大学英语考试作文（1）

大学生六级英语考试作文评析

上海理工大学外语学院 贾从永

2010年12月的`六级作文题密切联系社会热点，属于对立观点型题目，即提出有争议的社会话题，请考生分析人们对这一问题的不同看法（赞成vs反对）。

题目含三个要点。可把第一点扩展为引言段，快速人题。第二点宜扩展为主体段，分析不同的看法。可从赞成和反对两方面展开，注意双方的观点在篇幅上大致相同及两种观点之间的转折过渡。第三点宜扩展成结尾段，亮出自己的观点，然后再用一两句话简述理由。请参阅下例：

Currently the ranking of colleges is very prevalent in China, fueled by parents who are eager to look for guidance and universities which spend lavishly to raise their standings.

But there has been much debate about the value of such rankings. Some experts speak highly of the rankings, noting that.the league tables are useful to college-bound students and their parents. The view is echoed by a 2009 study, which concludes that the rankings spur universities to do a better job of educating students. Others, however, cannot share this point of view. They dismiss the rankings as pointless, bluntly pointing out the dubious statistics used in the rankings. They think the very idea ridiculous that universities with very different cultures and programs can be compared.

As for me, I side with the former view. Though it is incredibly difficult to judge how well a university performs, it does not necessarily mean the panorama of a university is unavailable.

《大学生六级英语考试作文评析》

大学英语考试作文（2）

关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that

俗话说(常言道)……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old It"s the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even

现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……;其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。

Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily First, ____ Second, What makes things worse is

现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外(而且)……。

Nowadays，it is common to Many people like ______ because Besides。

任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and

关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为(说)……，在他们看来，……

People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to Some people say that them,

人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more

……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。

______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their

……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as

根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出…。很显然…，但是为什么呢?

According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______ Obviously，______，but why?

大学英语考试作文（3）

为什么……?第一个原因是……;第二个原因是……;第三个原因是……。总的来说，……的主要原因是由于……

Why______? The first reason is that second reason is third is all this, the main cause of ______due to

相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。

On the contrary，there are some people in favor of the same time，they

但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。

But I don"t think it is a very good way to solve example， of all。

……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，(也是)非常重要的。首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……

______is necessary and important to our country"s development and First，"s more, important of all,

有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。

There are several measures for us to First, we can______

面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……，另一方面。

Confronted with______，we should take a series of effective measures For one thing，______For another，______

早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……，另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。

It is high time that something was done about For these measures will

然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。

However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as

尽管如此，我相信……更有利。

Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more

完全同意……这种观点(陈述)，主要理由如下：

I fully agree with the statement that ______

大学英语考试作文（4）

far as concerned 至今被认为是

goes without saying 不用说(意思是：论述的内容是显而易见的)

can be said with certainty 不用说;是肯定的。

the proverb says 有句谚语是这样说的;常言道

has to be noticed 必须引起注意的是

`s generally recognized 通常认为

`s likely that 很可能

`s hardly 表否定，不被经常说起;我们很少谈到’s hardly too much to say

calls for special attention is 需要引起特别注意的是

’s no denying the fact 事实不容否认

is more important than the fact 没有比这更重要的是

’s far more important is 意思同上，更重要的是

As time goes by,随着时间的流逝

There is no doubt 毫无疑问

As far as I'm concerned, I 就我而言，我认为

It is said 据说

Two heads are better than 三个臭皮匠，顶个诸葛亮。

It is 强调句

It is important for sb to do

there be句型

Compared with A, B is more 与A相比，B更

in my opinion 在我看来

It is high time that we did 是我们做的时候了。

Only in this way, can we solve this problem 只有这样我们才能妥善解决这个问题。

sth is 如此以至于

not only ,but 不仅而且

To be honest To tell the truth 老实说来

太以至于不能

On one hand, the other hand,一方面另一方面

大学英语考试作文（5）

对立法 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或偏向于某一看法, 适用于有争议性的主题.

When asked , the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that I think/view a bit 在谈到,广大/求说但我觉得/观点有点不同。

When it comes to , some people believe that Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true . There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements , but (I tend to the previous/latter ) 当涉及到有些人认为一些人则认为/声称，相反/恰恰相反。可能有一些在两个参数真理/报表，但(我更倾向于前/后

Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that They claim/ believe/argue that But I wonder/doubt

现在，它通常是/一般/普遍认为/月/承认，他们声称/相信/认为不过，我怀疑/怀疑

现象法 引出要剖析的现象或者问题, 然后评论 .

Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) has cause/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide 最近上升的问题/(现象)已造成/引起公众/流行/宽/举世关注

Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of been brought into ( has been brought to public attention) 最近，问题的问题/ 的现象已成为注意的焦点。 (已经被brought公众的注意)

inequality is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face 通货膨胀/贪污/社会不平等又是新的和痛苦的真理，我们必须学会面对的/不断另一个。

观点法 ----开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法.

