雅思大作文（1）
Band 4
Topic:
Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree of disagree?
According to universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. Therefore, this essay will show some reasons of argument for and argument against.
Firstly, I will discuss about two reasons of argument for to begin with universities should accept equal numbrs of male and female students in every subject because it will be balance of idea while studying. In general, there usually are different ideas between man and woman. These lead to new ideas from different vision will happen. Another reason is it display that have equal of society not eccept in each side. In addition, nowadays, the most societies become to accept ability of both in any way.
Secondly, I will discuss about one reason of arguments against that is some subjects not suitable for each other. for example, some subjects of sports such as weight putting. It is not suitable for female because there are different of body between male and female.
In conclusion, I agree with universities should accept equal numbers of male an female students in every subject. Moreover, it depend on what the subjects that the students want to study, they can choose by themselves because I believe that if the students like to study their subjects, they will do it well so that I strongly agree with this topic.
雅思大作文（2）
雅思大作文中的职业与生活话题该如何写？除了基本的母题还会延伸出哪些子题呢？雅思与大家分享雅思大作文话题：职业与生活，考生可参考下文中的内容进行备考，预祝大家取得好成绩！
职业发展与生活方式
1. 职业发展
母题：As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What are the factors that contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
提示：工作满意度是一个很复杂的话题，不仅包括合理的'薪酬，合理的工作时间、良好的工作环境、工作保障与福利、与上司同事的人际关系，等等。当然，让所有人实现工作满意也不现实，只能让用人单位和雇员双方都采取努力去尽力实现。
子题：
跳槽和搬家好不好?做临时工好不好?
工作满意度和长期的工作哪个好?
要不要立法限制工作时间?
要不要因为年龄而拒绝求职者?
近年来工作条件发生了改变，为什么，人们如何准备未来的工作?
很多人忙于工作，没有时间陪家人朋友，为什么，会对家庭生活和社会造成什么影响?
雅思大作文（3）
Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems,both in cities and on motorways Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of
While it is undeniable that private car use is one of the main causes of the increase in traffic and pollution, higher fuel costs are unlikely to limit the number of drivers for As this policy would also affect the cost of public transport,it would be very unpopular with everyone who needs to travel on the But there are various other measures that would be implemented that would have a huge effect on these
I think to tackle the problem of pollution; cleaner fuels need to be The technology is already available to produce electric cars that would be both quieter and cleaner to Persuading manufacturers and travelers to adopt this new technology would be a more effective strategy for improving air quality, especially in
However, traffic congestion will not be solved by changing the type of private vehicle people can To do this, we need to improve the choice of public transport services available to For example, if sufficient sky trains and underground train systems were built and effectively maintained in our major cities,then traffic on the roads would be dramatically Long-distance train and coach services should be made attractive and affordable alternatives to driving your own car for long
In conclusion, I think that long-term traffic and pollution reductions would depend on educating the public to use public transport more, and on governments using public money to construct and run efficient
雅思大作文（4）
这是所有写作老师都反复强调，而学生却总不愿意去做的一件事。不愿意列提纲的理由是大家总觉得40分钟时间宝贵，恨不得从第一秒就开始拼命写。但是，没有整理好思路，一边想一边写的结果是更加浪费时间，而且段落的发展越到后面越混乱。
在列提纲之初，肯定是先要brainstorming，问题是很多考生brainstorming完了就以为自己审完了题目。
其实brainstorming出来的很多点是有重复或者有因果关系的，如果以这些重复或有因果关系的点作为段落的主题句，那么写到后面一定会有问题。所以，我们应该花一点时间整理一下逻辑。
比如讨论出国留学的好处和坏处，大多数学生很能想到下列的几个点得到更好的教育;得到更好的工作;开阔眼界文化交流 学习语言。
其实这5个点，整理一下的话，可以发现1和5是并列的，2是其结果。3和4也同样是因果关系。
这样5个点变成2个点，每个点的论证也有了着落，写起来就会很顺。
而有些学生想到了1和2就觉得自己有来两个段落了，立刻开始动笔，写完主体第一段，再开始第二段的时候，突然发现其实得到更好的工作是更好教育的一个结果，如果要把这个段落写清楚就得把第一段再重复一遍。
综上所述，题目审得好，提纲列得好，就能下笔如有神，反之就可能出现百转千折，不知所云的情况。
祝愿考生能够顺利通过考试。
雅思大作文（5）
“Do you think it is a positive or negative development / Discuss both views and give your ”这类便是discussion类雅思作文。
一般是讨论利弊或者从正方两面阐述观点，再阐述自己的观点。
切忌如果只讨论一个方面就会偏题。文章应尽量避免出现过多“advantage”单词和 “disadvantage”单词，显得词汇量单薄。
可用merit, benefit, value, strength等代替advantage，用downside, weakness等代替disadvantage。
雅思大作文（6）
这是一道社会类话题，也可以看作是政府类话题，近年来雅思写作越来越倾向于混合类写作话题，考生在备考过程中需要注意从多个角度思考话题。
范文：Traditionally, people who attained the age of retirement would simply leave their place of work for a life full of Increasingly around the world, it has been observed that more and more retirees have made the decision to continue working, for example, taking on freelance or consultancy The reasons for this are many fold, which I will explain Based on my observations of this trend, I am emphatically in favour of retirees working, as this brings benefits not only to the retiree but also to the community at
One key benefit generated by retirees continuing to work is that the store of knowledge possessed by the retiree is not Having spent many years honing their craft, it would be a waste to lose those skillsets of the older generation when they attain the age of I have observed many companies engaging their former employees after they attain the age of retirement in contract mentorship positions to ensure these valuable members of the organisation are available to coach the younger generation and provide continuity of
Another benefit is that the retiree will still enjoy a source of income, which would be helpful in defraying high living Inflation rates around the world are high at present, and lead to rising costs of Some retirees I know, who chose not to work and rely on their savings are constantly stressed trying to make ends They must forego luxuries that they could afford when they were working, simply because they no longer have the means to spend on them, as inflation eats into the purchasing power of their
For retirees who found pleasure in their work in the past, working past retirement age would be an enjoyable I have observed some retirees who used to thrive in the previous careers and who previously enjoyed the thrill and excitement of their work, find themselves utterly bored when they no longer Indeed, I have observed that older people who do not keep their minds active might even suffer from health ailments such as
Having considered the points above, I believe that people choose to work after the age of retirement as they can still contribute their skills, earn a decent income, and find it an enjoyable activity that may even benefit their Due to these advantages, I am firmly in favour of the older generation choosing to work after their
雅思大作文（7）
本文是雅思大作文写作的六大基本题型的介绍。烤鸭们需要先对这几个基本题型进行了解，因为只有知道了雅思大作文写作的基本题型才能在准备的过程中有重点的分别准备，那么雅思大作文等都有哪些基本题型呢?
,或者是advantage&disadvantage
what extent do you agree or disagree
在这6个20XX年雅思大作文写作基本题型中，第六种很少考到,4和5被国内叫做report,实际上这两种是分开的.第一种for&against现在雅思考试中也比较少考,最多的是2和3。
以上6种essay,每种都有自己的一套结构和写法,所以指望说所谓的"万能模板"来搞定雅思写作有些不大现实，但是还是有些雅思大作文的写作模板可以借鉴。.
这里就简单举cause&effect这类的essay来当例子,说说这样的essay,具体某一个body paragraph怎么写.
首先,你要有个topic sentence,接下来,在cause&effect这样的一对逻辑关系中,你要做的就是把一个一个cause和effect用逻辑关系链接起来.注意每个cause&effect的组合中的effect都可以变成下一对组合中的)
例如: no investment in rural areas->poverty->go to city to find job opportunities->the increase of population in cities->demand for transportation->more vehicles->more exhausts->more air pollution->more diseases related to air pollution->death rate increase->lift expectancy
这样就是个完整的链条了
逻辑很重要.有了逻辑,接下来就是用一连串的表示逻辑的词和词汇把这些个点串联起来.下面举些个词和词汇表示cause&effect
cause, create, affect, impact, influence, result in, lead contribute be attributed because, because of, due to, therefore, 等等.
