旅行作文英语（1）

i often make a trip by trains because it＇s both cheap and comfortable. last winter holidays i traveled in a car for the first time in my life. at first i didn＇t feel well. but this kind of feeling didn＇t last long. the trip was eciting. while travelling in a car, we could stop at any time if we wanted to enjoy the view outside. the fields, the mountains and rivers were really very nice. on the way we visited many places of interest and took a lot of photos. it was an unforgettable eperience for me.

旅行作文英语（2）

I like the summer holiday every year.This summer I went to Beijing for my holiday,Beijing is our capital city.I went to the Summer Palace,climbed the Great Wall and went to many places of interest.I had a very good time.During this summer holiday,I went to Putuo and Xiangshan.I saw the beautiful sea.I enjoyed having a walk along the beach after supper or having a swim in the moonlight.It's really "cool"

旅行作文英语（3）

Hainan is the southernmost province of our country. I heard the scenery was picturesque and the temperature was suitable, so I'd like to see it. In this year I again begged mom and dad in the travel agency, the newspaper, I finally have a chance to see the South China Sea Pearl - Hainan face!

What impresses me most in Hainan is all kinds of tropical fruits, tall coconut trees, gold and golden beaches, and the boundless sea. Now, let me give you a brief introduction of these things.

Let's talk about the fruit of Hainan first! Because of the warm climate here, many kinds of fruit are produced. Is eating stinky smell fragrant durian, nutrient rich pitaya, eat like egg yolk like fruit, carambola star like, with sweet and sour sapodilla, have long durian like jackfruit, a thin meat, sweet emperor banana, a body is a treasure of coconut...... Many kinds, right?

The fruit should be introduced to the tree of the long fruit. Hainan Island is also called the "Coconut Island" here coconut and areca trees everywhere, and they look like, but the coconut tree tree, some slightly thicker than areca shorter, so the coconut tree is known locally as "elder brother tree" areca tree is called the "Mei tree". Ninety-nine percent of China's coconuts are produced in Hainan, which is because of the warm climate in Hainan and coconut in all the year.

Hainan province is located in the southernmost Chinese, Sanya city is the southernmost province of Hainan, but also in Sanya city "the remotest corners of the globe" on the south end, so each person will travel to Hainan for a visit here, at the entrance there is a scenic star model inside the remotest corners of the globe, inlaid with a crystal, abnormal beautiful. The golden beaches were spread near the blue and blue sea. The seaside "South Tianzhu" stone is called fortune stone, because it appears on the back of the two yuan RMB, and there are "Tianya" and "Jiao Jiao" stone. When Jiang Zemin and Li Changchun came here, there were all kinds of coconut trees on the right side of "Tianya" and "Jiao Jiao" stone.

Is it beautiful in Hainan? I hope there's a chance to have a look at the students.

旅行作文英语（4）

My holiday was very interesting. I did my homework on first day. I played tennis on second day. I watch TV on the third day. I went to shopping on the fourth day. ?I ….. but i like going shopping best. On Sunday，I went to a shopping mall was very big. There were all kinds of things.Everyday a lot of people go there to buy things .I was helping my mother to buy things. ?I had a shopping list in my hand. We were looking for things on the shopping list. After staying in the shopping mall About two hours. We got all the things and back home. I have a good holiday!

Hello, everyone. My name is Li Wei. I am a 11 year old boy. My height is 155 cm. My favorite color is green. My favorite sport is playing badminton. My favorite singer is Taylor Swift. I have big eyes, a small mouth, a big nose and two ears. Do you like me?

In the evening, my father, my mother, to watch the Olympic badminton mens singles championship match.

The first game, Lin Dan and Lee Chong Wei played very intense, because too many mistakes lindane, therefore, the first lost. Second, because lindane calm, and finally a comeback. The third field, which is the final championship game, and their scores in hot pursuit. When you hit the same score (19:19), lindane streak with two goals, scored the championship game of the gold medal. Lindane excitedly took off his shirt, ran around the stadium.

