高考英语作文提分(优质3篇)
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高考英语作文提分(1)

一、追求优美要想让短文达到优美的境地,最重要的是语法正确,用词贴切。

但这远远不够,还要做到以下两点,才能使文章增色。

第一,使用较高级词汇,并且避免重复使用同一单词。20xx年高考题在表达"不应该收门票"时,不少考生写了"A park should not want/receive/accept entrance fee."三个谓语动词属于较低级的词汇,用在此意义尚可,但干涩无味,也不十分准确。换一种谓语"A public park should be free of charge."既能贴切地表达整体意义,又显得句子地道、优美。再如"公园是休闲的地方",很多同学都写成"A park is a place in which people can rest and be free.""be free"固然不恰当,整句也很生硬,有逐字翻译的感觉。如变通一下,"People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves."信息量增多,词数减少,并且用了need a place,enjoy themselves,给人以妥贴、地道的美感,也给阅卷者留下交际水平高写作能力强的印象,得分档次随之升高。

二、注意联贯高考试题拟题时考虑到计分的统一尺度,内容上的得分点都做了科学的安排。

近几年的内容得分点都有六、七个,写全一个即可得分。但得分多少还要看语言表达水平,按不同档次给分。由于考生比较注重对内容得分点的理解,所以这方面误差或遗漏不多。失分的原因往往是各个要点之间缺乏联贯,缺少内在的联系。有些考生仅限于将要点一一写出,就象翻译句子一样,没有成文。

要想写得联贯,要做到两点:第一, 适当加上"粘合剂".20xx年高考书面表达中,不少考生一开始便写"60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees."显得很唐突。如果加上"Opinions are divided on the question."或"Students are heatedly discussing the question."与上文就比较联贯,过渡自然。提到相反意见时,加上"On the other hand"就很恰当。常见的过渡词语还有:as a result,at last,at present,in a word,in the meantime,in general,I think,等等。

第二,句子紧凑,信息量要大。有的考生,用短小的单句较多,显得较松散。有的考生写的句子虽然长,但有效信息量不大,显得呆板、拖沓。要使短文联贯就必须学会紧缩句子,用排比、递进、平衡等等手法,或用并列句、复合句,在一句中表达较多的内容。例如,20xx年高考题表格右栏的三行文字,三个要点仅用一句话就能表达得淋漓尽致。

On the other hand,40% think that fees should be charged because they need money to pay gardeners and other workers,and to buy plants and young trees.

三、认真审题做题时切勿贸然动笔,应细读题目要求,认真审题,对文章框架做到心中有数。

审题要明确三项内容:首先认清体裁。作文题可分自由式、半控制式和全控制式。高考书面表达历来采用全控制式,亦称指导性写作(guided writing)。它的体裁、内容和篇幅都有明确的限定。体裁有叙述文、描写文、说明文和应用文。应用文包括书信、通知、日记等。无论提供材料的方式是通过文字、图画还是表格,要求写的文章体裁都是唯一的`。体裁、格式、风格是紧密联系的,一定的体裁有特定的格式。但是,相同的体裁也可能表达的人称、风格和说话的口吻相异。这需要细心思考才能确定。

第二,要考虑文章的主要时态。动词时态的错误是阅卷时最容易发现的错误之一。时态错误多是考生语言运用能力较差的显著标志。因此在写作中要力求避免时态错误。

第三,要琢磨表达内容的次序和短文的基本框架。英语书面表达无须插叙、倒叙,基本次序与所给提示一致即可。20xx年高考由于考生审题不慎,将书面表达写得层次不清。有的把两个截然不同的,又没有可比性的观点放在一句中表达,给人一种模糊、零乱的感觉。其实英语作文审题与汉语作文是相通的,只要有足够的重视,遵循"慢审快写"的原则,正确审题是不难做到的。


高考英语作文提分(2)

1. Some people think that …. To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below.

2. For years, … has been seen as …, but things are quite different now.

3. I believe the title statement is valid because….

4. I cannot entirely agree with the idea that …. I believe….

5. My argument for this view goes as follows.

6. Along with the development of…, more and more….

7. There is a long-running debate as to whether….

8. It is commonly/generally/widely/ believed /held/accepted/recognized that….

9. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the former/ the latter.

10. Before giving my opinion, I think it is essential to look at the argument of both sides.

二、表示比较和对比的常用句型和表达法

1. A is completely / totally / entirely different from B.

2. A and B are different in some/every way / respect / aspect.

3. A and B differ in….

4. A differs from B in….

5. The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in….

6. Compared with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B….

7. A…, on the other hand,/in contrast,/while/whereas B….

8. While it is generally believed that A …, I believe B….

9. Despite their similarities, A and B are also different.

10. Both A and B …. However, A…; on the other hand, B….

11. The most striking difference is that A…, while B….

三、演绎法常用的句型

1. There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones.

2. There are many factors that may account for…, but the following are the most typical ones.

3. Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.

4. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.

5. The reasons are as follows.

四、因果推理法常用句型

1. Because/Since we read the book, we have learned a lot.

2. If we read the book, we would learn a lot.

3. We read the book; as a result / therefore / thus / hence / consequently / for this reason / because of this, we’ve learned a lot.

