作文高分 英语（1）
dreams/ objectives
the cartoon aims at informing us of the significance of our dreams/objectives. definitely, no once can deny the importance of it. our dreams/goals/ideals/objectives will prevent us from quitting easily especially when we are in great trouble. they will lead us to the destination we are eager to reach, bring out the best in us and stimulate us to remain firm in our faith. to further illustrate the importance of dreams/objectives, i would like to take helen keller as a case in point: how could she, a disabled woman who was born blind and deaf, finally be a world-renowned writer who wrote if i had three days to see without her dreams to overcome physical limitations.
accordingly, at no time should we underestimate the power of dreams/objectives. furthermore, we must set up proper goals before we start to do anything and stick to it whatever difficulties we meet . “one of the most dangerous forms of human error is forgetting what one is trying to achieve. ” paul nitze once said.
作文高分 英语（2）
考研英语高分作文
考研英语高分作文是怎样炼成的?从英语学习起，就涉及英语作文，写出一篇英语作文并不很难，但是写一篇英语高分作文却不容易，而在考研英语作文写作中，尤其如此。怎样写出一篇考研英语高分作文，大嘴外教老师将以三步骤与同学们分享考研英语高分作文是怎样炼成的。
考研英语高分作文是怎样炼成的第一步：描写现象。
其实很多同学都了解，我们的考研英语作文为什么提到三方面，去浏览大纲的话，你发现它在确定我们考研英语作文的时候，明确指出：要求同学们在自己的作文当中，也就是200来字的大作文当中要非常真切地、确切地写出我们对整个考研英语作文技巧的要求。考研英语作文的“逻辑三段论”当中，你可以在第一个自然段，把你所看到真真切切的现象写出来，我们都知道什么叫“现象”，现象是我们看到的，在我们身边发生的事情，在我们试卷当中一个图画里所表达的东西，同学们也看到了一个新的东西，当你写出现象的`时候，实际说的直白一点，你就已经会了英文写作的描写手法了。我们今天要考研，可能你第一个自然段一定是描写出来的，而且这种描写一定要客观。
考研英语高分作文是怎样炼成的第二步：透过现象看本质。
如果我们只把现象说出来，那不是考研的要求，因为考研的第二步要求的是什么?通过现象看你内在的本质，内在的本质又是什么东西?其实就是画外音。从2001年看过来，这些年的大作文考试当中，只有07年考研英语大作文当中看到没有画外音，其他的考试都是有画外音的。比如我们考了，“爱心是一盏灯，越黑暗的地方越明亮”;我们也考了文化，国内文化和国际文化之间的关系;甚至我们都知道“养老足球赛”，这是跟和-谐社会相背道的现象;同时我们也看到了，对贝克汉姆的盲目崇拜是不可为的，所以这些东西对同学们来讲，都是一种现象，随后给了你一个画外音。这时候同学看到，拿08年考研英语大作文来说，“你一条腿、我一条腿，你我一起走南闯北”，我们都知道，“你我一起”就在向我们传递着一种理念。当你第一自然段描写完看到的图画之后，第二自然段最重要的就是让同学们把这个现象下面的本质告诉我们。
考研英语高分作文是怎样炼成的第三步：议论。
最后该来说说考研英语作文的议论了。毕竟我们写的是议论文，什么是议论呢?很多同学，他们不能非常清晰地分清什么是说明，什么是议论，这造成了一种尴尬，很多同学都在该说明的时候把议论混进去了。但是你要知道，在真正你们的目标读者，就是判卷老师分析的过程中，他一定会重点要看你是不是把说明和议论分清楚了。所以同学要知道，到了今天，我们重要的备考阶段究竟是什么，你应该头脑非常清晰地能够把以上的内容弄清楚，那也就是我们要了解，我们在真正该说明的时候就去说明。
那么议论应该怎么去说呢?我们采取了一些措施和手段。比如一些丑恶现象我们要去解决它;当我们看到了“人”字结构相互支撑的时候，我们应该弘扬它、学习它，因为这样的话我们会怎样怎样，这是同学在这个时候要思考的。说到这儿同学可能已经感觉到了，这个所谓的“三”这个神奇的数字已经告诉了我们，我们在一篇大作文当中，理论上讲是三个段落的。这三个段落应该确切地说，按照它的写作手法来分，第一段应该是描写，第二段应该是说明，第三段确切地讲是我们的议论。
作文高分 英语（3）
六级作文万能模板：表明事实
1、We cannot ignore the fact that……我们不能忽略这个事实……
2、No one can deny the fact that……没人能否认这个事实……
3、This is a phenomenon that many people are interested
4、be closely related to ~~ (与息息相关)
六级作文万能模板：采取措施
1：We should take some effective 我们应该采取有效措施
2：We should try our best to overcome/conquer the 我们应该尽最大努力去克服困难
3：We should do our utmost in doing 我们应该尽力去做……
4：We should solve the problems that we are confronted/faced 我们应该解决我们面临的困难
六级作文万能模板：给出原因
1：The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子 (的原因是)
2:This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons .First,…….Second,…….Third，……。这一现象存在有很多原因的，第一……第二……第三……
3：For one thing,…… For another thing，…… ==On the one hand,……On the other hand……一方面……另一方面……
4：I quite agree with the statement that……The reasons are chiefly as 我十分赞同这一论述，即……。其主要原因如下。
六级作文万能模板：论证类型
1：From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the (在我看来，支持第一种观点比第二种更有道理)
2：I cannot entirely agree with the idea that……(我无法完全同意这一观点)
3：As far as I am concerned/In my opinion,……(就我来说……)
4：I sincerely believe that……==I am greatly convinced (that)子句.(我真诚地相信……)
5：Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why ……(最后，坦率地说，还有另外一个实际的原因……)
六级作文万能模板：阐述观点
1：People's views on……vary from person to Some hold that……However, others believe that……(人们对……的观点因人而异，有些人认为……然而其他人却认为……)
2：People may have different opinions on……(人们对……可能会持有不同见解)
3：Attitudes from person to people hold different attitudes (人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异)
4:There are different opinions among people as to……(对于……人们的观点大不相同)
