雅思作文犯罪（1）

It is shown that many criminals have a low level of Some people argue that the best way to reduce crime is to educate criminals in prison to help them find jobs when they leave Do you agree or disagree?

题目分析：

题目类型：犯罪类

提问方式：同意与否类

Crime from the juvenile to the adults, obviously, has become an serioussocial problem, which cannot be Gradually, more people focus on the future of criminal released from the prison, and believe that to provide them educational opportunities does help the reduction of crime; as for me, I am an advocate of this

As the major reason of high crime rate in today's society, low education level has been People without receiving enough education would be attempted easily, and do not have the equal and excellent skills to compete with others when looking for a job; besides, lacking sufficient moral knowledge to distinguish right from wrong contributes to go astray on their way to pursue the It is worth providing the prisoners, especially committing minor crimes, with education opportunities before free, which not only can give them another chance to learn some practical skills and accumulate certain knowledge to find a job and start again after the sentence, but also decline the risk that they would turn to crime

On the other hand, educational opportunities in prison cannot be the universal solution of all the problems the prisoners The huge life pressure and the attitude from other citizens could lead them to go back to the old lifestyle, or even cause more serious problems to both the society and the individuals financially and However, no one can doubt the function of education as the basic mean to provide people and the society a brighter future; thus, though education cannot solve all the problems at once, it is necessary for a long

In conclusion, in spite of many causes in high crime rate, our society should realize the importance of education, and give all the criminals the second chance to do something right and have a better development in the future

雅思作文犯罪（2）

Task：Many scientists believe that now we can study the behavior of a three-year-old child to see whether they will grow up to be To what extent do you think the human nature produces crimes? And how can we prevent children from growing up to be criminals?

参考范文：

Does a child’s performance at the age of 3 decide whether he or she would be a criminal in the future? Personally, I partially agree that gene defects in some cases indeed cause some illegal actions, while it is unwise to attribute all crimes to the gene problem, and my reasons will be explored as

Admittedly, to the extent of Geneticism, this assertion is reasonable, because some of human behaviors, attitudes and characteristics are determined by DNA, and there is always homeotypical continuity from inappropriate behaviors in childhood to criminality in For example, symptoms of gene-based psychological abnormality, which stems from the imbalanced secretion of hormones in brain, can be reflected in the very young age as inattention, restlessness, apathy, the lack of guilt about wrongdoings, and unkindness to other In adulthood, there is a high possibility that these morbid emotional traits evolve into anti-social minds--specifically, disregarding of rights of others or rules of society, irresponsibility, aggressive personalities and misperceptions about the right and

However, I strongly believe this assertion is problematic, for the reason that it completely underestimates more fundamental influences of other aspects on children after their Firstly, parents always play a key role in children’s formative education that directly shapes behaviors, minds and values of For example, poor parenting skills in daily life, such as violence and corporal punishment, tend to make personalities of children aggressive and rude, even irritable, which might turn into dangerous behaviors and anti-social minds in

Besides, violent contents on the internet, TV programs and video games are also responsible for juvenile It is because youngsters, unlike adults, are lack of abilities to distinguish right from Therefore, too much violence in the virtual world could twist the social values of young As a result, they, more often than not, consider violence as the main or even only way to solve problems, thereby leading to

In conclusion, there are more factors that might result in delinquencies of the youth than genes, and the impacts from parents and media on children’s growth are bigger than that from

雅思作文犯罪（3）

观点类大作文犯罪类话题

Many people are afraid of leaving house because of Some think more action should be taken to prevent crime, but others think little can be What is your view?(题目来源：20XX年9月3日大陆雅思大作文)

题目大意

很多人因为犯罪害怕出门。一些人认为应该采取更多的措施来阻止犯罪，然而其他人认为犯罪无法阻止。问你的观点。

写作思路

这道题目是一道犯罪类话题的题目。犯罪类话题是雅思考试的高频题目，基本上每年必考个四五次。这道题目出题的角度有点怪，说的是害怕出门。当然了，作为生活在天朝的子民来说，这种话有点可笑，但是好在只是背景，不是问题本身。问题是能否有措施有效地阻止犯罪。个人认为当然是可以的。如果我们啥都不做，犯罪只会越来越多。文章就从几个方面入手介绍犯罪阻止的方法，所以这道题目其实是一道罗列观点型题目。

审题，找出敏感词/限定词

Action，限定词，measure等

Prevent，限定词，deter，cease，halt等

高分范文

An ongoing topic of debate in traffic safety world has been whether the age for driving should be raised or Typically, the legal age to drive alone needs to be 17 or so, but there is a proposal, underpinned by some

It is fairly hard to imagine that home has become the only place of safety in modern society, where residents are worried about various kinds of crimes, street robbery, car theft and even This is obligation of the government to protect the civil life and work, which, I think, could be classified into three

