专四（1）

Competition is a common phenomenon in our society . We compete when we play games, we try to do better than others in our study, and there is constant competition for jobs, fame, wealth and so forth. Therefore,we can say that, in a certain sense, competition is one of the motive forces of the development of our modern society.

It is often believed, that competition and cooperation are in opposition to each other. Some people stress competition, without which, in their eyes, there is no responsibility, no drive and ultimately, no progress. Others advocate cooperation whatever they do. They are of the opinion that the dependence of people on one another has increased, without which the society we live in can not keep going smoothly. In reality, we find that in many cases competition goes hand in hand with cooperation. Lets take a football game for example. During the game, one team is competing against the other, but each member of the team must cooperate with his teammates. Otherwise, they would lose the game no matter how skillful each individual player might be. It is clear that competition has much to do with cooperation.

As far as I’m concerned, I do not agree with the view that competition and cooperation are always in conflict with each other. In my opinion, while advocating competition. We should never forget cooperation. In our social life, cooperation is especially necessary because most work is fulfilled with or through other people. So Ive come to the conclusion that competition are equally important.

竞争是社会的普遍现象。我们在玩游戏的时候会有竞争，我们会在学习上做得比别人好，而对于工作、名望、财富等等的竞争也不断的竞争。因此，我们可以说，在某种意义上，竞争是现代社会发展的动力之一。

人们通常认为，竞争和合作是相互对立的。有些人强调竞争，没有了这些，在他们眼里，没有责任，没有动力，最终，没有进步。其他人主张合作，无论他们做什么。他们认为，人们对彼此的依赖度增加了，而没有了我们生活的社会就不能顺利进行下去了。在现实中，我们发现，在许多情况下，竞争与合作的手。让我们以一个足球比赛为例。在比赛中，一个队是在同一个对手，但每个队员必须与队友合作。否则，他们会失去游戏，不管有多熟练的每个球员可能会。很明显，竞争有多大关系进行合作。

就我而言，我不同意竞争与合作总是相互冲突的观点。在我看来，在提倡竞争的同时。我们永远不应该忘记合作。在我们的社会生活中，合作是特别必要的，因为大多数工作都是通过或通过其他人来完成的。所以我得出这样的结论：竞争同样重要。

专四（2）

Books are close friends of humanity. They can arm us with knowledge and information we need to make success of life. Through books we can obtain skills and techniques for survival and development. Through books we can enlighten our spirits and live a fuller life. There are generally two ways in which we can have access to books: borrowing or buying. While millions are borrowing books, I still think buying them best suits me and gives me the greatest enjoyment.

Admittedly, there are a few merits for borrowing books. For one thing, borrowing books can save us huge amounts of money. And of course, with the money saved we can do other more worthy things .And also, as we borrow books from the library and friends, we normally have deadline to finish them, and consequently we can read more books in a limited time. And we can, above all, better our efficiency of our reading, just as a famous Chinese saying goes, “books can not be read unless borrowed.”

However, some advantages for buying books are more obvious and compelling. One of them, definitely not shared by the choice of borrowing books, is the abundance of freedom that buying books can offer us. Since we can keep the books as long as we wish, we can read as much as we want. Another strength of owing books is that we can take whatever notes on the margin of the pages of the books. And finally, the process of selecting and keeping books can be a great fun that borrowing books can by no means offer.

While borrowing books can, to some extent, quench our thirst for knowledge, buying books gives us greater pleasure of selecting and keeping the best of the world treasure. Can we think of any thing else more delightful and rewarding?

