Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. You have taken good care of me since I was born.When I am in trouble，you always encourage me and cheer me up.Once I argued with my best friend and was upset，you talked with me the whole night and finally helped me solve the problem. With your help，I have become a good student.I am so thankful for your love that I will work harder and try to do better in the future。
Best wishes
Yours。
作文高分 英语（2）
dreams/ objectives
the cartoon aims at informing us of the significance of our dreams/objectives. definitely, no once can deny the importance of it. our dreams/goals/ideals/objectives will prevent us from quitting easily especially when we are in great trouble. they will lead us to the destination we are eager to reach, bring out the best in us and stimulate us to remain firm in our faith. to further illustrate the importance of dreams/objectives, i would like to take helen keller as a case in point: how could she, a disabled woman who was born blind and deaf, finally be a world-renowned writer who wrote if i had three days to see without her dreams to overcome physical limitations.
accordingly, at no time should we underestimate the power of dreams/objectives. furthermore, we must set up proper goals before we start to do anything and stick to it whatever difficulties we meet . “one of the most dangerous forms of human error is forgetting what one is trying to achieve. ” paul nitze once said.
作文高分 英语（3）
1. Here are several possible reasons，excerpt that…
2. Somebody believes/argues/holds/insists/thinks that…
3. It is not simple to give the reason for this complicated phenomenon…
4. Different people observes it in different ways
5. As the proverb says…
作文高分 英语（4）
在学习、工作、生活中，大家都跟作文打过交道吧，作文是通过文字来表达一个主题意义的.记叙方法。写起作文来就毫无头绪？下面是小编精心整理的高考英语作文高分句型汇总，希望对大家有所帮助。
1、热烈的讨论/争论a heated discussion/ debate
2、把时间和精力放在……上focus time and energy on。
3、毫无疑问Undoubtedly，/ There is no doubt that......
4、完全不同的观点a totally different argument
5、…也不例外…be no exception
6、宝贵的自然资源valuable natural resources
7、为社会做贡献make contributions to society
8、对……有益be beneficial to......
9、发挥着日益重要的作用play an increasingly important role in…
10、无可非议blameless / beyond reproach
11、经济/心理负担financial burden / psychological burden
12、提供就业机会offer job......
13、取其精髓，去其糟粕Take the essence and discard the dregs
14、开阔眼界widen one"s horizon/ broaden one"s vision
15、From my point of view，it would be better if。在我看来……也许更好
16、对…必不可少be indispensable to …
17、对…有益be beneficial / conducive to…
18、方便快捷convenient and efficient
19、理论和实践相结合integrate theory with practice
20、代替replace/ substitute / take the place of
21、打下坚实的基础lay a solid foundation for......
22、扩大知识面expand one"s scope of knowledge
23、长远利益。 interest in the long run
24、经不起推敲cannot bear closer analysis / cannot hold water
25、不可推卸的义务unshakable duty
26、一些人…而另外一些人… Some people… while others…
27、From what has been discussed above，we may safely draw the conclusion that…。通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论…
28、提出折中提议set forth a compromise proposal
29、双方的论点argument on both sides
30、与……比较compared with。/ in comparison with
作文高分 英语（5）
中心句放开端
文章中心句是整个文章的主题和写作围绕的中心，通常应该放在段落的开端，这样一方面能够让阅卷老师一眼看出文章表达的主旨意思，起到开门见山的作用;另一方面可以使文章条理层次更加清晰，逻辑性强，文章的整体结构合理。中心句在作文中可以起到承接上下文的作用，放在段尾也可以起到总结全文的作用。这一方法对于写作初学者来说还是有一定困难的，因此在六级考试中，为了减少不必要的错误和损失，大家尽量将中心句放到文章的开头以保万无一失。
关键词要具体
文章的中心句一般是通过关键词来表现和限制文章的主旨思想的，所以为了突出主题，关键词需要尽量写得具体些。这里对“具体”的要求主要体现在两个方面：一方面是要具体到能限制和区分文章段落层次的发展;另一方面是要具体到能说明段落发展的方法。精确仔细地突出关键词是清楚地表达文章主旨、写好段落中心句的重要前提之一，这对考生来说有一定难度。
设问扩充内容
中心句及关键词确定后，文章的大概框架已经清晰了，这时候就需要选择和主题有关的信息和素材来填充这个框架。实质上，针对关键词测试每一个所选择的素材就是一个分类的过程。有一种常用的行文方法就是句子展开前加以设问，然后解答，即设问-解答(why-because)的方法，利用问题引出自己需要的话题再加以解答表现自己的观点，同时紧紧围绕主题。
英语写作除了要求大家在词汇量和语法上有一定的积累外，也需要大家注意总结一些常用的写作技巧，把技巧运用于文章中，你的文章必然会让读者眼前一亮。
作文高分 英语（6）
As is vividly shown in the picture, …
It is clearly depicted in the picture that…
This picture depicts a thought-provoking scene of…
According to the figures given in the chart, …
The chart above provides a series of essential figures, illustrating the changes taking place in a time span of…
The graph demonstrates that the number is growing/declining rapidly
作文高分 英语（7）
There is no denying that… will continue increasing/decreasing in the better/worse
Undoubtedly, the tendency reflected from the chart will undergo a continuous increase/decrease in the near
