作文赏析英语(精选6篇)
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2024-10-27 08:54:23
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作文赏析英语(1)

在现实生活或工作学习中,大家都写过作文,肯定对各类作文都很熟悉吧,借助作文人们可以实现文化交流的目的。那要怎么写好作文呢?下面是小编为大家收集的.关于考试之后英语作文赏析,仅供参考,欢迎大家阅读。

Scores are undoubtedly important for students. So today when I saw the score, 96,on my Chinese test paper, my happiness was beyond words. I believed that mum would also be very happy and perhaps she would reward me.

As soon as I got home, I raised the test paper before mum and said proudly, "Mum, look at my score!" Out of my expectation,Mum said calmly, "Good, but I hope you can find out the reason why four points were taken away." Hearing the words, I stood in amazement at first. Then I understood Mum‘s words and nodded with all my strength.

Then Iunderstood that the most important thing that we get from examinations is not whether we have got high scores but whether we know what we have grasped and what we haven‘t.

成绩对学生来说无疑是重要的,所以今天当我看到语文试卷上的96分时,我高兴得无以言表。我相信妈妈也会为此高兴,可能她还会奖励我呢。

我一到家就将卷子高举到妈妈面前,骄傲地说:“妈妈,看我的成绩!”出乎我的意料,妈妈平静地说:"很好,但是我希望你能找到丢掉另外四分的原因。”听到这些话,一开始我惊愕地站在那里,然后我理解了妈妈的话,用力地点了点头。

我明白了我们从考试中得到的最重要的东西不是我们是否得到了高分,而是我们是否知道自己学到了什么,没有学到什么。


作文赏析英语(2)

July 20,20xx

I went to summer camp on On the first day, we went to a beautiful It was a sunny and hot day, so we went The water was warm and we had great Then the next day, we went to the There were many trees and I really enjoyed On the last day, we had a great We sang and danced We didn’t want to leave the friends and the I hope I can go to summer camp again next

我去夏令营度假。第一天,我们去了美丽的海滩。这是一个阳光和炎热的一天,所以我们去游泳。水是温暖的,我们玩得很开心。然后第二天,我们去了山区。有许多树木,我非常喜欢他们。在最后一天,我们有一个盛大的派对。我们高兴地载歌载舞。我们不想离开朋友和老师。我希望明年我可以再次去夏令营。

3 Unforgettable summer vacation 难忘的暑假

I think this summer over a very meaningful day,in addition to the study of computers outside,also tried a new aerobic exercise -YOGA,I love this sport, so I learned an optimistic face life,but also to correct my bad shape,for my future learning and life will be very helpful,I love YOGA,with the hope more people will join me to try this new

今年暑假过得非常有意义

我觉得今年暑假过的非常有意义,每天除了学习计算机以外还尝试了新的有氧运动-YOGA,我非常热爱这项运动,它让我学会了乐观的面对生活,还纠正了我的不良体形,对我今后的学习及生活都有很大的帮助,我爱YOGA,希望有更多的人和我一起尝试这项新的运动。初中英语作文难忘的暑假


作文赏析英语(3)

That was a morning in the early of I took a bus to my school in the suburb which was surrounded by rice paddies and The sky was gray with the gloomy clouds congregating gradually along the far eastern "There must be a heavy rain " I spoke to

When I hurried into the classroom, the sky, gray before, was shrouded now by black clouds, darken to twilight, I felt quite stuffy, while it was quite calm, without I saw the leaves of trees and grass static, which seem to await something Several minutes later, I saw the lightening split the clouds and heard the thunders Suddenly, the curtain of rain fell and the wind soon the grass flattened under the wind and the With the rain forming like a fog, the sky became I took several deep I felt

The heavy rain lasted three hours and stopped when the class was The air was so fresh and the sky was so I felt like a new man

那是6月初的一天早上,我乘汽车去郊区的学校上课,学校四周是稻田和鱼塘。天空是灰色的,在遥远的东方地平线上有阴云在慢慢汇聚。我心想:“要下大雨了。”

当我匆忙走进教室时,原本灰色的天空已被黑云笼罩,像黄昏。我感到气闷,而周围一切都很静,没有任何声音,没有风。我看到树叶和草一动不动,像等着什么事情发生。几分钟之后,我看到闪电撕开云层,听到随之而来的雷声。突然,大雨倾盆,风也起了。草在风雨中倒伏。随着雨下成了雾状,天空开始放亮,我深吸了几口气,舒服多了。