专四（3）

Just as is revealed in the pictures above, people are generally classified into two types: the pessimistic and the optimistic. We can see in one picture some people, long-faced and downhearted, are counting the nights by the shadows while in the other picture the happy-go-lucky people are enjoying the starry nights. What a contrastive view! Remember, it is not the bad thing that determines our state of mind but the way we look at it matters. (描述点题段) (以小到大)

An example that comes to mind is SARS crisis that has recently torn apart and ravaged most of China. Admittedly, it has cost us quite a lot. Some people suffered from health damage and still some even lost their lives. And our economy suffers a temporary setback and a slowdown. However, we still have learnt and benefited a lot from it. (举例说明段) 4. First things first, we are more concerned than never before with our health, and the environment we live in. Additionally, we tried and bettered and are still bettering our mechanism to respond to unexpected crises. These and other lessons at the expense of blood, tear, toil and sweat are benefiting and continue to benefit us and generations of Chinese to come. (分析问题段)

The best way to overcome the frustrations brought about crises is to always take a positive outlook on life. Just as a well-known ancient Chinese notion goes, the past lessons if not forgotten are good teachers for us all. If we can bear in mind sufferings and ordeals we have experienced, then our sufferings will not go unrewarded. (前瞻感言段)

专四（4）

Nowadays more and more people are concerned about mental health issue. It is reported that the number of people committing suicide is on the rise. Many of them committed suicide just because of some little frustration such as failing an exam. If they had paid more attention to their mental health, they might not have reacted in such an extreme way.

How to keep ourselves psychologically healthy? First, we should adjust ourselves to the new conditions. When we go to a university as freshmen, or go to work in a strange city, we may become nervous because everything is so unfamiliar. The only way out is to adjust ourselves to the new conditions and shake off the anxiety quickly. Second, we should know our-selves well and admit that we are just ordinary people. Knowing that ordinary people may not be good at everything, we can easily accept some small failures in our lives. Third, we should try to share our feelings with friends. By doing this, we are assured that any difficulty can be solved since we are not alone.

It is very important for us to be psychologically healthy, and we should pay more attention to our mental health.

专四（5）

As the development of the media, people are affected by the TV and commercial ads, they keep their eyes on the amusement all the time, so they will become a fan. Especially for the teenagers, they chase for the idols. Idols bring the great effect on the public, their power is huge.

由于多媒体的发展，人们受到了电视和商业广告的影响，他们总是在关注着娱乐，所以他们会成为娱乐的粉丝。特别是青少年，他们追逐偶像。偶像给大众带来了很大的影响，他们的力量是很大的。

Today, weibo is very popular for people to share the information. The celebrities open their accounts and they record their lives on it. Many fans will keep their eyes on their idols’ accounts, they want to know everything about their idols. When the celebrities post the news about helping the poor people, then the fans will try their best to help the poor people. The fans will follow their idols’ words.

今天，微博对于人们来说很流行，他们使用微博来分享信息。名人开了账号来记录生活点滴。很多粉丝会观察偶像们的账号，想要了解有关偶像的一切。当名人们张贴了有关帮助穷人的消息时，粉丝会尽最大的努力去帮助穷人。粉丝们会追随着偶像的话语。

As the power from idol is so effective, so the idol should keep the positive image to the public.

由于偶像的力量是如此的有效，因此偶像应该在大众面前保持积极的形象。

The idols have the responsibility to keep the positive image, so that their power can be used in the proper way.

偶像有责任保持积极的形象，这样他们的力量才能用在适当的方面。

专四（6）

As is vividly depicted in the drawing,three birds are standing on the wire.while another bird is standing on the other side without wire,with its whole body floating in the air.One of the three

birds says:”he’s got wifi’

By depicting this the image,the drawer attempts to expose the popularity of wifi nowadays.But every coin has two sides,so does wifi.On the one hand,it makes it possible for a wireless-enabled computer or personal digital assistant to connect to the Internet almost time,anywhere,making our life more convenient and interesting And with the development of society,free wifi will be available in may more places,which will make it cheaper for us to surf the internet.On the other hand,access points could be used to steal personal information transmitted form wifi users and there is still room for improvement in the signal strength of wifi.

Generally speaking,only when we make the most of the advantages of wifi and get rid of its.

disadvantages,will it benefit us.

