英语作文赏析（1）

Summer is the great season for all sports in the open It is the season for baseball which is often called the national sport because of its I usually watch television and read the newspaper reports about the baseball results of the newspaper reports about the baseball results of the little

During the summer I like to go to the beach often because it is very close to my home in the I usually go there bur in the summer vacation to relax after many months in school in the I feel very comfortable with the familiar quiet of the

夏天是户外运动最好的季节。这是个打棒球季节，通常被国家体育称为受欢迎程度的季节。我通常看电视和读有关棒球比赛结果的报纸报道。

在夏天，我喜欢经常去海滩，因为它离我家很近。我通常在暑假去城市放松。我觉得熟悉的村民的平静让我很舒服。

英语作文赏析（2）

July 20,20xx

I went to summer camp on On the first day, we went to a beautiful It was a sunny and hot day, so we went The water was warm and we had great Then the next day, we went to the There were many trees and I really enjoyed On the last day, we had a great We sang and danced We didn’t want to leave the friends and the I hope I can go to summer camp again next

我去夏令营度假。第一天，我们去了美丽的海滩。这是一个阳光和炎热的一天，所以我们去游泳。水是温暖的，我们玩得很开心。然后第二天，我们去了山区。有许多树木，我非常喜欢他们。在最后一天，我们有一个盛大的派对。我们高兴地载歌载舞。我们不想离开朋友和老师。我希望明年我可以再次去夏令营。

3 Unforgettable summer vacation 难忘的暑假

I think this summer over a very meaningful day,in addition to the study of computers outside,also tried a new aerobic exercise -YOGA,I love this sport, so I learned an optimistic face life,but also to correct my bad shape,for my future learning and life will be very helpful,I love YOGA,with the hope more people will join me to try this new

今年暑假过得非常有意义

我觉得今年暑假过的非常有意义，每天除了学习计算机以外还尝试了新的有氧运动-YOGA，我非常热爱这项运动，它让我学会了乐观的面对生活，还纠正了我的不良体形，对我今后的学习及生活都有很大的帮助，我爱YOGA，希望有更多的人和我一起尝试这项新的运动。初中英语作文难忘的暑假

英语作文赏析（3）

That was a morning in the early of I took a bus to my school in the suburb which was surrounded by rice paddies and The sky was gray with the gloomy clouds congregating gradually along the far eastern "There must be a heavy rain " I spoke to

When I hurried into the classroom, the sky, gray before, was shrouded now by black clouds, darken to twilight, I felt quite stuffy, while it was quite calm, without I saw the leaves of trees and grass static, which seem to await something Several minutes later, I saw the lightening split the clouds and heard the thunders Suddenly, the curtain of rain fell and the wind soon the grass flattened under the wind and the With the rain forming like a fog, the sky became I took several deep I felt

The heavy rain lasted three hours and stopped when the class was The air was so fresh and the sky was so I felt like a new man

那是6月初的一天早上，我乘汽车去郊区的学校上课，学校四周是稻田和鱼塘。天空是灰色的，在遥远的东方地平线上有阴云在慢慢汇聚。我心想：“要下大雨了。”

当我匆忙走进教室时，原本灰色的天空已被黑云笼罩，像黄昏。我感到气闷，而周围一切都很静，没有任何声音，没有风。我看到树叶和草一动不动，像等着什么事情发生。几分钟之后，我看到闪电撕开云层，听到随之而来的雷声。突然，大雨倾盆，风也起了。草在风雨中倒伏。随着雨下成了雾状，天空开始放亮，我深吸了几口气，舒服多了。

大雨下了三个小时，下课的时间停了，空气那么新鲜，天气那么晴朗，我感觉像换了一个人似的。

英语作文赏析（4）

national day is coming，and we can have a family are going to 's a good seaside are staying there for a we are going to the beach and going swimming in the 're visiting tianya haijiao，wanquan river and many other beautiful think we'll have a good time

【译文】

国庆节来了

国庆节来了，我有七天的假期。我们一家去海南。那是一个美丽的海滨城市。我们在那里待上一个星期。我们去沙滩，还在海里游泳。我们游览“天涯海角”，菀泉河还有别的许多好地方。我想我们在那里会玩得很开心。

英语作文赏析（5）

it is known to everyone:oct,1st is our national this day i went to street and saw i will tell you!

at 8:00 i got up and went bus station with my mother .o my god there were so many people!with difficult we got up the bus and felt very traffic was so bad too!i cost nearly 1 hour that we arrived the center of

what were worse there were even more people!in my opinion it was not very interesting to come out at this day!nest time i prefer to stay at home and study! the night of sthe national day hanghai has never appealed to city born and city bred, i've got tired of the brightness of neon signs and the grandeur of skyscrapers in

but on this year's national day, i spent a whole night roaming nanjing road and the bund the symbol of the modern material shanghai, with my it's the first time that i went out with with the huge amount of tourists, we could only wander with the cluster of people, having no in the crowd, we entertained ourselves singing, joking and chatting, leaving all the worries, pressures and unhappiness behind,until mid tired as we were, we still felt very my roommates were quite impressed by the beauty, prosperity and the liveliness of but for me, all these were none of my what i treasured was the time i shared with them though that night shanghai was so charming that she seemed to be one of the leading cities in the

