高分作文结尾（1）
from this, other ways/ aspects/functions
除此之外，另外一些方法(方面、作业)是……
例句：Besides, other ways are also under
除此之外，其他方法也是在考虑中。
last but not the least
最后但并非不重要的是……
例句：The last but not the least is that we should get up
最后但并非不重要的是我们要早起。
the one hand,,on the other hand,
一方面……，另一方面……
例句：On the one hand, we need to be helpful, on the other hand, we should be on the alert to protect
一方面我们要乐于助人，另一方面我们要提高警惕保护自己。
less important/ harmful
同样重要(有害)
例句：No less important is saving
节约用水也是同样重要的。
, you may ask, why indispensable/ necessary?
但你也许会问，为什么……很重要(必不可少、有必要)?
例句：But, you may ask, why is water important?
但你也许会问，为什么水很重要?
Few things can approach/ equal/ match/
没有什么能与……相比
例句：Nothing can approach my pet
没有什么能与我的宠物狗相比。
the fact that most of them , I would like to
尽管大部分人喜欢……，我还是倾向于……
例句：Despite the fact that most of them like swimming, I would like to choose
尽管大部分人喜欢游泳，我还是倾向于跑步。
differ greatly on their attitudes towards this Some maintain Others, on the contrary, hold the opinion Personally, I stand on the side
人们对于这个问题的态度差异很大。有人坚持认为……与此相反，有人认为……就我个人而言，我站在……这一边。
例句：People differ greatly on their attitudes towards this Some maintain that living in the big city is Others, on the contrary, hold the opinion that living in the small country is Personally, I stand on the side of the
人们对于这个问题的态度差异很大。有人坚持认为居住在大城市比较好。与此相反，有人认为小城镇比较好。就我个人而言，我站在后者这一边。
understand the truth , it is necessary to
为了了解……的真相，有必要分析……
例句：To understand the truth of air pollution, it is necessary to analyze automobile
为了了解大气污染的真相，有必要对汽车尾气进行分析。
people have different opinions/ views/ ideas Some people take it for granted On the contrary, some other people
对于……的观点因人而异。有人想当然的认为……相反，有人则认为……
例句：Different people have different opinion about choosing living Some people take it for granted that big city is On the contrary, some other people think small town is the perfect
对于居住地的选择因人而异。有人想当然的认为大城市更好。相反，有人则认为小城镇是最好的选择。
have been brought up believe /myth
我们从下到大都相信这种说法……然而……
例句：We have been brought up believe that study is the most important Yet playing is also very
我们从小到大都相信学习是最重要的这种说法。然而玩耍也是很重要的。
the fact , it by no means indicates
尽管……是事实，但是并不意味着……
例句：Given the fact that book is important, it by no means indicates that it is
尽管书籍很重要是事实，但是并不意味着书就是一切。
reasons can explain this First of all, , Furthermore,
一些原因可以解释这一趋势。首先，……;其次，……;另外，……
例句：Some reasons can explain this First of all, air pollution is more and more Secondly, water is also Furthermore,animals are in
一些原因可以解释这一趋势。首先，大气污染越来越严重;其次，水资源也被污染了;另外很多动物也濒临灭绝。
to/ Owing to/ Due to/ Because of/ As a result of
因为……
例句：Thanks to my mom, I become an excellent
因为我妈妈，我成为了一个优秀的人。
are many reasons explaining this As for me, I consider the following as the typical To begin with, Secondly, Last but not least,
有很多原因可以解释该问题。就我而已，我认为以下原因比较典型。一个是……;第二个是……;最后，……
例句：There are many reasons explaining this As for me, I consider the following as the typical To begin with, air Secondly,water Last but not least, ocean
有很多原因可以解释该问题。就我而已，我认为以下原因比较典型。一个是大气污染;第二个是水污染;最后是海洋污染。
one can deny the fact
没有人可以否认……的事实。
例句：No one can deny the fact that we are