专四（7）

Should Universities Give Priority to Practical Courses for Students?

Because of the demands in the job market, students with "hot" degrees such as computer science or finance are more likely to get a job than students with a "cold" degree like geography. Some people say that universities should give priority to practical courses for students. But I think that traditional courses are equally important and universities should not give priority to practical courses.

First, both practical and traditional courses are needed in our country. Students who do well in different courses can help to develop different aspects of our country after their graduation. For example, our society needs not only people who can help to develop economy and technology, but also people who can contribute themselves to literature and education. Second, if universities give priority to practical courses, more students will choose those "hot" degrees. When these students graduate, they will have to fight harder for a job because there will be too many applicants with the same degrees. This will in turn cause an imbalance of supply and demand in the job market.

In one word, both practical courses and traditional courses are important, and universities should not give priority to either side.

专四（8）

water is very important for living things. without water there can be no life on earth.

as we can see, the world population is growing rapidly day by day. so enough fresh water is needed to feed such a big population. what's more, with the development of industry, factories and vehicles produce poisonous gases or wastes, which consequently results in the pollution of water. though fresh, a good amount of it can no longer be used. only quite limited fresh water resource is available to human beings. so it's high time for us human beings to take quick action to protect water resource. stop pollution and save water, otherwise, we cannot survive on the earth.

with fresh water, the world will be prosperous.

water is the source of life.we can't live without water.however,with the increasing population and industrial development,water pollution has become a serious problem.large amounts of wastewater go into rivers and seas directly without being treated,which can be dangerous to people.also lots of people pay no attention to saving water in daily life,while in some place water is badly needed.

it's time for us to take some measures to improve the situation.factories should treat the wastewater before letting it go into rivers.we can play a positive role in saving water.for example we can reuse the water for wishing rice to wash vegetables and then clean a mop.

water is indispensable to our life and the development of national economy. it is often described as the source of all living things and the lifeblood of agriculture and industry. without it, nothing could grow and out world would become a terrible desert.

the world we live in is now faced with a severe shortage of fresh water. according to some official figures, more than 1,700 million people in the world don't have enough clear water to drink and over 25 thousand people die of water related diseases daily.

so, all of us should actively b save water. it's our obligation for the benefit of the future generations.

专四（9）

How to Keep Psychologically Healthy?

Nowadays more and more people are concerned about mental health issue. It is reported that the number of people committing suicide is on the rise. Many of them committed suicide just because of some little frustration such as failing an exam. If they had paid more attention to their mental health, they might not have reacted in such an extreme way.

How to keep ourselves psychologically healthy? First, we should adjust ourselves to the new conditions. When we go to a university as freshmen, or go to work in a strange city, we may become nervous because everything is so unfamiliar. The only way out is to adjust ourselves to the new conditions and shake off the anxiety quickly. Second, we should know our-selves well and admit that we are just ordinary people. Knowing that ordinary people may not be good at everything, we can easily accept some small failures in our lives. Third, we should try to share our feelings with friends. By doing this, we are assured that any difficulty can be solved since we are not alone.

It is very important for us to be psychologically healthy, and we should pay more attention to our mental health.

专四（10）

一、对比选择型

1、适合Advantage / Disadvantage题型

People’s views towards the advantages and disadvantages of 主题词 vary greatly. Some believe that 观点1 , while others support that 观点2 . As for me, I agree to the latter idea because its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.

There are dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据一. 理由一.

The second reason that can be seen by every person is that 论据二. For example, 理由二.

From the above, we can easily see that 主题词 is beneficial to 总结理由一二.

2、适合Yes / No题型

It has long been a contentious issue as to whether 题目陈述. Some people are of the opinion that 观点一, while others point out that 观点二. As far as I am concerned, the latter opinion holds more weight.

For one thing, 论据一. 理由一.

For another, 论据二. 理由二.

Now, after close examination, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that 总结观点. Therefore, as a university student, we should 提出意见.

