高考英语作文满分作文（1）
Ways of making friends Everyone needs friends, so how to make true friends is very important to anybody. First of all, you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you always sure to get a smile in return. You should think more of others than of yourself and try your best to make a stranger fell at home.
Think as you are in his position. Try to remember others names, which will make them fell that they have made an impression on you. If you dont agree with others,dont argue but discuss with them. Finally,dont believe those who leave their friends when they are in trouble because “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
高考英语作文满分作文（2）
My dream job will be working in one of the biggest international accounting firm as an accountant. I want to be an accountant because I love mathematics and business so much. Also, being an accountant can help me to explore my knowledge of business and provide me a board range of network among the business world.
I need to do a lot in order to achieve my goal. First, I have to get an undergraduate degree in accounting from college. Then I might either to go graduate school for a more advanced degree in accounting or get prepare for the CPA exam. With the CPA lisence, I have a better opportunity to get a job in the accounting firm. Finally, with my experience in the accounting firm, I can apply accounting position in the international accounting firm and to serve as an accountant there!
高考英语作文满分作文（3）
作文题目
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的.情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
注意：1．词数：100左右：
2．参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。
Dear Bob,
Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.
Best wishes !
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。
Dear Bob,
How are you these days?
I’m so glad
高考英语作文满分作文（4）
【作文题目】
描述你在学校的一次午餐，具体要求如下：
详细描述用餐的情况
简要表述你对这次午餐的感受
这是一篇简单却需要挖掘的文章，因为如果只是描述用餐情况，显然缺乏深度，夸夸其谈，流于表面。学生拿到这样的题目需要仔细考虑用餐背后的东西。比较容易想到的话题是食物浪费、用餐卫生、餐桌礼仪等。在创作范文中，笔者另辟蹊径，通过大多数同龄人用餐时的'匆忙来衬托“我”的悠然自得，凸显出在紧张的高中学生生涯中，作者能够留有一片心灵净土，通过饮食来调节情绪，更好地面对挑战，表现出乐观的人生态度。此文结构简单，文笔清新，语言精准，并运用了高中阶段常见的语法结构，不失为一个很好的作文模板，供学生借鉴。
【作文范文】
The instant the bell indicating the endof the last class rang, out of the classroompoured all students but one。Unlike my peers, I was in no hurry to make a run for the school canteen, to rush through lunch and to return to the classroomfor homework. I arrived at the canteenwhen amassive queue had formed.Waiting for my turn patiently, I smelled the aroma ofthe appetizing food. Greasy as some dishesmight be, the wide range of food preparedby the school was superior in nutritional val-ue to that found elsewhere.
The typical schedule of a highschooleris extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch breakis a rare timewhen overworked students canwind down and enjoy the pleasure providedby the flavorful food. Imake it a point topampermy taste buds by savoring every littlebit of taste in food.What I usually like to do over lunch is have amindless conversa-tionwith a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses along the bonebreaking journey through high school. Werounded off our lunch with a dessert, re-freshed and satisfied。 Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude towards life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges.
高考英语作文满分作文（5）
【试题回放】
实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。
注意：
1、对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2、词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3、演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。
Good afternoon, everyone.
The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.
Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.
Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.
What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.
Thank you for your listening!
【名师点评】
这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的演讲稿，文中大量运用排比句型，不但准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的'信息，而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同结构的复合句式，将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句议论应如何倾听，则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。
高考英语作文满分作文（6）
在现实生活或工作学习中，许多人都写过作文吧，作文是通过文字来表达一个主题意义的`记叙方法。一篇什么样的作文才能称之为优秀作文呢？下面是小编整理的高考英语满分作文 Teenagers and Video Games，仅供参考，希望能够帮助到大家。
These days most adults seem to think that most teenagers spend all of their time playing video games. However, when we surveyed 100 students in our school on the topic of video games, we discovered some interesting results.
According to the survey, playing video games was only chosen as the third favorite leisure activity, with 22 votes. Also we can see the time spent on it varies from boys to girls. Most girls spent between 0 and 2 hours one day while one more hour went for boys on average. It’s apparent to show that boys are addicted to it more easily. Finally, as for the students who were interviewed, 47 percent held the view that they spent less time compared with that of last year.
