a_class（1）
It's almost the end of our middle years. Last Friday afternoon, we had our last class meeting in our classroom. All the students and our class teacher took part in it.
差不多到了初中的尾声了。上周五下午，我们在教室里举行了最后一次班会。所有的学生和老师都参加了。
We held a warm discussion about our future life. Each of us spoke at the meeting actively. Besides, we also showed our sincere thanks to our teachers. They worked so hard to help us in study and life. Teachers hoped that we can still study hard in the future and come back to middle school often. After the discussion, we all decided to study hard as usual and hoped that we all can do well in the secondaryentrance exam.
我们对未来生活进行了热烈的讨论。每个人在会上都积极地发言了。此外，我们还对我们老师表示了真诚的感谢。他们如此努力工作以帮助我们的学习和生活。老师希望我们在以后仍然能够努力学习，常回中学看看。讨论过后，我们都决定像往常一样努力学习，并希望我们都能够在中考中取得好成绩。
a_class（2）
最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After-class Activities”的栏目，请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。
1.你校开展课外活动的情况；
2.你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处
3.为同学选择课外活动提出建议
4.为学校开展课外活动提出建议
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.文中不得提及人名、校名及地名‘
3.稿件的开头以为你写好（不计入总词数）
After-class Activities
Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.....
After-class Activities 课外活动
Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools. In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge, they also free me from the heavy work of study.
Here I have some suggestions. To students, you'd better choose the activities which interest you and suit you; to schools, they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.
Dear friends, please actively take part in after-class activities, which will not only make your school life colorful, but also improve you learning.
如今，课外活动在中学越来越受欢迎。在我们学校，有各种各样的活动，例如艺术和体育。我们非常喜欢这些。读书和踢足球是我的最喜欢的并且使我获益良多。除了强身健体和丰富我的知识，也让我从繁重的学业中解脱出来。
我这里有一些建议。做为学生应该选择你最感兴趣最适合你的活动；学校应该为学生们组织更多的活动，给学生们更少的作业让他们更多的活动时间。
亲爱的朋友们，请大家积极参加课外活动，这不仅使你的校园生活丰富多彩，而且还能提高你的学习。
a_class（3）
This morning, I had an English class. Before the class, my teacher prepared some cards. A new world was written in each card. In class, my teacher showed us these cards one by one. She told us to guess the meanings of these words. If we were right, we could get a chocolate as the reward. Besides, she told us to make a sentence with the new words, because it could help us to remember their meanings better.
参考译文
今天早上我有一节英语课。上课之前，我的老师准备了一些卡片。每张卡片上是生词。课堂上，老师一张张地给我们展示了这些卡片。她让我们才这些单词的意思。如果我们才对了就可以得到一块巧克力作为奖品。此外，她还让我们用新词造句，因为这样可以帮助我们更好地记住它们的意思。
a_class（4）
Since I go to school, the teachers gave us the class in the classroom, it seemed that sitting in the chair and looking at the blackboard are the only way to receive the knowledge. But my new Chinese teacher has showed me another way to learn knowledge. Last week, my Chinese teacher had asked us to write an article about protecting the environment, when she asked us how much we knew about the pollution, we shaked our heads. Then she told us to have the class in the reading room, we could some reading there and searched the information. It was so excited for us to do it, we like this special class and it is very helpful.
自从我上学起,老师就在课堂上给我们上课,似乎坐在椅子上，看着黑板是获得知识的唯一途径。但是我的新语文老师给我展示了另一种方式去学习知识。上周,我的语文老师要求我们写一篇关于保护环境的文章,当她问我们我们对污染了解多少,我们摇了摇头。然后她告诉我们在阅览室上课,我们可以阅读和搜索信息。我们很兴奋,喜欢这种特别的课程，有助于我们学习。
a_class（5）
Yesterday was Saturday. Our class went for an outing. We met at the school gate at 8:00a.m. We took a bus there. We went to theXiangshanMountain. It took about fifty minutes to get there. We climbed to the top of the mountain. From the top, we could see the whole city. It was so beautiful. We had a short rest on the top. And then, we went downhill. There is a lake in the bottom of the mountain. We had a picnic at the lake. We all took foods and shared with others. We werereally happy yesterday.