六级作文万能模板：推测后果
1：Obviously，if we don't control the problem, the chances are that……will lead us in (很明显，如果我们不能控制这一问题，很有可能我们会陷入危险)
2：No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that ……(毫无疑问，除非我们采取有效措施，否则我们很可能会……)
3：It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation(很紧迫的是应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展)
六级作文万能模板：解决问题
1：The best way to solve the troubles is……解决这些麻烦的最好办法是……
2：As far as something is concerned,……就某事而言，……
3;It is obvious that……很显然……
4：It may be true that……but it doesn't mean that……可能……是对的，但这并不意味着……
5;It is natural to believe that……but we shouldn't ignore that……认为……是自然的，但我们不应忽视……
6：There is no evidence to suggest that……没有证据表明……
六级作文万能模板：提出建议
1：It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).(该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了)
2：There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of……(毫无疑问，对……问题应予以足够重视)
3：Obviously ,if we want to do something … it is essential that……(显然，如果我们想要做么事，很重要的是……)
4：Only in this way can we ……(只有这样，我们才能……) 5：Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)
六级作文万能模板：结尾句式
至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为……
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some I think that
总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。 In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of in this way can ______in the
但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势(好处)。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于(喜欢)……
But ______and ______have their own For example, _____, Comparing this with that, however, I prefer
就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……
Personally, I believe Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us
随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。
With the development of society, it"s urgent and necessary to every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and
至于我(对我来说，就我而言)，我认为……更合理。只有这样，我们才能…… For my part, I think it reasonable Only in this way can you
对我来说，我认为有必要……。原因如下：第一，……; 第二，……;最后……但同样重要的是……
In my opinion, I think it necessary The reasons are as First Last but not least,
在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现……。
It is difficult to say whether _____is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation However, from a personal point of view
综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论……
From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion
如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是……
If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do
作文高分 英语（4）
(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
有一些人认为
另一些人认为
我的看法
①-----------------(主题)的主题近来越来越受欢迎。对此有两方面的意见。有人说A是他们最喜欢的。他们持有他们的观点是因为②-----------------(支持A的理由一)更重要的是，③------------ - 理由二)。此外，④---------------(理由三)。
而另一些人则认为在以下三个原因中B是更好的选择。首先，-----------------(支持乙的理由一)。其次(除此之外)，⑥------------------(理由二)。第三(最后)，⑦------------------(理由三)。
从我的角度来看，我认为⑧----------------(我的观点)。原因是⑨--------------------(原因)。事实上，还有其他一些理由来解释我的选择。对我而言，前者无疑是一个明智的选择。
(2)给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点
有人认为①----------------(观点一)。例如，他们认为②-----------------(举例说明)。并且会带来他们③---------------(为他们带来的好处)。
在我看来，我从来不认为这个理由可能是重点。一方面，④-------------(我反对该看法的理由一)。另一方面，⑤---------(反对的理由之二)。
所有我所说的形式，我同意这个想法⑥-----(我对文章所讨论的主题的看法)。
作文高分 英语（5）
结尾万能公式之如此结论
说完了，毕竟要归纳一番。相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。
也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，这样，你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子：
Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for
显然，我们可以得出结论，良好的举止源于礼貌和对别人的尊重。
如果读者很难“显而见之”，但说无妨，就当读者的眼光太浅罢了!
【更多过渡短语】
to sum up(总之), in conclusion(总之，最后), in brief(简而言之), on account of this(因为这), thus(因此)
【更多句型】
Thus, it can be concluded that…
因此，可以得出结论
Therefore, we can find that…
因此，我们可以发现
结尾万能公式之如此建议
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气句型。拽!
Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the
显然，我们是时候采取一些措施来解决这个问题了。
这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢?
【更多句型】
Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be
因此，我建议采取一些措施。
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be
因此，为了解决这个问题，应该采取一些措施。
引经据典是英语作文中常用的方法。恰当地使用英语谚语能让阅卷老师眼前一亮，是提升英语作文逼(fēn)格(shù)的一大法宝。以下100条谚语，涵盖各种英语考试的常见写作主题。Come on,everybody!抽空选自己喜欢的背起来吧~
1勤奋、意志与成功
Where there is a will, there is a 有志者事竟成。
No pains, no 没有付出就没有收获。
Constant dripping wears away a 水滴石穿，绳锯木断。
Care and diligence bring 谨慎和勤奋才能抓住机遇。
Genius is nothing but labor 天才不过是勤奋而已。
Great hopes make great 伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。
Industry is the parent of 勤奋是成功之母。
No rose without a 没有不带刺的玫瑰。
There is no royal road to 书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟。
No way is impossible to 勇者无惧。
Success belongs to the 坚持就是胜利。
The finest diamond must be 玉不琢，不成器。
Adversity makes a man wise, not 逆境出人才。
2学习方法与态度
Practice makes 熟能生巧。
It is never too old to 活到老，学到老。
Readingis to the mind while exercise to the 读书健脑，运动强身。
A man becomes learned by 不耻下问才能有学问。
Learn and 活着，为了学习。
Knowledge starts with 实践出真知。
Books and friends should be few 读书如交友，应求少而精。
Complacency is the enemy of 学习的敌人是自己的满足。
Knowledge makes humble; ignorance 知识使人谦虚，无知使人傲慢。
Knowledge advances by steps and not 知识只能循序渐进，不能跃进。
A man can do no more than he 凡事都应量力而行。
A man cannot spin and reel at the 一心不能二用。
3健康与心态
An apple a day keeps the doctor 一天一苹果，不用请医生。
Prevention is better than 预防胜于治疗。
All work and no play makes Jack a 只工作,不玩耍,聪明小伙也变傻。
Health is not valued till 病时方知健康可贵。
A close mouth catches no 病从口入。
A good medicine tastes 良药苦口。
Good health is over 健康是最大的财富。
Happiness lies first of all in 幸福首先在于健康。
Cheerfulness is health; its opposite,melancholy, is 欢乐就是健康,忧郁就是病痛。
He is happy that thinks himself 自乐者常乐。
Content is better than 知足者常乐。
4品行与操守
Honesty is the best 诚实不欺为上策。
Respect yourself, or no one else willrespect 要人尊敬，必须自重。
Patience is the best 忍耐是良药。
One good turn deserves 行善积德。
He knows most who speaks 大智若愚。
A still tongue makes a wise 寡言者智。
A candle lights others and 蜡烛照亮别人，却毁灭了自己。
He is not fit to command others thatcannot command 正人须先正己。
Pride goes before, and shame 骄傲使人落后。
Please the eye and plague the 贪图一时快活，必然留下隐祸。
Penny wise, pound 贪小便宜吃大亏。
He who makes constant complaint getslittle 经常诉苦，没人同情。
Do as you would be done 己所不欲，勿施于人。
5金钱与财富
Gold will not buy 黄金不能买尽一切。
The chief aim of man is not to 人的主要目的并不是赚钱。
The money the miser hoards will do himno 守财奴积财，对自己毫无好处。
What is wealth good for, if it bringsmelancholy?财富如带忧郁来，有了财富有何用?