It’s a good phenomenon, to some degree, showing that the quality of students’ leisure time is improving, though we still need to keep an eye on the future trends.
What do you think of school uniforms Have you ever been to a school which did not have a school uniform Write and tell us about your: experiences and opinions. Send your letters to "Chatback" at the CITY MIRROR.
高考英语作文满分作文（7）
在平时的学习、工作或生活中，大家都尝试过写作文吧，写作文是培养人们的观察力、联想力、想象力、思考力和记忆力的重要手段。那么一般作文是怎么写的呢？下面是小编为大家整理的高考英语的满分作文:上网看法，欢迎大家分享。
We should say that every coin has its two sides. So it is with surfing on line.
Generally speaking, students will benefit a lot from Internet. People can get lots of useful information through the Internet quickly ,no matter it is national or throughout the world. We can also listen to the music and chat with the friends far away.The most important of all is that we can search many foreigners who speak English as their native languge, which can help us improve our Enlish rapidly.We can send Email to our good friends in a few seconds---with the internet your friend don't need to wait for so long time as receiving a letter as before.
But it also can spread many side effects.for example ,there are some sexy news and pictures on web which will not do good to teenagers. And there are some games that can easily attract the students and even make you addict to the games so you can waste a lot of valuable time.
On the whole it will give you both good and bad things, the thing matters much is how do you make use of it.
【参考翻译】
我们都说任何事物都有其两面性，所有上网也不例外。
总的来说，学生通过互联网还是受益颇多的，我们可以很快从网上取得很多有益的信息，不管是国家的还是世界的。还可以在网上听音乐和远方的朋友聊天，最重要的是可以接触到很多讲英语的.外国朋友和他们当地的方言，以帮助我们快速提高英语水平。通过互联网我们远方的朋友不再像以前一样需要花很长一段时间才能收到信件，只需几分钟就可以给我们的好朋友发送邮件。
但同时也带来很多不同的影响，比如，很多不利于青少年的色情新闻或者图片在网上出现，同时还有很多易于吸引学生的游戏甚至长时间沉溺于游戏。
总的来看很多东西都有利有弊，就看你如何去利用它。
高考英语作文满分作文（8）
April 12 is memorable because our clahad a meaningful experience on that In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the Upon arrival, we began to work Some were digging Some were carrying and planting young Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the Before leaving we took some photos to record our green Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our
高考英语作文满分作文（9）
Where is my home?
Some fish are forced to leave polluted water and are flying in the But unfortunately, air is also so polluted that they have to wear Each of them is crying, “Where is my home?” What a terrible sight!
Mankind has brought so much Waste is being poured into rivers and Poisons to kill pests in farming and chemicals go into rivers and seas, Poisonous gasses from factories also make the air so The whole balance of nature is being destroyed as a result of our ignorance of the environmental
Personally, man can not live alone on the Should fish die from serious pollution, so would man! It is high time we did something to prevent such a scene from
高考英语作文满分作文（10）
江苏高考英语作文篇1假如你是李华，是一名高中生。随着科技的发展，iPad已成为中学生的新宠。用iPad既可以听音乐，阅读纯文本电子书，又可玩电子游戏。请你用英语给某英语报社写一封信，谈谈中学生使用iPad的情况。信的内容必须包括以下几点：
1、使用iPad对学习的好处：
2、对课堂纪律和学习可能产生的负面影响：
3、提出自己的建议并说明理由。
注意：开头已经给出，不计入总数。词数120字左右
Dear Editor',
I'm a senior high school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and think it's a fashion to use them.
参考范文：
Dear Editor',
I'm a senior high school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and think it's a fashion to use them. Using an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen. Apparently, it's helpful to our study, especially to our English listening.
Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music without earphones, which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed. Some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games.