参考翻译
昨天是星期六，我们班出去郊游了。我们八点在校门口集合坐公车去香山。到那总共花了十五分钟。我们爬上了山顶。从山顶我们可以看到整座城市，它是那么美丽。我们在山顶短暂的休息了一会然后就下山了。山脚下有一个湖，我们就在湖边野餐。我们都带来食物并和大家分享。昨天我们真的很开心。
a_class（6）
My name is Zhong Xin and I am student in Grade Six. There are forty-two students in my class. Nineteen are boys and twenty-three are girls. Like most other classes, there are some interesting students in my class. And there are some quiet students, too. In general, my class is a united union. Our classmates get on well with each other. We are classmates as well as friends. I like my lovely class.
参考翻译
我的名字叫钟欣，是一名六年级的学生。我们班一共有四十二名学生，其中十九名男生，二十三名女生。和其他大部分班级一样，我的班级有一些很有趣的学生，也有一些比较安静的学生。总的来说，我的班级是一个团结的集体，同学之间友好相处。我们不仅是同学，也是朋友。我喜欢我可爱的班级。
a_class（7）
After going to the middle school, I have less time to play outside the school, because I always have a lot of homework to do. Though my leisure time is shorter, I still keep on after-class reading. Many years ago, my Chinese teacher introduced many classic books to us, I bought them and read them all, I fell in love with reading these books, I would be immerged in the stories. Reading these books helps me a lot, I have improved my writing skill. When I saw the topics, my mind will come out a lot of ideas, I have things to enrich my paper. What’s more, I also broaden my vision.进入中学后,我没有多少时间在外面玩,因为我总是有很多作业要做。虽然我的休闲时间比较短,我仍然坚持课外阅读。许多年前,我的语文老师给我介绍了许多经典书籍，我买了这些书,并且去阅读,我也爱上了读这些书,我会沉浸在其中。读这些书可以帮助我很多,我提高了写作技巧。当我看到话题时,我的脑海里会涌现出来很多的想法,我有东西去充实我的论文。更重要的是,我也开阔视野。
a_class（8）
there are fifty-two students in my class. we have different likes and dislikes, but we all have a great goal. we study together. we play together. we talk to each other. we help each other. we are friendly to each other. our class is like a big family. we are very happy.
we have many teachers. they are very kind. they are always nice to us.
they make us study very very hard. all my teachers always encourage us to learn all subjects well.
a_class（9）
I am in primary school now, I have many lessons to learn from Monday to Friday, my favorite subject is English. Last week, my English teacher gave us a task, she asked us to make the presentation of our favorite English celebrity. I chose Avril Lavigne, she is my favorite singer, I have listened to her songs for many years. When I presented the singer, many of my classmates clapped their hands, because they like her, too. Then we share many things about Avril, I felt so happy in that class, it is so interesting, we talked happily, we share our common interest. I will never forget about that class, it causes my passion to learn English.初中英语作文
我现在在上初中，从周一到周五我有很多的课，我最喜欢的科目是英语。上周，我的英语老师给我们布置了一个任务，她要求我们做一个展示，展示我们最喜欢的英语国家的名人。我选择了艾薇儿，她是我最喜欢的歌手，我已经听了很多年她的音乐。当我向同学们展示了这个歌手，我的很多同学鼓起了掌，因为他们也喜欢她。然后我们分享着一些艾薇儿的事情，那节课我觉得很开心，很有趣，我们聊得也很开心，分享着我们共同的兴趣爱好。我永远都不会忘记那节课，它点燃了我学习英语的激情。
a_class（10）
题目
Some people believe that university students should be required to attend classes while others believe that going to classes should be optional. What is your opinion about compulsory class attendance?
范文
Class Attendance Should Be Compulsory
Although some students argue that class attendance should not be compulsory either because the classes are boring or because they can learn more on their own, I believe that making class attendance compulsory is beneficial for both students and teachers.