Watching this game, I learned that lindane humble in victory, defeat is not hungry spirit.

旅行作文英语（5）

I went to three cities to play during last summer holidays. They are Beijing, Dalian and HuHehot.

I went to Beijing more than eight times. Beijing is the capital of China. It’s a big city. I am very familiar with Beijing. It takes an hour and forty minutes from Nantong to Beijing by plane. There are many tall buildings in Beijing. It’s a modern city. My family visited the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum, the Beihai Park, the Space Museum, etc. I went to the countryside of Beijing to go boating and fishing. It was very interesting. I went shopping in WangFuJing. I bought lots of souvenirs and other things. I like eating Beijing snacks. They are delicious. Don’t miss Beijing Duck. It is really nice.

Dalian is a beautiful city. Dalian is close to Beijing. I spent 5o minutes on the plane. Dalian is near the sea. I smelled the salt in the air. The roads are clean. There are lots of trees and flowers near the roads. There are many esplanades and Japanese buildings. There are some fountains in one of the esplanades. Some people flew kites and walked on the esplanades. We went to see the beach and the sea. The sea is blue. There were many swimmers in the sea. I lay on the beach to see the sky. Dalian is a very nice place to live in.

Huhehot is in Inner Mongol. There are lots of large grasslands. The grasslands are endless. The sky is bright blue. There were a lot of horses and sheep. They were running or eating grass. I rode a horse on the grassland. I picked some colourful flowers. We drank tea with milk. There is a small desert, it was very hot when I walked on it. The sand could sing. These trips helped me open my eyes. I enjoyed my day.

旅行作文英语（6）

During the summer vacation I went to a lot of tourism destination, with picturesque scenery, there are very surprised, among them, my favorite that lets a person want to stay back and forth park, the breeze blowing on calm water of the lake is covered with wrinkles, lake live fish, shrimp, their cheerful singing, swimming, the lake also waved to people from time to time. Two lines of egrets flying in the sky, sometimes a little water on the surface of the lake, sometimes have a rest on the shore, and nodded to the people ask sound good.

I often have worry will come to the park to the lake said v. my heart as long as sit on for a while will unlock the heart lock, as long as I have wronged I will come to the park to the injustice of egrets told me just stand for a moment I would like to open. When I sat on the lake in my heart only a few words want to say: "lake, thank you for giving me support, you opened the big lock in my heart. Egrets, thank you for giving me the strength, did you read my heart. Your love for me I'll never forget."

As the vast lake, your heart to the sea.

旅行作文英语（7）

This is the second time for Mr. Brown to visit Jinan. During his stay in Shandong, he will visit several schools. Next week Mr. Brown will visit some places. First, he will take a train to Tai'an to climb Mount Tai. Then he will go to Qufu by bus to visit the Temple of Confucius. After that, he will return to Jinan by bus. Then he will fly to Qingdao for a visit. There he will stay for some days and give a talk on American English. At last he will take a plane to go back to America from Qingdao.

Mr. Brown comes to Shandong for a visit to several schools. He is in Jinan now. This is the second time for him to come here. Next week he will visit some places. First, he wants to go to Tai'an by train to climb Mount Tai. Then he will visit the Temple of Confucius in Qufu. After he returns to Jinan by bus, he will fly to Qingdao to stay there for some days. There he will give a talk on American English. After the talk, he will fly back to America and end his visit to China.