3、适合A / B题型

Nowadays, 通过想象引出话题. As a result, some people are worried that A与B之间的矛盾. However, I don’t think their concerns are necessary, because A has some exclusive advantages over B.

First of all, A 与 B比较优势一. A 的`优点. However, B的缺点.

Furthermore, A 与B比较优势二. For example, 举例说明优势二.

Last but not least, A 与B比较优势三. A的优点. In contrast, B 的缺点.

In short, A has some merits that B doesn’t have. Therefore, 结论.

二、给定观点型

Nowadays, with 现象, people are becoming increasingly aware of the significance of 主题词. In my point of view, 把标题变为陈述句. There are numerous reasons to support my point of view, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.

One of the primary causes is that 理由一. If you look around, you will always find that 举例证明一.

Another reason that can be seen by every person is that 理由二. A good case in point is 举例证明二.

So from what has been discussed, one can reach only this conclusion that 结论. Therefore, 提出建议.

三、自由发挥型

1、适合The Best Way型

Nowadays, it is a heatedly discussed topic that 引出话题. People have put forward various ways, such as 例一，例二，例三, etc. As for me, the best way to 主题词 is 论点.

The benefits for my ideas can be generalized to two major ones. First of all, 理由一. Suppose if 提出假想例子证明理由一.

Another benefit is that 理由二. Suppose if 提出假想例子证明理由一.

In conclusion, 总结. So 提出建议.

2、My Idea型

This problem is a much debated one in that it affects almost everybody in their daily lives. As a college student, I think that 论点.

To begin with, 理由一. 证明理由一.

A further reason why I support this is that 理由二. There is a good evidence to show that 证明理由二.

From what has been discussed above, a conclusion can be drawn that 结论. I wish 提出希望.

专四（11）

Competition is a common phenomenon in our society . We compete when we play games, we try to do better than others in our study, and there is constant competition for jobs, fame, wealth and so forth. Therefore,we can say that, in a certain sense, competition is one of the motive forces of the development of our modern society.

It is often believed, that competition and cooperation are in opposition to each other. Some people stress competition, without which, in their eyes, there is no responsibility, no drive and ultimately, no progress. Others advocate cooperation whatever they do. They are of the opinion that the dependence of people on one another has increased, without which the society we live in can not keep going smoothly. In reality, we find that in many cases competition goes hand in hand with cooperation. Lets take a football game for example. During the game, one team is competing against the other, but each member of the team must cooperate with his teammates. Otherwise, they would lose the game no matter how skillful each individual player might be. It is clear that competition has much to do with cooperation.

As far as I’m concerned, I do not agree with the view that competition and cooperation are always in conflict with each other. In my opinion, while advocating competition. We should never forget cooperation. In our social life, cooperation is especially necessary because most work is fulfilled with or through other people. So Ive come to the conclusion that competition are equally important.

竞争是社会的普遍现象。我们在玩游戏的'时候会有竞争，我们会在学习上做得比别人好，而对于工作、名望、财富等等的竞争也不断的竞争。因此，我们可以说，在某种意义上，竞争是现代社会发展的动力之一。

人们通常认为，竞争和合作是相互对立的。有些人强调竞争，没有了这些，在他们眼里，没有责任，没有动力，最终，没有进步。其他人主张合作，无论他们做什么。他们认为，人们对彼此的依赖度增加了，而没有了我们生活的社会就不能顺利进行下去了。在现实中，我们发现，在许多情况下，竞争与合作的手。让我们以一个足球比赛为例。在比赛中，一个队是在同一个对手，但每个队员必须与队友合作。否则，他们会失去游戏，不管有多熟练的每个球员可能会。很明显，竞争有多大关系进行合作。

就我而言，我不同意竞争与合作总是相互冲突的观点。在我看来，在提倡竞争的同时。我们永远不应该忘记合作。在我们的社会生活中，合作是特别必要的，因为大多数工作都是通过或通过其他人来完成的。所以我得出这样的结论：竞争同样重要。

专四（12）

Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation:

You have heard that your friend, Jim, wishes to sell his hike. Write him a note expressing your interest in it, asking him about its condition and offering a price for it.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.