First, it is beneficial for students because most universities have a regulation that states if students miss one-third of their classes they will not be allowed to take the final exam. So students being absent from class punish themselves by missing out on the exam and face having to retake the class during the next semester. Furthermore, many teachers tie in attendance with marks. For example, my English teacher awards 10 percent of the final marks for attendance with percent being deducted for every absence. In some cases, lack of attendance could mean the difference between a pass or fail. Second, it is beneficial for teachers because a full class complement shows respect for the teacher and the university education system. If a teacher prepares to teach a class it is only right that students turn up to be taught. If it is not compulsory for students to attend classes then teachers could say that what is good for the goose is good for the ganders too and refuse to take classes. Clearly this would lead to a breakdown of the entire university system.
In conclusion, making class attendance compulsory benefits both students and teachers by allowing students to maximize their marks and allowing teachers to be respected for their professional duties. (253 words)
精彩句子
1.Teachers are compelled to attend classes and so should students,
强制规定老师要上课，所以学生也应该上课。
2.Students who fail to attend class for whatever reason only harm themselves.
学生不管因为什么原因旷课都只会对自己不利。
3.Teachers and students are a vital part of the educational process and if you take away one the whole edifice crumbles.
老师和学生都是教育过程中的重要部分，如果一方缺失，整个大厦就坍塌了。
4.Teachers show respect for their students by diligently preparing for class and students show their respect for teachers by turning up for class.
老师认真备课是尊重学生的表现，而学生上课则是尊重老师的表现。
5.There are more advantages for compulsory class attendance than disadvantages.For example，…
强制上课利大于弊。比如，……
a_class（11）
I am twelve years old and I am a student of Grade six. There are forty-five students in my class. Twenty-one are boys and twenty-four are girls.
My classmates are active. Our teachers like us very much. They feel good to have lectures in my class.
In my class, we have good relationship with each other. We are ready to help others. I think my classmates are lovely. I feel happy to study with them.
参考译文
我今年12岁，是一名六年级学生。我们班共有45名学生，21个男生，24个女生。
我们班很活跃，老师都很喜欢我们。他们觉得在我们班上课很好。
在班上，我们与每个人关系都很好，我们总是随时帮助别人。我认为我的同学很可爱，和他们一起学习我觉得很开心。
a_class（12）
Growing up, there is always trouble. With the partner, the love hug... When I knew there was TFBOYS in the first class, I couldn't say how happy I was. I was "happy like a mouse" when it came to the idea that this program might be aired on the whole campus. Every time they watch their show, they jump around like a maniac and laugh. And that's when I'm really happy. This may be a good sign. Seeing them on the first day of school is a driving force. A kind of motivation that encourages me to work constantly.
When there is no TFBOYS, it is always assumed that the new book, the new book, is in school. But since 2014, I have learned that TFBOYS will be on the first day of school. I finally understand that they are an essential and important part of my life. In 14 years, they will be in the first class in 15 years and 16 years. For me, that's a good start. I thought I could go all the way by myself, but in the end I found myself relying too much on them. I've always wondered if I could have done anything wrong without them. If it wasn't for that one thing, I might have thought they could do it for themselves. Finally, I found myself changed...
Forgive me for being young, but for the truth; Forgive me for my ignorance, but for your light; Forgive me for being arrogant, but for your faith. I finally knew how important they were to me. It was five days before school began, and thinking that wang yuan was going to be in the heat of the summer. Hate that you don't have wings, or you can fly to his school to protect him. In fact, I understand that they are stars and many people love and hold. But I'm willing to be one of their fans. Be willing to work with them, be willing to protect them, protect them from the rain, and give everything to them. As I have said, even the whole world is opposed to my love for them, and I will continue to do so. Because that's the only constant in my life.
a_class（13）
One says the famous people in our class, we don't have to say a lot, to say the highest, and it must be one boys who want to know her? Then let me introduce him.This is the one feature of the ancient times, and the famous man in our class was named Dr. Gao, and he was your theme symbol, and it was a little difficult, and she was your skill at four.
