大学英语写作（1）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why you prefer online (paper) reading to paper (online) reading. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
[范文]
With mobile phones widely used in our daily lives, various Apps emerge. Reading has therefore become more convenient. However, different people hold different views toward online reading.
Though more convenient reading becomes, I like paper reading more than online reading. The reasons are as follows. Firstly, I cherish the moment keeping company with the book. When I bury my head into the book, the special fragrance of the book slips through my fingers, into my nose, then into my brain. How marvelous the feeling is! Secondly, I can take various notes on the book as long as I want to, which is not that easy to do when reading online. When I have finished reading the book, what I harvest will be not only the knowledge and idea the book conveys, but also my systematic thinking about the book, which can be vividly embodied by my notes on the book. Thirdly, paper reading won't be distracted easily by irrelevant information which often emerges in online reading.
Based on the above three points, I prefer paper reading to online reading.
大学英语写作（2）
借助说明文的构思方法，看看下列标题问题该如何写：
（1）The Layout of a Hospital
Direction: You are asked to write a composition about “The Layout Of a Hospital”. Locate some important departments in the hospital based on the picture and information given below. Your compositions should be no less than 100 words.
1）the Emergency Department
2）the Out-patient Department
3）the Surgery Department
4）Dispensary/Pharmacy
5）Physician Department
6）the Eye, Ear, and Throat Department
7）the Dental Department
8）the Laboratory
9）the X-ray Department
10）the Administrative Building
11）the Ward
参考范文
Near the gate, on the west side of the road is the Emergency Department. Opposite the Emergency Department across the Main Road is the Out-patient Department. The building to the southwest of the lake is the Dispensary, which faces the Surgery Department lying on the other side of the road. Along the west wall, from south to north, stand three buildings: the Physician Department, the Eye, Ear, and Throat Department, and the Dental Department. The Laboratory is to the northwest of the round about, and beside the Laboratory, the X-ray Department is located on the same side of the road.
A winding road by the lake leads to the Ward. Near the end of the main road, the Administrative Building is situated on the east side. The hospital is nicely and conveniently laid out.
大学英语写作（3）
英语四级考试作文和翻译一般能得160分左右。
英语四级卷面总分为710分，作文及翻译各占15%，也就是各分，作文和翻译分数一共212分。
四级考试单项分的报道分为四个部分，这四个部分以及各部分所占的分值比例分别为：听力(35%)249分、阅读(35%)249分、写作和翻译(30%)212分。
英语四级的复习重点有三个：
词汇、听力、阅读。对于词汇，使用单词书记忆是最重要的方式，不过在复习的中后期，大家也要重视在真题中对词汇的积累。
听力是英语四级最难的题型，也是分值很高的题型。想要做好听力题，大家就需要多听，只要大家听得足够多，听力能力自然就会上去。
阅读的分值和听力一样高，而且阅读题是大家的主要得分题型。想要做好阅读题，扎实的基础是前提，这就要求大家要提前夯实基础。然后大家就需要对阅读题进行大量的训练，只要大家的做题经验足够丰富，做题能力自然会提升。
大学英语写作（4）
1、英语四级考试8:45考生进入考场
所有考生一律携带身份证、学生证和准考证进入考场。证件不全者,不得参加考试。考生进入考场后,调试耳机。
2、英语四级考试9:00迟到考生不得入场,监考员发答题卡1和卡2
考生用且只能用黑色字迹签字笔在答题卡上填写姓名、准考证号,用2B铅笔涂黑相应的信息点;暂不填写答题卡2上试卷代号一栏;考生不得提前答题,否则按违规违纪处理,并报省教育考试院处理。
3、英语四级考试9:10考试正式开始,开始做试题第一部分
考生做试题第一部分“写作”,务必用黑色字迹签字笔答题。
4、英语四级考试9:35监考员发试题册
考生不得提前翻阅或改变试卷位置,否则按违规违纪处理,并报省教育考试院处理。
5、英语四级考试9:40开始做试题的第二部分
英语四级写作部分考试结束;考生打开试题册，开始做试题的第二部分“快速阅读理解”。
6、英语四级考试9:55收答题卡1
收卷期间考生不得答题,否则按违规违纪处理,并报省教育考试院处理。
7、英语四级考试10:00听力考试正式开始。
8、英语四级听力考试结束后,开始做试题的第四部分
英语四级听力考试结束后,请立即摘下耳机,否则按违规违纪处理,并报省教育考试院处理;考生开始做试题的第四部分。
9、英语四级11:20考试结束
英语四级考试结束,考生立即停止答题,不离开座位,待监考教师收齐试卷、清点考试材料无误并同意考生离场后,考生方可退场。
10、考生不得提前退场和交卷
英语四级考试过程中,考生不得提前退场,包括提前交卷,否则按违规违纪处理,并报省教育考试院处理。