范文

April 12,

Dear Jim,

I have heard that you wish to sell your bike. At the moment I just need a bike by which I can go to do my part-time job on the weekend. Would you please tell me what color your bike is and how well it works? And is it possible that I buy it at the cost of 50 yuan?

Yours,

Mary

专四（13）

The last several decades have seen a decline in parental influence on their children. In fact, it seems that the more children watch movies and television and get influenced by people outside the home, the more their parents lose control over them. Nowadays, children and teens are often searching for role models other than their parents to imitate. They naturally look to celebrities like singers, movie stars, and athletes to be their guides. For example, many high school students like to dress in the latest fashions that have been made popular by various celebrities. They even cut their hair like famous people or say the same things as them. Parents simply cannot complete with these stars when it comes to influencing their children. Many television shows, movies, and video games have high levels of violent content and bad language, which greatly influence young people watching them. Children have begun acting badly based upon what they have seen on various media.

近几十年来，父母对子女的影响出现了下降。事实上，越来越多的孩子看电影和电视，并受到外界的影响，他们的父母对他们失去控制。如今，孩子和青少年往往是在寻找榜样，而不是他们的父母模仿。他们很自然地去看像歌手，电影明星，运动员是他们的指南。例如，许多高中学生喜欢穿最新的时装，这是由各种名人所欢迎的。他们甚至把自己的头发剪了，像名人一样，或者说同样的事情。父母只是不能完成这些星星，当它影响他们的'孩子。许多电视节目、电影和电视游戏都有很高水平的暴力内容和不好的语言，这些都严重影响了年轻人的观看。孩子们已经开始根据他们在各种媒体上看到的东西开始表演了。

专四（14）

题目：College Students Starting Their Own Undertakings

写作要求

Nowadays many college students choose to start their own undertakings after graduation and this practice is encouraged by the government. What are the possible reasons behind this phenomenon? What’s your view of it?

Write on Answer Sheet Two a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:

College Students Starting Their Own Undertakings

You are to write in three parts.

In the ? rst part, state speci? cally what your idea is.

In the second part, provide reasons to support your idea OR describe your idea.

In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure tofollow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

审题思路

本题是现象解释说明/结果预测型的题目，探讨为什么那么多大学生要创业，并给出自己的观点。可以从以下几方面着手：

1. 关于原因方面 ，可以正面说明，或者给出创业会带来哪些好处 ；

2. 关于自己的观点方面 ，先表明态度 ，是赞成还是反对 ，然后简单给出理由。

范文赏析

College Students Starting Their Own Undertakings

Nowadays there are many college students who choose to start their own undertakings instead of ?nding a job after graduation. The government encourages this practice, and provides many preferential policies and facilitation measures for college students. As far as I’m concerned, an array of integrated factors contributes to this.

引言部分 ：作者先提出大学生毕业后不去找工作而是选择创业这个现象，然后用as far as I’m concerned 引出自己的.看法 。

The ?rst factor that should be mentioned is that college students are facing severe employment situations. Many college graduates couldn’t find ideal jobs, which forces them to set up their own businesses. Another equally important factor is that some ambitious college students are not satisfied with being employed by others. They want to develop and prove their talents by running their own companies.Besides, the government’s encouragement and the media’s reports on college students venture stars have stimulated more college students’ enthusiasm to take this way.

主体部分：在主体部分，作者陈述了三个原因，分别使用了the first fact or，an oth er equ ally important factor和besides 来连接这三个原因。

As for me, it is a good choice for college students to start their own undertakings. However, it is a very difficult cause, which needs firm determination, clear mind, the ability to endure hardship and a feasible project. Therefore, they should think it over and make full preparation before deciding to start their own businesses.