An English word that can't be remembered, the king of gold in his TV.It must be you are I am doing a very difficult number of ao I can not touch the hair, and sometimes look at Ceiling, and sometimes frowning.10 minutes ago, the answer to the problem was 15 minutes past the brain, and the problem was still a stumbling block in front of me, 20 minutes past one. The problem of solving the problem has not been found, it is very urgent.Look for the teacher, but the teacher is not in the office. How can it be good? I'm not having a doctor at one?I hurried to the high doctor's seat, and how did the doctor answer this question? He moved his glasses on his nose, the tide, and the body looked at it for three minutes, and his eyes suddenly looked big, and he was excited to say, "you see this problem is d on the formula."
I saw him enter the drawing, the clarity of my thinking, the words are not vague.He is not only rich in knowledge, he can also say that he is calm and calm, he is not panic, he has an urgent task, and he is not excited when he comes to the good news. We are impressed by the good attitude he is not busy with.One was in half the class, the class teacher announced that the class was going to hold one books, and when the classroom began to boil, everyone was happy, and some of them threw their hats on the roof. Some happy circles around the table, some loud and loud, as if to make the room's ceiling, one, 30 high, and then go to see the one high-- Although the face is full of happiness, but there is no dance like the other students.How about our class, class, is there a place where it is different? Want to get to know him further, please go to Beijing primary school Class two, grade five.
a_class（14）
Hello, everyone. I’m Liang Xinying. I’m from 0406. I think our class is the best class in our school. I don’t know what you think about 0406. Never mind, let me tell you about 0406. I’m sure you will love it!
Look, what a nice classroom it is! You can see some beautiful pictures on the wall. Can you see the tidy floor? If you go into the classroom of 0406, you will feel very comfortable. The students in 0406 are very friendly. The boys are clever and helpful. They like sports very much, because they know more exercise is good for them. They are all very healthy. The girls in 0406 are very hard-working and careful. They like reading very much. Sometimes, they like chatting with each other and talking about stars. They have lots of things to do all day, so they are very busy. They also like exercising. They think that it’s also important for girls to exercise. Look! Who are they? Oh, they are the teachers of 0406. I think they know everything. They love their students and work hard all day. We all love them too. Oh, what a great class it is!
What nice students! What funny teachers! What a nice classroom!
Dear friend, now Do you know 0406? Do you love 0406, too? What do you think of 0406?
I think, you must love it very much, right?
大家好，我叫梁新颖。我来自0406班。我认为我们班是我们学校最好的班。我不知道你是怎么想的0406。不过没关系，让我告诉你关于0406。我肯定你会喜欢它!
看，这是一个很好的课堂!你能看见墙上的一些美丽的照片。你能看到干净的地板?如果你走进0406教室，你会感觉很舒服。0406的学生都很友好。男孩是聪明的和有帮助的。他们非常喜欢体育运动，因为他们知道更多的锻炼对他们是好的。他们都很健康。0406个女孩都很勤劳和谨慎。他们非常喜欢读书。有时，他们喜欢聊天，谈论明星。他们要做的事情每天都很多，所以他们很忙。他们也喜欢运动。他们认为这女孩子的运动也很重要。看!他们是谁?哦，他们是0406的教师。我认为他们知道一切。他们爱自己的学生，一整天都在努力工作。我们都太爱他们。哦，真是一个伟大的阶级是!
多好的学生!多么有趣的老师!多么好的一个课堂!
亲爱的朋友，现在你知道0406?你也爱0406吗?你怎么看待0406?
我想，你一定很爱它，对吗?
a_class（15）
I am very happy to become a member of this class.It is a very particular class because all the memeber of it are girls .our girls are going to be preschool-kindergarten.There are forty two girls in our class.I am very proud of this sbuject.Not only because we are going to the selfless people in edcation,but also the students we teach are kids.Early education is very important .so I like my class very much .
a_class（16）
I Love Class Activity
I am in middle school now, this is my second year, I have to learn so many subjects from Monday to Friday. When comes to the class activity, I will be very excited and take part in the activity. Class activity can take me away from the heavy study, I can take in the fresh air. What’s more, it is also provides a good chance for students to communicate. They will get further understanding of each other and build the deep relationship, what a happy atmosphere. This is why I like class activity so much, I wish we could have more chances to hold the activity, we not only pay attention to the study.