Wealth makes 财富能使人拜倒。
6珍惜时光
Time 光阴似箭。
Time and tide wait for no 时不我待。
To save time is to lengthen 节约时间就是延长生命。
Time stays not the fool’s 时间不等闲逛的傻瓜。
Lost years are worse than lost 失去时光金不换。
Time is 时间就是金钱。
Time has 光阴去如飞。
Time lost cannot be won 时光一去不复返。
7择友与友谊
Birds of a feather flock 物以类聚，人以群分。
A man is known by his 什么人交什么朋友。
Keep good men company and you shall beof the 近朱者赤，近墨者黑。
A friend in need is a friend 患难见真情。
A friend is easier lost than 得朋友难，失朋友易。
A faithful friend is hard to 知音难觅。
A friend is never known till a man 需要之时方知友。
Misfortune tests the sincerity 患难见真情。
8常理与法则
A good beginning is half 良好的开端是成功的一半。
Don’t put off till tomorrow what shouldbe done 今日事，今日毕。
Fact speak louder than 事实胜于雄辩。
Failure is the mother of 失败是成功之母。
A bird in the hand is worth than two inthe 一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。
Seeing is 眼见为实。
Still water run 静水流深。
Strike the iron while it is 趁热打铁。
When in Rome, do as the Romans 入乡随俗。
Man proposes, god 谋事在人，成事在天。
Look before you 摸清情况再行动。
Experience must be 吃一堑，长一智。
Make hay while the sun 良机勿失。
He who does not advance loses 逆水行舟，不进则退。
Easier said than 说得容易，做得难。
Every day is not 好景不常在。
All that glitters is not 闪光的不一定都是金子。
All things are difficult before theyare 凡事总是由难而易。
Every advantage has its 有利必有弊。
Every man has his 金无足赤，人无完人。
Four eyes see more than 集思广益。
He laughs best who laughs 谁笑到最后，谁笑得最好。
It is the first step that 万事开头难。
The farthest way about is the nearestway 抄近路反而绕远路。
Take things as they 既来之，则安之。
Every man is the architect of his 自己的命运自己掌握。
The early bird catches the 早起的鸟儿有虫吃。
It is no use crying over spilt 覆水难收。
Don’t trouble trouble until troubletroubles 不要自找麻烦。
Don’t try to teach your grandmother tosuck 不要班门弄斧。
作文高分 英语（6）
① demonstrate常用于阐明现象，引出主旨。
② 提出观点，something must be done也可以用we should take measures代替。
③ 提出建议。corresponding laws and regulations, from均适用于解决问题类作文。用alcohol指代饮酒以避免重复。
④ wine culture“酒文化”，有中国特色的固定表达。
⑤ Only位于句首时主句采用部分倒装语序，注意从句采用正常语序。
作文高分 英语（7）
Nowadays, there is a growing concern over the issue of…
People in growing numbers are directing their attention to…
When it comes to…, people’s notions may vary from one to
Traditional virtue/value has it that…, yet people are…
作文高分 英语（8）
The purpose of the picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to…
The fact/phenomenon that… indicates that…
Having scrutinized the details of the picture, we can discuss the implications subtly conveyed from
作文高分 英语（9）
There is no denying that… will continue increasing/decreasing in the better/worse
Undoubtedly, the tendency reflected from the chart will undergo a continuous increase/decrease in the near
作文高分 英语（10）
It`s for to do 做对某人来说
如此以至于 .
do 太而不能
如此以至于
直到才
例:I didn`t go to bed until my mother came
The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 的原因是
例:The reason why he got angry was that she told him a
(他生气的原因是她对他说了谎.)
That is why + 句子 那是的原因
That is because + 句子 那是因为
It is said that + 句子 据说
It is reported that + 句子 据报道
There is no doubt that + 句子 毫无疑问
It goes without saying that + 句子 不言而喻,毫无疑问
There is no need to do 没必要做
There is no point in 做某事毫无意义
作文高分 英语（11）
try to do 努力做 strive to do 努力做
try one`s best to do = do one`s best to do 竭尽全力做
make efforts to do = make every effort to do 尽力做
do what can (do) to do 尽力做
spare no effort to do 不遗余力的做
do what / everything can to do 尽某人全力做
作文高分 英语（12）
英语中的多数副词一般是放在动词后面，或者放在be动词、助动词或情态动词之后且实义动词之前(若实义动词后有宾语，则放于宾语之后)。
而在写作中将其置前，可以起突出和强调的作用。
比如：
Obviously/Interestingly/Ironically，what the picture conveyed should be given further
多用复合句
复合句类型比较多，但是在考研中一个主句加一个从句基本上是标配。
但是要把复合句写好的话，一方面可以使用词汇替换的技巧，另外一方面还需要用不同的句型。
(1) 用it作形式主语：
结构：It be++ do
例：It is obvious that protecting environment is our compulsory duty and also a legal
(2) 使用定语从句(这个是英语写作中需要重点掌握的句式)
It goes without saying that the cartoon depicts four persons are competitively playing a football game, which captures our eyes
(3)使用双重否定：
比如：可以用no/not+表否定意义的形容词，如It is not impossible (for ) to do 也可以用no/not/never+without，如 cannot do without 此外，还可以用no/not/never/nobody/few+具有否定意义的动词或短语，如 never fail to do
(4) 使用倒装结构：
一种情况是使用“Only+状语”置于句首，如：Only in this way can we resolve the 另一种情况是将否定词置于句首，如：By no means should weturn a blind eye to such things of spoiling
(5)使用强调句：
可强调动词：I do expect that the issue of environment pollution can be settled as soon as
也可强调句子某个成分：It was persistence and optimism that made Thomas Edison bravely confront a variety of obstacles and other failures and then finally invent the electrical
作文高分 英语（13）
啊，我们家里实施了新标准(垃圾要分类)，每一个人都要负责一个工作岗位，垃圾分类好生活才干净。奶奶负责垃圾的分类，而我是家里的监督人员，负责做出提醒要大家把垃圾分类好。
奶奶洗菜时用一个专用袋子装起吃完饭的剩菜、果皮。咦?妈妈看电视时吃掉的光子皮放在其他垃圾里，赶快倒出来放进厨余垃圾袋里，妈妈我要对你的行为做出提醒，不可以把吃剩的东西倒进装其它垃圾的垃圾桶里。知道了!