这是布朗先生的二次访问济南。在山东逗留期间，他将参观几所学校。下周布朗先生将参观一些地方。首先，他将乘火车到泰安去爬泰山。然后他将乘公共汽车去曲阜参观孔子庙。之后，他将乘公共汽车返回济南。然后他将飞往青岛参观。在那里他会呆几天，给一个讲美式英语的讲座。最后，他将乘飞机从青岛返回美国。

布朗先生来到山东参观了几所学校。他现在在济南。这是他到这儿来的.第二次了。下周他将参观一些地方。首先，他想乘火车去泰安爬山。然后他将参观曲阜的孔子庙。他乘公共汽车回到济南，他将乘飞机去青岛待几天。在那里他会给一个关于美国英语的讲座。会谈结束后，他将飞回美国，结束对中国的访问。

旅行作文英语（8）

Going to high school is my first time to leave home. I have to live in school from Monday to Friday. I like to stay away from my parents for some time, because I can make my own choice and be free to go anywhere. My friends and I like to spend the weekend in the countryside that near the city we live. It is the short travel that I can not only appreciate the beautiful scenery, but also learn to be independent. The things that nature teaches me are a lot. I can see from the color of the cloud to predict the weather and the sound of of animals have different meanings. All of these are hard to know from the books. I have my own thinking from these trips, and the way to take care of myself helps me to grow up.

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旅行让我成长

上高中是我第一次离开家,我必须住在学校，从星期一到星期五。我喜欢离开父母一段时间,因为我可以自己做决定,随便去任何地方。我的朋友们和我喜欢在我们生活的城市附近的'乡镇去度过周末。短暂的旅行,我不仅可以欣赏美丽的风景,同时也学会独立。自然教会我很多的东西。我能从云的颜色来预测天气和动物的声音有不同的含义。这些都是很难从书本学到。从这些旅行中,我有了自己的思考方式，也学会了照顾自己，这让我成长。

旅行作文英语（9）

There are many beautiful trips keep in my heart, but the most unforgettable good trip is in 20xx, I went to Hangzhou to join in "National Competition for King of Story ", by the way to there, I went to a old town - Wuzhen, and a well known beautiful lake - West Lake. Especially, I had a exciting Wu Pengchuan ride on Wuzhen Lake, sit down in it, just extend your hand, you can enjoy a cool summer in this clear lake. Weall didn't want to go home because the view is so beautiful, and thereare so many other exciting things to try, but sadly it was time for us to go.

It was definitely an exciting trip.If I have a chance to go there again, I will be more than happy to visit the place.

旅行作文英语（10）

The Spring Festival

The Spring Festival，Chinese New Year，is the most important festival for all of us. All family members get together on New YearEve to have a big meal.At the same time，everyone celebrates to each other.At about 12 oclock，some parents and children light crackers.The whole sky is lighted brightly. We may watch the fireworks excitedly.How busy it is！

On the first early moring of one year，many senior citizen get up early and they stick the reversed Fu or hang some couplets on the front door. Some houses windows are sticked on red paper cutlings.

The Chinese New Year lasts fifteen days. So during the fifteen days，we always visit our relatives from door to door. At that time，children are the happiest because they can get many red packets form their parents，grandparents，uncles，aunts and so on. The last day of the Chinese New Year is another festival. It names the Lantern Festival.

So the Chinese New Year comes to the end.

Will Christmas Replace the Spring Festival？

Christmas arouses increasing attention year by year in China. Christmas cards become popular with students. People hold Christmas parties and exchange Christmas girts. A lot or TV and radio programs about Christmas are on. Meanwhile the Spring Festival is less appealing to youngsters. Thus some people wonder whether Christmas will replace the Spring Festival.

This worry is fairly unnecessary. Why ？One reason lies that Christmas only affects Christians，college students and joint—ventureworkers. Another reason is that Christmas is mostly celebrated in cities. Few people in countryside show extreme interest in this exoticfestival. By contrast，the Spring Festival is the most influential traditional festival in every family.

I think，it is natural that with increasing exchanges with the West，a lot of Western holidays have been gradually introduced into China. For us Chinese we should never neglect or even discard our own traditional festivals. For centuries Chinese have observed this traditional holiday to welcome the beginning of a new year. And we will treasure the Spring Festival forever.

My plan of next year

A new year ，a new start，when I stand on the edge of a new year，I cant help thinking about my plan of next year.

Just as the old saying：“Well began is the half of the success.”So I decide that I should be at work while the others are still relaxing ，and then ，at the beginning ，Im quicker than the others and of course I will get better result than the others.

