作文小建议(推荐6篇)
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2024-06-20 07:15:06
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作文小建议(1)

小时候,我最喜欢去家里附近的小溪里面去摸鱼、抓虾和抓螃蟹,我依稀记得我还在记忆中的小溪中学会了游泳,这一切的回忆真的是非常美好,可惜我再也不能见到记忆中那条美丽的小溪了。为什么呢?因为这几年,家乡的发展速度越来越快,为了能够建上成群的高楼大厦,我最爱的小溪满满消失出我的视野了。

每天上学的时候,我经常发现道路边上的树叶沾上了许多灰尘,天空总是灰蒙蒙的,道路边上的垃圾随处可见,有些白色垃圾还迎风飞舞,我认为为了经济发展来牺牲我们的大环境是不值得的!所有,我想关于环境的保护提出几点意见和建议:

第一,保护环境,增加绿化。对于企业的排污应该合理化,与此同时,我们要多种植一些花草树木,这样,不仅可以让我们的生活增添绿色,而且美化了我们的生活环境,给我们带来清新的空气。这样,我们的家乡会越来越美丽,生活会越来越美好!

第二,保护环境,从现在做起。首先,我觉得我们应该从小我出发,改掉不良的生活习惯:我们无论是在学校还是家里,甚至在其他公共场所,应该遵守社会公德,不乱丢乱扔,随意吐痰,随意刻画,遇到有人出现了这种行为,我们应该上前制止他,并合理劝导。这样,我深信我们的环境会越变越好。

第三,保护环境,人人有责。保护环境并不是一个人的事情,也不是几个人事情,也不仅仅是一个家庭或者一个机构、一个学校的事情,而是每一个人的责任和义务。俗话说,团结就是力量,我认为我们一定要团结起来,三个臭皮匠胜过一个诸葛亮,全国甚至是全世界的人团结起来,这股强大的力量绝对会掀起一股强烈的热潮。

最后,我会从自我做起,从小事做起,从点滴做起,我希望我可以为美好的环境奉献出自己一小份力量。并且,我相信,我们的家园一定会变得更加美好,所以,让我们一起努力,一起加油,共同建造我们的美丽家园吧!


作文小建议(2)

1)雅思小作文开头永远用一般现在时,简单改写一下题干要求即可,但千万不能单纯照搬因为这样会不被计入最后字数从而严重影响得分。

2)雅思写作主体和结尾部分跟着文章中所给的时间而定,是过去的时间就用过去时,将来的状态就用将来时。

建议在小作文审题的时候,就将时间画出,并将需用时态写在图旁,这样每次看一眼图都能有效提示自己注意所用时态。在真正写作的时候,可以注意把时间当成小跟班,每次说话的时候注意一下时间时态就不成问题了。


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Task 2 Question: Some people think that the government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists includes painters, musicians, poets, however, other people think that is a waste of money for providing this State your

To be of assistance or not, it indeed is debatable if artists deserve and require funding by the Firstly, I acknowledge that the benefits from artists and poets can enrich our everyday lives in so many different ways; otherwise our life would have been a lot drabber without

Any genuine artist most certainly deserves some form of aid and there can not be any doubt about that, however, whether they require government assistance is another issue Contrary to popular belief it seems to be that not all artists and literary personalities are wealthy, and most renowned personalities are deservedly rich and

While the other large group of artists is neither rich nor famous, they do continue to produce the art works as for the passion and often the passion is what drives It would be ridiculous to think that any kind of financial incentives could power their However, not many of them are able to take up their passion on a full time basis because they cannot afford It is import to note that most creative artists are made, and were not born It is the vagaries of life & struggles that they have to face which fuels their creativity, in the process they need to mature into renowned to be an artist or a When they do and when their work is recognized, there will not be any dearth of money or

In my opinion, it would be criminal to take away this very drive and shun their Having said that, I do believe that they need to have some kind of incentives, it can be in the way of appreciation and opportunity to present their talent to the rest of the This could be done in various ways, for instance, giving tax incentives to amateur artists and writers or financial rebates in government owned auditoriums to stage their

