赏析英语（1）
在现实生活或工作学习中，大家都写过作文，肯定对各类作文都很熟悉吧，借助作文人们可以实现文化交流的目的。那要怎么写好作文呢？下面是小编为大家收集的.关于考试之后英语作文赏析，仅供参考，欢迎大家阅读。
Scores are undoubtedly important for students. So today when I saw the score, 96,on my Chinese test paper, my happiness was beyond words. I believed that mum would also be very happy and perhaps she would reward me.
As soon as I got home, I raised the test paper before mum and said proudly, "Mum, look at my score!" Out of my expectation,Mum said calmly, "Good, but I hope you can find out the reason why four points were taken away." Hearing the words, I stood in amazement at first. Then I understood Mum‘s words and nodded with all my strength.
Then Iunderstood that the most important thing that we get from examinations is not whether we have got high scores but whether we know what we have grasped and what we haven‘t.
成绩对学生来说无疑是重要的，所以今天当我看到语文试卷上的96分时，我高兴得无以言表。我相信妈妈也会为此高兴，可能她还会奖励我呢。
我一到家就将卷子高举到妈妈面前，骄傲地说：“妈妈，看我的成绩!”出乎我的意料，妈妈平静地说："很好，但是我希望你能找到丢掉另外四分的原因。”听到这些话，一开始我惊愕地站在那里，然后我理解了妈妈的话，用力地点了点头。
我明白了我们从考试中得到的最重要的东西不是我们是否得到了高分，而是我们是否知道自己学到了什么，没有学到什么。
赏析英语（2）
Summer is the great season for all sports in the open It is the season for baseball which is often called the national sport because of its I usually watch television and read the newspaper reports about the baseball results of the newspaper reports about the baseball results of the little
During the summer I like to go to the beach often because it is very close to my home in the I usually go there bur in the summer vacation to relax after many months in school in the I feel very comfortable with the familiar quiet of the
夏天是户外运动最好的季节。这是个打棒球季节，通常被国家体育称为受欢迎程度的季节。我通常看电视和读有关棒球比赛结果的报纸报道。
在夏天，我喜欢经常去海滩，因为它离我家很近。我通常在暑假去城市放松。我觉得熟悉的村民的平静让我很舒服。
赏析英语（3）
July 20,20xx
I went to summer camp on On the first day, we went to a beautiful It was a sunny and hot day, so we went The water was warm and we had great Then the next day, we went to the There were many trees and I really enjoyed On the last day, we had a great We sang and danced We didn’t want to leave the friends and the I hope I can go to summer camp again next
我去夏令营度假。第一天，我们去了美丽的海滩。这是一个阳光和炎热的一天，所以我们去游泳。水是温暖的，我们玩得很开心。然后第二天，我们去了山区。有许多树木，我非常喜欢他们。在最后一天，我们有一个盛大的派对。我们高兴地载歌载舞。我们不想离开朋友和老师。我希望明年我可以再次去夏令营。
3 Unforgettable summer vacation 难忘的暑假
I think this summer over a very meaningful day,in addition to the study of computers outside,also tried a new aerobic exercise -YOGA,I love this sport, so I learned an optimistic face life,but also to correct my bad shape,for my future learning and life will be very helpful,I love YOGA,with the hope more people will join me to try this new
今年暑假过得非常有意义
我觉得今年暑假过的非常有意义，每天除了学习计算机以外还尝试了新的有氧运动-YOGA，我非常热爱这项运动，它让我学会了乐观的面对生活，还纠正了我的不良体形，对我今后的学习及生活都有很大的帮助，我爱YOGA，希望有更多的人和我一起尝试这项新的运动。初中英语作文难忘的暑假
赏析英语（4）
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to Heyuan, now let me introduce our city — Heyuan to Heyuan is a city with a long It is in the northeast of Guangdong and 198 kilometres away from It has a population of 3,240,
There are many places of interest in Heyuan, such as Sujiawei Wanlu Lake and so Wanlu Lake is a beautiful The water is clean and not There are all kinds of fish in You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic It is really a good place to spend your Besides, you can go and visit Heyuan There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg
I hope you can enjoy yourselves in
Thank
女士们,先生们,
欢迎来到河源市,现在让我向你介绍我们的城市——河源市。河源市是一个有着悠久历史的城市。在广东的东北部,离广州198公里。它有3240000人口。
在河源市有许多名胜,如Sujiawei，万绿湖等等。万绿湖是一个美丽的地方。水是干净的,没有污染。有各种各样的鱼。你可以去划船,钓鱼,野餐。这真的是一个好地方可以度过你的假期。此外,你可以去参观河源市博物馆。在那里你可以看到很多恐龙蛋化石。
我希望你能在河源市玩得愉快。
谢谢你们!