But ，what I really decide to do is that I must make good of anytime I can spare though it seems impossible. While，I will do my best to live up with what I have planned，and the result will prove it.

旅行作文英语（11）

My Pleasant Trip

August 8th Sunday

Sunny

Last summer,I spent a one-week holiday in Yunnan.

On the first day,we went to Dali,where I put on their traditional clothes to take some photos near the beautiful Butterfly Spring.The next day,we got to Er Hai.We took boats sailing on the water and enjoying national dancing performance.The last destination of our tour is Yu Long Snowmountain.I chose to ride a horse to climb the mountain.Though several times I fell down from the horseback,I felt excited.

It's a very pleasant trip.I'll keep it in mind forever.

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愉快的旅行

8月8日 星期天 晴

去年夏天，我在云南度过了一周假期。

第一天，我们去了大理。 在那儿，我穿上传统的民族服装，在美丽的蝴蝶泉边拍了许多照片。第二天，我们到达洱海，荡舟于湖面，欣赏传统民族舞蹈表演。我们旅行的最后目的地是玉龙雪山。我选择骑马爬雪山，虽然从马上摔下来几次，我仍然很兴奋。

那是一次愉快的旅行，将永留我记忆中。

旅行作文英语（12）

the past ages of man have all ben carefully labeled by anthropologists. descriptions like ‘palaeolithic man’, ‘neolithic man’, etc., neatly sum up whole periods. when the time comes for anthropologists to turn their attention to the twentieth century, they will surely choose the label ‘legless man’. histories of the time will go something like this: ‘in the twentieth century, people forgot how to use their legs. men and women moved about in cars, buses and trains from a very early age. there were lifts and escalators in all large buildings to prevent people from walking. this situation was forced upon earth-dwellers of that time because of their extraordinary way of life. in those days, people thought nothing of traveling hundreds of miles each day. but the surprising thing is that they didn’t use their legs even when they went on holiday. they built cable railways, ski-lifts and roads to the top of every huge mountain. all the beauty spots on earth were marred by the presence of large car parks.’

the future history books might also record that we were deprived of the use of our eyes. in our hurry to get from one place to another, we failed to see anything on the way. air travel gives you a bird’s-eye view of the world- or even less if the wing of the aircraft happens to get in your way. when you travel by car or train a blurred image of the countryside constantly smears with the urge to go on and on: they never want to stop. it is the lure of the great motorways, or what? and as for sea travel, it hardly deserves mention. it is perfectly summed up in the words of the old song: ‘i joined the navy to see the world, and what did i see? i saw the sea.’ the typical twentieth-century traveler is the man who always say ‘i’ve been there,’ you mention the remotest, most evocative place-names in the world like el dorado, kabul, irkutsk and someone is bound to say ‘i’ve been there’—meaning, ‘i drove through it at 100 miles an hour on the way to somewhere else.’

when you travel at high speeds, the present means nothing: you live mainly in the future because you spend most of your time looking forward to arriving at some other place. but actual arrival, when it is achieved, is meaningless. you want to move on again. by traveling like this, you suspend all experience; the present ceases to be a reality: you might just as well be dead. the traveler on foot, on the other hand, lives constantly in the present. for him traveling and arrving are one and the same thing: he arrives somewhere with every step he makes. he experiences the present moment with his eyes, his ears and the whole of his body. at the end of his journey he feels a delicious physical weariness. he knows that sound, satisfying sleep will be his: the just reward of all true travelers.

旅行作文英语（13）

currently, people in growing numbers are seeking to make tours in other countries. as is vividly indicated in the above chart, the numbers of foreign-travelling people in x city has reached to more than 120,000 in the year of 20xx, compared with about 12,000 in 1995 and less than 40,000 in 20xx. from the chart, we can also predict that this trend is likely to continue in the following years.

the reasons for the increasing of traveling abroad are obvious as follows. firstly, as the development of people’s life style and economy, they are rich enough to afford to go travel abroad. secondly, the world has become a small village as the information age and internet improve. thirdly, more and more people are interested in the cultue of other countries, therefore they are eager to visit them in their eyed. as we can see from the chart, this trend mentioned above will bring lots of benefits for us. for one thing, traveling abroad will help connect our world closely and enhance the friendship between countries. for another, tourists can leran great amount of experiences and cultures, which will be unquestionably beneficial for our countries development.