我现在在上初中，在念初二，从周一到周五我有很多学科要去学。当谈论到班级活动的时候，我会很兴奋，并且参加班级活动。班级活动能让我脱离沉重的学习，呼吸新鲜的空气。而且，班级活动也提供了同学们一个好的`机会去交流。他们会对彼此有更深入的了解，建立深厚的感情，这是多么和谐的氛围啊。这就是我为什么那么喜欢班级活动，我希望我们可以有更多的机会去举办班级活动，不仅仅专注于学习。
a_class（17）
There are thirty-three students in my class. They are all my classmates and friends. Five of them are my good friends. They are Gloria, Lucy, Lilian, Rone, and Dana. We usually study together and play with each other. We are happy together every day. Gloria is good at math. When I have questions about math, I always look for her help. Dana is good at music. We usually listen to music together. Lucy and I are interested in English. We often study English together. Rone studies geography and history. Of all the subjects, history is the most difficult to me, so I often ask Rone to help me. We are going to graduate in June. I think I will remember them forever. I also hope that we will stay in touch after we graduate.
我们班有三十三名学生。他们都是我的同学和朋友。其中有五个都是我的好朋友。他们是Gloria，Lucy，Lilian，Rone，和Dana。我们经常一起学习一起玩。我们在一起每一天都很快乐。Gloria擅长数学,每当我有关于数学的`问题，我总是找她帮忙。Dana擅长音乐，我们经常一起听音乐。Lucy和我都对英语感兴趣，我们经常一起学习英语。Rone研究地理和历史。在所有的科目中，对于我来说历史最难，所以我经常找Rone帮我。六月我就要毕业了，我想我会永远记住他，我也希望我们毕业后还会再联系。
a_class（18）
【试题回放】情景作文
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。
注意：词数不少于60
提示词：郊区suburbs
April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.
【名师点评】
本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。
英语专四作文满分范文：学生评价老师
专四题目：学生评价老师
Many students are required to evaluate their teachers but some teachers complain that these evaluations are unfair and can in some cases lead to the dismissal of a teacher. In your opinion, is the students' evaluation of their teacher a worthwhile exercise?
专四范文：
Difficulties with Students' Evaluation of Their Teacher
The students' evaluation of their teacher can be a very subjective proposition because it depends a lot on how the evaluation is made and how it is subsequently used. I believe most teachers would like to know how effective their teaching really is and how it benefits their students.
A difficulty with students' evaluation of their teacher is finding the right formulae to achieve an honest, constructive and independent response. The size and makeup of the class can be a reason for this difficulty. The larger the class the more likely will be the range of ability in the students. That fact Limits the interaction between the teacher and individual students and automatically influences how students will perceive the effectiveness of their teacher. Smaller classes are much less likely to have a great range of ability in the students and their evaluation of their teacher will tend to be more consistent. A crucial aspects with students' evaluation is how it is used. If it is a formal part of the school's program it needs to be used constructively in liaison with the teachers for the benefit of both teachers and students.
For students' evaluations to be worthwhile they need to be independent and honest. Negative comments from students, delivered with sincerity, can be very valuable in helping teachers change their teaching methods and making them more effective. Biased evaluations can lead to misinterpretation and less productive outcome. (237 words)
更多专四作文精彩句子：
1.An evaluation process depends on the methods used and how the evaluation is applied.
评价过程取决于使用的评价方法以及评价是如何进行的。
2.When dealing with opinions,it is usually very difficult to be entirely objective,
我们表达观点的时候，很难做到完全客观。
3.Teachers can be more effective with genuine feedback from their students.
老师从学生那里得到真实的反馈时，他们会更有效率。
4.Class size has a significant impact on students’ perceptions of their teacher.
班级大小对学生对老师的看法有重要的影响。
5.In some ways,negative feedback is more valuable to a teacher than positive comments.