起床了，看见爸爸要把装厨余垃圾的垃圾袋放进其它垃圾的回收桶里，我赶紧提醒爸爸放进厨余垃圾的桶里才行。当然了，作为家里的监督人员自身也要做得好才行。没用的纸张放进可回收垃圾桶，要做好分类工作我的奶奶最有体会，她告诉我没用的电池不可以随便乱放，要放进有害垃圾的垃圾桶才行，这些知识真的很有用，现在把家里弄得干干净净，多漂亮。
Ah, we have a new standard in our house (garbage classification), everyone is responsible for a job, garbage sorted well life is Grandma was responsible for the garbage classification, and I was the supervisor of the family, responsible for making a reminder to have the garbage sorted
Grandma washed dishes with a special bag for the leftovers and Yi? Mom watching TV when eat photons skin in other garbage, pour into the kitchen waste garbage bag quickly, mom, I want to alert with your behavior, could not put the leftovers into other rubbish Know!
When I got up, I saw my father putting the garbage bag in other garbage bins, and I quickly reminded dad to put the garbage in the And, of course, as the family's supervisor, you have to do Worthless paper in the recycling bin, want to do a good job classification most e某perience, my grandmother she told me that it's no use battery can not be casually put, have to in hazardous waste bin, these knowledge are really useful, now contrive to clean, more
垃圾分类英语作文五
学校暑假作业要求我们记录垃圾分类的故事，从今天开始我就用网络日记的形式记录我和我的家人进行垃圾分类的故事及感受。
妈咪让我先要了解垃圾分类的意义：1、减少环境污染2、变废为宝……
垃圾分为可回收垃圾和不可回收垃圾。可回收垃圾，如：报纸、啤酒瓶、饮料罐、破旧衣物，纸皮……不可回收垃圾，如：厨余垃圾。还有有害垃圾：废电池、过期药品等等，妈咪说医院还有医疗垃圾，这些垃圾需要特殊处理。
今天的收获真不少，垃圾分类是一件有意义的事情!
The school summer job requires us to record the stories of garbage From this day on, I have recorded the stories and feelings of garbage classification with my family in the form of online
Let me first understand the meaning of garbage classification: Reduce environmental pollution
Garbage is divided into recyclable and non-recyclable Recyclables such as newspapers, beer bottles, beverage cans, old clothes, paper Do not recycle garbage, such as kitchen There are also hazardous waste: waste batteries, e某pired medicines and so on, and mommy says hospitals still have medical waste, which needs special
Today's harvest is quite a lot, garbage classification is a meaningful thing!
作文高分 英语（14）
When I was a kid, "father" this noun in my heart is so distant, so the Impression, he is always so busy, in a hurry, rarely with children, even Mother said: dad on a business trip, so So, the mother became the backbone of its children, culture, education of For our three children couldn't be tamed, beat and scold is little Should be is an old saying goes - "dozen is close, scold is love". For the mother, I always have a special By contrast, my father and I always across a insurmountable gap I seldom or was afraid to talk with his Each to say something, the mother will act as the mouthpiece of the between us, "said mom, with " .
Meet mother in a bad mood, return to sentence: "himself to go with dad " I was caught up in the extremely awkward Remember the poem wrote: "distance is a kind of beauty", but I think "distance is a kind of indifference, a " I often disappeared in a strange, timid at his father, and thought: "what he relies on the strength, let me afraid of him, he mean He hit me? No, no, he never even scold " Oh, that of his childhood to me, is really a Childish mind thought of it like that before: may all the father want to use their own way, in front of the children to keep the unique Well, maybe, my father is supposed to be like
作文高分 英语（15）
作文题目
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
注意：
词数：100左右：
参考词汇：房租—Tent().
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese I have already found a fiat for It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese Bus can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours, Li Hua
满分理由
格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。
作文高分 英语（16）
高中英语作文常用高分句型篇1一、~ the + ~ est +名词+(that)+主词+ have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read，etc)
~ the most +形容词+名词+(that)+主词+ have ever +
seen(known/heard/had/read，etc)
例句：
Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen. 海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had. 张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。
二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more +形容词+ than to + V
例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education. 没有比接受教育更重要的事。
三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.(再怎么强调……的重要性也不为过。)
例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
四、There is no denying that + S + V……(不可否认的……)
例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad
to worse.
不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
五、It is universally acknowledged that +句子~~(全世界都知道……)
例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
六、There is no doubt that +句子~~(毫无疑问的……)
例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be
desired.
毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
七、An advantage of ~~~ is that +句子(……的优点是……)
例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't
create(produce)any pollution.
使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
八、The reason why +句子~~~ is that +句子(……的原因是……)
例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with
fresh air.
The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for
us.
我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
九、So +形容词+ be +主词+ that +句子(如此……以致于……)
例句：So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。
十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be，S + V~~~(虽然……)
例句：Rich as our country is， the qualities of our living are by no means
satisfactory. {by no means = in no way = on no account一点也不}
虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。
高中英语作文常用高分句型篇2十一、The + ~er + S + V，~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~
The + more + Adj + S + V，~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V ~~~(愈……愈……)
例句：The harder you work，the more progress you make. 你愈努力，你愈进步。
The more books we read，the more learned we become. 我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。
十二、By +Ving，~~ can ~~(借着……，……能够……
例句
By taking exercise，we can always stay healthy. 借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。
十三、~~~ enable + Object(受词)+ to + V(……使……能够……)
例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed. 听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
十四、On no account can we + V ~~~(我们绝对不能……)
例句：On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。
十五、It is time + S +过去式(该是……的时候了)
例句：It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the
traffic problems.
该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。
十六、Those who ~~~(……的人……)
例句：
Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。
十七、There is no one but ~~~(没有人不……)
例句：There is no one but longs to go to college. 没有人不渴望上大学。
十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V(不得不……)
例句：Since the examination is around the corner，I am compelled to give up
doing sports.
既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。
十九、It is conceivable that +句子(可想而知的)
It is obvious that +句子(明显的)
It is apparent that +句子(显然的)
例句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.
可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。
二十、That is the reason why ~~~(那就是……的原因)
例句：Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I don't like it.
夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。
高中英语作文常用高分句型篇3二十一、For the past +时间，S +现在完成式……(过去……年来，……一直……)
例句：For the past two years，I have been busy preparing for the examination.
过去两年来，我一直忙着准备考试。
二十二、Since + S +过去式，S +现在完成式。
例句：Since he went to senior high school，he has worked very hard.
自从他上高中，他一直很用功。
二十三、It pays to + V ~~~(……是值得的。)
例句：It pays to help others. 帮助别人是值得的。
二十四、be based on(以……为基础)
例句：The progress of thee society is based on harmony. 社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。
二十五、Spare no effort to + V(不遗余力的)
例句：We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。
二十六、bring home to +人+事(让……明白……事)
例句：We should bring home to people the value of working hard.
我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。
二十七、be closely related to ~~(与……息息相关)
例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health. 做运动与健康息息相关。
二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving = make it a rule to + V(养成……的习惯)
例句：We should get into the habit of keeping good hours. 我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。
二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving，~~~(因为……)
例句：Thanks to his encouragement，I finally realized my dream.
因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。
三十、What a + Adj + N + S + V!= How + Adj + a + N + V!(多么……!)
例句：What an important thing it is to keep our promise!
How important a thing it is to keep our promise!遵守诺言是多么重要的事!
三十一、Leave much to be desired(令人不满意)
例句：The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired. 我们的交通状况令人不满意。
三十二、Have a great influence on ~~~(对……有很大的影响)
例句：Smoking has a great influence on our health. 抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。
三十三、do good to(对……有益)，do harm to(对……有害)
例句：Reading does good to our mind. 读书对心灵有益。
Overwork does harm to health. 工作过度对健康有害。
三十四、Pose a great threat to ~~(对……造成一大威胁)
例句：Pollution poses a great threat to our existence. 污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。
三十五、do one's utmost to + V = do one’s best(尽全力去……)
例句：We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标
作文高分 英语（17）
20xx年高考英语作文1：International Nurses DayEverybody admire doctors so much, for they save people’s lives and like the angels, while the special group who assists doctors in finishing their jobs should not be forgotten, they are the nurses and they are angels, too. The international Nurses Day is coming and they deserved enjoying their own day.
每个人都敬佩医生,因为他们拯救人们的生命，就像天使一样,然而有那么一群特殊的群体，她们协助医生完成工作，不应该被忘记,她们是护士，也是天使,。国际护士节即将来临,她们值得去享受属于自己的一天。
My aunt is a nurse and she loves her job so much. She always needs to work at night, she told me that though it was a little tired but she felt proud of what she did. In 20xx, the horrible disaster of SARS attacked China, at this dangerous moment, my aunt never thought about quitting her job, she stayed at the hospital all the time. A lot of nurses like my aunt are so great, they are doing the ordinary work but they are not ordinary.