旅行作文英语（14）

New Years Day morning, we all woke up, only I still sleep, dream of snow.

Suddenly heard his father said loudly: "Rainbow, woke up, snow." I heard the hearts of a little do not believe, but I still got up the bed, put on new clothes, down the floor. A look, wow! I saw a white blurred piece. All the things like wearing a white dress. The sky is still floating like goose snowflakes. I was so excited! I suddenly wanted to run snow in the snow, the mother pulled me. "Now do not work, so the snow stopped the energy to play, or the clothes will be wet." I think also for the first wash finished, and then eat breakfast, and other snow stopped, I waited for a morning, the snow did not stop The The time has come for lunch, and after I have eaten, the snow has finally stopped. I and my mother all the way to the snowman, the mother rolled a snowball as a snowmans body, I rolled a small snowball when the snowmans head, made with black beans snowmans eyes, with black pen and eyebrows and mouth, with carrot Make a nose and make a hand with a branch. So that a lively and delightful snowman is ready. We and the snowman all the way to take pictures. According to the number of how many, according to the finished phase we have to fight snow ... ... this day is the happiest day of my holiday.

旅行作文英语（15）

This is the second time for Mr. Brown to visit Jinan. During his stay in Shandong, he will visit several schools. Next week Mr. Brown will visit some places. First, he will take a train to Taian to climb Mount Tai. Then he will go to Qufu by bus to visit the Temple of Confucius. After that, he will return to Jinan by bus. Then he will fly to Qingdao for a visit. There he will stay for some days and give a talk on American English. At last he will take a plane to go back to America from Qingdao.

Mr. Brown comes to Shandong for a visit to several schools. He is in Jinan now. This is the second time for him to come here. Next week he will visit some places. First, he wants to go to Taian by train to climb Mount Tai. Then he will visit the Temple of Confucius in Qufu. After he returns to Jinan by bus, he will fly to Qingdao to stay there for some days. There he will give a talk on American English. After the talk, he will fly back to America and end his visit to China.

旅行作文英语（16）

have a travel plan.I’m going to be in the Shaihai from January eighteenth to the twenty-fifth.I’m going to buy some clothes and books.I’m going to be in the Chouzhou from January twenty-sixth to the thirty-first.

I’m going to visit my grandma .I’m going to be in the Guangzhou from February first to the fifteenth.I’m going to Disney Land.

旅行作文英语（17）

We got to Hong Kong early in the morning. It had taken us about 2 hours to come here by plane. It is really an exciting city and very different from Taiyuan. My uncle showed my mother and me around Hong Kong. We visited Hong Kong Park.

我们在清晨到了香港。我们花了大约2个小时的飞机来到这里。这真是一个令人兴奋的城市，和太原完全不同。我叔叔带我和妈妈到处游览。我们参观了香港公园。

After lunch we went to St. John's Cathedral. It is an old and quiet church. Then we did some shopping in a supermarket and bought a nice watch for my father. On the way back to the hotel we both felt tired but happy. We enjoyed ourselves very much.

午餐后我们去了圣约翰教堂。这是一个古老的、安静的教堂。然后我们在超市购物，买了一只很不错的手表给爸爸。在回酒店的路上，我们都感到很累但很高兴。我们玩的很开心.

Tomorrow we are going to Disneyland.

明天我们要去迪斯尼乐园。

旅行作文英语（18）

It is a traditin in china t pa a visit t the tb f their ancestrs’ n Spring Festival and I did it this ear, t.