赏析英语（5）
This is my summer I intend to finish the Then, take a look at China's famous Look at some Of course, also want to play with the computer, watch Early every morning to get up and running to run, do other But it is conducive to our body! But one thing should not be must help parents do the housework! My holiday arrangements like? something good? give suggestions?
这就是我的暑假。我打算完成作业。然后，看中国的著名小说。看书看一些日子。当然，也要玩电脑，看电视。每天早上早早起床跑步，做其他运动。这有利于我们的身体!但有一件事不应该被忘记。必须帮助父母做家务!我的假期安排呢?好的东西?给点建议?
赏析英语（6）
That was a morning in the early of I took a bus to my school in the suburb which was surrounded by rice paddies and The sky was gray with the gloomy clouds congregating gradually along the far eastern "There must be a heavy rain " I spoke to
When I hurried into the classroom, the sky, gray before, was shrouded now by black clouds, darken to twilight, I felt quite stuffy, while it was quite calm, without I saw the leaves of trees and grass static, which seem to await something Several minutes later, I saw the lightening split the clouds and heard the thunders Suddenly, the curtain of rain fell and the wind soon the grass flattened under the wind and the With the rain forming like a fog, the sky became I took several deep I felt
The heavy rain lasted three hours and stopped when the class was The air was so fresh and the sky was so I felt like a new man
那是6月初的一天早上，我乘汽车去郊区的学校上课，学校四周是稻田和鱼塘。天空是灰色的，在遥远的东方地平线上有阴云在慢慢汇聚。我心想：“要下大雨了。”
当我匆忙走进教室时，原本灰色的天空已被黑云笼罩，像黄昏。我感到气闷，而周围一切都很静，没有任何声音，没有风。我看到树叶和草一动不动，像等着什么事情发生。几分钟之后，我看到闪电撕开云层，听到随之而来的雷声。突然，大雨倾盆，风也起了。草在风雨中倒伏。随着雨下成了雾状，天空开始放亮，我深吸了几口气，舒服多了。
大雨下了三个小时，下课的时间停了，空气那么新鲜，天气那么晴朗，我感觉像换了一个人似的。
赏析英语（7）
national day is coming，and we can have a family are going to 's a good seaside are staying there for a we are going to the beach and going swimming in the 're visiting tianya haijiao，wanquan river and many other beautiful think we'll have a good time
【译文】
国庆节来了
国庆节来了，我有七天的假期。我们一家去海南。那是一个美丽的海滨城市。我们在那里待上一个星期。我们去沙滩，还在海里游泳。我们游览“天涯海角”，菀泉河还有别的许多好地方。我想我们在那里会玩得很开心。
赏析英语（8）
national day is coming,and we can have a family are going to 's a good seaside are staying there for a we are going to the beach and going swimming in the 're visiting tianya haijiao,wanquan river and many other beautiful think we'll have a good time
国庆节来了，我有七天的假期。我们一家去海南。那是一个美丽的海滨城市。我们在那里待上一个星期。我们去沙滩，还在海里游泳。我们游览“天涯海角”，菀泉河还有别的许多好地方。我想我们在那里会玩得很开心。
赏析英语（9）
in the autumn of october, in the joy of the harvest season, in this twenty-first century tenth fall, once again we ushered in a grand festival -- 62anniversary of the founding of the national day celebration, china, china god chau as cheerful as a
looking back 62years, from scratch, from weak to strong, the growth of the republic as the new saplings, although suffer the baptism of wind and rain, is still standing; even after suffering, but see more
in the past 62years, china produced the change we turn the world upside down with advanced agriculture, developed industry, we have the world's cutting-edge science and technology, in the world of sport can enjoy chinese athletes won the gold and silver bright and brave, the "sick man of east asia" stigma has gone for ever, replace is" the world sports power " of the
mother, we have made great achievements and proud, for in your arms and proud, we love you that 9600000 square kilometers wide, love you the next thousand years of long, love you love you the wonders of the world the great wall, the roof of the world, pearl mu lang, love you running information of the yellow river of the yangtse river, love you through civilization "silk road", love you towering erect high mountains, love you beautiful beautiful china is our home, we love china!
today, stand under the flag, as the blood red color, passion of our blood, the magnificent singing andirritate our since we can not use language to express your love, that will allow us to use action to show it, we will use wisdom hands to depict the country in twenty-first century of the grand blueprint for the motherland tomorrow, to create brilliant!
