四级高分作文(1)
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。
However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。
There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。
2. 批驳观点式
A.一个错误观点。
B. 我不同意。
Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响)。
There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。
3. 社会问题(现象)式
A.一个社会问题或者现象。
B. 产生的原因
C.对社会和我们生活的影响
D. 如何杜绝。(如果是问题的话)
E. 前景的'预测。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public)。 According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。(或者是一个例子)。
There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon. 下面参照辩论式议论文的写法。
X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated(表达) in the following aspects. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。
A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will ……。
写作模板——图表式作文
It is obvious in the graph/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies)。 At the point of (接近)X1, Y reaches its peak value of …(多少)。
What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are … (多少) reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all, …(第一个原因)。 More importantly, …(第二个原因)。 Most important of all, …(第三个原因)。
From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graph/table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势)。
写作模板——辩论式议论文
模版1
Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.
There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1.
More importantly, 论据2.
Most important of all, 论据3.
In summary, 总结观点。 As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心。
或 From above, we can predict that 预测。
四级高分作文(2)
无论是名言警句还是漫画作文都要坚持「由表及里,由浅入深」的原则,将话题和某一社会现象、问题联系,或者论述某一重要素质的重要性(例如坚强意志力、好奇心等)。
漫画作文首段描述图画,不做论述;二段从原因、利弊、重要性方面论述,并加以具体例证。尾段重申观点,并提出建议措施。
文字形式的作文首段破解文字内涵,将抽象的名言或警句具体化。二段是将话题联系现实生活论述相关的社会问题或者能力素质的原因、现象、背景、重要性、利弊等。尾段再次重申观点加上建议措施即可。
四级高分作文(3)
网络对人际交流的影响
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180
首段:图画联系主题
Apparently, this cartoon can be naturally associated with the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate: Internet makes our communication convenient, but if individuals intend to maintain close and harmonious relationship with others, it is not advisable for them to chat merely by the
二段:现象+危害
In contemporary society, it has become a trend for a host of youngsters to spend much time in playing PC games, QQ and Meanwhile, an increasing number of parents find it rather difficult to have opportunities to chat with teenagers face to face, because of A case in point is the guy and his parents: he seldom sees his parents, and when his computer crashes, he will come downstairs to see his It is the Internet that does not enable teenagers to spend adequate time in caring about parents and significant As a matter of fact, intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the negative influences of Internet: cold or indifferent
尾段:观点+结论
As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to strengthen our communication in real Do bear in mind: electronic communication can never replace face-to-face (200词)
四级高分作文(4)
1、Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion 把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论……
很完全的答法,"take sth into consideration"短语的应用,加分。
2、Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion 考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论……
"Take into account sth"短语似乎又比上句的"take sth into consideration"提升了一个层次。
3、Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion 因此,自然我们得出以下结论。
"Hence"一词用在文章中大气吧,但别平时口语中用,否则即使老外也用一种看老古董的眼神看你。
再特意提一句:"we'd better"在这里不是“不得不”或“最好”的意思,而是一种自然而然,水到渠成的得出结论。
4、There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as 毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点。
短语"there is no doubt that"上线,同时运用我们的老朋友"as well as"增加看点。
5、All in all, we cannot live But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would 总之,我们没有……是无法生活的。但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题。
这句话一般用于作文结尾,属万能句式,句式较为简单,方便操作。
四级高分作文(5)
1、It is high time that we put an end to the (trend). 该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。
"It is high time" 打头,为该句增色。注:that 后跟虚拟语气,后跟动词的一般过去式,表示“是某人做。的时候了”或者“是某人不做。的时候了”
2、It is time to take the advice of and to put special emphasis on the improvement of 该是采纳……的建议,并对……的进展给予非常重视的时候了。
去掉一个"high",画风完全不一样,不用过去式,只需用"to do"来替代。
3、There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of 毫无疑问,对……问题应予以足够的重视。
"there is no doubt that"+被动还是蛮经典的组合。
4、Obviously, If we want to do , it is essential 显然,如果我们想做某事,我们需要……
这句有些老生常谈,稍微不“常”的就是"essential" 替代了"important"。
5、Only in this way can 只有这样,我们才能
Only+倒装,经典万能句式,还能看出点水平呢。
6、It must be realized 我们必须意识到
把人人都会的"I realized"升格为被动语态,省略了主语,监考老师绝对会眼前一亮的!
四级高分作文(6)
It must be pointed out that it is one of our basic State policies to control
population growth while raising the quality of the
It is (has been) estimated that the world's population could reach 6 billion by the end of the
It must be kept in mind that there is no secret of success but hard
It can be seen from this that there is no difficulty in the world we can
As is known, man is the product of
It is a common saying that man who has a settled purpose will surely
It is clear that the enemy has no desire for
It is hard to imagine how Edison managed to work twenty hours each
It's hard to say whether the plan is
There is no doubt that you will be helped by others if you have any
It seems certain that they have made a series of
It is said that bats have been using radar for millions of
To tell the truth, many mistakes we made could have been
As we know, it was not until recently that the problem was
It must be admitted that you haven't done what you promised to
In my opinion, this computer is different from that one you
It is certain that we have a long way to
All this shows that nothing can prevent us from reaching our
As far as we know, it took him more than a year to write the
It has been proved that every substance, no matter what it is, is made up of
It has been decided that we are going to build a railway whose base must be completed within this
It is obvious (evident) that the success of the innovation depends on our concerted
To be frank, whether you like it or not, you have no other
It is natural that one may have trouble expressing complicated ideas in simple
What is more important, the agreement they have negotiated is being carried
We will be successful as long as we
Frankly speaking, what you call the truth may not apply to things happening
It is true that we must redouble our efforts; otherwise we cannot catch up with the developed
I take it for granted that they will support this
I regard it as natural that they will agree to this
In a certain sense, a successful scientist is a person who is never satisfied with what he has
The oceans do not so much divide the world as unite
There is no denying the fact that the new management method has greatly increased the
Upon hearing the unexpected news, he was so surprised that he couldn't utter a
As the saying goes, nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to
Our goal must be Our goal can unquestionably be
Nothing can prevent us from realizing the four
Now in China, more and more families can afford to buy high-grade goods, such as washing machines, TV sets, video
No matter how difficult English may be, you should do your best tolearn
It can be said that without knowledge of science and technology, it is impossible to build a modern