大雨下了三个小时,下课的时间停了,空气那么新鲜,天气那么晴朗,我感觉像换了一个人似的。


作文赏析英语(4)

national day is coming,and we can have a family are going to 's a good seaside are staying there for a we are going to the beach and going swimming in the 're visiting tianya haijiao,wanquan river and many other beautiful think we'll have a good time

国庆节来了,我有七天的假期。我们一家去海南。那是一个美丽的海滨城市。我们在那里待上一个星期。我们去沙滩,还在海里游泳。我们游览“天涯海角”,菀泉河还有别的许多好地方。我想我们在那里会玩得很开心。


作文赏析英语(5)

it is known to everyone:oct,1st is our national this day i went to street and saw i will tell you!

at 8:00 i got up and went bus station with my mother .o my god there were so many people!with difficult we got up the bus and felt very traffic was so bad too!i cost nearly 1 hour that we arrived the center of

what were worse there were even more people!in my opinion it was not very interesting to come out at this day!nest time i prefer to stay at home and study! the night of sthe national day hanghai has never appealed to city born and city bred, i've got tired of the brightness of neon signs and the grandeur of skyscrapers in

but on this year's national day, i spent a whole night roaming nanjing road and the bund the symbol of the modern material shanghai, with my it's the first time that i went out with with the huge amount of tourists, we could only wander with the cluster of people, having no in the crowd, we entertained ourselves singing, joking and chatting, leaving all the worries, pressures and unhappiness behind,until mid tired as we were, we still felt very my roommates were quite impressed by the beauty, prosperity and the liveliness of but for me, all these were none of my what i treasured was the time i shared with them though that night shanghai was so charming that she seemed to be one of the leading cities in the


作文赏析英语(6)

I am going to have a busy weekend ! On Saturday , I'm going to clean my room and do homework. Then , in the evening , I 'm going to the supermaket with my mother . On Saturday, I'm going to the bookstore on foot . I'm going to buy some books. Then, I'm going to go home and read the new books. In the evening , I'm going to watch TV. That will be fun! What about you? What are you going to do on the weekend?

四年级英语作文:暑期难忘的一件事

It was a sunny day today,when i got up in the morning,i decided to see my grandparents.so i took the bus and got there at noon,they were happy to see me,and i was very happy,too.

In the afternoon,my farther asked me to help him water the plant,and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.

In a word,today is a unforgetive day.because i saw my relatives and helped people.

四年级英语作文:我的业余爱好

My hobby

I am Cendy. I am in Nanhai Experimental Primary School. I am in Class 9, Grade 6. I am tall and thin. I live in Dali. I have many good friends. I often play with them.

I have many hobbies, riding a bike, drawing pictures and reading books. But I like to read books the best. Because of reading books is good for my study. I also like riding bikes. Because of it does a lot of good to my body.

What’s your hobby? Can you tell me?

四年级英语作文:我的小兔子

One day, my mother bought two little rabbits for me. I’m very happy.

From that on, the two little rabbits became my good friends. They have two little ears, red eyes, with white and fat boby. They’re marvellous.

Everyday, they play with each other happily. One day, I couldn’t find them. I asked my mother: ”Where are they? ” My mother told me that She didn’t know. At last, I found them in the grass. They were very dirty. I was angry, but when I looked at their lovely faces, I was happy again.

I love my little rabbits, and they love me. They are my good friends forever.

四年级英语作文:秋天的颜色(The Colour of Autumn)

Autumn comes , it gets cooler and cooler. The sky is blue and the clouds are white. You would say autumn is blue and white.

Look ! Birds are flying from the north to the south. The leaves are yellow. Some are hanging on the trees, some are on the ground ,some are dancing in the wind. Someone would say autumn is yellow.

There are so many fruits in autumn in Xinxing . Pears ,peaches. Mangos, oranges and so on. They're fresh and healthy.

四年级英语作文:我的铅笔盒(My Pencil-box)

I have a good friend. Her name is Pencil-box. She is a very beautiful girl. Look! there is a picture on her face. It's a picture of flowers. Her coat is blue and yellow. there are some pencils, a pen, a ruler, a rubber and a tape in her stomach. From Monday to Friday, I go to school with her. When I want to copy or write the new words, I open her mouth and take out the pencil from her stomach. She helps me a lot. And I like her very much.