我的阿姨是一名护士,她非常喜欢她的工作。她总是晚上需要工作,她告诉我,虽然有点累,但她但是她为自己做的事情感到骄傲。20xx年,可怕的灾难非典袭击了中国,在这危险的时刻,我阿姨从来没想过放弃她的工作,她一直呆在医院。很多像我阿姨那样的护士是如此伟大,她们做着普通的工作但是她们一点也不普通。
These lovely group deserve to have a day of their own. The public shows respect to them and sends their best wishes to them. I adore the nurse like my aunt so much, they are the real heroes in my eyes.
这些可爱的群体应该有属于自己的节日。公众向她们展示了尊重并给她们献上最美好的祝福。我喜欢那些像我阿姨那样的护士,在我眼里她们是真正的英雄。
20xx年高考英语作文2：Anti-bully In CampusThe show British Got Talented is very popular around the world, it is the original show. As it is so hot and many talented people have found their stages,its influence on other countries can’t be ignored. Last night, I saw an episode of a boy composing a song with his friend, it reminded the public of the issue of anti-bully in campus.
《英国达人秀》在世界各地很受欢迎,这是原创的节目。因为它是如此的火热,许多有才华的人找到了他们的舞台,这个节目对其他国家的影响不可忽视的。昨晚,我看了一集，一个男孩与他的朋友写了一首歌,它提醒了公众反校园暴力的问题。
When the boy and his friend stood on the stage, he was so shy and he looked very nice. He told the audience that they would sing a song which was composed by himself and the judges were so looking forward to hearing it. As the boy sung, the audience sensed his miserable days in his childhood, he was bullied by the higher grade students. His friend sung the part of giving hope. The judges were so touched and they spoke highly of this inspring song.
当男孩和他的朋友站在舞台上时,他很害羞,也很友好。他告诉观众,他们将要唱一首自创的歌,评委们充满了期待。当男孩唱起来了,观众感觉到他童年里悲伤的日子,他被高年级的学生欺负。他的朋友则演唱给予希望的部分。评委们非常感动,他们高度评价这首令人振奋的歌曲。
There are always some big guys trying to control the situation, so they bully others. This behavior is condemned by the public. The one who plays the role of bad guy is actually always the one with weak heart. The movement of anti-bully in campus needs everybody to care for each other.
总有一些高大的家伙试图控制局势,因此他们欺负别人。这样的行为受到了公众谴责。总是扮演坏人角色的那些人实际上有着软弱的心。反校园暴力的活动需要大家彼此关爱。
20xx年高考英语作文3：When I am RetiredMy parents always talk about their retired life, they have portrayed their retired life all the time and they look forward to it. My parents think they are so busy when they are working and they need to enjoy life when they are old. I am affected by them, though some of their views I will not agree, I think of my retired life sometimes.
我的父母经常谈论他们的退休生活,他们已经描绘过他们退休后的生活,并且充满了期待。我的父母认为他们工作的时候很忙,他们需要享受生活当他们老了。我受到了他们的影响,尽管他们的一些观点我不同意,但是有时我会思考退休后的生活。
When I am retired, the first thing I would like to do is to travel and take adventures. Working hour will surely occupy my life and I need to make my ends meet, so there is no doubt that when I am young, my time focus on work. Retired life means that I have stored certain amount of money and I can go to any place I want.
当我退休后,我想做的第一件事就是旅行和冒险。工作时间肯定会占据我的生活,我需要收支平衡,所以毫无疑问,当我年轻的时候,我的时间会专注于工作。退休生活意味着我存储了一定钱,可以去任何想去的地方。
The second thing I want to do is to open a coffee shop. I can spend my hour to talk to all kinds of people and share their stories, I can give them my sincere suggestion. Being a listener and making friends are wonderful life for an old people.
我想要做的第二件事是开一家咖啡馆。我可以花时间跟各种各样的人聊天，分享他们的故事,我可以给他们真诚的建议。成为一个聆听者和交朋友对于一个老人家来说的是美好生活。
I will not wait for my retired life, so before that stage comes, I will enjoy every moment.
