英语作文高考范文（1）
Specialists’ suggestions seem to be everywhere nowadays. They frequentlyappear in advertisements, TV shows, and the news discussion and so on. However,some people hold the opinion that the specialists’ suggestions are not asauthoritative as before. We should not trust them anymore. However, in myopinion, I think we can believe in specialists as long as they are honest, andthe products they recommend to us are proved to be good.
First of all, there are more than a few fake specialists in China. Thesefake specialists pretend to be professional in the public. Some of the immoraladvertisers use money to hire the fake specialists to be their productsspokesmen. Then the consumer will fall for the beautiful lies the so calledspecialists tell them. The truth is that the real specialists are forbidden totake up these kinds of ads; they should stay in their labs and do experiments.Second, the real specialists are quite intelligent and they are able to solvemany problems. They can teach us lots of knowledge that we ever learn from thetextbooks. For instance, they may teach us how to stay in good health througheating particular food, or the effective way to reduce stress. The mostimportant thing is the words they say are proved to be true. In this case, wecan believe in the specialists.
英语作文高考范文（2）
写在前面的话
英语作文批改软件的开发一直是业界的一个难点。电脑模拟人脑的逻辑思维能力，其实质就是海量数据的对比。作为软件设计人员，主要任务就是优化数据比对代码，实现高效快捷，然而一篇100个单词的英语作文，单单进行单词正误比对就要将近百万次，更甚的是语法、句法、语义及逻辑表达等的比对，数万亿次以上的工作量更不在话下，超大型计算机还勉强可以应付得来，家庭用的微型电脑可能要比对好几天，因此寻找一个折衷的办法——既做到较好地评判文章的优劣，又能在用户可以接受的时间内产生结果，且不必花费很多的钱购买它，是我们这几年来一直努力的方向。高考英语作文智能评分系统1.0及2.0版本已相继应用于高考英语测试、大学英语四级测试等软件中的作文部分，受到用户们的好评。不少用户跟我们反映：平时找老师课外辅导英语写作，一节课动辄上百元，问我们能不能研发一款高考英语作文软件帮助学生练习写作，减轻学生和家长的经济负担。于是，我们的软件设计师及英语教师团队经过1年左右的时间将之前的2.0版本进行功能升级，成为现在的3.0版本，希望对考生朋友们学习英语写作技巧、提高英语写作能力有所帮助。
一、简介
该软件包括“写作技巧专栏”和“高考英语作文训练”这两个主要版块。其中“写作技巧专栏”共有五个章节，主要讲解了高考英语书面表达（作文）题解题的总指导思想、各种英语作文题型的应试策略以及应用文的格式和写法等，该版块配有53篇优秀的范文供考生参考学习；“高考英语作文训练”版块配套有50篇高考英语书面表达（作文）题供考试测试训练，包含全国各地历年高考英语作文题目（精选）以及模拟题目，测试完毕后由电脑进行智能评分。
二、学时安排
“写作技巧专栏”建议学习17.5个课时，“高考英语作文训练”建议学习75个课时，共92.5个课时。考生可以根据软件上提供的距离高考的剩余时间，安排好高考英语作文学习训练的时间。
三、特色
1、英语作文电脑人工智能评分
该软件通过对您所写作文单词的正误，句子的语法、句法及文章的章法等方面内容进行分析，能客观地给出作文的得分。使用“复制、粘贴他人作文”的作弊方式将难逃软件的“火眼金睛”。这些都是以往许多测试软件所不能实现的。
2、电脑计时
进入考试后，软件自动为你倒计时，时间一到，您将无法继续答题，只能无条件交卷。这样有利于您提高答题速度，强化时间观念。
3、试卷讲评“有的放矢”
考试完毕后，进入“试卷讲评”，您将看到该作文题目的范文、你写的作文以及软件评分和基础点评。
4、成绩入库
每次考试时，您必须将姓名填写在“考卷”上，交卷后给您汇报成绩的同时将登记考试成绩进入数据库保存，这样每次考试后您都可以比较一下历次考试的成绩（另有考试时间，卷名等内容），看看自己进步与否，了解自己的学习效果。
5、软件具备“历次考试详情保存”功能，方便您在考试后的任何时间查看已考过题目的详细情况。
6、具备高考倒计时功能。
最后，希望该英语学习软件可以成为你学习英语、提高英语成绩的好助手，祝你成功！
英语作文高考范文（3）
首先来了解一下英语作文的评分标准
各个档次的给分范围及标准（满分25分）
A、第五档（很好）：（21—25分）
1、完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2、覆盖所有内容要点。
3、应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4、语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
5、有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6、完全达到了预期的写作目的。
B、第四档（好）：（16—20分）
1、完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2、虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3、应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4、语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
5、应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6、达到了预期的写作目的。
C、第三档（适当）：（11—15分）
