中考作文 英语(1)
Beijing has a history of over 3,000 years with a population of nearly 13 million and a lot of places of interest around it. In recent years, the city of Beijing has been advancing very quickly. You can see more museums, parks an shopping centers here and there. More and more highways and overhead walkways have been built up. Whats more, a lot more buses which burn cleaner fuel, such as CNG or LPG, are put into use, to prevent air from being polluted. Water in the rivers is clean again. Wherever you go, you can see GREen trees, grass and beautiful flowers. All these make life in Beijing more convenient, pleasant and colorful. Beijing is still advancing to the bright future.
中考作文 英语(2)
Dalian is a place where you can find natural scenes of stunning beauty,
amiable climate, stylish architecture, comfortable beaches and summer tourist resorts. The gardens and circuses everywhere are good decorations of the city. Along the southern coast, a road like a jade ribbon runs among the mountains and along the sea, threading through the scenic spots of Bangchui Island, Tiger Beach, Fujia Village, Baiyunshan Park, and Xinghai Park. To the
southwest of the city, there are worldly famous Lushunkou. Taiyanggou (Sun Valley), and Baiyu Mount (White Jade Mount) and natural wonders such as the Snake Island and the Sea Cat Island. To the north of the city, there is the
Golden Pebble Beach Holiday Resort, where one can see typical sea-corroded landscape and landform of coastal cast, and the Almighty''s master
piece----the unique "turtle-shell rocks." In Dalian there is also the Bingyu
Valley''s scenery attractions in the north of the Zhuanghe city, which boasts soothing green mountains and clear rivers.
中考作文 英语(3)
1.内容完整,语句流畅,无语法错误,书写规范,给9-10分;
2.内容较完整,语句较流畅,基本无语法错误,书写较规范,给6-8分;
3.内容不完整,语句欠流畅,语法错误较多,书写较规范,给3-5分;
4.只写出个别要点,语法错误较多,书写欠规范,只有个别句子可读或不知所云,给0-2分。
对考生的作文要求有四点:1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文,都会得到相应的高分。所以,在写作文的时候,大家要牢记这些要求。
要做到内容完整,我们首先要认清看好题目的要求,抓住要点,注意文体。我们可以在写作之前好好构思一下,自己将从几个方面来写。是否能将所有内容都包含在内。在写完之后,再检查一遍。看看有没有内容的缺失。
要做到语句的流畅,这就要求有扎实的英语基本功。在平时的积累上,注意一些语义的表达方法。要尽量使用自己能够正确运用的语句和表达方式。注意句子之间的连贯性。这不仅仅指从语法上,也指句意上的连贯。
在初中阶段,考生应注意语法点有:动词单三形式,时态(包括:现在进行时,一般过去时,将来时),定语从句(此项语法建议考生尽量不要使用),语态,单复数,主谓一致,冠词等还有一些表达方式。比如,我非常喜欢足球。考生经常会写成Iverylikefootball.这样的错误一定要避免。
书写一定要规范。要了解英语作文的书写规则。同时,要知道应用文的写作方法。
除了以上的`四个方面,还建议考生们要检查:单词的拼写、大小写和标点符号。
考试的时候,要尽量留出充足的时间给作文。这样,我们才能有足够的时间去构思,去打草稿。在评卷的时候,第一印象很重要,所以考生们一定要让自己的作文看起来舒服,干净,整齐。
中考英语中,很多学生自感基础很差,主动放弃了作文的15分。即便学生表达能力很差,但只要所写文章中包括题目要点中的部分信息,依然能得1-3分的最低档分数;如能完整表达题目给出的要点和要求,同时文章通顺,无严重语法和拼写错误,一般能得到4-11分的中档分。
中考作文 英语(4)
第一,词汇量要充足。
词汇量多少很大程度上决定作文是否能写得下去。
第二,审题要充分。
我所教的学生中在写英语作文时,普遍存在这样一个情况:看完作文题,就开始写,想到哪写到哪,只要把字数凑够了就停笔了。这样写出来的文章,看起来就像在记流水帐,没有任何逻辑,杂乱无章,毫无条理,同时容易出现用错时态、用错格式等的情况。试想,如果你是试卷的命题人,你出作文题的时候,肯定有出这道题的独特的道理。所以仔细审题和构思就成了写作的第一步。审题的重点放在写作体裁、格式、字数方面,确保第一遍审题就能保证得到基本分。同时还要文体和时态,因为不同的文体要求的写作格式也是不同的,时态的要求也非常重要。
第三,提纲要详细。
审完题后一定要列提纲。很多学生认为,中考英语作文译成中文,最多是小学二年级的语文作文水平,所以根本没有必要列提纲。其实,这种想法是非常错误的,因为提纲不仅能使文章的结构清晰,还有很重要的一点:防止漏掉作文内容。因为中考英语作文有一个很重要的要求:要点要全。如果你漏掉了需要写的内容,即使文章写得再优美,用词再准确,也拿不了高分。最后要注意打草稿,然后修改。这样可以保证错误降低至最少或者没有错误,同时也能保持卷面整洁。
第四,文化差异要注意
我们要时刻牢记一点,中英文表达方式有很大的差异,所以体现在作文表达上也常常会出现生硬的中国式作文表达,降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重中英语言差异,并努力找到两者之间的表达方式上的共通点,并且有意识的运用就能避免类似的问题。
第五,细节错误要摒弃。
很多孩子在写作文时常常感觉写得非常好,用上了几个高级句型或者不错的词汇短语,以为可以得高分,但最终结果出来后却与预想差距很大。主要的原因是很多细节没有注意。比如第三人称单数,名词的单复数,大小写,甚至标点、书写、段落安排等,这些细节问题也很重要。
最后:背诵阅读优秀的中学生的作文集
写作很容易在短时间内有大的飞跃,要做的就是积累一些经典的句型、地道的表达方式。可以背诵阅读优秀的中学生的作文集,把精彩的段落和句子抄下来并仿写,最后整理出几十个最常用、最精彩的表达法,写作文时有意识地想一想,总能用上几个。
做好以上几个方面,中考英语写作是很容易提高的!
中考作文 英语(5)
Reading is a very good habit. I like reading very much. In my eyes, I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us. It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us to think over more different things efficiently.
Besides, we can do some reading every time when we are free. For example, I often read some of my favorite books in my spare time both at home or in the library. What I like most are story books because most of them are quite interesting. Now I often buy my favorite books on line for its big discount.
Finally, I like to share my favorite books with our family or my classmates. Since reading can benefits us a lot, it’s time for us to have our good reading habit now!
中考作文 英语(6)
I am in Xianchi Railway Middle School. There are about 40 teachers and 900 students in my school. It's very large with two small gardens. Some small trees and flowers are planted. We enjoy beautiful flowers in spring, summer and autumn. They are the places the students like most. There are two modern teaching buildings and a teaching building in my school. Our classrooms are large and bright. We feel so happy to study in such comfortable classrooms. Besides, the teachers in our school are so excellent that they are popular in our students. Students build a good relationship with teachers. I am sure you will like my school.
我在仙池铁路中学读书。学校大约有40名老师和900名学生。学校很大,还有两个小花园,里面还总有一些小树和花。在春、夏、秋三季,我们欣赏美丽的花朵。那里是学生们最喜欢的地方。学校有两栋现代教学楼和一栋办公楼。我们的教室宽敞明亮。在如此舒适的教室里学习我们感到很快乐。此外,我们学校的老师很优秀,所以在学生中很受欢迎。学生们和老师建立了良好的关系。我相信你一定会喜欢我们学校的`。
中考作文 英语(7)
One possible version:
When I was in Grade 7, my English was very poor. I even couldnt understand what my English teacher said in class. I felt so upset that I wanted to give up English. One day, Mrs Zhang, my English teacher asked me to go to her office and had a long talk with me. She encouraged me to study English well and gave me some good advice. This helped me a lot. I became confident from then on and made much progress. I believe my English will be much better in the future.
中考作文 英语(8)
New Year
Chinese New Year is the most important, interesting festival in China.