In talking about artists in Australia, which has a concrete social security system in place to take care of all kinds of basic needs, any kind of added financial incentives are not only an added burden on the It would be an issue to find out worthy beneficiaries and there will be enough crooks who will misuse any well intended government assistance Every human being craves for recognition and money happens to be one of the means towards this end, however, as I mentioned in the beginning it is more important to acknowledge their work than provide financial

On the other hand, as a Chinese, my perception of the government’s assistance is more Firstly, we need to give artists a definition and how do you classify a person who is an In essence, calligraphy, poetry, music and art they all can be extended to a person who writes well, paints well in his/her To extend this artist sense further, can we say a singer is an artist? Well, there are many pop song and folk music singers in In the same way, a dancer, a talk show’s talent, a movie star, the director, the photographer they can all be And this number of artists would add up to whole population of How could the Chinese government provide any assistance without any discrimination to those artists in every classification? I personally do not believe our government has enough financial ability to accommodate this wide ganging number of

As a Chinese I can see that in my country, there is still a big gap between the poor and the rich, I would rather government’s financial assistance be directed toward the poor, this does not mean that I would think to provide assistance to artists is a waste of My point is that while we can give a true definition of artists, government should use our taxes in a way to be more accountable



作文小建议(4)

有一次,我们班上开中队会。队会题目是“怎样止住吃零食的习惯”。很多同学都举手发言,有的说:“谁吃零食就 罚钱。”有的说:“谁吃零食就不让进教室。”可是张老师认为 这些办法都不好。我突然想出了一个好办法。于是我举手发 言,对老师说:“我建议咱们自己办一个‘小银行’,让同学 们把自己的零花钱存入我们的‘小银行”,然后从班费里扣出 几十元钱,做利息。”老师点头称是,同学们也一致同意。于 是,老师选了十个做事很细心的同学当“小银行”的工作人 员,还选我当了 “小行长”呢!从那以后,我们十一个同学 就忙碌起来了,整天都有事做。我们的课桌前每大总是拥挤 着一群同学,有的是取钱的,有的是存钱的,我们的课桌简 直成了银行柜台。

自从办了这个“小银行”,我们班上的同学再也不像原来 那样爱吃零食了。学校门口的小摊上的东西,对我们班上的 同学来说,不再是那么诱人了。

班主任张老师经常抚摸着我的头,用温和的语气对我说: “你这孩子,就是喜欢动脑筋,无论什么事,只要问你,准能 想出好办法,有些事连我都想不出来呢!”说完,我们俩都笑 了,笑声传到整个校园,传到四面八方。


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四年级下1单元苏教版作文:春游南湖小建议

风儿低低地服过树梢,穿过花间,徘徊在高高的蓝天下。几朵淡淡的浮云,飘过晴朗的天际,一下子就被风吹散了。我在漫步行走,欣赏着这南湖的美景。

首先,应入眼帘的是那几棵柱子,那柱子又粗又高,花团锦簇,好像彩色的魔法棒,使南湖变得生机勃勃,一片明艳。

快走几步,就到了湖旁,湖水又清又绿,微风吹过,湖面荡起一圈圈粼粼的波纹,几只小鱼在水中嬉戏,好像给镜子镶上红宝石。湖边的树映衬着湖水,又好像给淡雅的水墨画上增添了美丽的色彩。

我一路奔过了桥,就到了亭子。坐在亭子里观赏南湖全景,花柱犹如一支簪子,草丛、绿叶、枝条就是花边,而那一潭静默的湖水好像镶在上面的翠玉......