因此,在这六大雅思大作文基本题型中，虽然各不相同，但是还是可以在准备的时候运用一样清晰地结构，在雅思考试中取得好成绩
雅思大作文（8）
考生在写作时面临一些困境和问题,主要有以下几点:
一、滔滔不绝"意识流"
有一部分考生在考试时一见到作文题,便感到很对自己的胃口,觉得有很多内容要写。于是乎千言万语涌上心头,写着前一句想着后一句。往往前句尚未写完便接上了后一句,辛辛苦苦写了一大堆(甚至有写11个自然段的)犹觉余意未尽。结果令判卷的老师头疼不己,无法继续往下看。原因就在于这种没有构思、未理提纲的作文章法太乱,语言质量差。无论是四、六级考试还是研究生入学考试,我国的作文试题都是规定式作文(controlledwriting),这跟国外考试(如TOEE)不一样。因此,写作时必须按给出的提纲或提示去写,任何过于放任自由的做法都是不可取的,更不要另有所图,滔滔不绝。这是进入实际操作前的一个基本认识问题,稍不留神就会出问题。
要控制这种"意识流"的写法,必须严格按照三点提纲来写。假如第一段要求描述某个现象,务必不要先进行原因分析,否则到了第二段该分析原因的时候就没东西可写了。明智的做法是投其所好,该怎样就怎样,这一原则适用于所有的考试。另外,有的考生一方面有话则多,一发而不可收,控制不了自己;一方面无话则隐,该说的话没有说出来。我们不妨把作文的要求量化到每一个段落:一篇200词左右的作文一般不会超过15句话,把这15句话根据题目要求分配到各段中去,每一段大模只说那么几句话,绝不多说。事实上往往是说得越多,错误越多。因此,眼着提纲走,每一段不要写得太多,点到为止,见好就收,这才是最稳妥的对策。
二、无话可说真难受
无话可说是滔滔不绝的对立面。有的考生题目看得懂,提纲也一目了然,就是不知道该说什么,在考场上头脑一片空白,想到的也只是空泛的东西。这是一种常见的现象。在这种情况下,即使是用中文也难以写好,更何况要用英文去表达。针对这一情况,办法就是要善于联想到一些具体的事实、具体的例证以及具体的现象。比如说,要谈论电视节目这一话题,可以联想到新闻联播,并由此想到它让人们开阔视野,了解世界。但有人觉得话题太熟悉了,反而一时说不出什么来。其实,作文题一定是永恒的话题,在任何时候都可以讨论;或为当代话题,让所有的人都有话可说。题目是公平的,绝对不会让某一专业的考生有特别的优势。所以,考生一定能联想起具体细小的事情,再形成观点。把看得见摸得着的事物带来的思考变成作文里的实质内容,这不失为一种很好的策略。例如,计算机的利与弊这个话题似乎太大,但是可能想到的具体的现象是小孩、学生要在计算机前玩计算机游戏。由此带来的思考是,这些学生整天呆在那里对他们的mind是有害的,并wastealotoftime。
因此,当头脑出现空白时,应该由具体细小的、琐碎的、微不足道的事物所引发的思考形成观点,再进行论述。这种定式思维的形成需要多下功夫多练习。从无话可说到有话可说,下面的例子让人不无启发。在种.种场合下,经常要欢迎领导讲几句话。领导往往首先开口说:同志们大家好,我利用这个机会讲三句话。讲第一句话时,脑子里不知道第二句话是什么,讲第二句话时,根本就没想第三句话要说什么。但他最终说了三句话,以"谢谢大家"结束讲话。领导讲话"1、2、3"成了一种定式,他总能找到有关内容讲几点,这种功夫是长期磨练的结果。写作文也一样,平时需要多多练习这种思维。
三、真情流露没必要
考试时,监考老师通常发现有的考生坐在那里根本就是在玩深沉,他在那里思考人生的伟大哲理;他在那里要想出一个观点,想出一个理由,想出一个措施,非要显得与众不同。陷入这种境地的考生,显然犯了一个根本性的错误。参考时间为40分钟的作文,一般应该在35分钟之内完成,再用几分钟的时间检查语言错误。可有的考生十几分钟一句话都写不了,就是因为他太进入角色了,他想向判卷的老师掏心掏肺。这是一个很大的误区。
