英语作文中考(必备18篇)
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英语作文中考(1)

第一,词汇量要充足。

词汇量多少很大程度上决定作文是否能写得下去。

第二,审题要充分。

我所教的学生中在写英语作文时,普遍存在这样一个情况:看完作文题,就开始写,想到哪写到哪,只要把字数凑够了就停笔了。这样写出来的文章,看起来就像在记流水帐,没有任何逻辑,杂乱无章,毫无条理,同时容易出现用错时态、用错格式等的情况。试想,如果你是试卷的命题人,你出作文题的时候,肯定有出这道题的独特的道理。所以仔细审题和构思就成了写作的第一步。审题的重点放在写作体裁、格式、字数方面,确保第一遍审题就能保证得到基本分。同时还要文体和时态,因为不同的文体要求的写作格式也是不同的,时态的要求也非常重要。

第三,提纲要详细。

审完题后一定要列提纲。很多学生认为,中考英语作文译成中文,最多是小学二年级的语文作文水平,所以根本没有必要列提纲。其实,这种想法是非常错误的,因为提纲不仅能使文章的结构清晰,还有很重要的一点:防止漏掉作文内容。因为中考英语作文有一个很重要的要求:要点要全。如果你漏掉了需要写的内容,即使文章写得再优美,用词再准确,也拿不了高分。最后要注意打草稿,然后修改。这样可以保证错误降低至最少或者没有错误,同时也能保持卷面整洁。

第四,文化差异要注意

我们要时刻牢记一点,中英文表达方式有很大的差异,所以体现在作文表达上也常常会出现生硬的中国式作文表达,降低了我们的作文质量。所以注重中英语言差异,并努力找到两者之间的表达方式上的共通点,并且有意识的运用就能避免类似的问题。

第五,细节错误要摒弃。

很多孩子在写作文时常常感觉写得非常好,用上了几个高级句型或者不错的词汇短语,以为可以得高分,但最终结果出来后却与预想差距很大。主要的原因是很多细节没有注意。比如第三人称单数,名词的单复数,大小写,甚至标点、书写、段落安排等,这些细节问题也很重要。

最后:背诵阅读优秀的中学生的作文集

写作很容易在短时间内有大的飞跃,要做的就是积累一些经典的句型、地道的表达方式。可以背诵阅读优秀的中学生的作文集,把精彩的段落和句子抄下来并仿写,最后整理出几十个最常用、最精彩的表达法,写作文时有意识地想一想,总能用上几个。

做好以上几个方面,中考英语写作是很容易提高的!


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Dear Tom,

I came to your house this afternoon, but you were out. So I leave this message. We'll go to visit a factory and a village the day after tomorrow. We'll meet at the school gate at seven thirty in the morning and come back at five o'clock in the afternoon. We'll ride bikes there. At noon we'll have lunch and have a rest in the village. Please take your bike, lunch food and drink.

Yours

Zhang Hua


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I am in Xianchi Railway Middle School. There are about 40 teachers and 900 students in my school. It's very large with two small gardens. Some small trees and flowers are planted. We enjoy beautiful flowers in spring, summer and autumn. They are the places the students like most. There are two modern teaching buildings and a teaching building in my school. Our classrooms are large and bright. We feel so happy to study in such comfortable classrooms. Besides, the teachers in our school are so excellent that they are popular in our students. Students build a good relationship with teachers. I am sure you will like my school.

我在仙池铁路中学读书。学校大约有40名老师和900名学生。学校很大,还有两个小花园,里面还总有一些小树和花。在春、夏、秋三季,我们欣赏美丽的花朵。那里是学生们最喜欢的地方。学校有两栋现代教学楼和一栋办公楼。我们的教室宽敞明亮。在如此舒适的教室里学习我们感到很快乐。此外,我们学校的老师很优秀,所以在学生中很受欢迎。学生们和老师建立了良好的关系。我相信你一定会喜欢我们学校的`。


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Mr Green,Im Wang Gang. Im very sorry to tell you that I was ill. Im not feeling well. This morning I went to see a doctor. He told me that I had caught a bad cold.