In my opinion, as students, we should make good use of iPads to help achieve academic success. The classroom is a place for students to study, and therefore concentration is awfully needed for us to learn our lessons. Furthermore, the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPads in a proper way.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
江苏高考英语作文篇2近期，雾霾Dust-haze天气频频发生，PM2.5(可入肺颗粒物)与PM10(可吸入颗粒物)这两个此前不被人熟知的词最近一直被许多人提及，环境保护越来越受到人们的关注。作为一名青少年，我们如何尽自己的微薄之力来保护环境，请以学生会的名义发出一个倡议。
要点：1.环保受到人们更多的关注;2.环境的现状;3.应采取的措施。
注意：词数120～150(格式已给出，不计入总词数)。
词汇提示：过低碳生活live a low-carbon life
①My fellow students, recently, the Dust-haze weather hit the north of China over and over again, which had a great effect on people’s life and health. ②As a result, people are becoming more and more concerned about our environment. ③As we all know, it’s the development of industry and heavy traffic jams that have caused air pollution. ④So as a teenager, I think we should take some measures to protect our environment.
⑤On one hand, we’d better launch a campaign to raise people’s awareness of environmental protection. ⑥Also we can hold a speech contest about protecting environment to stress the importance of living a low-carbon life. ⑦On the other hand, do what we can to influence people around us to go to work or school on foot or by bike. ⑧As far as I’m concerned, every small step we take really counts. ⑨So please remember: together, individuals can make a difference.
江苏高考英语作文篇3假设你是李华。近日，你的英语笔友Jack听说你们学校正在开展“建设节约型社会(Construction of an energy-saving society)”主题活动，发来邮件请你介绍一下你对活动的看法和建议。请你结合以下要点，用英语给Jack回复邮件。
1.不浪费粮食和纸张;2.尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋;
3.毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用;4.其他建议。
[满分范文]
Dear Jack。
①Glad to receive your e-mail.
②As you know, there has been an activity of “Construction of an energy-saving society” in our school recently. ③I think it is of vital importance because our society is faced with the increasing danger of lack of energy. ④Many reasonable suggestions are given during the activity.
⑤In my opinion, there’re many things we can do. ⑥In our daily life, we shouldn’t waste any food or paper. ⑦It is also advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. ⑧Besides, I think the government should make it a rule that used textbooks should not be thrown away when we graduate from school, because most of the books are in good condition and can be recycled.
⑨Actually, there are quite a lot that we can easily do, for example, try to take buses or bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. ⑩Only with joint efforts can we help to construct an energy-saving society.
Yours。
Li Hua
江苏高考英语作文篇4In the current society, with the rapid development of the Internet, shopping on the internet has been a fashion especially among the youngsters.
在当今社会，随着互联网的飞速发展，网上购物已经成为一种时尚，尤其是青少年。
Online shopping has made our daily life become more convenient and feel comfortable. In the first place, shopping on the Internet can save much time so they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic study. In the second place, the Internet has provided kinds of goods to consumers, and we can save much money through online shopping.
网上购物让我们的生活变得更加方便和舒适。首先，在网上购物可以节省大量的时间，这样他们就有更多的精力和时间花在学习上了。第二，互联网为消费者提供了各种各样的商品，而且我们还可以节省很多钱。
However, every coin has two sides, online shopping also has shortcomings. We maybe buy some fake products online because of lacking of the face to face communication with sellers. What's more, the delivery will increase the risk of items' damage.
然而，每个硬币都有两面，网上购物也有其缺点。在网上我们可能会买到一些假的产品因为无法面对面与卖家沟通。更重要的是，物流也会增加商品损坏的风险。
Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the former, because shopping on the internet has become more and more important to us in our daily life. We should follow the footsteps of the times.
权衡这两种观点，我更倾向于前者因为网上购物在我们日常生活中越来越重要了。我们应该要跟上时代的脚步。
江苏高考英语作文篇5根据下列提示用英语在校园网站上报道该校即将举行的一次主题演讲活动。
主题：文明校园，我的责任
时间：本周六上午
地点：学校操场
演讲者：各年级演讲前两名获胜者
出席人员：全体师生
主要内容：不乱扔废弃物，保持校园清洁;
爱护花草、树木，让校园充满绿色;
不追逐打闹，文明举止;
关爱他人，让校园充满爱。
参考词汇：文明civilize
There will be a speech on our school playground this Saturday afternoon, whose theme is “To civilize schoolyard is my responsibility”. All the teachers and students are required to attend. In the activity, the first two winners in each grade will give such valuable advice as follows: we should not litter anywhere in order to keep our campus clean; we should love flowers, grass and trees so that everyone can enjoy the greenness; we should behave well instead of running after one another, quarreling and fighting noisily; we should care for others so that our school will be full of love. We believe our school will become more and more beautiful and peaceful.
