作文的建议英语（1）
●适当放慢进度，留出思考时间
●反复训练重要、易错知识点
●指导方法
●减少作业量以保证质量
●给予更多鼓励
注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;
3. 词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。
Dear Mr. Wang,
We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.
In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation.
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范文(One possible version)
Dear Mr. Wang,
We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.
In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.
By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.
作文的建议英语（2）
I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.
First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.
Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.
(We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)
作文的建议英语（3）
We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.
In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.
By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.
作文的建议英语（4）
优点：1. 话题广泛;
2. 图片丰富;
3. 有助于提高学习兴趣。
建议：适当降低词汇难度。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
满分作文
Dear Editor,
As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.
In my eyes, these books have a lot of advantages. To begin with, there are such a wide variety of topics in the books that they can satisfy students’ curiosity better. In addition, the pictures in the textbooks are very interesting and attractive. Not only can they draw students’ attention, but they can also arouse our interest in learning English. In short, we have benefited a lot from these books.
However, in my opinion, there are still some shortcomings in the textbooks. We find some words are a bit difficult to remember. Therefore, I suggest that you can make them easier to understand.
Best regards,
Li Hua
亲爱的编辑。
作为学生的读者，我写了一个关于你家出版的英语教材的作文。
在我的眼里，这些书有很多优点。首先，他们可以更好地满足学生的好奇心，有这样一个各种各样的主题的书籍。此外，在教科书中的图片是非常有趣和有吸引力的。他们不仅能吸引学生的注意力，而且能激发我们学习英语的兴趣。总之，我们从这些书中受益匪浅。
然而，在我看来，教科书中仍有一些不足之处。我们发现有些话是有点难以记住。因此，我建议你可以让他们更容易理解。
最好的问候。
李华
作文的建议英语（5）
如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。
obviously， it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢?
更多句型：
accordingly， i recommend that some measures be taken.
consequently， to solve the problem， some measures should be taken.