11、考生进入考场需携带2B铅笔和黑色签字笔,不得携带其它材料
考生进入考场不得携带的材料如书本、纸张、书包、录音器材、电子记事本和通讯工具(含BP机、对讲机和手机等均不得带入考场,否则按违规违纪处理,并报省教育考试院处理。
12、本次考试的题型分为六部分，第一部分作文的题目在答题卡1上，其余五部分的题目在试题册上;考试材料包括：试题册、答题卡1和答题卡2。
希望大家好好看一下大学英语四级考试流程，特别要注意的是，听力考试结束后就要回收答题卡1，以往很多同学都是来不及填答题卡，求监考老师也没有用，这里告诉大家一个小方法就是，听力考试的最后几题是稍微有些难度的，如果你英语成绩不是很好，可以适当放弃最后几题，把时间留出来填答题卡。
一般英语成绩不是很好的同学，是很难把全部题目做完的，可以先把自己擅长的题目做完，不要在一个题目上消耗太多时间，不值得。
大学英语写作（5）
overuse of plastic bags is always a major problems in
as they are for customers, they have become a threat to the environment and a cause for severe waste of
increasing number of reporters make up false stories about……
as to make themselves more popular or to win some
readers` taste and curiosity
of them even cut down the expending for books and meals to satisfy their desire for fashionable
of them even fail to focus on their study,
, it is a costly hobby to follow the tide,which will impose(使…强迫接受) financial stress on their
reasons are simple but thought-provoking(令人深思的)
, in recent years, the 4-hour show is losing its appeal, especially to 讲述一件事情失去了它的影响力
, some other people are faithful audience of it, they argue that……
讲述一件事情失去了它的影响力的时候，仍有人依旧热衷。
No invention has received more praise and abuse than 没有一项发明像互联网一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。
People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with 人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。
An increasing number of experts believe that imigrants will exert positive effects on construction of However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, who complain that the imigrants have brought many serious problems like crime and 越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而，越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法，他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题，像犯罪和吸毒。
Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowded with a large number of 许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少，以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车，而车上可能已满载乘客。
A proper part time job does not occupy students' too much In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull 一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间。事实上，把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康，正如那句老话：只工作，不玩耍，聪明的孩子会变傻。
, many students always go into raptures at the mere(仅仅的) mention of the coming life of high school or college they will Unfortunately, for most young people, it is not pleasant experience on their first day on 当前，一提到即将开始的学校生活，许多学生都会兴高采烈。然而，对多数年轻人来说，校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历。
The majority of students believe that part time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable(满意的) position in the future job 大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。
It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable(悲惨的[mizərəbl] ) life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure(暴露[ikspəsuə] ).无可争辩，现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冻的痛苦生活。
People equate success in life with the ability of operating 人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并论。
Environmental experts point out that the increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our 环境学家指出：持续增加的污染不仅会导致像全球变暖这样严重的问题。
For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment after their 对大多数人来讲，退休以后，阅读或学习一项新技术已成为他们生活的中心和快乐的来源。
For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to 对于那些想过上健康而有意义的生活的人们来说，找时间学习一些新知识是很重要的，正如那句老话：活到老，学到老。
However, this idea is now being questioned by more and more experts, who point out that it is unhealthy for children who always stay with their parents at 然而，这一想法正遭到越来越多的专家的质疑，他们指出，孩子总是呆在家里，和父母在一起，是不健康的。