考作文的目的纯粹是通过这一命题形式,考查考生的英语水平怎样。命题人关注的是书面表达能力,而不是看一个人有没有内容,思想有没有深度。以20XX年考研作文题为例(为什么海洋里的鱼越来越少),原因基本成立,内容相关即可,根本没有必要想破脑袋去找原因,不要去猜测判卷的老师喜欢什么观点。只有当作文明显跑题时,内容才体现出其重要性。不管原因也好,措施也好,某一考生想到的任何一点,很可能命题人早已料到,而且肯定会被成千上万的考生重复无数遍。因而曾经令自己激动一时的想法,在判卷的老师看来全无感觉。规定式作文的拓展空间本来就非常有限,所以"真情流露"是没有必要的。
四、英语表达憋得慌
如果说以上几点都明白了,剩下的最大障碍就是用英语表达意思很困难。对于这一点,首先要树立信心。实际上,大部分考生都受过正规的大学英语教育,即使是一些自学的考生,其英语水平也足以写好一篇考研作文。关键在于要把这种潜力挖掘出来。《朗文词典》(LongmanDidonary)的最大特点,就是用20XX个核心词来解释几十万个词条,而且词条大都有几个义l项。由此可见,并不一定要用多么复杂l的英语来表达,也不一定非得添加一些高难度的单词以加深判卷老师的印象。事实上,简单的语言也能表达复杂的事物。著名的美国作家海明威的作品以其明白晓畅的语言吸引了千千万万的读者,就是一个明证。
要求考生运用英语思维来写作文是不现实的。如果能用英语思维,也就谈不上会遇到多大的困难了。在实际写作过程当中,脑子里想的是中文句子,然后把一个一个的中文句子译成英文。在翻译的时候努力寻求一一对应的关系,希望找到与中文词对应的英文单词。结果句子结构和单词的选用受到中文的影响,自己感觉上也是"憋"得费劲,或者觉得表达出来了,意思差不多,而实际上给人的感觉依然还是中文。若是让老外来看这篇作文的话,也许根本就弄不清楚文章的内容,而判卷的中国老师在判卷时往往能想象出文章是怎样写出来的。在这种情况下,出路在于把中文译成英文时,不要去追求一一对应的关系,而应该"得其意,忘其形"(getthemeaning,forgettheform),忘掉中文的语法结构,句法形式则可能要整个地打乱,"钻进去,跳出来"。所谓"钻进去"就是要看意思是否到位了,"跳出来"就是要忘记中文的语言形式。实际上把英文译成中文,也是一样的道理,关键是要在转换中把意思表达出来。如果写出来的句子整个结构都在对应,无异于用英语词说中国话,这显然是不合适的。
词汇掌握有限的考生,可以经常看一看朗文词典中词条的英文注解,这对于提高写作的表达能力会有巨大的帮助。整部词典成千上万的词义全部用20XX左右常用词汇解释。随意翻开词典的任何一页,找出其中不认识的单词,然后看后面的英文注释。要找不认识的单词,因为在急于知道意思的情况下看注解,印象才深刻。要先学人家怎么表达,再学会自己表达。有的人简单地认为,只要记了单词和语法,就可以高兴怎么表达就怎么表达,这样的人永远学不好英语。记住一个词跟学会使用这个词是两码事。BBC的一个材料上说,英国农民一辈子最常用的、基本上能够表达他所有情感世界和日常生活的词大概不到一千。农民也有喜怒哀乐,在这一点上,一个农民的情感世界跟一个伟大诗人的情感世界是没有什么区别的,而且用简单的语言把复杂的意思表达出来也可谓之伟大。对于一个一时找不着词的概念,‘应该用一种迂回曲折的方式把意思表达清楚。或用一个短语,或用一个从句,或三言两语,如果没出什么语言错误的话,这也算是一种伟大!