英语作文赏析（6）

in the autumn of october, in the joy of the harvest season, in this twenty-first century tenth fall, once again we ushered in a grand festival -- 62anniversary of the founding of the national day celebration, china, china god chau as cheerful as a

looking back 62years, from scratch, from weak to strong, the growth of the republic as the new saplings, although suffer the baptism of wind and rain, is still standing; even after suffering, but see more

in the past 62years, china produced the change we turn the world upside down with advanced agriculture, developed industry, we have the world's cutting-edge science and technology, in the world of sport can enjoy chinese athletes won the gold and silver bright and brave, the "sick man of east asia" stigma has gone for ever, replace is" the world sports power " of the

mother, we have made great achievements and proud, for in your arms and proud, we love you that 9600000 square kilometers wide, love you the next thousand years of long, love you love you the wonders of the world the great wall, the roof of the world, pearl mu lang, love you running information of the yellow river of the yangtse river, love you through civilization "silk road", love you towering erect high mountains, love you beautiful beautiful china is our home, we love china!

today, stand under the flag, as the blood red color, passion of our blood, the magnificent singing andirritate our since we can not use language to express your love, that will allow us to use action to show it, we will use wisdom hands to depict the country in twenty-first century of the grand blueprint for the motherland tomorrow, to create brilliant!

英语作文赏析（7）

I am going to have a busy weekend ! On Saturday , I'm going to clean my room and do homework. Then , in the evening , I 'm going to the supermaket with my mother . On Saturday, I'm going to the bookstore on foot . I'm going to buy some books. Then, I'm going to go home and read the new books. In the evening , I'm going to watch TV. That will be fun! What about you? What are you going to do on the weekend?

四年级英语作文：暑期难忘的一件事

It was a sunny day today,when i got up in the morning,i decided to see my grandparents.so i took the bus and got there at noon,they were happy to see me,and i was very happy,too.

In the afternoon,my farther asked me to help him water the plant,and i was happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.

In a word,today is a unforgetive day.because i saw my relatives and helped people.

四年级英语作文：我的业余爱好

My hobby

I am Cendy. I am in Nanhai Experimental Primary School. I am in Class 9, Grade 6. I am tall and thin. I live in Dali. I have many good friends. I often play with them.

I have many hobbies, riding a bike, drawing pictures and reading books. But I like to read books the best. Because of reading books is good for my study. I also like riding bikes. Because of it does a lot of good to my body.

What’s your hobby? Can you tell me?

四年级英语作文：我的小兔子

One day, my mother bought two little rabbits for me. I’m very happy.

From that on, the two little rabbits became my good friends. They have two little ears, red eyes, with white and fat boby. They’re marvellous.

Everyday, they play with each other happily. One day, I couldn’t find them. I asked my mother: ”Where are they? ” My mother told me that She didn’t know. At last, I found them in the grass. They were very dirty. I was angry, but when I looked at their lovely faces, I was happy again.

I love my little rabbits, and they love me. They are my good friends forever.

四年级英语作文：秋天的颜色(The Colour of Autumn)

Autumn comes , it gets cooler and cooler. The sky is blue and the clouds are white. You would say autumn is blue and white.

Look ! Birds are flying from the north to the south. The leaves are yellow. Some are hanging on the trees, some are on the ground ,some are dancing in the wind. Someone would say autumn is yellow.

There are so many fruits in autumn in Xinxing . Pears ,peaches. Mangos, oranges and so on. They're fresh and healthy.

四年级英语作文：我的铅笔盒(My Pencil-box)

I have a good friend. Her name is Pencil-box. She is a very beautiful girl. Look! there is a picture on her face. It's a picture of flowers. Her coat is blue and yellow. there are some pencils, a pen, a ruler, a rubber and a tape in her stomach. From Monday to Friday, I go to school with her. When I want to copy or write the new words, I open her mouth and take out the pencil from her stomach. She helps me a lot. And I like her very much.

英语作文赏析（8）

请以Good Health为题写一篇文章。

【参考范文】

GoodHealth

The desire for good health is universal. Especially nowadays, the possession of good health is regarded by nearly everyone as essential to a happy life as well as a successful one. Only in good shape can you expect to live comfortablyorwork effectively.

How to keep healthy, then? First, enough time should be set aside for persevering in exercises in addition to sleep and rest. Second you must give up the habits that damage your health, such as smoking and drinking too much alcohol. Finally, be sure to have your physical check-up regularly.

As for me, I have always been taking care to have proper sleep and relaxation. In my spare time I like running, swimming, and playing table tennis. So, I can keep fit and have a good life.

【名师点评】

本文层次清楚，逻辑分明，第一段讲好身体的重要性，第二段讲保持身体健康的种种方法，第三段讲就“我”而言，“我”如何加强体育锻炼。本文语言地道，亮点颇多，如：First… second… Finally…三个词分述三种方法；The desire for, …is universal, Especially nowadays, the possession of, is regarded by nearly everyone as…, Only… can we expect to….How to…then? As for me, I have always been taking care to… so, I can…等，这些短语的运用使得文章错落有致，多姿多彩。