总结部分 ：作者用as for me来引出自己的观点，与首段不同；作者认为创业是个不错的选择，但是应仔细考虑并做周全的准备。

亮点回放

1. undertaking : “事业 ，企业 ，保证”；此处作 “企业”解 ，文中表示“创业 ”的表达 方式很多 ：start their own undertakings ，set up their own businesses ，running their own companies ，start their own businesses等 。近义词的使用使文章不单调，充满变化性。

2. practice : “练习，习惯，业务”；此处表示 “做法 ” ，常用的搭配还有international practice（国际惯例 ），best practice（最优方法 ）等 。

3. preferential: “优先的，特惠的”；此处也可以使用favorable terms来表示“优惠条件”。

4. facilitation measure: “便利性措施”。

5. an array of: “一系列的”；近义词还有a series of ，a number of ，a set of等 。

6. integrated: “综合的，整合的”；这里指“综合性 的因素”。

7. ambitious: “野/雄心勃勃的” ；此处也可以用enterprising （有事业心的，有进取心的 ） 来代替 。

8. run : 通常同学们只用该词的常用意思 “跑 ” ，此处表示 “经营 ，运 营” ，近义词为operate ，manage等 。

9. stimulate: “刺激 ，激励” ；此处可以用motivate ，inspire ，rouse来替代 。

10. cause: 常用作动词，此处作名词，表示“事业 ，事情”，也可以简单地使thing来表示。

11. determination: “决心” ；通常考生会使用make up one’s mind来表示 “下定决心做某事”，但是determination 的使用更为正式 。

12. feasible: “可行的” ；此处也可以使用reasonable ，practicable ，workable ，achievable等。

专四（15）

My younger cousin got in trouble at school for kicking some other students. When asked why he did it, he responded that he had been imitating his favorite cartoon character. He had seen this behavior and decided to act similarly. His parents had enormous difficulties getting him to stop. This showed me that TV shows can be more influential than parents. Finally, young people often feel like they have nothing in common with their parents, so their parents' influence in their live decreases. Young people think their parents do. For example, many parents are not as proficient as their children are at using modern technology. They might not even know how to surf the Internet or use an MP3 player. This gap in knowledge makes it very hard for them to find common ground with their parents. In conclusion, modern media and the world of technology have much stronger influences on young people than their parents do. As young people get more absorbed in television, movies celebrities, and their friends, parents should expect to continue losing more control over their children.Many believe that outside influences have stronger effects on young people than their parents do. This, however, is a mistaken belief.

我弟弟在学校里遇到了一些其他学生的麻烦。当被问到他为什么这样做时，他回答说，他一直在模仿他最喜欢的卡通人物。他已经看到了这种行为，并决定采取同样的行动。他的父母给他带来了巨大的困难让他停下来。这说明我认为电视节目比父母更有影响力。最后，年轻人通常觉得自己和父母没有共同的生活，所以他们父母的生活会影响他们的生活。年轻人认为他们的`父母。例如，许多父母不像他们的孩子一样熟练使用现代技术。他们可能甚至不知道如何上网或使用MP3播放器。这方面的知识差距使他们很难找到共同的立场与他们的父母。总之，现代媒体和世界的技术对年轻人的影响比他们的父母更强烈的影响。随着年轻人对电视、电影明星以及他们的朋友的影响，父母应该继续失去对孩子的控制，许多人认为，外界的影响对年轻人的影响比他们的父母更为强烈。然而，这是一个错误的信念。

专四（16）

在学习、工作、生活中，大家都接触过作文吧，作文一定要做到主题集中，围绕同一主题作深入阐述，切忌东拉西扯，主题涣散甚至无主题。那要怎么写好作文呢？下面是小编收集整理的专四专八作文高分七点注意事项，欢迎阅读与收藏。

