作文怎么写才能写好(1)
当小作文完成,考生正式开始进入大作文的时候,你需要再仔仔细细把题目读一次,并且要去找一下题目中的关键词,有没有限定词/句,有没有绝对词。
所谓限定词,就是把题目的主题限定在一定范围内的词。
比如:The incidence of violence/crimes for young people is Give possible reasons and recommendations of punishment and measures to the , 这个题目中youth就是一个关键词,全文必须围绕青少年来分析其犯罪原因和惩罚方案,有的学生写到了失业率高,找不到工作,没有钱负担生活,所以去犯罪。
这个理由用于成年人的犯罪是很好,但大多数的青少年还在学习阶段,还没工作,自然谈不上失业的压力。
所以写这个话题,如果我们从家庭和学校的环境,以及媒体的影响这几个方面去着手会更切题。所谓绝对词,就是all, best, only, the most等词汇,题目中出现这样词汇,考生是很容易提出反驳的。
比如Some people think economic development is the only way to measure the success of a To what extend do you agree or 经济的发展确实是衡量一个政府是否成功的重要标志,我们可以写一到两个段落来说明经济的重要性,然后再写一个让步段,来反驳ONLY这个词,可以提出教育的普及,社会福利等方面也不可忽视,这样文章就更全面。
审题的第一第二步,花的时间不超过15秒。
作文怎么写才能写好(2)
这是所有写作老师都反复强调,而学生却总不愿意去做的一件事。不愿意列提纲的理由是大家总觉得40分钟时间宝贵,恨不得从第一秒就开始拼命写。但是,没有整理好思路,一边想一边写的结果是更加浪费时间,而且段落的发展越到后面越混乱。
在列提纲之初,肯定是先要brainstorming,问题是很多考生brainstorming完了就以为自己审完了题目。
其实brainstorming出来的很多点是有重复或者有因果关系的,如果以这些重复或有因果关系的点作为段落的主题句,那么写到后面一定会有问题。所以,我们应该花一点时间整理一下逻辑。
比如讨论出国留学的好处和坏处,大多数学生很能想到下列的几个点得到更好的教育;得到更好的工作;开阔眼界文化交流 学习语言。
其实这5个点,整理一下的话,可以发现1和5是并列的,2是其结果。3和4也同样是因果关系。
这样5个点变成2个点,每个点的论证也有了着落,写起来就会很顺。
而有些学生想到了1和2就觉得自己有来两个段落了,立刻开始动笔,写完主体第一段,再开始第二段的时候,突然发现其实得到更好的工作是更好教育的一个结果,如果要把这个段落写清楚就得把第一段再重复一遍。
综上所述,题目审得好,提纲列得好,就能下笔如有神,反之就可能出现百转千折,不知所云的情况。
祝愿考生能够顺利通过考试。
作文怎么写才能写好(3)
【写作要求】
现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生,我们应节约资源,保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起,做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low--carbon Life”为题,写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。
内容包括:
地球的污染越来越严重,我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。
你是怎样从身边小事做起,做到“低碳生活”的。如:每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。
号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。
作文要求:
不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的题目已经给出,不计入总词数。
My Low--carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse
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My Low-carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse Many trees are cut down, and water and air are As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce
Firstly, I often walk to It can reduce air Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste
I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more
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【写作要求】
某英语报开展“How to Deal with Our Study Problems”征文比赛,请你根据提示的内容,简要描述并适当发表自己的观点,写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下:
尽管我们常常感到有压力,但是应该找到合适的方式来解压。可以选择穿像蓝色和白色一样的冷色调来使我们自己感到放松;
我们应该足够细心,因为“失之毫厘,谬以千里”
也应该在课业和业余爱好之间取得平衡,试着安排好自己的空余时间;
任何时候都不要失去信心。通过努力学习,我们会取得大的进步。
有问题时,我们…
要求: 内容须包含所有要点,语句通顺,意思连贯;
词数90个左右;
第5点的内容需展开合理想象,用2句话补充完整。
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How to Deal with Our Study Problems
Although we often feel stressed, we should find suitable ways to deal with
We can wear calm colours like blue and white to make us feel We should be careful enough, because a miss is as good as a mile. We should also achieve a balance between schoolwork and Try to plan your spare time Dont lose heart at any You will make great progress through hard
When having problems, we can ask people around us for Its not wise to keep our worries to
作文怎么写才能写好(5)
【写作要求】
假设不久前你们学校为贫困地区的孩子们筹款举办了一次慈善行活动。请据此在制定的位置上,以“Walk for children in poor areas”为题,为某中学生英文报写一篇报道,内容要点如下:
目的:为贫困地区的孩子们筹款
10月23日,星期六
路径:学校—市中心
简况:学生把自己分成四人一组,出发前计划好了一切,步行很艰辛,但活动过程中大家互相帮助,互相支持。最终在许多人的帮助下,筹得善款5万多元。
感受:每个人都很累,但都很高兴,因为…
注意: 报道须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
第5要点的内容须用至少2句话展开合理想象,作适当发挥;
词数80个左右。
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Walk for children in poor areas
Not long ago, our school organized a charity walk to raise money for children in poor