Since it is reall a ver iprtant thing fr Chinese peple, I gt up earl this Spring Festival .And taen b a car; I cae t ft f the untain where grandfather was buried. When I stepped up the untain, an eries flashed bac t e. At the ent I felt a little guilt because I was the blue-eed b f grandfather but when he passed awa, I didn’t cr fr his death and it was als the first tie that I had visited hi since he died 3 ears ag. Nw never will I catch the chance t see hi again.

Befre grandfather’s grave, I hped sincerel that he culd frgive e. After that we lit the incense and firewrs.

On the wa bac he, I lst self in ind again. I still can reeber that grandfather was full f energ the da befre he died. He even taled t e gentl and it seeed that the Gd let grandfather live lnger. But the next da the Gd changed his ind.

There is n dubt that tie is the greatest agician f the wrld .It creates the transfratin fr happ dssier t illinaire. And it als aes the transfratin fr lives t bdies withut suls. S we shuld tae care f ur liited tie befre the sands f ur life are fast running ut.

Ww, what a da and what a visit.

旅行作文英语（19）

一、基本的写作步骤

许多考生在拿到作文题后，就雷厉风行地动手写了起来，结果不是写的一塌糊涂就是改得乱七八糟。在四级考试（包括其它水平考试）的写作中，通常进行以下五个步骤：审题、选材、腹稿（包括提纲和正文）、书写、修改。

1．审题

审题是写作的第一步,也是最关键的一步。因为如果跑题了的话，就几乎不得分了。所以在拿到题后，一定要冷静地弄清题目要求；然后确定文章的文体以及主题思想。

通常在四、六级的作文中，有两种形式。一种是给出题目和提纲（中文或英文），另一种是给出题目和每一段的段首句（段首句大多是该段的主题句，其实相当于提纲）。我们应该充分利用这些信息，才不至于跑题。以20xx年1月份的试题为例，它的题目是“HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview?”，给出了两个要点（提纲）：

（1）面试在求职过程中的作用

（2）取得面试因素：仪表，举止谈吐，能力，专业知识，自信，实事求是......

从这些信息来看，这篇文章应该是一篇议论加说明的文章，要求写的是如何在找工作时顺利（成功）通过面试。两个提纲告诉我们，文章至少要分两个部分，第一个部分是议论，说明面试是重要的；第二个部分要从第二点中给出的几个方面挑几点说明怎样去做。

但是这两个部分在文章中的比重应该如何？是否要平均？

此时应该看到，标题中的关键词是HOW，因此文章的重点应该在第二点，而第一点只是作为引言。

那么文章要分为几段呢？

在英语文章中，每一段只讨论一个问题。所以第（1）点显然要独立成段，第（2）点因为是文章的重点所在，可以是一个长一点的段或分为几段。但要注意的是，既然第一段是一个引言，那么文章就应该还有一个总结的段落，这是原提纲中没给出来的。

2．选材

确定了文章的主题和轮廓之后，我们就开始考虑要选择哪些要点来阐明主题。选材一定要围绕主题句进行，同时要考虑到全面性。

比如在考虑上面第一点时，我们要想到面试对双方都是重要的。对于interviewer来说，通过面试他能对applicant有更好的了解，能通过面试挑到合适的人选等；而对于interviewee来说，他能通过面试更好地了解所申请的工作、薪水、待遇等信息，还能更好地展示自己，还能增强自己的社会知识，能练习与人打交道等。

但这些是否都要写进文章中去呢？或者比重是否都应该一样呢？

当然不。就面试的作用来说，因为标题是站在求职者的角度来说的，因此面试对于求职者的作用就显得比它对招聘者的作用更为重要。而在后者中增强自己的社会知识、练习与人打交道等方面，并不是面试最重要的方面，就可以舍去。就第二点来说，提纲中给出了许多方面，但这些方面也不能一一都写进作文中去，否则就不是一篇考试作文，而要写一本求职大全了。应该挑最重要的和最好写的'去说，别的可以一带而过甚至不提。