It is suggested that governments ought to make efforts to reduce the increasing gap between cities and They ought to set aside an appropriate fund for improvement of the standard of peasants' They ought to invite some experts in agriculture to share their experiences, information and knowledge with peasants(农民[pezənt]), which will contribute directly to the economic growth of rural 政府应该努力减少正在拉大的城乡差距。划拨适当的资金提高农民的生活水平;邀请农业专家向农民介绍他们的经验、知识和信息，这些有助于发展农村经济。
Most important of all, apart from their hometown and parents, students couldn't catch sight of any familiar face and have to suffer from homelessness, which can cause certain serious mental 更重要的是，离开了家乡和父母，看不到任何熟悉的面孔，他们不得不忍受思家之苦，这可能会导致严重的精神疾病。
社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development
发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in…
复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon
长远利益. interest in the long run
优先考虑/发展… give (top) priority to
社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress
大学英语写作（6）
四级作文是提纲作文，一般按提纲写出相应段落即可。在文章内容上无需追求高深新颖，切题合理便可落笔；在思路逻辑上则要求句意通顺，文字流畅；在文字表现上要求无语法错误，个别小错可忽略(如动介搭配，单词拼写等不涉及语法类小错)。另外，值得一提的是，在篇章结构上建议写三段，所以即便题目只给出两个提纲，最好在完成两个提纲后，再多补充一段，所补内容不限，但须跟话题相关。
二、四级作文例题分析
(1) The Shortage of Fresh Water
1. 目前淡水资源非常紧缺
2. 为什么会出现这种情况
3. 该如何解决
96年6月份曾考过此题，今天来看，似乎更有现实意义。这是一道负面社会现象题，那么挖掘其背后根源，并找出解决方案，就成为探讨的主要方面，而提纲也正是如此。三个提纲各属其类，界限清晰，直接按提纲写三段即可。段1为提出现象，确立研究对象。提纲1翻译后仅一句话，作为一段话则显内容单薄，字数匮乏，所以需进一步发挥。不妨从例证角度扩充，举例时即可基于国内现状，也可纵观全球，显然前者更易行。可从我国西南地区的生活缺水，水价上升，以及河流干涸等细节方面铺陈。段2是原因分析，建议分析主观原因和客观原因两方面。所谓主观原因即是基于人的思想意念，心理意识，行为动机以及行为举措，比如人们节约意识的淡漠或者人们误认为淡水取之不尽等不当想法。而客观原因则是从非人角度出发，如社会发展，人口激增，甚至污染的加剧等方面出发，这些因素均使得淡水消耗的增加。当然，考场上由于时间紧迫，无法细想，可能会写出的两个全是主观类或客观类的原因，其实也无妨，只要二者不同即可，谨防虽言明两原因，但实则彼此混淆，出现逻辑不清的窘况。段3是措施分析，措施可从官方措施和民众措施两方面写起，也可加入作为现代年轻人，我该如何约束自己，从生活中小事做起节约水资源等内容。总之，在内容上考生尽可发挥想象力，纵马驰骋，原则依旧：切题者皆可。
(2)Part-time Jobs for College Students
1.目前大学校园里很多学生业余时间做兼职
2.对于大学生是否该做兼职工作，人们看法不一
3.我的看法
这是一道校园话题，在内容上即涉及现象，又涉及观点，能很好地考察到学生的综合分析能力。提纲1依旧是现象提出，看到提纲1，大家脑海里会浮现很多熟悉的场景，如校园布告栏里张贴着的兼职广告，校园论坛上也经常发布的一些兼职信息等等，这些都可反映在段1中。所以当我们第一眼看到话题或提纲时，脑海中常常会浮现出相关场景，把这些画面定格，进行详细描绘即可，即自然又切题。当然，段1也可从学生的兼职渠道以及兼职类型等方面加以发挥。总之，提纲是总领，而符合总领的任何附属内容都可写。段2是人们对此学生兼职的不同看法，一正一反。切记在表达上述两类观点时，提出其相关论据。段3是提出作者本人看法。本人看法既可选择上述任一方(只要不极端)，也可提出与上述均异的第三类观点，对于极度偏激的正反方观点则需做一番调和与勾兑(这个一般很少见)。需要提醒的是，继提出己方观点后，还应补充其他内容，如论据；也可写我的下一步做法，甚至可写我所认为的大家对此问题所应采取的对策云云。
(3)Private Cars of Today
1.目前私家车越来多了
2.私家车为人们带来的益处和问题
大学英语写作（7）
范文一：
Dear my father and mother。
This letter is my inner feelings。 I want to thank both of you for so many years’ care and help。
During my growth， you have made a lot of efforts and love for me。 When I make a success， both of you are more excited than me， and support me to do better。 Even though I have failed， you always share sorrow with me and encourage me not to give up。 Especially， during my preparation for CET-4， the support from you is always everywhere。 I have passed the exam successfully。
You love is so unselfish that I am deeply affected， so I will study hard to be a useful person and won’t make you disappointed。 Anyway， I would like to express the deep gratitude to you。
With best wishes。
Sincerely yours。
范文二：
My dear family member,
I would like to extend my heartfelt thanks to you for your unselfish love shown to me during my preparation of College Entrance Examination. You give me emotional security, care and love and support my study, which is part and parcel for my school days. Without your assistance and care, I can not make good performance definitely. I take this opportunity to express our deep appreciation for the kind assistance you rendered me.