作文高分 英语（8）
I’m writing to… 开门见山的开头模式
I’m writing to inform you that… (通知类型)
I’m writing to seek your assistance in… (请求类型)
I’m writing in response to your advertisement in… (回应类型)
I’m writing to express my views on… (建议类型)
I’m writing to apply for the scholarship that your department offers to students from other (申请类型)
I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding… (咨询类型)
I’m writing to express my disappointment/dissatisfaction about… (投诉类型)
作文高分 英语（9）
I feel really sorry to you for…
I must apologize to you for…
I would like to express my deepest apology/regret for not being able to…
Please accept my sincere apology for…
I want you to know how badly I feel about…
作文高分 英语（10）
Any favorable consideration of my application will be highly (申请/求职)
We should be very pleased if you could honor us with your (邀请函)
Best wishes for your greater success in your (祝愿)
Thank you for your patience and concern in reading this I hope this does not cause you too much I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest (套话组合)
作文高分 英语（11）
Four Steps to a Successful
The first time in life? Then grasp your chance with your perfect performance on the dating night, by learning the following principle in
Dress While everyone wants to give an impressive debut on the first date, you should avoid wearing something too bizarre to be If you are still in school, a sportswear can fulfill your For businessman or grownups, casual clothes are Never put up your working uniforms,no matter how well you like that Armani It is no A few accessories such as a pair of sunglasses or silver loops on the wrist can add up to the romance
Take a bath before And if you like, spray a little perfume, but unless you're sure that he or she likes the smell,don't use ones that are too
Watch your You're no prince of the Scotland nor Cinderella in the Proper manners will ensure a lasting relationship while bad ones scare away your And do make sure you do not boast about your fortune, for, not everyone are green And your way of smiling, or your greatestoath, should neither be "coy" nor "by Loy!" after the nun in
Be a little sensitive than merely Do make sure you do not intrude his or her privacy on the first For there maybe something deeply concealed within the inner core of every heart, of which the owner doesn't share often with anyone but his
Finally, wish you good May you get your hearts combined and start a new journey in the miracle of life and Stay tuned till a borderline is reached, and keep on through out the whole
作文高分 英语（12）
How to Keep Fit
提纲
健康是幸福生活的保证。
保持健康的几种方法。
美好的未来需要健康。
Health is the guarantee of one's Without a healthy body, one cannot do what he wants to, not to mention accomplishing his goals in
One can keep fit in three First, he is to pay attention to Stay away from viruses, which means one should wash hands, take baths frequently, eat and drink Stay away from bad life habits, such as smoking and overworking, which severely damage the body Secondly, one is to exercise He may go jogging, swimming, bicycling, playing basketball and so Exercises will improve one's ability to resist And last but not least, he should be optimistic, fearing no difficulties and obstacles, and always being in high
Only in good health as well as in high spirits can we greet the future, which is full of competition and challenges, and strive to achieve our ambitions
作文高分 英语（13）
Advantages and Disadvantages of
Urbanization has been a subject of heated discussion for a long Some people are in favor, while others are In my opinion, urbanization has both advantages and
Generally, the advantages of urbanization can be listed as First,urbanization can quicken our pace to catch up with the developed We all know that the developed countries are all highly Second, urbanization will help to solve the problem of It will create more job opportunities for the In addition, urbanization will free a great number of farmers from the fields, thus realizing the dream of agricultural mechanization in our Finally, urbanization can improve the standards of living of the migrants who move to the urban
However,the disadvantages of urbanization are also To begin with,administration of the increasing population in urban area might be a great challenge to the Moreover, more problems, such as increasing crime rate, over crowding, might increase, since more people are concentrated in a relatively smaller