没有人可以否认我们是兄弟的事实。
Rumor has it
据说……
例句：Rumor has it that they have got
据说他们已经结婚了。
are coming to realize the importance They have begun to try their best We believe
人们开始意识到……的重要性，正竭力……。我们相信……
例句：People are coming to realize the importance of They have begun to try their best to work on We believe that science will make our life
人们开始意识到科学的重要性，正竭力钻研科学。我们相信科学会使我们的生活更美好。
不管怎么样……
例句：Anyway, we are
不管怎么样，我们都是兄弟。
高分作文结尾（2）
结束全文的五种方式：
A、领导式 Bossy Style
领导就是领导，一拿起话筒就特有“范儿”。托福作文的领导式结尾一般都是回顾主体段的观点.偶尔高兴了还会再小展望一下未来。
比如Kaplan中这个关于“班级规模到底应该多大合适”的结尾段就是纯粹的领导式(但是请注意它没有照搬上文的词句，而是paraphrase和summary，这一点请要当“领导”的朋友们切记):
Reducing class size is not just a matter of relieving(减轻) It will enhance what a student learns and even the person they learn it from can learn from this (The End)
很大牌吧?两句话就结束全文，根本不给你反驳的机会。
再看这个处级干部:
In conclusion, university education should not be made I believe in that because the colleges need the money to make them If the universities are free, taxes will be raised and people will have to pay for things they might not
此外，领导式结尾中还有一种极度嚣张的形式，已经接近给读者最后通牒，所以这样的结尾也可以称为“大爷式”。
比如Princeton Review中的这个结尾段，就是典型的mogul style:
In conclusion, I have shown that it's better for teachers to encourage their students to question Without curiosity there can be no
领导式结尾非常适合作“一边倒”作文的结尾段，不过要注意这种写法除了转述上文外，最好能再深入写一点相关的引申，这样显得结尾更充实。
B、家长式 Tender-loving-care Style
家长式结尾也同样带有较强的概括性，但语气比领导式湿馨很多.有坚实的群众基础，让考官接受起来不会有屈辱感。
比如下面这个Education类结尾:
For those reasons, we can safely conclude that classmates are too important a factor to ignore and they have more important influence than teachers on students' success at
是不是?完全以理服人。
句句都是暖人心的话。由于家长式结尾特有的温情一面，它既适合一边倒的结束语，也适合作折中式的结尾。不过需要注意:家长也毕竟还是有决策权的，不能完全让孩子(你的读者)去自己选择.所以家长式结尾还是要有明显倾向性的.只不过是用比较容易接受的方式说出来而已了。
C、愤青式 The beat generation style
看名宇就很好理解，对话题冷眼看待.有一种自命清高的书生气。但如果确实语言功底不错，而且确信能把自己不同流合污的价值取向表达清晰，用这种结尾倒真是相当不俗的。多给大家看个例子:
Needless to say, both sources are important to But in my opinion, knowledge from experience is even more important because without experience, it's almost impossible to understand knowledge from books'or to understand how to apply this knowledge in real
这种结尾通常是先用Apparently, , to say,…/It goes without saying 等表达在结尾段首对辩论话题表示不屑，然后再用However,…, / Still,…这类词汇引出一两句表明自己态度的结束语。
与家长式的“可正可反.不同，愤青式特别适合一边倒的高分作文结尾段。但注意写好它的关键并不是激动地发泄对社会的不满.而是有论证依据的、建立在充分说理基础上的表达改变现状的合理愿望。
D、小秘式 Gold-Digger Style
这种结尾的特色就是.顺着说“，比较适合已经放弃了努力去改变社会的幻想、等着社会来改变自己的考生。
比如下面这个高分范文结尾段:
I would like to say that I personally agree with the statement that music tells us something about a culture, and with my example I wanted to illustrate how much of the culture of a country it is
possible to learn about just listening to its
再比如这个关子“教育重要还是让小朋友多玩儿重要“的结尾:
I agree that formal education at an early age offers children benefits at all levels and therefore is more important than letting them After all, kids can always play after school but learning
at school stimulates(激发)their brain growth and puts them in competitive social settings, which is indeed irreplaceable experience for such a critical stage of
(irreplaceable这个词用得很妙——不可替代的.嘴这么甜的小秘一定人见人爱吧?)