Your generous help made it possible that I pass my college entrance examination and obtain the good result. I will cherish the good will and family affection you showed me. Your encouragement is my best drving force. Please accept my most cordial thanks for your best love, which I will always remember.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your kind assistance.
Lovely yours,
大学英语写作（8）
Have you ever been at sea in a dense fog when it seemed as if a tangible white darkness shut you in, and the great ship, tense and anxious, groped her way toward the shore? I was like that ship before my education began, only I had no way of knowing how near the harbor was.
The most important day I remember in all my life is the one on which my teacher, Anne Mansfield Sullivan, came to me. I am filled with wonder when I consider the immeasurable contrast between the two lives which it connects. It was the third of March, 1887, three months before I was seven years old.
On the afternoon of that exciting day, I guessed vaguely from my mother’s signs and from the hurrying to and fro in the house that something unusual was about to happen, so I went to the door and waited on the steps.
I felt approaching footsteps. I thought it was my mother and stretched out my hand. Someone took it, and then I was caught up and held close in the arms of the person who had come to reveal all things to me, and, more important than that, to love me.
The morning after my teacher came she led me into her room and gave me a doll. When I had played with it a little while, Miss Sullivan slowly spelled into my hand the word “d-o-l-l”. I was at once interested in this finger play and tried to imitate it. When I finally succeeded in making the letters correctly I was filled with childish pleasure and pride. Running downstairs to my mother I held up my hand and made the letters for doll. I did not know that I was spelling a word or even that words existed; I simply made my fingers go in monkey-like imitation. In the days that followed I learned to spell in this uncomprehending way many words, among them, “pin”, “hat”, “cup”, and a few verbs like “sit”, “stand” and “walk”, but my teacher had been with me several weeks before I understood that everything has a name.
One day while I was playing with my new doll, Miss Sullivan gave me my old doll, too. She then spelled “d-o-l-l” and tried to make me understand that “d-o-l-l” applied to both. Earlier in the day, we had a struggle over the two words “m-u-g” is “mug” and “w-a-t-e-r” is “water” , but I persisted in mixing up the two. I became impatient and, seizing the new doll, I dashed it on the floor, breaking it into pieces. I was not sorry after my fit of temper. In the dark, still world, I had no strong sentiment for anything.
My teacher brought me my hat, and I knew we were going out into the warm sunshine. We walked down the path to the well-house. Someone was drawing water, and my teacher placed my hand under the spout. As the cool stream gushed over one hand, she spelled into the other word water, first slowly, then rapidly. I stood still; my whole attention was fixed upon the movements of her finger. Suddenly I seemed to remember something I had forgotten — a thrill of returning thought – and the mystery of language was revealed to me. I knew then that the “w-a-t-e-r” meant that wonderful cool something that was flowing over my hand. That living word awakened my soul and set it free.
I left the well-house eager to learn. Everything had a name and each name gave birth to a new thought. As we returned to the house, every object which I touched seemed to be full of life. That was because I saw everything with a strange, new sight that had come to me. On entering the door I remembered the doll I had broken. I felt my way to the fragments and tried in vain to put them together. Then my eyes were filled with tears, for I realized what I had done, and for the first time I felt sorry.
I learned a lot of new words that day. It would have been difficult to find a happier child than me when I lay in my small bed that night and thought of the joys that day had brought to me, and for the first time I longed for a new day to come.