First, deterring potential crimes is considered as a direct way to improve living environment for Some strict laws and regulations should be imposed on specific crime For example, prolonging the term of imprisonment could be an effective way to deter crimes, like theft and Also, lowering the minimum crime age on punishment is another solution to ordinary crimes because younger criminals are liable to escape from

Second, the high rate of crimes is derived partly from the widening gap of living in Therefore, creating more job opportunities after investing in manufactures and public services could, to some degree, bring about stable Reduction in the number of the homeless and unemployed contributes to decline in the level of social chaos and When everyone is satisfied with the company they work for and the salary they are paid, there may be no need for them to risk committing

Third, popularity of primary and secondary education or opening more technical schools is an urgent People who live in slums with minimum education more probably commit crimes than those with decent education and comparatively higher social Therefore, the level of education reflects living condition and public security in communities, which for a long term is regarded as the foundation of civilized

In conclusion, there are plenty of solutions to crimes and social problems, which depend on effectiveness of activities and continuous efforts from both government and

相关词汇

Street robbery街道抢劫

Car theft 偷车

Obligation责任

Classify分类

Deter震慑

Be imposed on强加于

Prolong延长

Imprisonment关监狱

Be liable to 易于做某事

Be derived from 由 而产生

Social chaos社会混乱

Conflict冲突

Slum贫民窟

Decent体面的

Comparatively相对而言地

雅思作文犯罪（4）

犯罪类雅思写作范文：青少年犯罪

先来看一下写作题目：

Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as To what extent do you agree or disagree?

范文:

Nowadays, there is an increasing concern that there are many young people who commit However, some people argue that these criminals should receive the same kind of punishment as I agree with the view that if they have done it more than once, there is little reason to protect them from harsh

Firstly, it is obvious that some underage criminals do not have a clear understanding of the consequences of behaviour when they make the mistake for the first The main point of punishment to this group is to educate them the importance of obeying the law, rather than punishing them for being ignorant of the Therefore giving them a softer punishment could be enough to prevent them from doing further harm to the

Moreover, the shortcoming in education is the root cause contributing to the growing juvenile Chances are that if children receive appropriate education in schools and families, they will get into trouble in the So the favourable education must be available before children having habit of unacceptable

That is not to say that if these underage criminals never learn the lesson and keep crossing the bottom line of the legal system, a severer treatment is still unnecessary in this The law could not forgive a law breaker again and again, which can trigger people’s doubt on legal So no matter how young they are, breaking the law seriously for the second time deserves the equivalent punishment as

In sum, I believe that those young people who have only committed a serious crime once deserve a less harsh and punishment and more rigorous education whereas those who keep ignoring the consequences of their wrong behaviour should be treated the same as Only in this way can the social justice be respected to a large

雅思作文犯罪（5）

Task：Some people who have been in prison become good citizens Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the danger of committing a To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sample answer：

A child’s education has never been about learning information and basic skills It has always included teaching the next generation how to become law-abiding While some people claim that those ex-prisoners are the best teachers to raise the awareness regarding laws, I believe that other measures are equally

Obviously, ex-prisoners play a vital role in cutting youth This is because those released prisoners have witnessed the horrors happened in the jail and they may also experience some of At the same time, they can share the tears and sorrows they suffered in the jails and the harm they have brought to the victims and their family This is more impressive than the traditional lectures given by By listening to a wide range of real cases in person, young generation will realize the consequence of the irresponsible behavior deeply and discipline themselves strictly in the

Nevertheless, I believe other alternatives should be taken into consideration as It is common for people to have a fear towards criminals, especially those who have committed violent crimes and therefore face-to-face conversation between the young and people with a criminal record might be inappropriate in some By contrast, policemen normally have a good impression among youngsters and they can become the active voice in reducing juvenile Apart from them, parents can certainly be the first to help children learn the differences between right and wrong since they are the people who know their children best in the

In my opinion, it is the responsibility of every member of a society to help the young generation to become good

雅思作文犯罪（6）

先来说说犯罪份子该如何表达

criminals 名词，罪犯(值得注意的是，该词有形容词性)。

offenders 名词，罪犯，违法者。

convicts 名词，罪犯，囚徒(前段时间很红的一套书《囚徒健身》，“Convict Conditioning”)。

culprits 名词，犯人。同时，本词可以指的是被指控犯罪的人。

outlaws 名词，罪犯。也有动词词性，并且为及物动词，译为宣布某事为不合法。

suspect (criminal suspect)名词，犯罪嫌疑人。其实，在法庭最终宣判之前，我们口中的罪犯多数情况下应该用这个词表达，更为严谨。

prisoner 名词，犯人，囚犯。

juvenile criminals 名词，青少年罪犯。

minor criminals 名词，未成年罪犯。

juvenile delinquent / juvenile offender 名词，少年犯，或行为不端的青少年

值得注意的是，其实在雅思写作犯罪类的话题中，未成年人犯罪往往是常见话题。因此后面几个词汇，需要大家重点掌握。

来说说犯罪这件事该如何表达，要注意词性标注

commit a crime (commit crimes) 动宾，犯罪

violate the law / break the law 动宾，犯罪，违法

offend against the law 动宾，违法

violent crimes / non-violent crimes 形容词+名词，暴力犯罪/非暴力犯罪

delinquent behaviors / illegal acts / lawless behaviors形容词+名词，不法的行为

juvenile delinquency 名词，特指青少年的不法行为

illegality 名词，泛指所有违法行为。此外，immorality 名词，指的是不道德的行为，其实近似于违法行为，但是略有区别。同理，副词illegally和immorally也是类似的区别