在某种程度上，负面的反馈比正面的评价对老师更有价值。
相关链接：
英语专四作文满分范文：强制学生上课
20xx年高考英语满分作文及名师点评
20xx高考英语满分作文(上海)
描述你在学校的一次午餐，具体要求如下：
详细描述用餐的情况
简要表述你对这次午餐的感受
这是一篇简单却需要挖掘的文章，因为如果只是描述用餐情况，显然缺乏深度，夸夸其谈，流于表面。学生拿到这样的题目需要仔细考虑用餐背后的东西。比较容易想到的话题是食物浪费、用餐卫生、餐桌礼仪等。在创作范文中，笔者另辟蹊径，通过大多数同龄人用餐时的匆忙来衬托“我”的悠然自得，凸显出在紧张的高中学生生涯中，作者能够留有一片心灵净土，通过饮食来调节情绪，更好地面对挑战，表现出乐观的人生态度。此文结构简单，文笔清新，语言精准，并运用了高中阶段常见的语法结构，不失为一个很好的作文模板，供学生借鉴。
范文：
The instant the bell indicating the endof the last class rang, out of theclassroompoured all students but one。Unlikemy peers, I was in no hurry tomake a run for the school canteen, to rush through lunch and to return to the classroomfor homework. I arrived at the canteenwhen amassive queue had formed.Waitingformy turn patiently, I smelled the aroma ofthe appetizing food. Greasy as some dishesmight be, thewide range of food preparedby the schoolwas superior in nutritional val-ue to that found
elsewhere.
The typical schedule of a highschooleris extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch breakis a rare timewhen overworked students canwind down and enjoy the pleasure providedby the flavorful food. Imake it a point topampermy taste buds by savoring every littlebit of taste in food.What I usually like todo over lunch is have amindless conversa-tionwith a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses along the bonebreaking journey through high school. Werounded off our lunch with a dessert, re-freshed and satisfied。 Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude towards life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges.(219words)
一、语法解构
现在分词作定语 the bell indicating theend of the last class rang
倒装句
(1)out of the classroom pouredall students but one
(2)Greasy as some dishesmight be
不定式 Iwas in no hurry to make arun for the school canteen
状语从句 I arrived at the canteenwhenamassive queue had formed.
在分词作状语 Waiting formy turnpatiently。
20xx年高考英语满分作文及名师点评
作文题目
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
注意：
1.词数：100左右：
2.参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours, Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以'which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。
Dear Bob,
Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.
Best wishes !
Yours, Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。
Dear Bob,
How are you these days?
I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.
There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。
Dear Bob,
I’m so glad that you are coming to learn Chinese here. I’ve already found you a house near our school. I’d like to tell you something about it.
You may get on No.ll bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School. The house is near the school. It is about 25 square metres. In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window. You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it. There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom. The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen. So you may cook by yourself. The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month. Hope you’ll enjoy staying here!
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文内容具体，详略得当，表述方式很有创造力和新意，长短句并用，语言结构富于变化，错落有致，顺畅圆润，尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到，为文章增色不少。
Dear Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you. The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.
It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.
Yours,
Li Hua
20xx年高考英语满分作文及名师点评
【试题回放】
实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。
注意：
1、对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2、词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3、演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。
Good afternoon, everyone.
The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.
Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.
Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.
What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.
Thank you for your listening!
【名师点评】
这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的演讲稿，文中大量运用排比句型，不但准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息，而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同结构的复合句式，将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句议论应如何倾听，则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。
20xx年高考英语满分作文及名师点评
【全国卷I海南、宁夏】
【试题回放】
假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：
1.外出购物
2.替房东还书
3.Tracy 来电话留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消
2)此事已告知Susan
3) 尽快回电
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Mrs. Wilson,
I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.
Yours,
Li Hua
[名师点评]
本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。
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The bell rang and the class was over. Many classmates jumped up from the seat. The classroom became noisy. Some students went out of the classroom while talking and laughing. Two girls were singing a song on their seats. Some boys were telling a joke loudly. They were laughing together. I was chatting with some classmates when Li Hong came to me. She joined us. Our class break was often full of fun and laughter. We often have a pleasant break.
【译文】：
铃响了，下课了。许多同学从座位上跳了起来。教室变得嘈杂。一些学生走出教室，说话和笑。两个女孩坐在座位上唱歌。一些男孩正在大声讲笑话。他们一起笑着。我和几个同学聊天时，李洪来找我。她加入我们。我们的课间休息充满了乐趣和欢笑。我们经常度过愉快的课间。