江苏高考英语作文篇6假设你是李华，梁教授去年六月推荐你去悉尼大学深造，现在你已经被悉尼大学化学学院录取，请写封信向梁教授表示感谢。
Dear Professor Liang,
I am writing to extend my gratitude to youbecause with your help I am now a student of Chemistry Department of SydneyUniversity.
Last June, when I applied to become agraduate student of Sydney University, you really gave me a lot of valuablehelp. You not only wrote a recommendation(推荐) for me to Professor Wells who worksin the Sydney University but also gave me careful and patient instructions onhow to fill the application forms and write the application letters.
It is your unreserved(无保留的) help thatenables me to obtain this splendid(极好的)opportunity of further education. For thefollowing two years I will study hard to reciprocate(回报) your sincere help andexpectations with excellent grades.
Yours truly,
Zhang Ying
高考英语作文满分作文（11）
Drunken driving is bound to generate severe consequence if we keep turning a blind eye to it. Firs and foremost, this behavior will directly threaten the safety of drivers, passengers and pedestrians/goers, resulting in traffic accidents, injuries and even deaths. Besides, treating the injured and repairing broken cars mean a grievous waste of money, time and resources. Last but not least, this irresponsible driving will make the road a nightmare, and thus, it will causes serious losses of faith in governments and the society.
In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures must be taken before things gget worse. First, it is essential that the supervisory role of laws and regulations should be strengthened to punish those performing drunken driving. Secondly, the public, especially drivers, should enhance their awareness of public safety. With stringent laws and alert public, it will only a matter of time for drunken driving to become things of past.
高考英语作文满分作文（12）
【试题回放】情景作文
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。
注意：词数不少于60
提示词：郊区suburbs
April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.
【名师点评】
本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。
英语专四作文满分范文：学生评价老师
专四题目：学生评价老师
Many students are required to evaluate their teachers but some teachers complain that these evaluations are unfair and can in some cases lead to the dismissal of a teacher. In your opinion, is the students' evaluation of their teacher a worthwhile exercise?
专四范文：
Difficulties with Students' Evaluation of Their Teacher
The students' evaluation of their teacher can be a very subjective proposition because it depends a lot on how the evaluation is made and how it is subsequently used. I believe most teachers would like to know how effective their teaching really is and how it benefits their students.
A difficulty with students' evaluation of their teacher is finding the right formulae to achieve an honest, constructive and independent response. The size and makeup of the class can be a reason for this difficulty. The larger the class the more likely will be the range of ability in the students. That fact Limits the interaction between the teacher and individual students and automatically influences how students will perceive the effectiveness of their teacher. Smaller classes are much less likely to have a great range of ability in the students and their evaluation of their teacher will tend to be more consistent. A crucial aspects with students' evaluation is how it is used. If it is a formal part of the school's program it needs to be used constructively in liaison with the teachers for the benefit of both teachers and students.
For students' evaluations to be worthwhile they need to be independent and honest. Negative comments from students, delivered with sincerity, can be very valuable in helping teachers change their teaching methods and making them more effective. Biased evaluations can lead to misinterpretation and less productive outcome. (237 words)
更多专四作文精彩句子：
1.An evaluation process depends on the methods used and how the evaluation is applied.
评价过程取决于使用的评价方法以及评价是如何进行的。
2.When dealing with opinions,it is usually very difficult to be entirely objective,
我们表达观点的时候，很难做到完全客观。
3.Teachers can be more effective with genuine feedback from their students.
老师从学生那里得到真实的反馈时，他们会更有效率。
4.Class size has a significant impact on students’ perceptions of their teacher.
班级大小对学生对老师的看法有重要的影响。
5.In some ways,negative feedback is more valuable to a teacher than positive comments.