wrongdoing / misconduct / delinquency 名词，都是指的是行为不端

犯罪率的表达方式

Crime rate / incident of crime

如何降低犯罪率，是经常在雅思写作中被讨论的话题。

Unbelievably high juvenile crime rate is plaguing many countries all over the world, and how to reduce it has become prime task for those governments for a long

雅思作文犯罪（7）

先来说说犯罪份子该如何表达

criminals 名词，罪犯(值得注意的是，该词有形容词性)。

offenders 名词，罪犯，违法者。

convicts 名词，罪犯，囚徒(前段时间很红的一套书《囚徒健身》，"Convict Conditioning")。

culprits 名词，犯人。同时，本词可以指的是被指控犯罪的人。

outlaws 名词，罪犯。也有动词词性，并且为及物动词，译为宣布某事为不合法。

suspect (criminal suspect)名词，犯罪嫌疑人。其实，在法庭最终宣判之前，我们口中的罪犯多数情况下应该用这个词表达，更为严谨。

prisoner 名词，犯人，囚犯。

juvenile criminals 名词，青少年罪犯。

minor criminals 名词，未成年罪犯。

juvenile delinquent / juvenile offender 名词，少年犯，或行为不端的青少年

值得注意的是，其实在雅思写作犯罪类的话题中，未成年人犯罪往往是常见话题。因此后面几个词汇，需要大家重点掌握。

来说说犯罪这件事该如何表达，要注意词性标注

commit a crime ( commit crimes ) 动宾，犯罪

violate the law / break the law 动宾，犯罪，违法

offend against the law 动宾，违法

violent crimes / non-violent crimes 形容词 + 名词，暴力犯罪 / 非暴力犯罪

delinquent behaviors / illegal acts / lawless behaviors 形容词 + 名词，不法的行为

juvenile delinquency 名词，特指青少年的不法行为

illegality 名词，泛指所有违法行为。此外，immorality 名词，指的是不道德的行为，其实近似于违法行为，但是略有区别。同理，副词 illegally 和 immorally 也是类似的区别

wrongdoing / misconduct / delinquency 名词，都是指的是行为不端

请见如下例文：(青少年违法之后应该如何被惩罚永远是雅思考试的常见话题)

There is no denying that everyone should be punished due to his/her illegality, no matter how old he/she Notwithstanding, this does not imply that juvenile culprits should be treated as equally as adult Juvenile detentions ought to be the place for those minor offenders instead of common jails, and besides juvenile suspects should be on trial in juvenile court where their right can be protected much

Juvenile convicts with violent crimes should be detained in juvenile detentions as they might be potential threats to our society, and on the other hand minor culprits with non-violent crimes can be punished with more flexibility such as being forced to do social

PS: Juvenile detentions 名词，少管所

juvenile court 名词，未成年人法庭

detain 及物动词，羁押

犯罪率的表达方式

Crime rate / incident of crime

如何降低犯罪率，是经常在雅思写作中被讨论的话题。

Unbelievably high juvenile crime rate is plaguing many countries all over the world, and how to reduce it has become prime task for those governments for a long

criminals / reform criminals 动宾，改造罪犯

Main function of prisons is not only punishing culprits with locking them up but also rehabilitating them as everyone no matter what he/she has done deserves a second 监狱的功能不仅是限制犯人的自由，还要给这些犯人提供一个改过自新的机会。

几个导致青少年犯罪的原因如下：

Lack of moral education 名词性，缺少德育教育(lack 一词在实际写作中是考生们常犯错误的地方，请看后面的注解。)

Inappropriate parenting 名词性，不恰当的家庭教育

Being exposed to misleading information from media 动名词性质，暴露于媒体的诱导性信息

Lack of ability of telling right from wrong 名词性，缺少辨别是非的能力

Blindly imitate what they often see or read in media 动宾结构，盲目模仿在媒体中看到的或者听到的事物

PS： 关于 lack

首先，可以是及物动词。例如：With stress from exams, students lack enthusiasm on learning any kind of

其次，名词，多用于词组 be lack of / be lack in = be short of 例如：Generally speaking, high crime rate, to a great extent, can be attributed to lack of law enforcement capacity of

再次，lacking 形容词，常用词组 be lacking of / be lacking in 例如： Fresh graduates are usually lacking in working experience that is required badly on majority of job