针对英语表达"憋得慌"的情况,必须摒弃翻译中追求一一对应的关系并机械地把中文译成英文的方法,应该把中文句子结构彻底地忘记,然后用比较简单的"万能"英语表达。平常不妨做一做这样的练习,通过阅读不认识的词条的英文注解,然后试着把单词译成中文词,再去对照英汉词典的汉语释义,慢慢地就会开始领会用英语表达的门道了。之所以强调这样做,是因为朗文词典语言简明,例句来自活生生的现实生活,不同于传统的英语词典从文学作品里摘录例句的做法。正因为如此,其词汇量比较贴近我们的词汇基础,只要读得多占自然就会明白这样好。做的奥妙,进而受其影响。
五、处于被动危害大
尽管考研作文为规定式命题,但考生仍可积极主动地把作文写。其主动性在于采取回避的策略:表达上采取迂回的方式,即运用不很复杂的语言,内容的取舍上避重就轻地写比较易于表达的内容。很多人在写作过程中从头至尾都处于被动状态,当有内容想要表达清楚的时候,却又发现种.种途径都不可能表达好,只好硬着头皮把自己意识到没把握的东西勉强写上去。毫无疑问,这种连自己都意识到可能是错误的东西,只会产生于己不利的负面作用。所以,当有的内容感觉一点找不着、英语实在表达不清楚的时候,就应该彻底地放弃。开动脑筋多想几点内容、理由和措施,假设想到四条理由,但因为语言表达的问题,其中一条理由说不清楚,那么就应当机立断地把它放弃,写上另外三点理由就可以了(或许两点就够了)。由此可见,积极主动的态度会使自己在考试中有更大的灵活性。
单词拼写错误多也是考研作文的一大问题。例如,opinion错拼为opium,结果inmyopinion成了inmyopium(在我的鸦片中)!常用单词是不能拼错的。有的单词平时会拼写,考试时突然没把握了,比如modernsod-ety,假如不知道modern与IElorden哪一个是对的,不妨换成societytoday或today'ssociety,或许还能想起另外一个难度大一点、拼写有把握的con-tempomy来代替modem。应该回避明确知道自己不会拼写的词:如果没法换一个词,将句子改换一种说法亦未尝不可。有的考生在考卷上没把握的地方标上问号,或者两种可能都写上,让判卷老师判断后选择其中一个,这是不可取的,是有害的。
总之,不能让自己陷人被动,想说什么、用什么方式说,说多少、说到什么时候,说到什么程度,一切都应由考生主动把握,这样才会减少心理上的压力,更好地发挥出自己应有的写作水平。
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第一段：(引子)
第一句： 描述背景 There are various different opinions on the subject of …
替换句型： there are widely differing views on the issue of whether …or not .
The issue of whether …or not is certainly a contentious one .
The past 20 years have seen a dramatic increase in …
The past 20 years have seen a considerable increase in …
These days , it seems that …
第二句： 引入话题 while some people might suggest that …,
替换句型： while some still hold to the view that …
this raises certain question about …
Despite the arguments of some people that …
第三句： 表达观点 I personally believe that …
替换句型： In this essay , I intend to argue that …
I would argue that the overall impact of …has in fact been negative / positive . Two of the primary drawbacks associated with this trend are as follows .
Although there are valid arguments to the contrary , in this paper I will argue that
It is my believe that …
Personally I do not agree with this opinion , for the following reasons
However , I am not a believer in the argument that …
I disagree with this point of view for the following reasons
第二段：(说理)
第一句： Firstly, obvious is a sight that …
替换句型： first of all , it is indisputable fact that …
first of all , it is an undeniable fact that …
it is an irrefutable fact that …
it is vitally important that …
one point which I believe to be absolutely pivotal is the fact that …
it is vital that …
第二句： This is because …
第三句： for example …
替换句型： This is particularly so given the fact that …
雅思大作文（10）
剑10G类testA雅思写作大作文范文
Writing Task 2
In many countries, the amount of crime is What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?
