In the past
Now
Personalities
shy, quiet, get nervous easily
brave, outgoing…
Hobbies
reading
reading, singing…
Abilities
good at dancing, singing…
要求:
1. 覆盖要点，可以合理增加细节；
2. 80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly.
【优秀满分范文】Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly.
Mary used to be a shy and quiet girl. She used to get nervous easily and her face often turned red when she spoke with strangers. She liked nothing but reading alone in her free time. However, she has changed alot since she joined the Buddy Club. Now, Mary is so brave and outgoing that she isn’t afraid of speaking out in public any more. What’s more, she has lots of hobbies, such as singing, writing and dancing. She is good at them as well.
People sure change all the time, right? What we should do is to learn from Mary. Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves.