作文赏析英语（1）
在生活、工作和学习中，大家都写过作文，肯定对各类作文都很熟悉吧，作文是人们把记忆中所存储的'有关知识、经验和思想用书面形式表达出来的记叙方式。写起作文来就毫无头绪？下面是小编收集整理的中考优秀英语作文赏析点评，欢迎阅读与收藏。
The desire for good health is universal. Especially nowadays, the possession of good health is regarded by nearly everyone as essential to a happy life as well as a successful one. Only in good shape can you expect to live comfortablyorwork effectively.
How to keep healthy, then? First, enough time should be set aside for persevering in exercises in addition to sleep and rest. Second you must give up the habits that damage your health, such as smoking and drinking too much alcohol. Finally, be sure to have your physical check-up regularly.
As for me, I have always been taking care to have proper sleep and relaxation. In my spare time I like running, swimming, and playing table tennis. So, I can keep fit and have a good life.
作文赏析英语（2）
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to Heyuan, now let me introduce our city — Heyuan to Heyuan is a city with a long It is in the northeast of Guangdong and 198 kilometres away from It has a population of 3,240,
There are many places of interest in Heyuan, such as Sujiawei Wanlu Lake and so Wanlu Lake is a beautiful The water is clean and not There are all kinds of fish in You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic It is really a good place to spend your Besides, you can go and visit Heyuan There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg
I hope you can enjoy yourselves in
Thank
女士们,先生们,
欢迎来到河源市,现在让我向你介绍我们的城市——河源市。河源市是一个有着悠久历史的城市。在广东的东北部,离广州198公里。它有3240000人口。
在河源市有许多名胜,如Sujiawei，万绿湖等等。万绿湖是一个美丽的地方。水是干净的,没有污染。有各种各样的鱼。你可以去划船,钓鱼,野餐。这真的是一个好地方可以度过你的假期。此外,你可以去参观河源市博物馆。在那里你可以看到很多恐龙蛋化石。
我希望你能在河源市玩得愉快。
谢谢你们!
作文赏析英语（3）
This is my summer I intend to finish the Then, take a look at China's famous Look at some Of course, also want to play with the computer, watch Early every morning to get up and running to run, do other But it is conducive to our body! But one thing should not be must help parents do the housework! My holiday arrangements like? something good? give suggestions?
这就是我的暑假。我打算完成作业。然后，看中国的著名小说。看书看一些日子。当然，也要玩电脑，看电视。每天早上早早起床跑步，做其他运动。这有利于我们的身体!但有一件事不应该被忘记。必须帮助父母做家务!我的假期安排呢?好的东西?给点建议?
作文赏析英语（4）
That was a morning in the early of I took a bus to my school in the suburb which was surrounded by rice paddies and The sky was gray with the gloomy clouds congregating gradually along the far eastern "There must be a heavy rain " I spoke to
When I hurried into the classroom, the sky, gray before, was shrouded now by black clouds, darken to twilight, I felt quite stuffy, while it was quite calm, without I saw the leaves of trees and grass static, which seem to await something Several minutes later, I saw the lightening split the clouds and heard the thunders Suddenly, the curtain of rain fell and the wind soon the grass flattened under the wind and the With the rain forming like a fog, the sky became I took several deep I felt
The heavy rain lasted three hours and stopped when the class was The air was so fresh and the sky was so I felt like a new man
那是6月初的一天早上，我乘汽车去郊区的学校上课，学校四周是稻田和鱼塘。天空是灰色的，在遥远的东方地平线上有阴云在慢慢汇聚。我心想：“要下大雨了。”
当我匆忙走进教室时，原本灰色的天空已被黑云笼罩，像黄昏。我感到气闷，而周围一切都很静，没有任何声音，没有风。我看到树叶和草一动不动，像等着什么事情发生。几分钟之后，我看到闪电撕开云层，听到随之而来的雷声。突然，大雨倾盆，风也起了。草在风雨中倒伏。随着雨下成了雾状，天空开始放亮，我深吸了几口气，舒服多了。
大雨下了三个小时，下课的时间停了，空气那么新鲜，天气那么晴朗，我感觉像换了一个人似的。
作文赏析英语（5）
national day is coming，and we can have a family are going to 's a good seaside are staying there for a we are going to the beach and going swimming in the 're visiting tianya haijiao，wanquan river and many other beautiful think we'll have a good time
【译文】
国庆节来了
国庆节来了，我有七天的假期。我们一家去海南。那是一个美丽的海滨城市。我们在那里待上一个星期。我们去沙滩，还在海里游泳。我们游览“天涯海角”，菀泉河还有别的许多好地方。我想我们在那里会玩得很开心。
作文赏析英语（6）
it is known to everyone:oct,1st is our national this day i went to street and saw i will tell you!