I have to stay at home for two days. So I cant go to school today or tomorrow. I hope Ill get well soon. Ill ask you for your help when I meet you in two days. Thank you.

Yours,Wang Gang


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Today,I’ll talk about going online. We know thatthere are too many net-bars (网吧) around us. The Internet can make our lives interesting and enjoyable.Many of us like going online very much because we can learn how to usethe puter and get more information from the Internet. We can learn English.We can read some good newspapers and magazines. It can make us cleverthrough playing puter games. I can sende-mails to our friends quickly. We can chatonline with our friends. It can help us get in touch with (取得联系) people from all over the world, but unfortunately the government doesn’t allow munication with many people.

But some students spend too much time playing puter games and some stay in net bars all day and all night.As a result, they do worse and worse in their lessons andthey don’t study well any more. I think we shouldn’t goonline when it is time for us to study. We can do it in summer or winterholidays.


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Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. It is a new way of shopping. Many things are offered and wait for your choosing. Convenience is the most important advantage. You can buy anything as you like. You don’t have to queue with other shoppers. Meanwhile, it is often open for 24 hours a day.

However, there are many disadvantages about shopping online. You can’t actually see the real products. So you may be cheated easily. Also, many people will miss the best opportunity to get along well with their friends and share the joy of shopping.

In conclusion, we should make proper use of the internet shopping.

【参考译文】

网上购物在我们的日常生活中很受欢迎。这是一种新的购物方式。很多东西都提供了,等待你的选择。方便是最重要的.优点。你可以随意买任何东西。你不必和其他购物者排队。同时,它通常每天开放24小时。

然而,网上购物有许多缺点。你真的看不到真正的产品。所以你可能很容易受骗。同时,许多人会错过与朋友相处的好机会,分享购物的乐趣。

总之,我们应该好好利用网络购物。


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Each of us should stay healthy, which is the foundation of our activities. Here are some ways to stay healthy.

First, we should spend one to two hours a day in regular exercise; try to walk instead of ride. Second, we should eat some healthy foods such as vegetables, fruits and so on. They are able to help us maintain a healthy body. When we are in trouble, try to relax our mood, listen to the soft music. It also enables us to maintain a good health. Finally there is a good sleep can also assure us a healthy body. We should sleep seven to eight hours a day to maintain adequate sleep. If we can do follow these advice, I believe we can have a healthy body, a better life.

参考译文:

我们每个人都应该保持健康,这是我们活动的基础。这里有一些方法来保持健康。

首先,我们应该每天花一两个小时在经常锻炼;尽量步行而不是骑。第二,我们应该吃一些健康的食物比如蔬菜、水果等等。他们可以帮助我们保持健康的身体。当我们陷入困境,试图放松我们的心情,听轻柔的音乐。它还能使我们保持身体健康。最后有一个好的睡眠也能保证我们一个健康的身体。我们应该每天睡7到8小时,保持充足的睡眠。如果我们可以遵循这些建议,我相信我们可以有一个健康的身体,更好的生活。


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Some people think killing animals for food is cruel and unnecessary and some people think it is essential for daily diet. Nowadays, more and more meat was provided for people, therefore many people think that animals are being killed just for food, and this kind of action is cruel for animals.

The main reason is that people should not master existent right of animals. More and more wild animals are rapidly disappearing from this globe, it couldn't be divided with that animals were hunted and killed cruelly.

Another reason is that if people do not eat meat, their health will not be affected. Moreover, the Chinese Kongfu comes from the Chinese temple that is famous in the world.

Last but not the least reason is that people have already made all kinds of man-made meat, so they do not have to eat animal meat. At least, we do not have to kill animals in order to satisfy our appetite. Otherwise we will lose them.


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Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment.

It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China. A lot of fishes died. The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become grass land. The water is becoming less and less because of the bad weather.

So everyone should do something to save our environment. First, we should save every drop of water, such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the water. For example, we can water the plants and clean the rest room with our used water. Second, we should save energy, such as less turning on the lights and turning off the lights when we leave;Do more walking, more bicycling and less driving and so on. Third, we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.