It is evident that the advantages outweigh the Therefore, I am in favor of
作文高分 英语（14）
英语中最常见的修饰成分是定语，用于说明名词的品质与特征。而可以作定语的成分包括形容词、名词、代词、数词、不定式、动名词、分词、介词短语、从句等。
比如：
原：Young people should be
改：Young people giving up supporting their parents should be
(注：分词短语giving up supporting their parents作后置定语，修饰前面的young people。此外，可以将其变为定语从句who give up supporting their parents进行替换。)
作文高分 英语（15）
英语中的多数副词一般是放在动词后面，或者放在be动词、助动词或情态动词之后且实义动词之前(若实义动词后有宾语，则放于宾语之后)。
而在写作中将其置前，可以起突出和强调的作用。
比如：
Obviously/Interestingly/Ironically，what the picture conveyed should be given further
多用复合句
复合句类型比较多，但是在考研中一个主句加一个从句基本上是标配。
但是要把复合句写好的话，一方面可以使用词汇替换的技巧，另外一方面还需要用不同的句型。
(1) 用it作形式主语：
结构：It be++ do
例：It is obvious that protecting environment is our compulsory duty and also a legal
(2) 使用定语从句(这个是英语写作中需要重点掌握的句式)
It goes without saying that the cartoon depicts four persons are competitively playing a football game, which captures our eyes
(3)使用双重否定：
比如：可以用no/not+表否定意义的形容词，如It is not impossible (for ) to do 也可以用no/not/never+without，如 cannot do without 此外，还可以用no/not/never/nobody/few+具有否定意义的动词或短语，如 never fail to do
(4) 使用倒装结构：
一种情况是使用“Only+状语”置于句首，如：Only in this way can we resolve the 另一种情况是将否定词置于句首，如：By no means should weturn a blind eye to such things of spoiling
(5)使用强调句：
可强调动词：I do expect that the issue of environment pollution can be settled as soon as
也可强调句子某个成分：It was persistence and optimism that made Thomas Edison bravely confront a variety of obstacles and other failures and then finally invent the electrical
作文高分 英语（16）
一、写作决窍
总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;
关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;
组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;
字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。
二、写作步骤
1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。
2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。
3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。
4.先草稿，后抄写。
三、作文案例
[20xx年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.
·What exactly your hobby is;
·When and how you became interested in this hobby;
·Why you enjoy your hobby;
·About your hopes and plans for the future.
写作要求：
1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。
2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。
3.词数60-80.
[学生解答A]
My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.
①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。
②also的位置应放在can之后。
[点评]：档次9-11分。
①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。
②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。
③有少量错误。
[学生解答B]
My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improvemy writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.
①开门见山、点题。
②真情流露，理由充分。
③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、
④巧妙使用句型以表决心。
[点评]：档次13-14分。
①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。
②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。
③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。
[高分突破]
①文体：记叙文。
②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.
③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。
内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。
四、培养途径
1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。
2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。
3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。
4.自己纠错，写下反思。
五、备考演练
A
缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。
写作要求：
1.词数在100左右。
2.条理清楚，语句通顺。
3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。
Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …
B
阅读电视广告词：“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。
提示：
1.生活离不开水。
2.可饮用水在减少。
3.水污染严重。
4.应保护水源，再利用水。
思路点拨与参考答案
①文体：记叙文。
②时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。
③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要性。
Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting theenvironment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to preventstarting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.
B. [思路点拨]：
①夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。
②时态：一般现在时态。
③广告词的含义——水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作意图)。
Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirtywater into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.