at 8:00 i got up and went bus station with my mother .o my god there were so many people!with difficult we got up the bus and felt very traffic was so bad too!i cost nearly 1 hour that we arrived the center of
what were worse there were even more people!in my opinion it was not very interesting to come out at this day!nest time i prefer to stay at home and study! the night of sthe national day hanghai has never appealed to city born and city bred, i've got tired of the brightness of neon signs and the grandeur of skyscrapers in
but on this year's national day, i spent a whole night roaming nanjing road and the bund the symbol of the modern material shanghai, with my it's the first time that i went out with with the huge amount of tourists, we could only wander with the cluster of people, having no in the crowd, we entertained ourselves singing, joking and chatting, leaving all the worries, pressures and unhappiness behind,until mid tired as we were, we still felt very my roommates were quite impressed by the beauty, prosperity and the liveliness of but for me, all these were none of my what i treasured was the time i shared with them though that night shanghai was so charming that she seemed to be one of the leading cities in the
作文赏析英语（7）
in the autumn of october, in the joy of the harvest season, in this twenty-first century tenth fall, once again we ushered in a grand festival -- 62anniversary of the founding of the national day celebration, china, china god chau as cheerful as a
looking back 62years, from scratch, from weak to strong, the growth of the republic as the new saplings, although suffer the baptism of wind and rain, is still standing; even after suffering, but see more
in the past 62years, china produced the change we turn the world upside down with advanced agriculture, developed industry, we have the world's cutting-edge science and technology, in the world of sport can enjoy chinese athletes won the gold and silver bright and brave, the "sick man of east asia" stigma has gone for ever, replace is" the world sports power " of the
mother, we have made great achievements and proud, for in your arms and proud, we love you that 9600000 square kilometers wide, love you the next thousand years of long, love you love you the wonders of the world the great wall, the roof of the world, pearl mu lang, love you running information of the yellow river of the yangtse river, love you through civilization "silk road", love you towering erect high mountains, love you beautiful beautiful china is our home, we love china!
today, stand under the flag, as the blood red color, passion of our blood, the magnificent singing andirritate our since we can not use language to express your love, that will allow us to use action to show it, we will use wisdom hands to depict the country in twenty-first century of the grand blueprint for the motherland tomorrow, to create brilliant!
作文赏析英语（8）
I am going to have a busy weekend ! On Saturday , I'm going to clean my room and do homework. Then , in the evening , I 'm going to the supermaket with my mother . On Saturday, I'm going to the bookstore on foot . I'm going to buy some books. Then, I'm going to go home and read the new books. In the evening , I'm going to watch TV. That will be fun! What about you? What are you going to do on the weekend?
四年级英语作文：暑期难忘的一件事
It was a sunny day today,when i got up in the morning,i decided to see my grandparents.so i took the bus and got there at noon,they were happy to see me,and i was very happy,too.
In the afternoon,my farther asked me to help him water the plant,and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.
In a word,today is a unforgetive day.because i saw my relatives and helped people.
四年级英语作文：我的业余爱好
My hobby
I am Cendy. I am in Nanhai Experimental Primary School. I am in Class 9, Grade 6. I am tall and thin. I live in Dali. I have many good friends. I often play with them.
I have many hobbies, riding a bike, drawing pictures and reading books. But I like to read books the best. Because of reading books is good for my study. I also like riding bikes. Because of it does a lot of good to my body.
What’s your hobby? Can you tell me?
四年级英语作文：我的小兔子
One day, my mother bought two little rabbits for me. I’m very happy.
From that on, the two little rabbits became my good friends. They have two little ears, red eyes, with white and fat boby. They’re marvellous.
Everyday, they play with each other happily. One day, I couldn’t find them. I asked my mother: ”Where are they? ” My mother told me that She didn’t know. At last, I found them in the grass. They were very dirty. I was angry, but when I looked at their lovely faces, I was happy again.
I love my little rabbits, and they love me. They are my good friends forever.
四年级英语作文：秋天的颜色(The Colour of Autumn)
Autumn comes , it gets cooler and cooler. The sky is blue and the clouds are white. You would say autumn is blue and white.
Look ! Birds are flying from the north to the south. The leaves are yellow. Some are hanging on the trees, some are on the ground ,some are dancing in the wind. Someone would say autumn is yellow.
There are so many fruits in autumn in Xinxing . Pears ,peaches. Mangos, oranges and so on. They're fresh and healthy.
四年级英语作文：我的铅笔盒(My Pencil-box)
I have a good friend. Her name is Pencil-box. She is a very beautiful girl. Look! there is a picture on her face. It's a picture of flowers. Her coat is blue and yellow. there are some pencils, a pen, a ruler, a rubber and a tape in her stomach. From Monday to Friday, I go to school with her. When I want to copy or write the new words, I open her mouth and take out the pencil from her stomach. She helps me a lot. And I like her very much.
作文赏析英语（9）
请以Good Health为题写一篇文章。
【参考范文】
GoodHealth
The desire for good health is universal. Especially nowadays, the possession of good health is regarded by nearly everyone as essential to a happy life as well as a successful one. Only in good shape can you expect to live comfortablyorwork effectively.
How to keep healthy, then? First, enough time should be set aside for persevering in exercises in addition to sleep and rest. Second you must give up the habits that damage your health, such as smoking and drinking too much alcohol. Finally, be sure to have your physical check-up regularly.
As for me, I have always been taking care to have proper sleep and relaxation. In my spare time I like running, swimming, and playing table tennis. So, I can keep fit and have a good life.
【名师点评】
本文层次清楚，逻辑分明，第一段讲好身体的重要性，第二段讲保持身体健康的种种方法，第三段讲就“我”而言，“我”如何加强体育锻炼。本文语言地道，亮点颇多，如：First… second… Finally…三个词分述三种方法；The desire for, …is universal, Especially nowadays, the possession of, is regarded by nearly everyone as…, Only… can we expect to….How to…then? As for me, I have always been taking care to… so, I can…等，这些短语的运用使得文章错落有致，多姿多彩。
作文赏析英语（10）
the celebration starts on the night before chusok and ends on the day after the holiday. thus, many korean families take three days off from work to get together with family and friends.
the celebration starts with a family get-together at which rice cakes called "songphyun" (蒸糕) are served. these special rice cakes are made of rice, beans, sesame seeds, and chestnuts. then the family pays respect to ancestors by visiting their tombs and offering them rice and fruits. the koreans visit the graves of their ancestors to bow and clean the area for the coming winter. in the evening, children wear their favorite hanbok (traditional korean clothing) and dance under the bright moon in a large circle. they play games and sing songs. like the american thanksgiving, chusok is the time to celebrate the family and give thanks for their blessings.