1、基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2、虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3、应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4、有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
5、应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
6、整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
D、第二档（较差）：（6—10分）
1、未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2、漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
3、语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4、有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
5、较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
6、信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
E、第一档（差）：（1—5分）
1、未完成试题规定的任务。
2、明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
3、语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4、较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
5、缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
6、信息未能传达给读者。
F、不得分：（0分）未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
从上面可以看出英语作文高分的关键因素及高分秘诀：
三点关键定档因素（不跑题是前提）
词汇多样性
语法复杂性
文章连贯性
书面表达的五项秘诀：
审题，遣词，造句，润色，谋篇
既然知道了这些关键因素和高分秘诀，我们要如何从这些方面入手呢？
审题的概念
拿到试卷后，首先浏览书面表达的题目，研究题目要求。正确的审题内容包括A、审标题B、审体裁C、审要点。审标题：看文章是否要求有题目（title）或者主题（topic）能够确保你不跑题；审体裁：确能够定文章的文体，为你写作提供方向。审要点：如果英语作文中，有要求要点的，一般打分时是踩点给分的，准确把握住要点，是高分的一个诀窍。
如何审要点？要做到以下两个方面：
总结归纳要点：不是所有内容都要写出来，而是抓住其中的关键要点、衔接要点！
理顺要点：将提炼的要点按逻辑关系（如时间关系、因果关系、转折关系等）重新安排，这样整篇文章看起来就整体有序，流畅自然，更加容易打动评分老师，从而作文分数提升一档。
构思文章提纲：根据题目的要点，安排好段落和主次关系。要形成良好的分段意识，写作分段是必须要进行的（2至4段为佳），这样显得文章不会拥挤并且层次分明。在行文意识上，要注意突出要点。
遣词的注意点
不出现语言错误
词语和短语搭配
适度使用加分词汇
避免词语重复
注意词语和短语搭配使用
可以适度的使用加分词句：高级词、同义词、短语等替代
造句的原则
表达意思要清楚无误。
多种表达方式表达相同含义
避免句式单调（简单句，并列句，复合句等适度调整）
表达意思清楚无误：具体化，细节化
可以用形象思维来表达（什么叫形象思维？比如说你朗读的“很好听”，用“抑扬顿挫”来表达就是形象思维）
谋篇的攻略
注意分段、详略搭配、注意连贯
行文时多用关联词、引导词，把文章句子通过各种关系整合起来，达到起承转合，运用自如的目的，从而获取高分。
具体的连接关系有：并列关系、递进关系、因果关系、转折关系、让步关系、列举关系、条件关系、举例关系、时间关系等。
英语作文高考范文（4）
第五档(很好)：(21~25分)
1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2.覆盖所有内容要点。
3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。
5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好)：(16~20分)
1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2.虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6.达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(适当)：(11~15分)
1.基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2.虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
6.整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(较差)：(6-10分)
1.未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
5.较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档(差)：(1~5分)
1.未完成试题规定的任务。
2.明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
3.语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4.较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
5.缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
6.信息未能传达给读者。
不得分：(0分)
如何写英语高分作文
第一要认真审题。根据题目类别，弄清文体的要求，并判明文章的种类(议论文、说明文、记叙文)，同时确定文章要阐明的主题或要表达的中心思想，若题目已经提供了提纲，还要注意弄清各提纲要点之间的逻辑关系。考生在拿到作文题后，切勿惟恐时间不够，提笔就写。一旦跑题，发现了再改就来不及了，常言道：磨刀不误砍柴工。
第二要注意设计安排段落。根据文章的中心思想，确定各个段落的主题内容和主题句。如果是议论文，一般要从论点的正反两个方面来考虑，首先是某观点的合理成分或某物的长处，然后是该观点的不合理成分或该物的短处，最后阐明自己的观点。如果题目提供了提纲，只要把提纲扩展成主题句即可。
第三要避免将记忆里较熟悉的句子生拉硬扯地搬进作文，使作文结构松散，意思不明确，甚至会偏离主题。
写好英语作文的方法
书写要漂亮，卷面整洁。和语文作文一样，卷面是最重要的，不要出现污痕、错字，保持卷面的干净整洁，给阅卷老师留下好的印象。字体不做要求，清楚，便于辨认，工整就足够了。平时可以多练书写，字体就会越来越漂亮。
背诵范文，尽量做到完整默写。不会写作文怎么办？背范文。背范文可以教你如何写作文，如何使用句型，对提高语感也有帮助。遇到类似的作文就可以往范文上靠，久而久之就找到感觉了。