在平时，总有很多同学写信来询问同样的一个问题：“我怎样才能够在短时间内提高我的专四写作水平？”答案其实是否定的。首先我们必须明确：冰冻三尺，非一日之寒；英语学习是一个长期积累的过程，短期的突击无异于舍本逐末、杯水车薪。然而，这并不意味着我们不能够通过掌握考试规律来调整我们的临考状态、提高我们的应考能力。以下，我想就如何利用应试规律、最大限度地发挥同学们的写作水平谈7点个人的看法。

1、心理

古人云，不战而屈人之兵，很大程度上取决于心理因素。随着考试改革的深入，会有更多，更新，更难的题目，包括作文题目出现，这样就要求我们有处惊不变的能力。即使是出现某种没有预料到的题型，考生也应该及时调整心态、从容不迫地应答。事实上，历史经验证明：题目要求越是高，难度越是大，考生的发挥余地也就越大。挑战和机遇是成正相关的。

2、评分

知己知彼，百战不怠。熟悉老师的评分习惯，对于考生正常、甚至是超常发挥自身水平也十分有益。正常情况下，阅卷老师要领会贯彻考试规定的评分原则，依照文章的结构和语言水平进行评分。然而，除此以外，有“两个基本点”我们也需要给予足够的重视――闪光点和语法点。在一篇出类拔萃的范文中，我们往往可以看到像提问法、谚语总结法、从句、并列句、理由段公式、理由词汇、路线句型、插入语、名词化、和被动语态等等闪光点；而在一篇低分例文中，基本的语言错误则多得数不胜数。

3、审题

磨刀不误砍柴工。在落笔前花两三分钟时间进行构思，既有利于理清行文思路、也避免了差之毫厘、失之千里的遗憾。尤其是在应对图表类作文时，我们更是要看清图表，牢牢把握各个数据的变化和相互关系，才能够下笔。否则张冠李戴，即使文章本身再不同凡响、语惊四座，也只会竹篮打水、甚至起到适得其反的效果。

4、卷面

对于像作文这样的主观题而言，考生与阅卷老师从来就犹如搏弈，无形中彼此互动、相互影响。一个考生可以做的，首先是通过卷面给阅卷老师下意识地传达个人信息。用笔的颜色（深蓝色使人心情放松愉快）、粗细（粗线条给人以安全感），整齐划一的格式（段首或一律顶格或一律空两格），明了的段落感（每段空一行），清晰的字数感（一行以十字为宜），工整的字迹都会给任何阅读者留下深刻的正面印象，从而使考生先发制人、取得先机。

5、结构

有始有终、首尾照应，是任何一篇好文章的基本标准之一，也是两大评分原则之一。如果说广大考生已经给第一段以足够重视的话，那么是不是大多数考生都意识到了理由段的条理和最后一段的呼应在全文中所具有的不可忽视的地位了呢？其实，要写好理由段，我们只需要注意表示启承转合的衔接词即可。而要写好结尾，最好的方法莫过于温故而知新，回顾第一段的.大致内容了。

6、表达

言之无文，行而不远。语言作为评分原则中的基本要素之一，在专四作文评分的整个过程中具有决定性作用。有评分老师甚至断言：“It is not what you say，it is the way that you say it.”（重要的并不在于考生写了些什么，而在于考生是怎么表达的。）虽然这种说法本身似乎有失偏颇，可是参加过国际标准化英语考试的同学应该也听说过那么一句话，叫做：“Give the monkey exactly what he wants.”（给阅卷老师最想要的。），不是吗？譬如同样是描述数据，一些同学拘泥于图表本身，动辄按部就班地引用图表上现成的数字和年代，其实这都是图表作文的忌讳。聪明的同学引而不用，他们常喜欢用倍数、分数、小数、百分比、或者一些动词（double / triple / quadruple）来表现极端数据，动态数据以及他们的相异之处。