Before the Chinese New Year, everyone is very busy. They want the Spring Festival to be a new beginning, so everyone is busy cleaning the room. They keep the room tidy. This is the first thing to welcome the Spring Festival.
The elderly take children to buy snacks and fireworks. But parents just stay at home to make tasty meals for dinner. On the evening of New Year’s Eve, my parents and my sister have dinner with me. We have a good time. After dinner, Oh! Yeah! My father is ready to give us red pockets. Oh, how nice the red pockets are! My sister and I both all say, Peace all year round to my parents! Now, give us red pockets. My parents give us the red pockets at once with a smile on their faces.
What a wonderful time we have!
I think Everything goes well this year!
中考作文 英语(9)
It's going to be sunny on next Monday, has a highest temperature of 9 degree and a lowest of 5 degree But Wendsday is going to be a little windy, and getting cold And it will get colder and colder On Friday, it's going to rain A highest temperature of -5 degree, a lowest temperature of -10 degree Taiyuan would be cloudy at the time with the temperature from eighteen to twenty-eight Yangquan would be sunny with the highest temperature of thirty degree We would have a sunny and hot day in Yuncheng
中考作文 英语(10)
在日复一日的学习、工作或生活中,大家都尝试过写作文吧,作文是人们以书面形式表情达意的言语活动。写起作文来就毫无头绪?下面是小编收集整理的初中中考英语作文,仅供参考,大家一起来看看吧。
At first I declare: I’m trying to write my feelings in English just because it’s fun… I’m not gonna show off so if I got anything wrong please tell me and I will soon correct my mistake as soon as I see your suggestions.
We’ve already lost two gold… it’s such a pity but don’t care about that cuz we still have chance to win the game and participation is the most important. We still have badminton, table tennis, diving and so on. Please don’t blame Du and Tan. They’re under such big stress and their opponents are very strong, too. Avril will be in China in September but I can go to see her performance cuz I’m in Junior Three… it’s so painful! Thank who told me the news all the same though it’s nearly impossible for me to go to the concert I’ve always been dreaming for… I saw Kobe Bryant (I hope I’ve got it right) on the TV last night and I was so excited! But I didn’t see Allen Iverson in the team from my second home USA. Both China and America are my homelands cuz I was born in America but I’m now living and studying in China. They just feel like home, I can see different people and things go by, I am so grateful to have my own life.
Sometimes I get so weird… I’ve got some strange thoughts like “woo my life is so boring”, or something like “why should I do what others tell me to do, I cannot always compromise”, maybe that’s what “rebel” means. J
Many people suicide (kill themselves) for different reasons every year, I think they’re too weak to face the setbacks happening everyday in their lives and they are probably not so optimistic to see the positive side of the life. Everything has two sides, if you can see the bright side instead of the dark side, you’re sure to succeed.
Junior Three… keep on fighting!
I’m really looking forward to seeing badminton and diving matches cuz I can see my favorite athletes!!
And that’s all for today, see you next time~ if you have some ideas, please write them down and tell me, thanks a lot!
中考作文 英语(11)
Christmas day is We will hold an English party on Christmas Eve in the meeting hall of our It will begin at 7:00 and end at 10:00 in the Each group has to prepare two or three For example, singing English songs,playing English plays, telling jokes or stories in English and reading English Welcome to take part in the party on
中考作文 英语(12)
As a middle school student, I learn many subjects, I study very hard every When I go home, I will do my homework and then review the But when the holiday comes, I feel a little confused, because I don’t want to study and want to do something I don’t know what to My mind went
I decided to cultivate my One day, I happened to see a tennis match, I couldn’t stop watching, then I fell in love with So I began to learn to play tennis, I felt very Develop interests and hobbies
Now tennis is my favorite sport, I find a way to relax
中考作文 英语(13)
Last Monday when I stepped into my classroom, my monitor told us that our class teacher, Mr Sun, had passed away in a traffic It seemed so unbelievable because he used to give us lessons on Monday I couldn't accept the fact until the headmaster came to tell us the
Mr Sun was a middle-aged He was full of sense of We all liked him very much because of his excellent His lessons were usually very lively and all liked to attend his He was an experienced
Mr Sun will always live in our hearts!