Never history has the change of been as evident as Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of be more visible/popular 历史上从未有改变的被明显的，因为在世界任何地方/中国有问题/思想的更可见/受欢迎的程度

Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/coming to realize/accept/(be aware) 现在越来越多的人/大量开始/来实现/接受/(知道)的

Now there is a growing awareness/recognition ot the necessity people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of 现在，人们日益认识/认识到有必要逾现在，人们越来越认识到/的重要性的认识

Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea 也许现在是有一个重新审视的态度/想法

引用法 ----- 先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 来引出文章要展开论述的观点!

"Knowledge is " such is the remark made by This remark has been shared by more and more people . “知识就是力量。”这就是由培根说了。这句话也有同样的越来越多的人。

"Education is not complete with " Such is the opinion of a great American Now more and more people share his “教育是不完整的毕业。”这就是一个伟大的美国哲学家的意见。现在，越来越多的人分享他的意见。

"" How often we hear such statements/words like thoses /this . ""如何我们经常听到这样的声明/放入系统一样的话/本。

In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as this "".在我们自己的日子，我们都已经习惯听到这样的传统抱怨，因为这"".

比较法 ------ 通过对过去,现在 两种不同的倾向,观点的比较 , 引出文章要讨论的观点.

For years, been viewed as But people are taking a fresh look With the growing , people . 多年来，已被视为但是，人们正在以新面貌了。随着越来越多 ，人 。

People used to think that (In the past, ) But people now share this 人们曾经以为 (过去，)但是，人们现在这个新的共享。

故事法 ---- 先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣, 引出文章的主题.

Once in (a newspaper) , I read of/learnt The phenomenon of has aroused public 一旦(报纸)，我阅读/学习的现象引起市民关注

I have a friend who Should he ? Such a dilemma we are often confront with in our daily 我有一个朋友谁如果他 ?这样的困境，我们常常遇到在我们的日常生活的。

Once upon a time , there lived a man who This story may be (unbelievable) , but it still has a realistic significance 从前，有一位男子谁这个故事可能是(难以置信)，但它仍然有现实意义现在

问题法 ----- 先用讨论或解答的设问, 引出自己观点, 适用于有争议性的话题.

Should/What ? Options of vary greatly , some , others

But in my opinion , . 应/什么 ?的选项差别很大，有些，有的但我认为， 。

Chapter 2 文章中间主体内容句型

大学英语考试作文（6）

结论性--------- 通过对文章前面的讨论 ,引出或重申文章的中心思想及观点 .

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that 从什么上面已经讨论过，我们可以有把握地得出这样的结论

In summary/In a word , it is more valuable 总之/总之，这是更有价值

后果性------ 揭示所讨论的问题若不解决, 将产生的严重后果.

We must call for an immediate method , because the current phenomenon of , if allowed to proceed, will surely lead to the heavy cost of 我们必须呼吁立即方法，因为目前的现象如果允许进行，必将导致沉重代价

Obviously , if we ignore/are blind to the problem , there is every chance that will be put in 显然，如果我们忽略/是盲目的问题，但每一个机会将处于危险境地。

号召性 -------- 呼吁读者行动起来, 采取行动或提请注意.

It is time that we urged an immediate end to the undesirable tendency of 现在是我们立即结束对不良趋向的时间了

It is essential that effective measures should be taken to correct the 重要的是特尔巴格尔有效措施，应采取正确的趋势。

建议性 -------- 对所讨论的问题提出建议性的意见, 包括建议和具体的解决问题的方法.

While it cannot be solved immediately, still there are The most popular is Another method is Still another one is 虽然不能一下子解决，但仍然有一些方法。最流行的是另一种方法是还有另外一个是

Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step toward the 意识/问题的认识是对局面的第一步。

方向性的结尾方式其与建议性的唯一差别就是对问题解决提出总的, 大体的方向或者指明前景.

Many solutions are being offered here, all of them make some sense, but none is adequate The problem should be recognized in a wide 许多方案都被提供在这里，他们都作出了一些道理，但没有一个足够。这个问题应该承认，在一广阔的道路。

There is no quick method to the issue of , but might be 没有快速的方法的问题，但可能会有所帮助/有益的。

The great challenge today is There is much difficulty, but 今天的巨大挑战是有许多困难，但

意义性的结尾方式 -文章结尾的时候,从更高的更新的角度指出所讨论的问题的重要性以及其深远的意义!

Following these not guarantee the success, but the pay off might be worth the effort . It will not only benefit but also 以下这些建议，并不能保证成功，但回报可能是值得的努力。这不仅将造福，也有利于

In any case, whether it is positive or negative, one thing is certain that it will 在任何情况下，无论是正面还是负面，有一点可以肯定，它无疑会…