Let’s act now from everything to save our environment. Don’t let our tears be the last drop of water in the world!


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初三中考在即。师生的复习应该进入一个非常专题化的时期。如何写好一篇60字的作文,争取18分的最大值,显然已经引起了师生极大的重视。原因很明显,本年度是中考有史以来作文分值最高的一年,要求也是最高、最细的一年,所以分差增大,原来最多不差三四分的作文,弄不好很可能差十分以上,十分!对于中考来说这可是个了不起的数字!那么如何提高作文得高分的能力?当然可以只回答一个字练。目标有了,最重要的就是方法了。至少我们应该注意作文的基本要求和基本技巧。

60字的作文,非常有限的文字里要说明白说清楚一件事或一个人物或者一个观点,并不是一件很容易的事情。所以更要注意结构、要求和技巧。

60字的作文最好先从结构上练起,一般要分这样五个层次:

1)开始句2)向主体过度句 3)主体叙述 4)向结尾过度 5)结尾。

第一层开始句起着点题的作用,60字的作文一定要开门见山。也就是第一句就能让人感觉到你将要写什么。但是往往是概括性地笼统地指出。所以往往是一句话就解决问题。第二层往往是在第一层的基础上具体指出某人或某事。第三层就这个某人或某事进行详细的叙述或议论或描写。但一般以3至4句为宜。因为中考作文的字数是60至80字之间。不足和超过都要扣分。所以应该及时向结尾过渡,完成第四层,多半以谈感觉为主。在主体叙述和结尾之间起着承上启下的作用。但也应该一句话解决问题。过渡的梯子搭好了,也就能够圆滑地圆满地结尾了。结尾的一句话往往是感慨、感想、感叹之类的句子。这样6至8句的作文,每句平均10字左右 (每个句子的字数根据含义的需要调整),最后写好的作文就应该是在60至80字之间了。


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How to Improve Memory?

Memory is important for everyone in all ages. How to improve it? It is a complex question. I have several suggestions. Firstly, have enough rest. Enough sleep can make sure brain works normally, because when people sleep, their brain and other organs also can rest. Enough rest can provide enough energy. Secondly, keep always thinking. Do not get used to the current situation. Keeping thinking when meets things can exercise brain. Thirdly, eat some healthy food that is good for memory, such as, radish, cabbage and spinach. I think these are helpful to improve memory。

译文:

如何提高记忆力?

记忆力对于每个年龄段的人都是很重要的。如何提高记忆力呢?这是一个复杂的问题。我有几个建议。首先,充足的休息。充足的睡眠可以保证大脑正常运作,因为人在睡觉的时候,他们的大脑和其他器官也得到了休息。足够的休息可以为它们提供充足的能量。其次,保持思考。不要安于现状。遇到的事情时要坚持思考可以锻炼大脑。第三,吃一些健康的、对记忆力有好处的食物,例如,萝卜,白菜,菠菜。我觉得这些都是有助于提高记忆力的。


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点题是用简明扼要的语句把文章的中心思想提示出来,话题作文作为一种应试文章,应该让阅卷者在短期内就有一个明确而正确的印象,了解这篇文章的材料和题旨,恰如其分的点题就能起到这样的作用。在文章恰当的地方(一般在结尾处,也可用“题记”的'形式出现在文首),恰当地点题,不但在结构上收拢全文、收束文脉,更重要的是,让阅卷者能及时充分、准确地把握文章的中心思想,对文章做出恰如其分的评价。话题作文的点题,一般可以采用明点的形式,在文章适当处出现和题目中关键字眼相同或大致相同的词语,直接解释和说明题目的含义,提示出文章的中心思想,以得到阅卷者的认可并赞同,当然也可以用象征式、比喻式、联想式的点题,但这类点题要求比较高,一般不易掌握,考生应该慎用。


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在日常学习、工作或生活中,大家或多或少都会接触过作文吧,通过作文可以把我们那些零零散散的思想,聚集在一块。一篇什么样的'作文才能称之为优秀作文呢?以下是小编收集整理的中考英语作文:幸福,欢迎阅读与收藏。

Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.