7、检查

行百里者半九十。一篇成功的作文少不了反复推敲、一再修改。然而，由于考试时间和条件等诸多因素的限制，考生绝对需要慎重对待作文的检查和修改。这里，我不得不提考生检查作文时的三大“通病”，即，数字数、孤芳自赏、和做结构与内容上的修改。我们必须明确：考试作文的润色和修改只需要达到三个目的即可：1.拼写正确，看文章中是否有汉字、多余符号、糊乱涂改、划线、和错别字；2.搭配正确；和3.语法正确，特别是人称、时态、和单复数的三“一致”。

专四（17）

1. From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that……(从上面提到的，我们可以得出结论……)

2. Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally/reasonably come to the conclusion that……(把所有的这些因素加以考虑，我们自然可以得出结论……)

3. Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that……(因此，我们最好的出这样的结论……)

4. There is no doubt that (job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as merits.(毫无疑问，跳槽有优点也有缺点)

5. All in all, we cannot live without……,but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.(总之，我们没有……无法生活，但同时我们必须寻求新的解决办法来面对可能出现的新问题)

1. It is a common belief that……==It is commonly believed that……(人们一般认为……)

2. A lot of people seem to think that……(很多人似乎认为……) 8:It is universally acknowledged that + 句子(全世界都知道...)

3. People's views on……vary from person to person. Some hold that……However, others believe that……(人们对……的观点因人而异，有些人认为……然而其他人却认为……)

4. People may have different opinions on……(人们对……可能会持有不同见解)

5. Attitudes towards (drugs)vary from person to person.==Different people hold different attitudes towards(failure)(人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异)

6. There are different opinions among people as to……(对于……人们的观点大不相同)

7. In short, it can be said that……(总之，他的意思是……)

1. It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).(该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了)

2. There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of……(毫无疑问，对……问题应予以足够重视)

3. Obviously ,if we want to do something … it is essential that……(显然，如果我们想要做么事，很重要的是……)

4. Only in this way can we ……(只有这样，我们才能……) 5：Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)

5. Obviously，if we don't control the problem, the chances are that……will lead us in danger.(很明显，如果我们不能控制这一问题，很有可能我们会陷入危险)

6. No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that ……(毫无疑问，除非我们采取有效措施，否则我们很可能会……)

7. It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation(很紧迫的是应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展)

专四（18）

第一步 审题：是讨论型( discussion )还是辩论型( argumentation )(确定其一)

第二步 构思：确定观点，以及拓展观点 (一分为三)

第三步 提纲：经典三段式(磨刀不误砍柴工)

引言段( 50 字)话题引入 + 众说纷纭 + 我方观点

主体段( 100 字)一分为三 + 逻辑顺序 + 事实说话

结论段( 50 字)重申主体 + 顺带提醒 + 提出展望

说明：( 1 )话题引入两种方式：宏观背景;突发事件;( 2 )事实说话多种方式：统计数据、正反对比、名人名言、亲身经历、趣闻逸事、调查结果等等

第四步 写作：严格按照提纲结构行文，写的时候注意

( 1 )多使用同义词或同义表达方式替换避免词汇的过度重复;

( 2 )如何使句子结构多样化(简单句，并列句和复杂句的交替使用，适当将句中非谓语结构、介词短语、从句等位置多样;插入语、同位语的运用等等);

( 3 )句子与句子之间衔接词的运用，表示上下文逻辑关系表达方式的使用。

周玉亮经典语录：想的时候不写，写的时候不想。

换句话说：构思和提纲阶段想好写什么，具体写作过程中只想如何做到词汇丰富、句式多样、衔接自然。严格按照构思和提纲阶段确定的内容来写。中途冒出的想法再妙也不要采用以保证整个文章思路是一致的。

第五步 校对：只对拼写错误和低级的语法错误做修改，保持卷面整洁。

补充说明：

时间分配： 10 分钟审题构思提纲 +30 分钟写作 +5 分钟校对

高分标准：书写工整 语法规范 词汇丰富 句式多变 衔接自然 结构完整

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