赏析英语（10）
I am going to have a busy weekend ! On Saturday , I'm going to clean my room and do homework. Then , in the evening , I 'm going to the supermaket with my mother . On Saturday, I'm going to the bookstore on foot . I'm going to buy some books. Then, I'm going to go home and read the new books. In the evening , I'm going to watch TV. That will be fun! What about you? What are you going to do on the weekend?
四年级英语作文：暑期难忘的一件事
It was a sunny day today,when i got up in the morning,i decided to see my grandparents.so i took the bus and got there at noon,they were happy to see me,and i was very happy,too.
In the afternoon,my farther asked me to help him water the plant,and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.
In a word,today is a unforgetive day.because i saw my relatives and helped people.
四年级英语作文：我的业余爱好
My hobby
I am Cendy. I am in Nanhai Experimental Primary School. I am in Class 9, Grade 6. I am tall and thin. I live in Dali. I have many good friends. I often play with them.
I have many hobbies, riding a bike, drawing pictures and reading books. But I like to read books the best. Because of reading books is good for my study. I also like riding bikes. Because of it does a lot of good to my body.
What’s your hobby? Can you tell me?
四年级英语作文：我的小兔子
One day, my mother bought two little rabbits for me. I’m very happy.
From that on, the two little rabbits became my good friends. They have two little ears, red eyes, with white and fat boby. They’re marvellous.
Everyday, they play with each other happily. One day, I couldn’t find them. I asked my mother: ”Where are they? ” My mother told me that She didn’t know. At last, I found them in the grass. They were very dirty. I was angry, but when I looked at their lovely faces, I was happy again.
I love my little rabbits, and they love me. They are my good friends forever.
四年级英语作文：秋天的颜色(The Colour of Autumn)
Autumn comes , it gets cooler and cooler. The sky is blue and the clouds are white. You would say autumn is blue and white.
Look ! Birds are flying from the north to the south. The leaves are yellow. Some are hanging on the trees, some are on the ground ,some are dancing in the wind. Someone would say autumn is yellow.
There are so many fruits in autumn in Xinxing . Pears ,peaches. Mangos, oranges and so on. They're fresh and healthy.
四年级英语作文：我的铅笔盒(My Pencil-box)
I have a good friend. Her name is Pencil-box. She is a very beautiful girl. Look! there is a picture on her face. It's a picture of flowers. Her coat is blue and yellow. there are some pencils, a pen, a ruler, a rubber and a tape in her stomach. From Monday to Friday, I go to school with her. When I want to copy or write the new words, I open her mouth and take out the pencil from her stomach. She helps me a lot. And I like her very much.
赏析英语（11）
i still remember the atmosphere of that evening. all the students who could not go back home assembled in our classroom, having a party to celebrate this traditional festival. we tried our best to show our own enthusiasm. as an ethnic minority, i performed a peacock dance, which received warm applause. after the two-hour party, we went out to the playground and sat together to appreciate the moon because it is a tradition on mid-autumn day. we ate moon cakes, played cards, and listened to romantic poems recited by one of our classmates. in that harmonious atmosphere, nobody felt lonely or homesick even though we were far away from our homes.
赏析英语（12）
请以Good Health为题写一篇文章。
【参考范文】
GoodHealth
The desire for good health is universal. Especially nowadays, the possession of good health is regarded by nearly everyone as essential to a happy life as well as a successful one. Only in good shape can you expect to live comfortablyorwork effectively.
How to keep healthy, then? First, enough time should be set aside for persevering in exercises in addition to sleep and rest. Second you must give up the habits that damage your health, such as smoking and drinking too much alcohol. Finally, be sure to have your physical check-up regularly.
As for me, I have always been taking care to have proper sleep and relaxation. In my spare time I like running, swimming, and playing table tennis. So, I can keep fit and have a good life.
【名师点评】
本文层次清楚，逻辑分明，第一段讲好身体的重要性，第二段讲保持身体健康的种种方法，第三段讲就“我”而言，“我”如何加强体育锻炼。本文语言地道，亮点颇多，如：First… second… Finally…三个词分述三种方法；The desire for, …is universal, Especially nowadays, the possession of, is regarded by nearly everyone as…, Only… can we expect to….How to…then? As for me, I have always been taking care to… so, I can…等，这些短语的运用使得文章错落有致，多姿多彩。