在某种程度上，负面的反馈比正面的评价对老师更有价值。
相关链接：
英语专四作文满分范文：强制学生上课
20xx年高考英语满分作文及名师点评
20xx高考英语满分作文(上海)
描述你在学校的一次午餐，具体要求如下：
详细描述用餐的情况
简要表述你对这次午餐的感受
这是一篇简单却需要挖掘的文章，因为如果只是描述用餐情况，显然缺乏深度，夸夸其谈，流于表面。学生拿到这样的题目需要仔细考虑用餐背后的东西。比较容易想到的话题是食物浪费、用餐卫生、餐桌礼仪等。在创作范文中，笔者另辟蹊径，通过大多数同龄人用餐时的匆忙来衬托“我”的悠然自得，凸显出在紧张的高中学生生涯中，作者能够留有一片心灵净土，通过饮食来调节情绪，更好地面对挑战，表现出乐观的人生态度。此文结构简单，文笔清新，语言精准，并运用了高中阶段常见的语法结构，不失为一个很好的作文模板，供学生借鉴。
范文：
The instant the bell indicating the endof the last class rang, out of theclassroompoured all students but one。Unlikemy peers, I was in no hurry tomake a run for the school canteen, to rush through lunch and to return to the classroomfor homework. I arrived at the canteenwhen amassive queue had formed.Waitingformy turn patiently, I smelled the aroma ofthe appetizing food. Greasy as some dishesmight be, thewide range of food preparedby the schoolwas superior in nutritional val-ue to that found
elsewhere.
The typical schedule of a highschooleris extraordinarily hectic and thus lunch breakis a rare timewhen overworked students canwind down and enjoy the pleasure providedby the flavorful food. Imake it a point topampermy taste buds by savoring every littlebit of taste in food.What I usually like todo over lunch is have amindless conversa-tionwith a couple of studentswho have alsolearnt to smell the roses along the bonebreaking journey through high school. Werounded off our lunch with a dessert, re-freshed and satisfied。 Come to think of it, it is not the foodbutmy attitude towards life that affordsmepleasure and empowersme in facing up tovarious challenges.(219words)
一、语法解构
现在分词作定语 the bell indicating theend of the last class rang
倒装句
(1)out of the classroom pouredall students but one
(2)Greasy as some dishesmight be
不定式 Iwas in no hurry to make arun for the school canteen
状语从句 I arrived at the canteenwhenamassive queue had formed.
在分词作状语 Waiting formy turnpatiently。
20xx年高考英语满分作文及名师点评
作文题目
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。
注意：
1.词数：100左右：
2.参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).
I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.
Hope you will come here soon!
All the best!
Yours, Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以'which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。
Dear Bob,
Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.
I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.
Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.
Best wishes !
Yours, Li Hua
满分理由
本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。
Dear Bob,
How are you these days?
I’m so glad to know that you’ll come to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.
There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。
Dear Bob,
I’m so glad that you are coming to learn Chinese here. I’ve already found you a house near our school. I’d like to tell you something about it.
You may get on No.ll bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School. The house is near the school. It is about 25 square metres. In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window. You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it. There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom. The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen. So you may cook by yourself. The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month. Hope you’ll enjoy staying here!
Yours,
Li Hua
满分理由
本文内容具体，详略得当，表述方式很有创造力和新意，长短句并用，语言结构富于变化，错落有致，顺畅圆润，尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到，为文章增色不少。
Dear Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Welcome to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you. The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just one stop.
It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.
Yours,
Li Hua
20xx年高考英语满分作文及名师点评
【试题回放】
实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。
注意：
1、对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2、词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3、演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。
Good afternoon, everyone.
The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.
Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.
Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.
What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.
Thank you for your listening!
【名师点评】
这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的演讲稿，文中大量运用排比句型，不但准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息，而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同结构的复合句式，将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句议论应如何倾听，则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。
20xx年高考英语满分作文及名师点评
【全国卷I海南、宁夏】
【试题回放】
假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：
1.外出购物
2.替房东还书
3.Tracy 来电话留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消
2)此事已告知Susan
3) 尽快回电
注意：
1. 词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Mrs. Wilson,
I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.
Yours,
Li Hua
[名师点评]
本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。
高考英语作文满分作文（13）
安徽高考满分英语作文篇1Hi Worried,
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:
First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your ftiends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Yours,
Jamie
安徽高考满分英语作文篇2These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone. As for me, it should start on the way to school.