I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder.

I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents.


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【写作要求】

请根据以下提示信息以My favourite movie star为题,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,可适当发挥。

提示信息:

☆ Who is your favourite movie star?

☆ What does he or she look like?

☆ What do you think is his or her best movie?

☆ Why do you like him or her?

【优秀满分范文】

My favourite movie star

My favourite movie star is Jackie He has won many He is famous not only in China, but also in other

Jackie Chan is not very He has black hair and a big His eyes are not big, but He always smiles, especially after he beats bad Most of his movies are I think his best movie is Police He often gives money to help poor people, so I like him very


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Notice

The sports meeting which was to take place this Saturday has to be put off because of the heavy rairi these All students are required to come to school on Saturday morning as usual, but there will be no class that Weather permitting, the sports meeting will be held next Saturday Members of the school ping-pong team must come to the Ping-pong Ha]] at 4:30 this Saturday Ping-pong stars from Wuhan will come and give special training and coaching

Office of Physical Education

10th April, 20XX



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I'm always working hard for a bright I imagine what my life in 20 years will be

In 20 years, I will play an important role in my I will take care of my Maybe I will be married and have a lovely In my free time, I will get together with my good friends to talk about the past school We can also do other things such as gardening and doing What's more, I will have a job and face new I think I will be a doctor and help Last but not least, maybe I will have a It can help me a lot in my daily

In a word, I hope my life in 20 years will be a better one!


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思路:

审好题

仔细审查所给的内容提示(包括文字和图表等),明确要求写的内容,确定文章的体裁、人称、时态等,理顺思路,确定主旨。

看要点,写片段

对于易于表达的内容,一次成句;对于一时难于表达的内容,写出词组。此时,既注意不遗漏内容要点,也不要随意添加任何内容。

步骤:

定句型,连词成句

这个环节是成文的关键,一定要注意做到:

(1)选用比较有把握的词汇,用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。在熟悉的基础上,鼓励多用高级词汇和结构复杂的复杂句。如表达“为了……”时,可用inorder to do 或 so as todo.也可用sothat引导目的状语从句。

(2)写出的句子要达意,完整,语法正确,合乎习惯,特别是句式、谓语动词形式要有根有据。

(3)表达限定的内容有困难时,就要想到“AllroadsleadtoRome.”这句话,用变通的方法,以达到“曲径通幽”。如要译“他表哥外强中干”这样一句话,表达起来似乎很难,但我们完全可以通过学过的东西将这句话明白贴切地表达出来:Hiscousinlooks strong but in fact,he is rather weak.

(4)尽量避免使用汉语式的英语。例如要表达“她睡得很迟”,不可写成:Shesleptvery late.应该写成:Shewent tobed verylate.因为“sleeplate”表示“睡懒觉”。又如要表达“他一点都不担心他的英语”,不可写成:Heisnot a little worried abouthisEnglish.实际上意思完全相反,表达成“他非常担心他的英语”了。应该是:Heisnot a bit worried about his English. 或:He isnotworried about his English at all.

连词成句,添减相宜

单句写出后,根据短文的内容要求,确定先写什么,后写什么,按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要,重新排列组合已写成的句子,划分必要的段落,一般分成三段。

即:文章的开头(Introduction)、文章的主体(Mainbody)和文章的结尾(Conclusion).这样写成文章的初稿。在连词成句的过程中,还要注意以下几点:

(1)句子或段落间的连接不仅仅是个语言问题,也是个逻辑思维方面的问题,这两者是不能分开的。能注意到这一点,你的文章就能达到条理清楚、层次分明的境界。

(2)为了使句子或段落语义连贯,表达合理准确,可以适当加入一些连接词语。如表达转折可用but,however,otherwise等,表达递进可用and,also,besides,Whatsmore等,表达因果so,therefore,asaresult等,表达对比可用atthesametime,meanwhile,while等,表达让步可用though,although,evenif等。有时还需要加入一些必要的过渡句子以达到承上启下的效果。

(3)仔细推敲在文章的哪些地方可用复杂句。切忌生搬硬套,给人一种为了用复杂句而用复杂句的感觉。要用得自然、得体。要顺应行文的需要,与整个文章浑然一体。

尽量使用我们熟悉的宾语从句、状语从句和定语从句。

检查,修改,定稿,誊写

检查修改是进一步减少疏漏提高质量的最后程序,这时要对照题目要求,认真检查以下几点:

(1)内容有无遗漏或误词,最好一一对应检查。

(2)体裁格式对不对。

(3)句子是否有语法结构错误,特别要检查句子中的冠词、代词、名词复数、动词的时态、语态、主谓一致等方面是否有错误。

(4)句子是否合乎英语表达习惯,是否达意。

(5)书写字迹和标点符号是否规范清晰,词数是否基本上符合要求。经过认真修改润色的短文,即可认真工整地誊写在指定的卷面上。抄好后再速读一遍,力求完美。

经典题例

下面以扬中树人今年3月中考一模试卷的作文为例,谈谈写中考英语作文的具体步骤和应注意的事项。

原题介绍

目前,扬州正在创建(create)全国文明城市(NationalCivilizationCity)。作为一个中学生,我们在学校、在家里、在公共场合等等应该做到哪些才能称得上是一个文明的(civilized)人呢?我们又如何为这个活动作贡献(makecontributionto)呢?请你就此写一篇100字左右的短文。

Nowadays,________________________________________________________________

解题步骤

第一步:认真审题,明确写作体裁、提示要点、文章的时态、人称和词数。

分析:

这篇作文的体裁是倡议书。文章主要有5大提示要点,考生可以用笔将这些要点圈出来。1.扬州正在创建全国文明城市。2.作为一个中学生在学校怎么做才能称得上是一个文明的人?3.作为一个中学生在家怎么做?4.作为一个中学生在公共场所怎么做?5.我们又如何为这个活动作贡献呢?

这篇文章时态以一般现在时为主。人称用第一人称。词数100个左右。

第二步:分析提示要点,用简明的英语写出要点。

分析:五大提示要点只有第一要点是限定的,考生可以直接翻译。其余四大要点都是半限定的、半开放性的。考生需要根据文章主题的需要联系实际生活进行适当发挥。不同的考生会有不同的答案。这部分既是写作的重点也是难点。考生可用简明的英语写出要点。如:Atschool: keep the classroom clean and tidy. At home : helpparents dosome housework. In public places: obey the traffic rulesdont maketoo much noise . make a contribution to this event: giveoutleaflets to make people understand the importance ofthisactivity.

第三步:列出写作提纲,并将要点扩展成句。

开头(Introduction):Yangzhouiscreating a National Civilization City. As middle schoolstudents,weshould try our best to become civilized persons.

正文(Mainbody):

At school, we should keep our classroom cleanandtidy every day. We shouldnt throw about rubbish.

At home, we should help our parents dosomehousework.

In public places, we shouldnt make much noiseinpublic places. We mustnt cross the road until the trafficlightsturn green.

We can make a contribution to this event bygivingout leaflets to the citizens to make them understand theimportanceof this event and take part in it.

结尾 (conclusion):Iam sure Yangzhou will become a National Civilization Citysoon.

第四步:组句成文。

分析:根据文章内容和要求,可以适当调整以上句子的先后顺序。为了使文章连贯自然,表达准确,适当加一些表达并列、递进、因果、转折等关系的连词,然后组成文章,这时如果发现文章词数不够,可把短语变成句子,也可增添一些与表达内容有关的短语或句子。如:表达“在家”,不用“athome”.而用“When we areathome.”如果发现文章词数超过要求,可以将句子变成短语或两句并一句。

第五步:计划时间,认真检查、修改。

分析:

中考英语作文一般要求在20分钟内完成。因此,考试时间有限,必须合理安排。成文后必须认真检查修改。特别注意以下几点:

1.内容是否符合要求,要点有无遗漏或误解。

2.句子是否符合英语习惯,句型是否正确。

3.是否有语法错误。特别是冠词、名词的复数、代词、主谓一致、时态、语态等方面。

4.是否有拼写错误。

5.书写是否有不清楚或不易辨认之处。

6.大小写和标点符号是否使用得当。

7.词数是否符合要求。

第六步:认真誊写。

分析:

注意书写清楚、规范,卷面整洁。中考20分作文,有两分卷面整洁分。

下面是修改过的作文:

Yangzhou is creating a National CivilizationCity.As middle school students, we should try our best tobecomecivilized persons.