参考范文——犯罪的原因及针对性办法
In this essay, I will explore the causes of crime and how we can go about eliminating crime from our society by tackling the
As we know, crime has become a hot issue in today’s It seems that not a day goes by without newspaper headlines such as “15 dead in gangland murder spree” and “Bankers steal 90 million from children’s charity” . The question is why? What drives people to do such I terrible things? I believe the cause of most, if not all, crime comes down to opportunity and Simply put, if a person has few options in life, he may become desperate for the things most of us take for granted (food, clothing etc) and steal On the other hand, if a I person has the opportunity to break the law for his own benefit and figures that the odds are I against them being caught, he is fairly likely to do so (banking fraud, confidence schemes and I such). In terms of education, either a person is unaware of the damage he causes, or he simply sees no other way to get what he Both of these causes must be tackled if we wish to reduce crime in our
I would recommend improving basic living standards to solve the problem of opportunistic If the government provides all citizens with a house, food, clothing and health care, then there should be no reason for a person to Further, an ethic of hard work should also be instilled in the citizenry - the idea that some people get more because they deserve it, either they work harder or are simply better at their job than other people, and therefore they should be rewarded for This should be indoctrinated in a person from In this way, we would see people become more productive and less willing to cheat their way to their
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在这篇文章中，我将阐释犯罪的原因，以及我们如何能够针对这些原因减少社会中的犯罪。
正如我们所知，犯罪已经成为当今社会的热点问题。几乎每天的报纸头条上都会有诸如此类的标题——“15人死于黑社会谋杀混战”或“银行家从儿童基金会挪用9000万”。问题是为什么?是什么驱使人们做出如此恶劣的事情?我认为大部分——即使不是全部——犯罪都是源于机会主义和教育缺失。简单来说，如果某人在生活中别无选择，他便会极其渴望得到大部分人都习以为常的东西(如食物、衣物等)，并盗取它们。从另一方面来说，如果某人有机会为个人利益而违反法律，并且认为被抓住的可能性不大，那么他极有可能会以身试法(如银行诈骗、信用欺诈等)。至于教育缺失，则指的是某人意识不到自身引起的伤害，或者是他找不到其他方式获取他想要的。如果我们希望减少社会中的犯罪，那么这两方面的问题必须得到解决。
我建议通过提高基本生活水准来解决机会主义犯罪问题。假如政府给予所有公民房子、食物、衣物和医保，那么人们就没有理由去偷盗。另外，还应该向所有公民灌输辛勤工作的道德观，即多劳者多得——他们或是工作更努力，或只是工作能力比他人更好，因此他们应该有所收获。这样的意识应该从一个人出生时就被灌输。这样一来，我们就能看到人们变得更有效率，而不再想用欺诈的手段达到目的。
雅思大作文（11）
观点类大作文，旅游类话题
Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different To what extent do you agree or disagree?
题目大意
当今，国际旅游是世界上最大产业。不幸的是，国际旅游给来自不同文化的人们带来了关系的紧张而不是相互的理解。你在多大程度上同意还是不同意?
写作思路解析
??题干两句话。但是第一句话为陈述句无逻辑考点，第二句为讨论话题，两句间无明确因果逻辑关系，单观点议论文出题方式，考察比较关系。
?? To what extent do you agree or disagree? 在多大程度上同意或不同意出题方式。
?? 话题类型：旅游+国际化。话题词 international tourism, tension, understanding, different cultures
高分写作示范
Recent decades have witnessed the flourish in global traveling and it has become a lifestyle for the normal Some contend that this trend has caused tension between diverse cultures rather than enhancement of understanding, but I find such opinion flawed and hard to
Admittedly, international tourism seems to bring some misunderstanding between local populace and foreign For example, many people believe that the tourism have aggravated or spoiled the visited locations due to pollution and However, it seems to me that these bad behaviors are not caused by international tourism, but by the lack of personal moral principles, and even some of the locals have these flaws Meanwhile, with close supervision and rigid regulations, these issues can be strategically
Therefore, I personally believe that the international tourism should be promoted because of its enormous benefits, especially in the aspect related to the enhancement of understanding of diverse First of all, this kind of tourism can certainly make travelers access and feel the first-hand experience，by which I mean experiencing cultural differences in person can substantially stimulate people's curiosity and desire for Therefore, it is not rare that travelers fall in love with the culture of the host country and work as cultural ambassadors Besides, international tourism eases tension between people of various nationalities through enhancing multicultural In other words, although reading the second hand information presented on the social media or other publications may partially ease the misunderstanding caused by the ignorance and prejudice, we find it confusing to interpret or complying with diverging cultural norms without experiencing civilizations on a first hand Luckily, traveling gives people a feasible solution by the means of accessing the different
In conclusion, international tourism connects people in various countries rather than separating Far from causing tension, international tourism improves people's relationship from different
相关词汇和语法结构
Populace 百姓/平民
Proficiency 熟练
Rare 稀有
Host countries 所在国
Ambassador 大使
Enhancement 提升
Interpret 解释
Diverging 偏离
Address 解决加强
Flaws 瑕疵
Firsthand 一手，亲自
nuisances 麻烦事儿
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报告类大作文，犯罪类话题
