记叙的英语作文(实用5篇)
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记叙的英语作文(1)

记叙文是记人叙事的文章,它主要是用于说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果,即我们通常所说的五个“ W ”( what, who, when, where, why )和一个“ H ”( how )。记叙文的重点在于“述说”和“描写”,因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚,描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。

一、记叙文的特点

1. 叙述的人称

英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人读后感到真实可信,如身临其境。如:

The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that I quickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.

用第三人称叙述,优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制,而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前,文章的客观性很强。如:

Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain with nothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then he had a good idea.

2. 动词的时态

在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的'是动词的过去的,这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。

3. 叙述的顺序

记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙,都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作,较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得平铺直叙,读起来平淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果,让所叙之事跌宕起伏,使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃,从而为文章所吸引,深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当,则容易弄巧成拙,使文章结构散乱,头绪不清,让读者不知所云。

4. 叙述的过渡

过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如:

In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing some housework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most was the sunrise.

The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizon were turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last it broke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became red and bright.

What a moving and unforgettable scene!

5. 叙述与对话

引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述,可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态,使记叙生动、有趣,使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果:

I was in the kitchen, and I was cooking something. Suddenly I heard a loud noise from the front. I thought maybe someone was knocking the door. I asked who it was but I heard no reply. After a while I saw my cat running across the parlor. I realized it was the cat. I felt released.

这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:

I was in the kitchen cooking something. "Crash!" a loud noise came from the front. Thinking someone was knocking at the door, I asked, "Who?" No reply. After a while, I saw my cat running across the parlor. "It's you." I said, quite released.

二、写好记叙文的基本要领

1. 头绪分明,脉络清楚

写好记叙文,首先要头绪分明,脉络清楚,明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析,弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程,然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都应该跟上述五个“ W ”和一个“ H ”有关。尽管不是每篇记叙文里都必须包括这些“ W ”和“ H ”,但动笔之前,围绕五个“ W ”和“ H ”进行构思是必不可少的。

2. 突出中心,详略得当

在文章的框架确定后,对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍,应该从表现文章主题的需要出发,分清主次,定好详略。要突出重点,详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节,略写粗述那么非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而使情节罗列化,使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题,也需要一定的技巧。如:

One night a man came to our house and told me, "There is a family with eight children. They have not eaten for days." I took some food with me and went.

When I finally came to that family, I saw the faces of those little children disfigured (破坏外貌) by hunger. There was no sorrow or sadness in their faces, just the deep pain of hunger.

I gave the rice to the mother. She divided the rice in two, and went out, carrying half the rice. When she came back, I asked her, "Where did you go?" she gave me this simple answer, "To my neighbors — they are hungry also!"

3. 用活语言,准确生动

记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。

原文:

One day Xiaoqiang was wandering away. He was soon lost among people and traffic. He could not find the way back home and started crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by found him standing alone in front of a shop and crying. They went up to Xiaoqiang and asked him what had happened. Xiaoqiang told them how he got lost and where he lived. The two students decided to take him home. Mother was pleased to see Xiaoqiang come back safe and sound. She invited the two students into the house and gave them some money, but they didn't take it. She served them with tea but they left.

修改后:

The other day, five-year-old Xiaoqiang left home alone and wandered happily in the street. After some time, he felt hungry so he wanted to go back home. But he found he was lost among the crowded people and heavy traffic. When he could not find the way home, he started and crying. Just then, two young students who were passing by from school found him sanding crying in front of a shop. They immediately went up to him.

"Little boy, why are you standing here crying?" they asked.

"I want Mom, I go home." said the boy, still crying.

"Don't worry, we'll send you home."

And they spent the next two hours looking for the boy's house. With the help of a policeman, they finally found it.

When the worried mother saw her son come back safe and sound, she was so thankful and she invited the students into her house. Gratefully, she offered them some money, saying it was a way to express her thanks, but the young students firmly refused it and left without even a cup of tea.


记叙的英语作文(2)

在平凡的`学习、工作、生活中,大家都尝试过写作文吧,作文一定要做到主题集中,围绕同一主题作深入阐述,切忌东拉西扯,主题涣散甚至无主题。相信许多人会觉得作文很难写吧,下面是小编收集整理的我的第一份兼职英语记叙文作文,欢迎大家分享。

The long summer vacation only lasted a few days, and I stayed at home doing nothing. So I decided to call my little buddy to find a summer job. The hot wind blowing in the hot summer was just a few minutes away, and my body began to sweat constantly.