I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way. If I ride a bicycle, I’ll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk, I’ll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing. Meanwhile, I’ll regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. I hope my behavior will make a difference.
安徽高考满分英语作文篇3These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone. As for me, it should start on the way to school.
I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way. If I ride a bicycle, I’ll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk, I’ll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing. Meanwhile, I’ll regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. I hope my behavior will make a difference.
高考英语作文满分作文（14）
请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.
是开放性作文，要求考生把握好图画内容，发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人，要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性。行文结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。
高考英语作文满分作文（15）
Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool”.
Nowinourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion.Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife.Theyhavethesamehairstylesastheirfavorablestarsandweartopbrandofclothesandshoes.Someuseexpensivemobilephones.Thereasonswhytheydosoareasfollows.Firstly,theyhopetolooksmartandspecial.Secondly,theywanttowinothers’admirationandrespect.Inaddition,itmakesthemfeelcool.
AsfarasIamconcerned,westudentsshouldholdtherightsenseofvalues.WeshouldpracticethriftinourdailylifebecauseitisoneofourChinesetraditionalvirtues.What’smore,itisadvisableforustodonatesomepocketmoneytotheHopeProjectsothatthosepoorchildreninruralareascanreturntoschooltoreceivenormaleducation.Lastbutnotleast,itistheinnerbeautyratherthanourappearancethatmakesusrespectable.
Thankyouforlistening!
【译文】
大家下午好！
我今天演讲的题目是“我的态度在学校工作，追求时尚”。
现在在我们学校有一个追求时尚热点。有些学生生活非常昂贵的生活。他们有他们的有利星级相同的发型，穿的衣服和鞋第一品牌。有些使用昂贵的移动电话。究其原因，他们这样做如下。首先，他们希望看起来聪明和特别。其次，他们想赢得别人的钦佩和尊敬。此外，它使他们感到凉爽。
据我所知，我们的学生应持正确的价值观念意识。我们应该在日常生活中实践节约，因为它是我们中华民族的传统美德之一。更重要的是，这是值得我们捐些零用钱给希望工程，使农村地区的贫困儿童能重返学校，接受正常的教育。最后但并非最不重要的，它是内在美，而不是我们的外表，使我们尊敬的。
谢谢你的关注！
高考英语作文满分作文（16）
Asisknowntoall,thetwobronzeanimalheadsweremadeduringtheQingDynastytodecorateYuanmingyuan.In1860,theBritishandFrenchtroopsbrokeintoBeijingandburneddowntheroyalgarden,takingawaymillionsofChineseartworks,includingthetwoheadrelics.
TheChinesegovernmentisstronglyagainstthisauctionandhasrepeatedlyaskedforthefreereturnofthemaccordingtotheinternationallaws.Atthesametime,theChinesepeoplehavetakenactions,too.SomepeopleevenflewtoFrance,tryingtostoptheselling.However,theFrenchcompanyjustwouldn’tlisten.
Inmyopinion,theauctionshouldbestronglycondemned.NotonlyhasithurtthefeelingsoftheChinesepeoplebutalsoitbroughtshametoFrance.Asmiddleschoolstudents,wemuststudyhardersothatwecanmakeourcountrymorepowerfulinthefutureandstopanysuchthingsfromhappeningagain.
【译文】
上个月在巴黎，一家法国公司拍卖两个铜像----老鼠的头部和一个兔子头捕捉到中国，这在中国引起很大的关注。
由于众所周知，这两个青铜兽首均是在清代装饰圆明园。1860年，英法联军闯入北京，烧毁了皇家园林，带走了中国的艺术作品以百万计，其中包括两个头的遗迹。
我国政府强烈反对这次拍卖，并一再为他们自由返回要求按照国际法律。同时，我国人民已采取行动，太。有些人甚至飞到了法国，试图阻止销售。然而，法国的公司就是不听。
我认为，拍卖应该受到强烈谴责。它不仅伤害人民的感情，但也带来了耻辱，法国。作为中学生，我们必须努力学习，使我们能够再次发生在我们的祖国更强大的未来和制止任何这样的事情。