平时多练。平时一定要多写，有范文的可以和范文比较，看看自己的差距。写完后记得找老师批改，找出自己的错误和不足。
尝试用高级词汇和句型。使用高级句型和词汇，可以让阅卷老师眼前一亮，分数也会相应提高。前提是你必须保证自己所写的符合语法，正确无误，否则就老老实实写自己学过的，保证正确率是最重要的，不要因使用错误的高级句型而丢分。
英语作文高考范文（5）
假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自我的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。Z__K
1。学会学习：方法，习惯等;
2。学会做人：真诚，友善;
3。学会其他：考生自拟。
注意：1。词数120左右;
2。发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总次数。
Good morning， everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on learn in senior high school。
Thank you!
范文：
One possible version
Good morning，everyone!It is my honor to be share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school。
In the ing three years，our school life will be challenging。Firstly，we should learn to learn efficiently。Personally，I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals。Developing a good habit is also of importance。It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons，get actively involved in class，and review what had been taught after class。
In addition，we should learn how to get along well with others。In school，I respected teachers and was fiendly with classmates。It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere。
Finally，we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently。They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life。
No pains no gains，I am sure that with your great efforts，you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here。
Thank you!
英语作文高考范文（6）
假定你是李华，在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上，你看到以下内容。 请你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?
写作要点： 表明自己的看法 陈述自己的理由 提出至少2条建议。
范文： Hi, TigerMom ,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China . My idea is that it is quite right for you to do so .
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission , development in wisdom emotion ,health and life attitude should never be ignored . There are many examples around us . Some all—A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities . Furthermore , punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically .
So I suggest that you take your friends’ advice . More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl ; let her have more friends and social activities ; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do .
英语作文高考范文（7）
假设你是某中学新老师李红，请给你的朋友张华写封信，告诉他你第一天上课的情景，主要内容如下：描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情 介绍你处理该事的方式 谈谈你的感想
范文：
Dear zhuanghua ,
It’s three months since I heard from you last time . Now I want to tell you an impressive story happening on my first lesson .
On hearing the bell students ran into the classroom as quickly as they But a boy ,LIMing , whose father died a month ago , was late for the He stood outside the classroom silently . I smiled to him and let him come After a while ,he cried on his desk . Then I walked to him and asked what had happened . He told me that his mother was ill and he had to take some medicine for her . At the same time ,he apologized to me for his lateness . Moved by his words , I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song named “mother” for the students . How time flies ! Class was over before I realized it .
From the story I felt we should respect our parents and do our best to help them . Do you think so ? I’m looking forward to your reply .