We know that the job is not so easy to imagine now, we saw a lot of the street between the Human Resources Inc, although there are a lot of recruitment information, but many panies do not recruit summer workers only recruit permanent jobs, some for a summer job, too far, screening for so long no one for us at this time, in the fierce sun, we already sweating, but we still insist, finally pays off, we finally found a suitable for our summer jobs, but the pany is so close to our home, we have to walk with long time.

But this pany will also sign the contract through the interview, and I'm excited and excited by my little panion. We don't have any work experience. This is our first interview.

We found that when waiting for the interview, teams have told us about many of the older students, they are like us, finally it was my turn to go to the interview, sitting inside a person, I think he is probably a manager, actually also does not have that what we want to interview the manager asked the plex. A few simple questions, such as you satisfied with the salary, you do not eat the bitter of such problems, interview.

The manager will announce the result when all the interviews are finished. When the manager came out, I was so nervous that I could feel my heart beating fast, and I was relieved when he read my name. I picked up with my little friends, but in fact, we found that most of the candidates were selected.

After a day's training, we will be ready for work in a few days. In fact, the training is only a brief note of attention, the allocation of shifts. When we are hesitant to work in the daytime or night, there are a lot of students chose the night shift, because they feel cool at night than during the day, when the work is not so hot. So we decided to take the night shift.

When I got home, I told my mother that I was going to work on the night shift, and my mother was in a bad mood. She said it was hard work on the night shift and asked if I could hold on. I was full of confidence and said there was no problem, but I got the first day of work, although it was a little cooler than the daytime, but the workshop was quiet and terrible at night.

When I thought it was about daybreak, I took a look at the time before I found out it was less than 12 in the middle of the night. Oh, my God, how long is it? What time does it break?! After midnight we can go to the dining hall, but inside the dish we flattered, see what no appetite, we hurriedly picking a few mouthfuls of rice do not want to eat, it can take a few egg go, or we'll be hungry work.

Although this work looks very easy, is to give the milk packing, but only a few days my fingers began to blister, and at night to sleep during the day, I was in the day is very difficult to sleep, not the spirit of the work at night. I started eating with my little buddy, and just a week after we decided to quit.

Fortunately, that contract at least a week to pay, we just work for a week, or we don’t nothing for this week, when I got the money, the heart is feeling, the money is really not easy, this work was a experience. And I also know how hard it is for my parents to work. I think only by working hard can I find a good job in the future to repay them.


记叙的英语作文(3)

初中英语记叙作文范文篇1

How time flies! It has been three years since I came to the school. My school is beautiful and there are many beautiful flowers and trees. The teachers are so kind though there is always too much homework. My classmates are all very friendly to each other. We always help each other. I have learned a lot from them and made a lot of friends. I enjoy my school life. However, I don't do well in math. I’ll try my best to study math during the summer holidays. Now I'm going to say goodbye to my teachers and classmates. I'll miss my school life.

时间过得真快!我来到这个学校已经三年了。我的学校很美,有很多美丽的花和树。虽然老师总是布置很多的作业,但他们还是很好的。我的同学也都很友好。我们总是互相帮助。我从中学到了很多东西,交了很多朋友。我喜欢我的学校生活。但是,我数学学得不好。我会努力在暑假期间好好学数学的。现在我要跟我的老师和同学们说再见了。我会想念我的学校生活的。

初中英语记叙作文范文篇2

My name is Tom Lee. I am fourteen. I study at No. 4 ICT School, not a very big school. There are about six hundred students in my school. There is only one building in our school, but we have a very big playground. There are ten computer labs and one library in the building, and there are many computer books in the library. We often go there in the afternoon.

我的名字是汤姆李。我十四岁。我在第二通信学校学习,不是非常大的一个学校。在我学校大约有六百名学生。我们学校只有一栋楼,但是我们有一个非常大的操场。在楼里面有十间电脑室和一个图书馆,图书馆里也有很多计算机的书籍。我们经常在下午去那里。

We are busy every day. We have four classes in the morning, and two in the afternoon.

我们每天都很忙。我们上午有四节课,下午两节。

ICT is my favorite subject and our ICT teachers are very patient and helpful. I am good at ICT, but bad in history.

通信是我最喜欢的学科而且我们学学校的通信老师是很有耐心也很乐于助人的。我的通信学得很好,但是历史则学得不好。

初中英语记叙作文范文篇3

I have come back from the USA. From my diary you will know that I’ve been to many places in the States and I’ve tried different means of transportation. Here is a list:

我从美国回来了。从我的日记中你会知道我在美国去过很多地方,坐过不同的交通工具。这里是一个单子:

I have taken the subway to the Central Park and I have enjoyed the beautiful views there.

