作文的建议英语作文（1）
●适当放慢进度，留出思考时间
●反复训练重要、易错知识点
●指导方法
●减少作业量以保证质量
●给予更多鼓励
注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;
3. 词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。
Dear Mr. Wang,
We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.
In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation.
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范文(One possible version)
Dear Mr. Wang,
We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.
In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.
By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.
作文的建议英语作文（2）
Here are some suggestions to keep healthy. Firstly, we should keep a good mood. Keeping a good mood can make us healthy and wealthy. Secondly, we should have enough sleep every day. Don't stay up late at night and get up early in the morning. Thirdly, we should develop a good eating habit, namely eating more fresh fruits and green vegetables, less meat and no junk food. Besides, make sure that eat at regular intervals. In addition, we should change our clothes as the season goes. What’s more, when we are at home, we should open the windows to keep the air clean. Last but not least, do the exercise every day to strengthen our health. Do please pay attention to these points, keeping a healthy body.
这是一些保持健康的建议。首先，我们应该保持一个好心情。保持良好的心态可以使我们健康和富裕。其次，我们每天应该有足够的睡眠。晚上不要熬夜，早上要早起。第三，我们应养成良好的饮食习惯，也就是要多吃新鲜水果和绿色蔬菜，少吃肉，不吃垃圾食品。确保定时吃饭。此外，我们应该随着季节的推移变换我们的衣服。更重要的是，我们在家的时候，我们应该打开窗户以保持空气清新。最后但并非最不重要的是要通过每天锻炼来加强我们的健康。请注意这几点，保持一个健康的身体。
作文的建议英语作文（3）
Dear Lily:
I think you had better feed a hamster,the trediest kind of pet these days is the small hamster. People like them because they are quiet and clean. I have a hamster named Tom,it’s very cute and easy to take care of,and it’s cheaper than rabbits or cats,so I bought it. She’s my best company,because she reads books and litens to music with me every night.However,life with a hamster isn’t always perfect,she sometimes noisy at night ,she love sleep all day,too. So,sometimes she is very boring! How do you think?
作文的建议英语作文（4）
Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.
If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.
No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t you think so?
作文的建议英语作文（5）
I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.
First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.
Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.
(We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)
作文的建议英语作文（6）
We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.
In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.
By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.
作文的建议英语作文（7）
信的主要内容包括以下几点:
1. 北京的“排队日”有助于人们享受更轻松、更和谐的生活,其它城市可借鉴;
2. 一些人在购物或等车时不排队,定一个“排队日”是对他们的提醒,这样,人们会逐渐养成自觉排队的好习惯;
3. 希望每天都成为“排队日”,这样,我们的社会更加美好。
注意:1. 不必逐条翻译,可适当发挥;
2. 词数:100左右;
3. 参考词汇: 排队日lining-up day; 和谐的harmonious
one possible version:
dear editor,
a lining-up day has been set in beijing and it helps people enjoy an easier and more harmonious life. this has set a good example for other cities. nowadays, some people are unwilling to line up when they are doing their shopping or waiting for the bus, so i think it is necessary to establish a lining-up day to remind them. in this way, people will form the good habit of lining up voluntarily. i do hope that we will stick to this practice and popularize it until each day becomes a lining-up day. i’m sure it will make a big difference and our society will become more and more pleasant.
yours,
li hua
作文的建议英语作文（8）
优点：1. 话题广泛;
2. 图片丰富;
3. 有助于提高学习兴趣。
建议：适当降低词汇难度。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
满分作文
Dear Editor,
As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.
In my eyes, these books have a lot of advantages. To begin with, there are such a wide variety of topics in the books that they can satisfy students’ curiosity better. In addition, the pictures in the textbooks are very interesting and attractive. Not only can they draw students’ attention, but they can also arouse our interest in learning English. In short, we have benefited a lot from these books.
However, in my opinion, there are still some shortcomings in the textbooks. We find some words are a bit difficult to remember. Therefore, I suggest that you can make them easier to understand.
Best regards,
Li Hua
亲爱的编辑。
作为学生的读者，我写了一个关于你家出版的英语教材的作文。
在我的眼里，这些书有很多优点。首先，他们可以更好地满足学生的好奇心，有这样一个各种各样的主题的书籍。此外，在教科书中的图片是非常有趣和有吸引力的。他们不仅能吸引学生的注意力，而且能激发我们学习英语的兴趣。总之，我们从这些书中受益匪浅。
然而，在我看来，教科书中仍有一些不足之处。我们发现有些话是有点难以记住。因此，我建议你可以让他们更容易理解。
最好的问候。
李华
作文的建议英语作文（9）
I am writing to express my views concerning_____(对象). In the first place, I would like to say thank you for the help and everything else you have been offering to us. Meanwhile, I also want to make some suggestions .
Firstly, we have found that_____(建议一). Secondly, we want to______(建议二) . Finally, we hope that _______(建议三).
I am looking forwards to your consideration about my proposals. Thanks in advance.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
作文要点点拨
concerning 关于，论及，就…而言：
the help and everything else you have been offering to us
你一直向我们提供的帮助及其它事情。
proposals 提议，建议
in advance 预先，提前
建议信写作建议
首先，要表达你一直关注着某件事情，这件事情给你带来了那些好处，同时针对不足，你想给出一些建议。 (这样第一段基本上就完成了)
然后，针对具体的问题，给出具体的建议，一般是给出二到三建议就行了。(这里真的只能是具体问题具体分析，没有看到作文主题，老师也无能为力，提前帮你弄好。只能靠自己了，加油。)
最后，还是套路，希望认真考虑你的建议，表示感谢。
作文的建议英语作文（10）
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。
obviously， it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢?
更多句型：
accordingly， i recommend that some measures be taken.
consequently， to solve the problem， some measures should be taken.