Yours truly ,
Li Hong
英语作文高考范文（8）
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英语作文高考范文（9）
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英语作文高考范文（10）
A teacher just likes a shining star to Miss Fu, one of my English teacher, is a shining star in my
I happened to be in Miss Fu's class when I began my high school At that time, I dared not speak English aloud in public, for I was shy and my pronunciation and intonation were Afraid of being laughed at, I never put up my hand to answer the questions Miss Fu raised in class, even if I had some good answers to For a time, I even lost interest in practising spoken When Miss Fu found out the reason, she encouraged me to First she bought me some English tapes and told me to listen to them carefully, and try to recite In class, I was often asked questions and given a lot of chances to practise by little, I became brave enough to speak, and was not afraid to speak English before Miss Fu smiled sweetly when she heard the news that I had been chosen to take part in an important oral English
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英语作文高考范文（11）
Hi Worried,
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll Here are three useful tips:
First, talk to someone you trust about how you This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or Second, go outdoors and play team games with your ftiends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of And third, remain optimistic about your Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your
I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as
Yours,
Jamie
英语作文高考范文（12）
Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase However, results are sometimes
There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or service Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our own Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or It has become a common practice for some to pay for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their
Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go
英语作文高考范文（13）
As people are so busy with their work, they go to work directly in the morning without eating Some people think not having breakfast does no influence on their body Some believe breakfast is important to people's body In my opinion, I'm convinced that we should have breakfast because it is good for our body
First of all, breakfast offer us the energy we need for the Before breakfast, our body has consumed all the energy we get from previous Consequently, we need to eat some food in the morning to get enough energy and nutrient to support our If we don't have breakfast, then we have no enough energy to do our work
Secondly, people who skip breakfast will get weight If you don't have breakfast, then you will eat more food at noon and in the Generally speaking, we don't have much excise in the evening while we eat too much As a result, the surplus calorie will be stored in our body and make us
All in all, people should eat breakfast for the good of our health and for the good of keeping a good body
英语作文高考范文（14）
Beautiful MemoryWhen I was small, I lived in my hometown, it is a small village, but the scenery is so beautiful, the trees are so green and the water is so But when I went to primary school, I moved to the city with my parents, I missed the time in my hometown so When I was in my hometown,
I woke up early in the morning, some people took a walk and some were doing their farm I would always go to the mountain with my grandma, we took care of the fruit The little dog would come with me, when my grandma was doing her work, I played with the dog, how happy I Sometimes I would go to the river with my friends to catch the fish, I saw the fish These are beautiful memory for me, I keep it all the
英语作文高考范文（15）
例1：报纸和网站是当今两大主要媒体。请根据下表内容，以 “newspapers and websites” 为题，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍这两种媒体的优缺点。
报 纸
1. 传统媒体，天天更新，信息可靠
2. 携带方便，随时随地可以阅读
3. 仅有文字和图片
网 站
1. 新兴媒体，信息更新速度快
2. 依赖于电脑及互联网
3. 包含文字、图片、音频和视频
注意：
1. 短文必须包括表中所有内容，可以适当发挥;
2. 词数：100-120
3. 参考词汇：更新update;音频audio;视频video
newspapers and websites
newspapers and websites are two major new media in the world today, both of which can provide us with lots of news and information. but they’re different in some ways.
newspapers enjoy a longer history and often come out daily with more reliable news and information. they can be carried and read almost anywhere you like. so many people like reading them. but they can only contain texts and photos.
on the other hand, websites are quite new and popular, especially among young people. websites have not only texts with pictures but also audios and videos, which makes stories more interesting. what’s more, they are updated from time to time. so the latest news is always seen on websites instead of in newspapers. but it is not quite convenient for people without a computer connected with the internet to get information from websites.
英语作文高考范文（16）
I am writing to you to share my opinions on fashion with you, for I have just heard that you were depressed because you couldn’t afford the best(famous) brands.
I shall say that it is natural for everyone to pay much emphasis on his own image. And it is true that stylish clothes, shoes or something like those will make one more fashionable and eye-catching. However, everybody has his(her) own family background, and it is really extravagant for you to buy the famous brands. Besides, it will also add to the burden of your parents.
What’s more, beauty is just skin deep. There are many things which can make you popular with others except fashion. A great amount of knowledge, noble character and a warm heart will surely win others’ respect and admiration. Good qualities are the treasure in your life which is more valuable than anything you wear.
Never judge a person by the appearance. I hope that you will remember the saying and become as happy as you used to be.
Yours,Jane
亲爱的凯西。
我写信给你分享我的意见的方式与你，我刚才听到你沮丧，因为你买不起最好的(著名)品牌。
我说，每个人都付出非常重视自己的形象是很自然的。这是真正的时尚衣服，鞋或类似的东西将使这些人更时尚抢眼。然而，每个人都有他(她)自己的家庭背景下，这确实是奢侈的为您购买知名品牌。此外，它也将增加你父母的负担。
更重要的是，美丽只是肤浅的。有很多事情可以让你受人欢迎但时尚。大量的知识，高尚的品格和一颗温暖的心一定会赢得别人的尊重和钦佩。良好的素质是你的生活是比你穿什么更宝贵的财富。
从来没有一个人法官的出现。我希望你能记住这句话，成为你曾经是幸福的。
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