中考优秀作文:我和朋友之间的故事
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2022-11-02 00:41:56
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要求:

故事必须原创;

80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;

文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考要点:

分享故事(起因,经过,结果……);

表达感受(幸福,感动,思考……);

. ……

A Story Between My Friend And Me

There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me.

高分范文

【写作点拨】本文是一篇命题作文,并给出了参考要点。由题目“A Story Between My Friend and Me”可知写作的重点在于叙述故事,并表达感受。写作时,可选取个人与朋友之间印象深刻,且比较有教育意义的事件。叙述个人故事,要用第一人称,且时态主要为一般过去时,表达感受时,用一般现在时。

【高分范文】

A Story Between My Friend and Me

There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. One thing happened in the past had a deep influence on me.

Here is the story. On a rainy day, I suddenly fell down and hurt myself badly. My left leg was broken. So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study. Then my friend Mingming came to see me. When he knew about that, he said he could help me with my study. On hearing this, I didn’t feel worried any more. From that day on, he taught me every day. I was so moved. I didn’t fall behind the other students with Mingming’s help. I thanked him a lot.

In my opinion, friends are very important in our life. No matter what happens, true friends will always be friends.