4. As a result of /Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, we’ve learned a lot.

5. The cause of/reason for/overweight is eating too much.

6. Overweight is caused by/due to/because of eating too much.

7. The effect/consequence/result of eating too much is overweight.

8. Eating too much causes/results in/leads to overweight.

五、开头句型

1.As far as ...is concerned

2.It goes without saying that...

3.It can be said with certainty that...

4.As the proverb says。

5.It has to be noticed that...

6.It`s generally recognized that...

7.It`s likely that ...

8.It`s hardly that...

9.It’s hardly too much to say that...

10.What calls for special attention is that...需要特别注意的是

11.There’s no denying the fact that...毫无疑问,无可否认

12.Nothing is more important than the fact that...

13.what’s far more important is that...

六、结尾句型

I will conclude by saying...

Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...

All things considered,总而言之

It may be safely said that...

Therefore, in my opinion, it’s more advisable...

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that….

The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that….

It can be concluded from the discussion that...从中我们可以得出这样的结论

From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看来……也许更好

七、衔接句型

A case in point is ...

As is often the case...

As stated in the previous paragraph如前段所述

But the problem is not so simple. Therefore然而问题并非如此简单,所以……

But it’s a pity that...

For all that...In spite of the fact that...

Further, we hold opinion that...

However , the difficulty lies in...

Similarly, we should pay attention to...

not(that)...but(that)...不是,而是

In view of the present station.鉴于目前形势

As has been mentioned above...

In this respect, we may as well (say)从这个角度上我们可以说

However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is...然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面,即…

八、举例句型

Let’s take...to illustrate this.试举例以兹证明

let’s take the above chart as an example to

illustrate this.

Here is one more example.

Take … for example.

The same is true of….

This offers a typical instance of….

We may quote a common example of….

Just think of….


高考英语作文提分(3)

20xx高考英语作文提分佳句

1. Accomplishment is often deceptive because we don't see the pain and perseverance that produced it.

成功往往带有欺骗性,因为它背后的痛苦和坚韧,我们往往看不到。(挫折、成功、勤奋)

2.People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I don't think so. to read books is more valuable

人们常说金和银是世界上最有价值的东西,我却认为书本最为弥足珍贵。(读书、学习)

3 .Life is always so we covered all over with cuts and bruises, but later, the injured area will become our strongest places。

生活总是让我们遍体鳞伤,但到后来,那些受伤的地方一定会变成我们最强壮的地方。(挫折、励志、勤奋)

4.Have you ever seen a man who succeeds just by idling about ? The answer is "No"

你见过一个人靠无所事事而成功的吗?答案是否定的。(勤奋、努力、成功、励志)

5. A student must have knowledge,just as a solider must have armaments

一个学生必须有知识,正如一个士兵必须要有武器。(读书、知识)

6.Have an aim in your life,or your energies will be wasted

给人生定一个目标,否则你的努力就会被白费。(决心、目标、勤奋)

7.Books possess an essence of immortality. They're by far the most lasting products of human effort. Temple and statues decay,but books survive.

书是永恒不朽的,它是迄今为止人类奋斗的珍宝,寺庙会倒塌,神像会朽烂,只有书长存。(读书、知识、勤奋)

8. we are prepared to take on tomorrow's challenges

我们已经准备好接受明天的挑战。(万能句、勤奋)

20xx高考英语作文提分佳句

1.If you leave me, please don't comfort me because each sewing has to meet stinging pain.

离开我就别安慰我,要知道每一次缝补也会遭遇穿刺的痛。

2.Don’t forget the things you once you owned. Treasure the things you can’t get. Don't give up the things that belong to you and keep those lost things in memory.

曾经拥有的,不要忘记。不能得到的,更要珍惜。属于自己的,不要放弃。已经失去的,留作回忆。

3.I love and am used to keeping a distance with those changed things.Only in this way can I know what will not be abandoned by time. Forexample, when you love someone, changes are all around. Then I stepbackward and watching it silently, then I see the true feelings.

我喜欢并习惯了对变化的东西保持着距离,这样才会知道什么是最不会被时间抛弃的准则。比如爱一个人,充满变数,我于是后退一步,静静的看着,直到看见真诚的感情。

4.Men love from overlooking while women love from looking up. If love isa mountain, then if men go up, more women they will see while womenwill see fewer men.

男人的爱是俯视而生,而女人的爱是仰视而生。如果爱情像座山,那么男人越往上走可以俯视的女人就越多,而女人越往上走可以仰视的男人就越少。

5.Good love makes you see the whole world from one person while bad love makes you abandon the whole world for one person.

好的爱情是你通过一个人看到整个世界,坏的爱情是你为了一个人舍弃世界。

20xx高考英语作文提分佳句

例:Though I'm weak I'll make the effort.一般

Weak as I am, I'll make the effort.特殊

高考英语作文重要句型:使用虚拟语气

例: The ship didn't sink with all on board because there were the efforts of the captain.一般

But for the efforts of the captain ,the ship would have sunk with all on board.特殊

高考英语作文重要句型:使用状语从句

1.I won‘t believe what he says.一般

No matter what he says, I won‘t believe.特殊

2.If you come back before six o'clock, you can go out.一般

You can go out on condition that you come back before six o'clock. 特殊

3 If she doesn't agree, what shall we do? 一般

Supposing that she doesn't agree, what shell we do ?特殊

高考英语作文重要句型:使用定语从句

例: The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written.一般

The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of. 特殊

高考英语作文重要句型:使用名词性从句