我不会等待我的退休生活,所以在那一个阶段来临之前,我会享受每一刻。
作文高分 英语（18）
一篇好的作文除了要具备健康鲜明的主题，优美生动的文字以外，还要有一个完整、连贯、流畅的结构，我们把它归结为八个字，那就是“上下贯通，首尾相援”。
文章结构必须上下贯通，首尾相援，这也是作者思路的连贯性在文章中的体现，这种形式的连贯同时也能够体现文意的连贯，即形式服务于内容。文章的各部分之间，段落之间，前后语句间都要紧密连接，通篇一贯，这样的结构才能严谨、完美。好的结构会使文章主题鲜明突出，内容清晰完整，过渡自然流畅，文章整体和谐统一。否则，如果信马由缰，文章结构势必混乱无章，主次不分，再典型生动的材料恐怕也难以吸引读者去阅读和欣赏。“思想是有一条路的，一句一句，一段一段都是有路的，好文章的作者是决不乱走的。”（叶圣陶《认真学习语文》）。
文章结构必须细密周严，层层衔接，无懈可击，任何一篇文章都应是一个有机完整的整体，因此，我们在写作文时要在选好材料的情况下精心安排语句段落间的过渡与衔接，开头与结尾的关照与呼应，做到前后勾联，相互顾及，防止脱节，顾此失彼。
一、格外重视文章的线索。
所谓线索就是贯穿在整篇文章中情节发展与思想感情发展的路线，它像链条一样穿结着文章里全部的人物、事件和景物，让文章成为一个统一的艺术整体。在记叙文中，它把一个个彼此相关的事件及人物贯穿在一起，推进情节的发展，彰显主题；抒情性的文字中，线索又成了咏物抒怀、托物寓意的凭借，使主题突出，形散神聚。
初中课本中《藤野先生》一文以作者的爱国主义思想为明线，以作者与藤野先生的交往为暗线，把若干情节与事件有机的联系在一起，集中体现了藤野先生对学生严格要求，求实严谨，没有狭隘的民族偏见等高尚品质，这两条线索互相交融，但目标一致，都起到了贯穿全文的作用。如《感受真挚的友谊》一文，小作者以“友谊”为线索，架设小标题，向我们展现了小学生生活中三个典型画面，表现了自己与同学之间深深的友谊。而《感受友情的四季》一文更是以四季中的春、夏、秋、冬为线索，通过恰切、生动的比喻，抒写自己对友情如四季真挚感怀，以四季贯穿全文，新颖别致，使文章结构整齐划一，条理清晰，让人耳目一新。
二、严密紧凑，顺理成章。
这就是说文章的布局应该注重衔接，注重段落语句之间的过渡，前后关联，这样才不会造成各部分内容的疏散与脱离。
1.谈谈过渡。过渡是文章内容连贯的一种重要方法。好的过渡能够使文章前后衔接，自然流畅，天衣无缝。如我们学过的《从百草园到三味书屋》一文第9段“我不知道为什么家里的人要将我送进书塾里去了------ade，我的蟋蟀们！ade，我的覆盆子们和木莲们！……”很明显这是一个过渡段，巧妙地将白草园与三味书屋两段生活联结起来。又如《感受幸福》一文开头一段，“现在我终于明白了，原来它就在我的身边”一句，既回答了上文关于“幸福在哪里”的疑问，又自然地引起下文，写“我”对幸福的体验过程。
2.谈谈照应。照应是指文章前后内容之间的关照响应。前面的内容要有呼应后面的情节，前面也要埋下伏笔。在形式上照应有三种方式，一是结尾和开头的照应；二是伏笔和关键语句的照应；三是正文和标题的照应。
首尾照应是写作中常见的照应形式。开头结尾是文章的有机组成部分，好的开头能够帮助读者抓住要领，感受全文，好的结尾能够使文章的主旨更加明确，主题得到升华。而首尾照应则体现了两者的有机结合，更能突出文章的主题。如《感受友谊的枫叶》一文，小作者从不经意间发现的藏在书中的半片枫叶凝神沉思写起，道出了这代表友谊的半片枫叶的来由，结尾处以“很久很久，我才回过神来，又将那半片枫叶放回了书里”收篇，很自然地照应了开头“我将它拿起，放在手中，默默地站在那儿想了很久”，文章首尾圆合，浑然一体。再看《感受团结的力量》一文，小作者以散文化的笔法描述了几个花须经历了风雨的洗礼，造就了脉脉的芳香，但并未注意到首尾的呼应。开头写道，茉莉花虽无艳丽的外表，但香气脉脉而高雅，结尾处写“盛开的花代表了友谊的结晶，花下的世界，永远存在着那几个根须”，让人联想到花开的艳丽，与“脉脉的香气”是不吻合的，这也正是此文的重要缺憾之一。
前伏后应的照应也是照应的基本方式之一。《感受友谊的枫叶》的小作者就注意到了这一点。文章的第三段“那是一个深秋的晚上”道出了故事发生的季节是深秋的时节，而此时也是枫叶正红的时候，为后文的“从高高的树上落下了一片火红的枫叶”伏下了很好的一笔，不得不赞叹小作者在构思上的精雕细琢。
正文与开头的照应能够使主题更加明确，中心更加突出。我们看一下《感受幸福》一文的结尾：“如果有来生，我还要感受一下这辈子的幸福生活”，这一句意在照应文章的标题，然而语言过于平淡，格调低落，使人产生一种消极的情绪，不符合新时期少年儿童所应该拥有的心态，因而降低了文章的格调，这是我们在写作时要十分注意的。
一篇好的作文是讲究构造艺术的，而这个艺术的核心正是使文章“上下贯通，首尾相援”的艺术，做到这一点，也就做到了文章的通篇连贯，和谐一致，我们在作文时千万不要忽视它。