Some scientists believe that studying the behaviour of 3-year-old children can tell which children would grow up to be To what extent in your opinion is crime a product of human nature or is it possible to stop children from growing up to be criminals
题目大意
l 一些科学家认为研究3岁孩童的行为可以看出他们是否会成为罪犯。问：多大程度上你认为犯罪是本性的产物，以及是否有可能防止孩子长大成为罪犯。
思路解析
规划写作任务，论证过程分两大方面：
基因的确会影响到人们是否会犯罪：
基因会决定人们的行为模式，一些基因会会使人冲动，情绪化，寻求刺激，缺乏同情心，从而作出出格的行为。
缺乏积极品质的人也很容易作出一些欺骗行为，甚至是暴力具有破坏性。
采取措施预防犯罪是有效的：
有一些犯罪基因是受到环境的作用而激活，后天环境也会直接对一个人产生影响，因此可以从环境入手预防犯罪。
家庭教育方式要注意避免体罚，因为孩子容易模仿这些行为;同时适当的引导孩子的情绪管控能力。
审题，找出关键词/限定词
Nature：凡事看到这个词，就可以联想课上常提到写作话题思维分析中先天和后天的较量。一般情况下，凡事这样的内容，我们的重点一定是落在先天和后天永远彼此互相影响，两者的影响很难真正分开区别或者量化。如此的话，在这道题目中立场和角度的选取就很明确了，先天的作用肯定是存在的，但是由于后天的环境因素的存在，必然是可以有方法预防犯罪。
高分写作示范
Many have questioned whether it is possible to determine a link between genetics and criminal In my opinion, despite strong resistance in many quarters, crime occurs and is partially fostered by biological traits and still actions can be taken to intervene before antisocial behavior escalates into
There is now little scientific doubt that genetics play a part in the development of traits that have the potential to lead an individual down the path of illegal Many genes may affect brain functioning in ways that either increases or reduce the chances individuals learning various complex behavior Specifically, some genes influence difficult temperament, impulsivity, novelty seeking, and lack of empathy, which predispose people to be exposed to environmental risks and make it hard for people to express emotions in what would be considered a positive manner, leading people to engage in anti-social behaviors like enjoy getting lost or doing something crazy just for Also a lack of positive developmental traits is proven directly connected with antisocial When individuals drift from adolescence onto adulthood, symptoms of aggression, property destruction, deceitfulness, and rule violation may be exhibited in the workplace and
Such as it is, social skills and environment is a doorway to unlocking genetic traits that are instilled in Therefore, approaches intervening early in children’s life such as preventing them from abuse, domestic violence and exposure to emotional harm may well be effectively As physical punishments of slapping, hitting and punching provide a pattern to be modeled when youngsters are themselves frustrated and disenchanted, parental disciplinary tactics could be suggested or Besides, providing instructions and guidance on anger management and emotion language or reinforcing helpful behavior both at school and home will definitely diminish the likelihood of embarking on or persisting in a criminal
In fact, it is a combination of both biological factors in addition to social environment that molds people into who they Although genes dictate the mindset of one that chooses to engage in criminal behavior, certain temperament interacting with a myriad of experience, acquired interpersonal competencies, academic skills and effective strategies will avoid the pattern of such
相关词汇和语法结构
antisocial behavior
escalate
temperament
impulsivity
deceitfulness
disenchanted
reinforce
雅思大作文（13）
雅思大作文7分参考范文
As is known to all, the only solution to poverty and hunger is economic However, many people raise objections to economic progress on the ground that it will cause huge damage to the
It is true, of course, that rapid economic growth often comes at the expense of the This has happened again and again in the world, especially in the developing The relentless urbanisation process, for example, has destroyed numerous natural open spaces and animal habitat, and had the dull concrete buildings in their Meanwhile, it is not uncommon at all to see the rivers and streams around paper factories (or other manufacturing factories) are so polluted that the water is no longer
Yet this does not follow that we could do without economic For one thing, only with fast economic development can people have the opportunities to enjoy a better material life, which is the first-tier need of all people at all Though this does not suggest that people's insatiable desire should always be met by developing economy, we can rather safely say that economic growth is often the primary concern for all people, especially those living in poverty and For another, though economic growth will necessarily bring negative effects on the environment, the effects can well be minimized or even Covered with green trees and grasses, many big cities have now attracted birds and other animals back The rivers and streams around factories have become clean, too, as purifying technologies are put into
My opinion, then, is that economic growth is forever needed in spite of its potential risks to the What we ought to do is try to find ways of reducing its effect on the environment, rather than give up economic development
雅思大作文（14）
Well, do you think people can tell you their real thoughts just through phone? Without person-to-person contact, it is unlikely for you to
dig deep into their minds and unlikely to get truth.