长廊旁的大树,直挺挺地站立伸着粗壮的手臂,拥抱着一树的小芽儿,芽儿有淡绿、浅绿,还有墨绿的,远远望去深深浅浅,交织出一片绿的生机。朋友,春日南湖风景秀丽,芳草鲜美,你可曾驻足惊叹?放慢步子欣赏一番,你就会发现春日南湖如诗如画的美。


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我的小建议五年级作文 篇1

敬爱的校领导:

我是一个六年级学生,即将小学毕业,离开母校。心中有些恋恋不舍,但是为了使母校的明天更美好,我希望您在百忙之中能抽时间看看我的建议:

一、增加电脑课

现在是科技突飞的信息时代,在电脑上我们可以学到课本上没有的知识,从互联网上可以更多地了解社会,了解世界。所以我建议母校把一周一节改为一周两节。

二、保护绿色,反对破坏绿色的不文明行为

据统计,我国现在水土流失面积达40%,沙漠和沙化面积达160万平方公里,每年损失土壤大5.5亿吨!这些数字告戒人们要保护绿色。为此,我向母校建议:

每年植树节开展一次植树活动;开展“保护绿色”的主题队会,评出“绿色小卫士”。这样促进小学生环保意识!

三、黑板改成白板

多年来学校使用粉笔写字,在擦黑板的时候,粉笔灰在空中翩翩起舞,对老师同学的身体造成伤害。使用白板,用水彩笔在上面写字,一点灰尘也没有。可以减少粉笔灰对我们的伤害,所以我建议校长您能把黑板改成白板。

以上是我对母校的几点建议,衷心希望母校能考虑并采纳我的建议。

我的小建议五年级作文 篇2

春天到了 , 到处是春的踪迹 , 我建议老师带我们去春的田野里看看 .

油菜花像金子似的 , 一簇簇 , 一丛丛 , 一束束。放眼望去到处是金灿灿的油菜花,像在田里铺上了金子。那浓浓的香味,更是令人陶醉。

如果你走近看看,那油菜花井然有序。淡淡的雅致而明快的色彩更让人心旷神怡。东边有一个垂柳,风一吹,像是披上了半透明的薄沙。像姑娘的秀发、青翠,柔软,细长,柳枝上长满了鹅黄色的嫩叶,像姑娘头上插的小花。

疏稀的草丛中,有很多小草刚刚醒来,在伸懒腰有些急性子的花争奇斗艳,几只蜜蜂、蝴蝶开始了他们永不停息的工作。

西边有一个湖,湖水在阳光的照耀下,更美丽了!坐在草地上,望着蓝天,小燕子从南方赶来,斜着身子在飞。还有几只横掠过湖面,偶尔沾了一下水面。有的小燕子飞倦了,在电线上休息,多么像五线谱,停着的燕子成了音符,谱写出了春天的歌。

心动了吧!心动不如行动,赶快来吧!所以我建议你们去春游。

我的小建议五年级作文 篇3

快要春游了,同学们,你们想去哪儿呢?今天,我给大家介绍一个地方——那儿有可爱的鸽子,迷人的喷泉,美丽的草坪和动听的音乐……

下面,先跟我这个你一进门,就能看见天空中有成千上万只鸽子。它们时而在地上徘徊,等待着人们给它们送食物;时而停在石碑上眺望着美景;时而学着雄鹰的样子,在高空中展翅飞翔。最有趣的是,它们会不时地落在你的肩膀上啄几下,很快就把你当成了朋友。

前面的一块石碑旁围绕着一圈喷泉。喷泉伴随着动听的音乐喷着水,它时而高,时而低。再走进看,喷泉的水从半空中落下来,多么像一根根针落入了水中,再加上那悦耳的“啪啦啪啦…… ”声,更是让你感到心旷神怡。

喷泉的周围有一片碧绿的草坪。小草发芽了,它探出小脑袋,仿佛在对我们说:“欢迎!欢迎!快来我们这坐坐吧!”草地上,人们千姿百态。有的三五成群坐着,围在一起聊天;有的躺着,望着天空中自由自在飞翔着的鸽子;还有的伴着动听的音乐,在草地上翩翩起舞。

同学们,知道我说的是哪儿了吗?你们想去那儿真正的游览一番吗?

这就是闻名南京的人间天堂——音乐台。希望老师和同学们采纳我的建议,去音乐台走一走,看一看。