3. 打腹稿

打腹稿是不可省略的一步，但却为许多人所忽视。其实打腹稿就相当于我们平时写作时打草稿，只是考试时没有时间，也没有纸用来打草稿。 建议平时写作时，要养成良好的习惯，即使在打草稿时也要仔细想一想要怎么写，在脑子中先将文章“读”一篇。

打腹稿时，首先要考虑文章的开头和结尾，然后是各个段落间的衔接和过渡，然后是各个句子怎样写，要注意用自己熟悉的、有把握的句子，同时也要注意句子之间的衔接与连贯。

4. 抄写

严格地说，第四步仅仅是将前面三步的结果用笔写到试卷上。这部分不应占用太多的时间，真正需要时间的是前面的三步。

5. 修改

修改的主要任务是检查一下有无拼写和语法方面的错误，同时注意是否用词有过多的重复。

总之，在写作时切忌一边想一边写。

二、文章的衔接与连贯

在评分标准中，同是否扣题同样重要的是文章的连贯性。往往有的文章扣题倒也扣题了，但还是得不了几分，这其中的原因恐怕与连贯性有很大的关系。 这里所说的连贯有两两层含义。一是指文章在内容上是连贯、统一的，文章中所有的句子都是为全文的中心服务的。就各段而言，其中的每一句话都要紧紧围绕着该段的主题句进行，不能说与主题句无关的东西。有人也将其称为统一性。请看一例：

The weather has been changeable. On Sunday we had a high wind that blew down some trees. Monday was so cold that we had to turn on the heat and wear out winter coats. On Tuesday we formed a group to go roller skating. By Wednesday the weather cleared and the sun came out. Thursday was as hot and humid as an August day. Friday morning it began to rain, and it looks as if we’ll have a cold, steady wind for a few days.

这一段写“最近天气多变”，首句为主题句。扩展句叙述了星期日、星期一、星期三、星期四和星期五的天气情况，用以展开关键词changeable。但星期二没有提天气，而是说当天的活动安排，偏离了主题，打断了段落叙述的连贯性，破坏了段落逻辑意义的统一性，应删去或改为与天气有关的话。

再如：

Sports benefit us in many respects. When taking part in sports, we get the chance to train almost all parts of our body. There is no doubt that properly balanced physical activities keep us physically fit. Furthermore, sports can enrich our life and maintain our psychological health. Through participation, everyone can learn that on the playing field he not only competes for himself but also for his team. Sports teach us about consideration, cooperation and optimism, and how to cope with difficulties.

第一句是本段的主题句，接下来作者从体育运动对身体的好处说了

旅行作文英语（20）

Travel is beneficial to us in at least three ways. First, by traveling we can enjoy the beautiful scenery in different places. We will see with our own eyes many places read of in books, and visit some famous cities and scenic spots.

Second, we will meet people with different interests and see strange and different things when we travel. We can get ideas of the conditions and customs of other people, taste different foods and local flavours if we like. In this way, we can understand how differently other people live.

Third, travel will not only help us to gain knowledge of geography and history and other knowledge, which will arouse our deep love for our motherland, but also will help us keep healthy and make u s less narrow-minded . Travel does benefit us both mentally and physically .

With all these advantages of travel, it is no wonder that travel has now become more popular than ever in China.

旅游有利于我们至少在三个方面。首先,通过旅游我们可以享受美丽的风景在不同的地方。我们用自己的眼睛会看到许多地方阅读的书籍,并参观一些著名的城市和景点。

第二,我们将与不同的利益和满足人们看到奇怪的和不同的.东西,当我们旅行。我们可以得到别人的条件和海关的想法,如果我们喜欢品尝不同的食物和地方风味。通过这种方式,我们可以了解不同的人。

第三,旅游不仅能帮助我们获得的地理和历史知识和其他知识,这将激发我们热爱我们的祖国,还可以帮助我们保持身体健康和减少美国心胸狭窄。旅行的好处我们无论在心理上还是身体上。

与所有这些旅行的好处,难怪旅游现在已经成为在中国比以往更受欢迎。