大部分情况下,英文是首句中心句,段落其他部分是支持中心句的内容,所以听到首句就是主要意思,因此这种模式相对简单,表示观点的词,比如赞成(support, be for …,go for… be on the side of…, quite agree with…),中立( mutual, just so so, you can try it, not the best),反对( not good, be against…, not recommend…, better avoid …),喜欢(be favor of, like, prefer),一般态度(it's ok, but…),不喜欢(dislike),必须( must, it is necessary…),依情况而定( it depends),没必要( not necessary),等等.
2.直接观点表达
Another hazard for your back are the shock waves which travel up your spine when you walk, known as heel strike. A real find for our patients has been the shock-absorbing shoe insert. A cheap but very effective solution.--支持
Finally, a word about the state-of-the-art relief- the TENS machine-a small battery-powered gadget which delivers subliminal electrical pulses to the skin. Our experience indicates that your money is better spent on the more old-fashioned remedies.--反对
It can be useful to get special orthopaedic chairs, but remember the most important improvement should be in OUR posture.--中立 Though absolutely flat shoes can be a solution for some, others find their posture suffers--中立
雅思大作文（15）
An introduction is crucial, not just for what it says about the topic, but for what it tells the reader about writer’s style and approach. Unless you can introduce the subject clearly the reader may not wish to continue.
For a relatively short essay written under exam conditions, the following are worth including, in this order.
a. Definitions of any terms in the title those are unclear
b. Some background information
c. Reference to other writers who have discussed this topic
d. Your purpose in writing and the importance of the subject
e. A summary of the main points you intend to cover
2.雅思大作文写作类型：
雅思task 2一共有两种类型，第一种为Argumentation, 第二种为Report。
Argumentation:
1)给出一种观点-------Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays computer are widely used in education. As a result, some people think teachers no longer play important roles in classrooms.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
2)给出两种对立的观点-------Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
Some people argue that there are no basic differences between the way men and women approach academic study. Others insist that there are big differences in areas such as organization, attitude and ambition.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
3)分析优缺点-------Do you think the advantages/ benefits outweigh its disadvantages/ problems?
Some people agree to adopt a new language (Such as English) that can be used by people all of the world for international communication.
Do you think the benefits of this would outweigh the problems?
Report:
给出一种现象1) Why?
2) Result?
3) Solution?
1,2或1,3
(1, 2) Nowadays, people always throw the old things away when they buy new things; whereas in the past, old things were repaired and used again. What factors cause this phenomenon? What effects the phenomenon leads to?
(1, 3) Many species of plants and animals are dying out. What are the causes of this trend? How can we prevent it?
3. How to write an introduction:
Argumentation:
1) 选立场
2) 改写题目+表明立场
表明立场的两种方式：1) 直接回答问题
2) 通过让步引出个人立场
Lectures were used in the past as an old way of teaching a large number of students. As new technology is now available for education, some people suggest that there is no justification for lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recent years have experienced a marked development on new technology used in education and people are focusing great attention on whether this technology can be substituted for lectures. Some people contend that new technology can replace lectures. From my point of view, I tend to disagree with this view.
Recent years have experienced a marked development on new technology used in education and people are focusing great attention on whether this technology can be substituted for lectures. Despite those who believe that there is no justification for lectures, in my position, I am convinced that lectures are still crucial in education while modern technology is also beneficial to some extent.
Report:
改写题目+一句话(In this essay, I will analyze问题A+问题B)
The quality of life in big cities is worsening. What do you think the reasons are? What can you suggest as a solution?
Today, the world’s biggest cities continue to expand in size as increasingly more people are choosing to migrate towards an urban lifestyle. Often the drawbacks of this phenomenon include the worsening of the overall quality of life found there. In this essay, I will analyze the factors and solutions of this phenomenon.