城市雅思（1）

        Question

These days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the

Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation ( migration from the country to the city) and suggest some ways in which this trend could be reversed?

Key words analysis

? rural areas: 郊区, 它的相对词是urban areas

? depopulation: 减少居民，后面括号内的内容是岁这个词的解释

? trend: 趋势，和tide, current同义

? reverse: 使倒转

Argument:

? 这是属于议论文中的problem的类型，通常会在要求学生表达对这个问题的看法和给出一些解决方案。

Possible effects :

? 过于拥挤的城市易影响城市的舒适度

? 过于拥挤的城市可能会导致失业率升高

Possible solutions:

? 政府进行商业性的引导

? 加强农村基础建设，提升生活便利性

Model Essay 1 – Part 1

Introduction

Rural depopulation is a very important issue in many parts of the world In this essay, I will discuss some of the main effects of this problem and also offer some possible solutions to

Main body 1

Firstly, it is clear that migration away from the country negatively affects life in the Serious environmental and social problems often occur when cities become Problems such as air, water and noise pollution are now increasingly common in urban areas around the world because there are simply too many people living Pollution can make city life very uncomfortable indeed and can even cause Beijing is a very good example of Overcrowding in cities can also lead to high unemployment (especially in poorer parts of the world) and

Model Essay 1 – Part 2

Main body 2

In order to prevent people from moving away from the country and reduce the size of cities, I feel we must make country life more In my view, the best way of doing this would be to improve services in the One of the main reasons that so many people have left the country is that facilities like shopping centres, cinemas, swimming pools, restaurants, libraries, schools and hospitals are generally better in the If such facilities were available in the country, more people would choose to live Another effective solution would be for the government to subsidies businesses and workers who move to the

Conclusion

n conclusion, I believe we must all recognise how serious this problem For the sake of the environment and our own quality of life it is vital that we preserve rural

城市雅思（2）

雅思大作文题目：

Since cities have changed a lot, the size ofthe cities has grown Discuss thecauses and consequence of the enormous sizeof

雅思大作文范文：

Nowadays, the maps of cities are With the development of city, more andmore suburbs become parts of the When thecities in the world are amplifying constantly, peoplediscuss the topic hotly, the causes andconsequence of the enormous Different people have different answers by theirrespective

In my opinion, the evolution of society and the development of economy result in thegrowth of the vast size of Since the number of population in every city is increasingcontinually, people need a large amount of space to live With the progress of the technology,the output of crops rises Fewer and fewer farmers are required, as a result, more andmore villages The growth of the cities brings us many huge

There are more job opportunities in the For instance, China will hold the OlympicGames in Beijing in The government is amplifying the size of Beijing to build new gyms inorder to hold it Obviously, people in the cities could gain a lot of new

Of course, the enormous size of cities also has bad Pollution is becoming more andmore serious all over the world with the amplification of the For example, thepoisonous gas sent off by factories and automobiles has made the air unhealthy for people Water waste keeps pouring into rivers and lakes; as a result, many water species aredying Furthermore, more people the city have, more rubbish we can

In a word, since each coin has two sides, we should be acquainted clearly with the reasonswhy the size of the cities has grown enormously and what it will bring Thus, we could makefull use of the positive effects and overcome the negative

城市雅思（3）

题目

Some people think a rise in standard of living in a country only seems to benefit cities more than rural What problems may those differences cause? How to solve those problems?

题型：问题解决

翻译：有些人认为，提高一个国家的生活水平似乎给城市带来的好处比农村更大。这些差异会造成什么问题?如何解决这些问题?

写作结构

开头段：引入背景+话题介绍

主体段 1：可能造成的问题之一

主体段 2：可能造成的问题之二

结尾段：可采取的措施

范文解析

开头段

交代背景“一个国家的工业化和城市化大大提高了公民的生活水平。然而，许多人断言发展的成就城市超过农村，并产生了许多问题”，表示“应采取措施解决问题”。

背景句：The industrialization and urbanization of a country have massively improved the living standard of its However, many people assert that the developmental achievements have benefited cities much more than rural areas and a series of problems have

话题介绍：This essay will discuss the problems and then offer feasible solutions to cope with the

主体段 1

高度发达的大都市区占据了多数的优质资源，提供了大量的就业和商业机会，导致大量年轻农村居民涌入城市寻求机会，直接导致欠发达地区的劳动力和资金严重短缺。

主题句：The imbalance of economic and social progress between rural and urban areas is starkly visible and have triggered a number of

平行列举：First, the highly developed metropolitan areas have occupied the quality resources of education, medical service, finance, commerce and entertainment, providing numerous opportunities in employment and As a result, a large number of young rural dwellers crowd into the city to pursue education, hunt jobs and make investments, directly leading to the severe shortage of available labour force and capital in the underdeveloped The loss in population and finance would inevitably worsen the overall economic development in rural

主体段 2

由于农村和城市居民的受教育程度、职业和收入不同，可能导致农村居民进城务工的时候收到歧视。

主题句：The second problem resides in the aftermath of rural-urban

平行列举：As a multicultural destination, the city holds a huge population with diverse backgrounds in terms of education, profession, income, social class, and even Individuals from underdeveloped places tend to have less professional competence and personal wealth, due to the lack of educational and commercial resources in rural Such discrepancy might trigger discrimination towards the rural residents who struggle their way through the urban What's worse, the widening wealth gap might even force the poorer ones to commit crimes to obtain more material

结尾段

可采取措施解决发展不平衡的问题，如政府应该帮助农村居民利用当地资源发展旅游和商业贸易产业;在农村地区的教育系统中投入更多的劳动力和资金;还需要立法和监管来打击与歧视和暴力有关的行为。

Several solutions could be taken into account to improve the The government should help rural residents exploiting local resources, such as natural landscape and specialty products, to develop industries in tourism and commercial Once the industries are on the rise, job opportunities would be generated, along with a growing business revenue and average In addition, more workforce and fund should be invested into the education system in rural If rural dwellers could obtain a specific skill or a certain academic qualification, they would be more professionally competent and Furthermore, legislation and regulation are also required to fight against conduct related to discrimination and

重点表达

living standard 生活水平

a series of 一系列

cope with 处理，解决

labour force 劳动力