中考作文 英语(14)
When you were born, you need to face the ups and downs in our For example, you need to learn to speak, learn to walk, learn to write, learn to read, and so Whenever you learn a new thing, you will be always full of But the hardness only you Perhaps, you have thought about giving up, but in the end you insist In this world, there is no difficult, only those who do not adhere As long as you can hold on, that's not a Perseverance prevails! This is the eternal law! Come
中考作文 英语(15)
思路:
审好题
仔细审查所给的内容提示(包括文字和图表等),明确要求写的内容,确定文章的体裁、人称、时态等,理顺思路,确定主旨。
看要点,写片段
对于易于表达的内容,一次成句;对于一时难于表达的内容,写出词组。此时,既注意不遗漏内容要点,也不要随意添加任何内容。
步骤:
定句型,连词成句
这个环节是成文的关键,一定要注意做到:
(1)选用比较有把握的词汇,用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。在熟悉的基础上,鼓励多用高级词汇和结构复杂的复杂句。如表达“为了……”时,可用inorder to do 或 so as todo.也可用sothat引导目的状语从句。
(2)写出的句子要达意,完整,语法正确,合乎习惯,特别是句式、谓语动词形式要有根有据。
(3)表达限定的内容有困难时,就要想到“AllroadsleadtoRome.”这句话,用变通的方法,以达到“曲径通幽”。如要译“他表哥外强中干”这样一句话,表达起来似乎很难,但我们完全可以通过学过的东西将这句话明白贴切地表达出来:Hiscousinlooks strong but in fact,he is rather weak.
(4)尽量避免使用汉语式的英语。例如要表达“她睡得很迟”,不可写成:Shesleptvery late.应该写成:Shewent tobed verylate.因为“sleeplate”表示“睡懒觉”。又如要表达“他一点都不担心他的英语”,不可写成:Heisnot a little worried abouthisEnglish.实际上意思完全相反,表达成“他非常担心他的英语”了。应该是:Heisnot a bit worried about his English. 或:He isnotworried about his English at all.
连词成句,添减相宜
单句写出后,根据短文的内容要求,确定先写什么,后写什么,按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要,重新排列组合已写成的句子,划分必要的段落,一般分成三段。
即:文章的开头(Introduction)、文章的主体(Mainbody)和文章的结尾(Conclusion).这样写成文章的初稿。在连词成句的过程中,还要注意以下几点:
(1)句子或段落间的连接不仅仅是个语言问题,也是个逻辑思维方面的问题,这两者是不能分开的。能注意到这一点,你的文章就能达到条理清楚、层次分明的境界。
(2)为了使句子或段落语义连贯,表达合理准确,可以适当加入一些连接词语。如表达转折可用but,however,otherwise等,表达递进可用and,also,besides,Whatsmore等,表达因果so,therefore,asaresult等,表达对比可用atthesametime,meanwhile,while等,表达让步可用though,although,evenif等。有时还需要加入一些必要的过渡句子以达到承上启下的效果。
(3)仔细推敲在文章的哪些地方可用复杂句。切忌生搬硬套,给人一种为了用复杂句而用复杂句的感觉。要用得自然、得体。要顺应行文的需要,与整个文章浑然一体。
尽量使用我们熟悉的宾语从句、状语从句和定语从句。
检查,修改,定稿,誊写
检查修改是进一步减少疏漏提高质量的最后程序,这时要对照题目要求,认真检查以下几点:
(1)内容有无遗漏或误词,最好一一对应检查。
(2)体裁格式对不对。
(3)句子是否有语法结构错误,特别要检查句子中的冠词、代词、名词复数、动词的时态、语态、主谓一致等方面是否有错误。
(4)句子是否合乎英语表达习惯,是否达意。
(5)书写字迹和标点符号是否规范清晰,词数是否基本上符合要求。经过认真修改润色的短文,即可认真工整地誊写在指定的卷面上。抄好后再速读一遍,力求完美。
经典题例
下面以扬中树人今年3月中考一模试卷的作文为例,谈谈写中考英语作文的具体步骤和应注意的事项。
原题介绍
目前,扬州正在创建(create)全国文明城市(NationalCivilizationCity)。作为一个中学生,我们在学校、在家里、在公共场合等等应该做到哪些才能称得上是一个文明的(civilized)人呢?我们又如何为这个活动作贡献(makecontributionto)呢?请你就此写一篇100字左右的短文。
Nowadays,________________________________________________________________
解题步骤
第一步:认真审题,明确写作体裁、提示要点、文章的时态、人称和词数。
分析:
这篇作文的体裁是倡议书。文章主要有5大提示要点,考生可以用笔将这些要点圈出来。1.扬州正在创建全国文明城市。2.作为一个中学生在学校怎么做才能称得上是一个文明的人?3.作为一个中学生在家怎么做?4.作为一个中学生在公共场所怎么做?5.我们又如何为这个活动作贡献呢?
这篇文章时态以一般现在时为主。人称用第一人称。词数100个左右。
第二步:分析提示要点,用简明的英语写出要点。
分析:五大提示要点只有第一要点是限定的,考生可以直接翻译。其余四大要点都是半限定的、半开放性的。考生需要根据文章主题的需要联系实际生活进行适当发挥。不同的考生会有不同的答案。这部分既是写作的重点也是难点。考生可用简明的英语写出要点。如:Atschool: keep the classroom clean and tidy. At home : helpparents dosome housework. In public places: obey the traffic rulesdont maketoo much noise . make a contribution to this event: giveoutleaflets to make people understand the importance ofthisactivity.
第三步:列出写作提纲,并将要点扩展成句。
开头(Introduction):Yangzhouiscreating a National Civilization City. As middle schoolstudents,weshould try our best to become civilized persons.
正文(Mainbody):
At school, we should keep our classroom cleanandtidy every day. We shouldnt throw about rubbish.
At home, we should help our parents dosomehousework.
In public places, we shouldnt make much noiseinpublic places. We mustnt cross the road until the trafficlightsturn green.
We can make a contribution to this event bygivingout leaflets to the citizens to make them understand theimportanceof this event and take part in it.
结尾 (conclusion):Iam sure Yangzhou will become a National Civilization Citysoon.
第四步:组句成文。
分析:根据文章内容和要求,可以适当调整以上句子的先后顺序。为了使文章连贯自然,表达准确,适当加一些表达并列、递进、因果、转折等关系的连词,然后组成文章,这时如果发现文章词数不够,可把短语变成句子,也可增添一些与表达内容有关的短语或句子。如:表达“在家”,不用“athome”.而用“When we areathome.”如果发现文章词数超过要求,可以将句子变成短语或两句并一句。
第五步:计划时间,认真检查、修改。
分析:
中考英语作文一般要求在20分钟内完成。因此,考试时间有限,必须合理安排。成文后必须认真检查修改。特别注意以下几点:
1.内容是否符合要求,要点有无遗漏或误解。
2.句子是否符合英语习惯,句型是否正确。
3.是否有语法错误。特别是冠词、名词的复数、代词、主谓一致、时态、语态等方面。
4.是否有拼写错误。
5.书写是否有不清楚或不易辨认之处。
6.大小写和标点符号是否使用得当。
7.词数是否符合要求。
第六步:认真誊写。
分析:
注意书写清楚、规范,卷面整洁。中考20分作文,有两分卷面整洁分。
下面是修改过的作文:
Yangzhou is creating a National CivilizationCity.As middle school students, we should try our best tobecomecivilized persons.
First, when we are at school, we should keepourclassroom clean and tidy. And we shouldnt throw aboutrubbish.Second, we should help our parents do some housework athome.Third, we shouldnt make much noise in public places. Besides,wemustnt cross the road until the traffic lights turn green.Whatsmore, we can give out leaflets to the citizens in order tomakethem understand the importance of this event and take partinit.
If everyone makes a contribution to thisevent,Yangzhou will become a National Civilization City soon.