First, when we are at school, we should keepourclassroom clean and tidy. And we shouldnt throw aboutrubbish.Second, we should help our parents do some housework athome.Third, we shouldnt make much noise in public places. Besides,wemustnt cross the road until the traffic lights turn green.Whatsmore, we can give out leaflets to the citizens in order tomakethem understand the importance of this event and take partinit.

If everyone makes a contribution to thisevent,Yangzhou will become a National Civilization City soon.


英语作文中考(18)

英语作文中考预测篇1

假设你是李华,现就读于某寄宿制中学。你的室友王明经常违反寝室(dormitory)规定,如不整理床铺,休息时间大声拨打电话,未经许可(permission)动用他人物品,离开寝室不关灯等。为了提醒他改正不良习惯,做个文明室友,你决定写一封电子邮件给他。

要求:(1)包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;

(2)字数:60-80词(信得开头和结尾已给出,不介入总词数);

(3)信中不得出现你的真实姓名,学校名和地名。

From:

To:

Subject: To be a great roommate

Dear Wang Ming,

I'm writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules.

………

Best wishes,

LiHua

范文:

Dear Wang Ming,

I'm writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules. As we live in the same room, we are like families thus we should love each other and respect each other. What's more, we should make our room clean and tidy. Therefore, I hope you can read the following rules and obey them. Rule No.1 When you get up in the morning, remember to make the bed. Rule No.2 Don't make phone calls when we are sleeping. Rule No.3 Don't use others' things without permission. Rule No.4 Turn off the lights before you leave the room. I hope all of us can obey these rules and make our room more and more comfortable.

Best wishes,

LiHua

英语作文中考预测篇2

假如你是李华,是一名初中生。随着科技的发展,iPad已成为中学生的新宠。用iPad既可以听音乐,阅读纯文本电子书,又可以玩电子游戏。请你用英语给某英语报社写一篇短文,谈谈中学生使用iPad的利弊。短文内容必须包括以下几点:

1. 使用iPad对学习的好处;

2. 对课堂纪律和学习可能产生的负面影响;

3. 提出自己的建议并说明理由。

注意:开头已经给出,不计入总数。词数100字左右。

Is iPad Good or Bad for Middle School Students?

I’m a junior middle school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and they think it’s a fashion to use them.

【优秀满分范文】

Is iPad good or bad for middle school students

I’m a junior high school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and they think it’s a fashion to use them. Using an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen. Apparently, it’s helpful to our study, especially to our English listening.

Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music without earphones, which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed. Some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games.

In my opinion, as students, we should make good use of iPads to help achieve academic success. The

classroom is a place for students to study, and therefore concentration is awfully needed for us to learn our lessons. Furthermore, the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPads in a proper way.

英语作文中考预测篇3

假设你李华,你的美国朋友Tom 上个月来北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest),你在搜集资料,语言运用方面遇到了困难。请根据要点给Tom 写封email 1. 询问Tom的学习和生活情况 2. 谈谈你的困难并请他帮忙 3.你打算比赛后去看他。

范文:

Dear Tom,

How time flies! You have been studying in Beijing for nearly a month, during which you must achieved a lot .Well , how is everything going ? It is reported that the weather there is very hot and dry these days, which is different from that of your country . Have you adapted to it ? In addition, you once complained that the food served there is not to your taste. I hope that should have been improved.

I am glad to tell you that I am going to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest in July ,which is not only an honor ,but also an opportunity for me to improve myself. And now I try my best to make preparations for it .However , I have some trouble in collecting the materials relevant and using the language. I would appreciate it if you give me a hand to solve the problems

After the contest , I am to drop in at your school to visit you. Please wait for my phone.

Yours ,

Li hua