上面讲的四类结尾是托福作文考试中最常用的四种结尾手法。但请注意:如果你的作文主体用的是“折中式”写法.那么在结尾通常还是要重点倾向于其中的某一方，而不是双方各同意50%,否则你的结尾将转化成下面这种类型:
E 、和稀泥式 Goodie-Goodie Style
这种文章在结尾还是不表明任何一种态度倾向，完全是“大团圆”。请看下面关于“远程教育好还是到教室上课好”的结尾段实例:
下面ETS 中的满分范文结尾段更是“和”中高手:
The time to live Independently depends on the person He must decide whether they're ready to leave their parents to have an independent life or The decision will vary from one
person to A person should judge that he's capable of fulfilling his needs without being dependent on his parents; this indicates that he's ready for his independent Otherwise he
might need to stay longer with his
先用3句绕口令似的句子，最后提出到底应该何时开始独立取决于孩子自身的判断能力。depends on往往是“和稀泥’式的标志词。
高分作文结尾（3）
托福写作真题题目：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing games teaches us about Use specific reasons and examples to support your
托福写作范文：
Some think that games teach us about Others think that life is simply a grand game that one must learn to In any case games are part of the lives of every human, whatever Although the rules to games may be different, and the reasons for playing certain games diverse, it is indisputable that playing games teaches us about
First of all, playing games teaches us about Most games demand more than one participant, and several require that one work in unison with one or more other people on a When one is member of a team, one learns to put the team first rather than personal For instance, I played right fullback on an intramural soccer team at Oxford Without the work of myself and teammates at the back, clearing balls and passing up to the wings, our speedy strikers could not Conversely, without the speed and scoring ability of our strikers, no matter how solid we played on defense, we could not win the Soccer, then, demands that the entire team work in unison, performing discreet tasks that further a team goal, rather than an individual Playing soccer helped me to learn about teamwork, and this knowledge has spilled over into my life in other At my job, I constantly have to work with Working with people in my occupation is similar to playing Team goals become more important than personal ones, and learning to support each other during work time comes easily, as I had already learned these skills on the
Playing games also teaches us about preparation, which is vital both on the field and off of When I was twelve years old, I learned a valuable lesson about preparation from my basketball After a particularly uninspired practice, my coach gathered us He said, “You play like you And your sloppy practice will appear during the ” He was At our next game, we fumbled our passes, became frustrated with each other, and lost the My teammates and I resolved to focus harder in practice, and steadily our play in games My coach’s adage “you play like you practice” translates directly into Without specific preparation in work or at home, we rarely Preparation is paramount to success, and I learned this on the basketball
In summary, by teaching us about teamwork and preparation, games have direct relevance to For me, these lessons came on the sports field; for others they may come by participating in a variety of games, athletic or Games are a vital part of life, and they have many skills to impact that are applicable after the game is
高分作文结尾（4）
1. 自然结尾，点明主题
随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。如“helping the policeman（帮助警察）”的结尾可以是：the two children were praised by the police and they felt happy。再如“the tortoise and the hare（龟兔赛跑）” 的结尾可以是：when the hare got to the tree， the tortoise had already been there。
2. 首尾呼应，升华主题
在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题，深化主题，起到“画龙点睛”的效果。如“i love my hometown（我爱家乡）”的结尾可以是：i love my hometown， and i am proud of it。
3. 反问结尾，引起深思
这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，而且具有一定的强调作用，可引起他人的深思。如 “learning english can give us a lot of pleasure （学英语能为我们带来许多乐趣）” 的结尾可以是：if we learn english well， we can …don’t you think learning eng-lish is great fun？
4. 表达祝愿，阐述愿望
这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中，表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等。如“a letter to the farmers（给农民们的一封信）”的结尾可以是：i hope the farm-ers’ life will be better and better。
另外，书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语：best wishes；i wish you a merry christmas and a happy new year；i wish you have a good time等。