It was on Saturday, 23 rd We walked from the school to the centre of the Before the walk, we grouped ourselves into a team of four and planned everything It was a hard (tough) But during the walk, we supported and helped each With the help of many people, we raised over (more than) 50,000 yuan in the
We all felt tired, but we were very Because it was a meaningful experience and it was an excellent chance to learn team
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【写作要求】
“保护环境,人人有责”,你想成为一名绿色使者吗?请行动起来吧!其实,环保就在我们身边。请以“How to Be a Greener Person” 为题,写一篇短文。
注意:
表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
短文词数90 左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:draw, both sides of paper, plastics, water tap, collect, waste, can, sort
How to Be a Greener Person?
It’s our duty to protect our environment around
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How to be a greener person
It’s our duty to protect the inviyonment around
When we go to school, we should ride a bike or take a When we go out for activities, we shouldn’t step on the We cant draw When we go shopping, wed better use a cloth At home we can save water and When we leave a room, we should turn off the At school we can collect wast paper and recycle things, such as bottles, cans and plastic We shoudnt listen to pop music or spit in
Lets do something to protect our
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【写作要求】
“灿烂星空,谁是真的英雄?”做出惊天动地业绩的人是英雄,为追求真理献出生命的人是英雄,在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄……
一.Dr Norman Bethune
(国籍): Canada
taking photos
stories: saved a lot of Chinese people; opened hospitals; invented medical tools
二.Liu Xiang
China
singing
stories: won the first
gold medal in the men' s 110m hurdles event in Athens; set a world record in the same event in Lausanne
从上面信息卡中选择一位英雄,以The Hero in My Heart为题写一篇短文。
要求:①包含所选信息卡上的内容;②适当拓展,如学英雄的感想、行动等;③不能出现表明你身份的信息;④词数80左右,不含已给出部分。
The Hero in My Heart
As we know, most people have heroes in their For me,
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The Hero in My Heart
As we know, most people have heroes in their For me, Dr Norman Bethune is the hero in my He was a great doctor from
Dr Bethune was good at performing And taking photos was his In 1938, he came to He opened hospitals and invented medical He worked so hard that he saved thousands of Chinese He didn’t stop to take care of his own injured hand and
I am deeply moved by his So I’ll work hard today and do my best to help
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The Hero in My Heart
As we know, most people have heroes in their For me, Liu Xiang is the hero in my He is a famous Chinese
Liu Xiang is good at In 20XX, he won his first Olympic gold medal in the men,s 110m hurdles event in Then, he set a world record in the same event in Besides training and taking part in competitions, Liu Xiang also likes singing and he sings
With his hard work, he is winning competitions one after This encourages me to study harder from now
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【写作要求】
请以“My Favourite Great Book”为题, 根据下面的问题写一篇80个词左右的短文, 注意适当表达自己的看法。
Who is the writer of the great book?
What is the main idea of the book?
Who are the important characters?
What’s the theme of the story?
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My Favourite Great Book
My favourite great book is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark
Tom Sawyer is a lively and clever He lives with his aunt His aunt is strict with him, so he runs to an island in the middle of the Mississippi River with two friends, Huck and With Huck, he goes looking for treasure; with Becky, he gets lost in a And finally Tom and Huck find a box of Tom is the hero of the story, but there are other important Becky is pretty with fair Huck is Tom’s best friend, and Injun Joe is the bad man of the
The theme of the story is to do with children growing up and becoming more