我坐地铁到中央公园,我喜欢那里的美景。

I have taken a ferry to Liberty Island and I have visited the Statue of Liberty.

我坐渡轮到自由岛,参观过自由女神像。

I have taken a bike to Chinatown and I have eaten different kinds of Chinese food.

我乘自行车去唐人街,我已经吃了各种各样的中国菜。

I have flied to San Francisco and I have walked on the Golden Gate Bridge.

我飞到过旧金山,也走过金门大桥。

初中英语记叙作文范文篇4

Last Saturday, my parents and I went to visit my grandma. My grandma was glad about our coming, so she had already prepared a lot of fresh fruits and delicious dishes. We had a happy time at the table.

上周六,我和父母一起去看望我奶奶。对于我们的到来,我奶奶很高兴,所以她准备了很多新鲜的水果和美味的菜肴。我们吃饭的时候过得很开心。

In the afternoon, we climbed Daming Mountain. The scenery there was so beautiful. Then we had dinner in a restaurant. After dinner, we went to see a film. How interesting it was to see a film in the open air! Everyone was so cheerful that laughed so happily.

下午的时候我们去爬大明山。那里的风景太美了。之后我们在一家餐馆吃晚饭。晚饭后,我们去看了一场电影。在户外看电影是多么有趣啊!每个人都非常高兴,都笑得那么的开心。

What a wonderful weekend I had. I would remember it forever.

这是一个多么美好的一个周末。我会永远记住的。


记叙的英语作文(4)

好人好事英语记叙作文篇1

In life, there are many good things to praise, to learn. These good deeds make the world a better and more beautiful world. The good people around us have a lot of good things, everywhere.

On a hot summer day, the sun is heartily sway their light and energy, people tired and can't open his eyes because, sends out heat, let people sweat. At this time, a white haired grandmother is stations, bus, and beside the old woman have a young man, he is also waiting for the bus. Young man wearing a white shirt, wearing a peaked cap, holding the heavy luggage. The hot weather makes people can't resist, make people feel very irritable. At this time, are waiting for the bus granny seems to withstand the hot, her pale face, general weakness and looked very tired. Suddenly, the old woman sat down, his hands touched the ground, and then collapsed to the ground. See the old grandma beside the LAD (reprinted from the Chinese newspaper network , please keep this mark.) Inverted in, demur does not say, quickly put down hand heavy luggage, walked over to lift up the old grandmother, immediately the old woman admitted to the hospital.

After the doctor's diagnosis, the grandmother is a heat stroke, heat stroke because the weather is too hot, the old grandmother can not withstand, so it was a heat stroke. Fortunately, sent in a timely manner, or there will be the danger of life. After the doctor and the young man with the help of the old grandmother gradually improve, feel much better. She was very grateful, said to the young man, "young man, you are good, not you, now I will not be so fast, do not know how I will. Thank you, young man." "No thanks, this is what we should do, believe that today, if I am not in the scene, you will be rescued. If it is to be replaced by others, it will do so." The good people around us, everywhere.

In life, we should not only be good at discovering these good deeds, but also to be a good person. Let our world is full of love.

好人好事英语记叙作文篇2好人好事英语记叙作文篇3

It was one day morning in May.Xiao Han paid a visit to his friends.On his way he found a crowd of onlookers had gathered,then he just went and investigate.He saw a woman lying on the street,for being hurt in the traffic

accident.He called the driver to stop right away and sent her to the hospital.Then he paid the treatment expenses by himself and tried to contact her family.After all,her husband got to the hospital and has learnt that what had happened to his wife.When he was willing to express his thanks to him,Xiao Han had already gone.


记叙的英语作文(5)

2014 年已经告别我们了,我们将迎来新的一年。2014 年我学会了许多东西,也改掉了许多坏习惯。2014 年我学会了什么呢?我学会了帮妈妈做家务,比如自己叠被子、自己穿衣、扫地、拖地……我的坏习惯也改掉了不少。比如以前做作业慢吞吞的,做作业马马虎虎的,现在作业效率变快了,准确度也提高了不少呢。

我还学会了英语,从一开始的一窍不通到后来我慢慢地熟悉了英语。以前觉得很难,现在觉得非常容易,因为我知道了它的诀窍。

我的足球也踢得越来越好。以前总是被教练凶,现在不仅踢好了,而且越来越快了。我还在空闲时帮助妈妈带我的弟弟,让妈妈歇一歇。

我的2014 年学到了许多东西,希望在新的一年里我学到的东西会更多,再见2014。

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