赏析英语（1）

在现实生活或工作学习中，大家都写过作文，肯定对各类作文都很熟悉吧，借助作文人们可以实现文化交流的目的。那要怎么写好作文呢？下面是小编为大家收集的.关于考试之后英语作文赏析，仅供参考，欢迎大家阅读。

Scores are undoubtedly important for students. So today when I saw the score, 96,on my Chinese test paper, my happiness was beyond words. I believed that mum would also be very happy and perhaps she would reward me.

As soon as I got home, I raised the test paper before mum and said proudly, "Mum, look at my score!" Out of my expectation,Mum said calmly, "Good, but I hope you can find out the reason why four points were taken away." Hearing the words, I stood in amazement at first. Then I understood Mum‘s words and nodded with all my strength.

Then Iunderstood that the most important thing that we get from examinations is not whether we have got high scores but whether we know what we have grasped and what we haven‘t.

成绩对学生来说无疑是重要的，所以今天当我看到语文试卷上的96分时，我高兴得无以言表。我相信妈妈也会为此高兴，可能她还会奖励我呢。

我一到家就将卷子高举到妈妈面前，骄傲地说：“妈妈，看我的成绩!”出乎我的意料，妈妈平静地说："很好，但是我希望你能找到丢掉另外四分的原因。”听到这些话，一开始我惊愕地站在那里，然后我理解了妈妈的话，用力地点了点头。

我明白了我们从考试中得到的最重要的东西不是我们是否得到了高分，而是我们是否知道自己学到了什么，没有学到什么。

赏析英语（2）

Summer is the great season for all sports in the open It is the season for baseball which is often called the national sport because of its I usually watch television and read the newspaper reports about the baseball results of the newspaper reports about the baseball results of the little

During the summer I like to go to the beach often because it is very close to my home in the I usually go there bur in the summer vacation to relax after many months in school in the I feel very comfortable with the familiar quiet of the

夏天是户外运动最好的季节。这是个打棒球季节，通常被国家体育称为受欢迎程度的季节。我通常看电视和读有关棒球比赛结果的报纸报道。

在夏天，我喜欢经常去海滩，因为它离我家很近。我通常在暑假去城市放松。我觉得熟悉的村民的平静让我很舒服。

赏析英语（3）

This is my summer I intend to finish the Then, take a look at China's famous Look at some Of course, also want to play with the computer, watch Early every morning to get up and running to run, do other But it is conducive to our body! But one thing should not be must help parents do the housework! My holiday arrangements like? something good? give suggestions?

这就是我的暑假。我打算完成作业。然后，看中国的著名小说。看书看一些日子。当然，也要玩电脑，看电视。每天早上早早起床跑步，做其他运动。这有利于我们的身体!但有一件事不应该被忘记。必须帮助父母做家务!我的假期安排呢?好的东西?给点建议?

赏析英语（4）

That was a morning in the early of I took a bus to my school in the suburb which was surrounded by rice paddies and The sky was gray with the gloomy clouds congregating gradually along the far eastern "There must be a heavy rain " I spoke to

When I hurried into the classroom, the sky, gray before, was shrouded now by black clouds, darken to twilight, I felt quite stuffy, while it was quite calm, without I saw the leaves of trees and grass static, which seem to await something Several minutes later, I saw the lightening split the clouds and heard the thunders Suddenly, the curtain of rain fell and the wind soon the grass flattened under the wind and the With the rain forming like a fog, the sky became I took several deep I felt

The heavy rain lasted three hours and stopped when the class was The air was so fresh and the sky was so I felt like a new man

那是6月初的一天早上，我乘汽车去郊区的学校上课，学校四周是稻田和鱼塘。天空是灰色的，在遥远的东方地平线上有阴云在慢慢汇聚。我心想：“要下大雨了。”

当我匆忙走进教室时，原本灰色的天空已被黑云笼罩，像黄昏。我感到气闷，而周围一切都很静，没有任何声音，没有风。我看到树叶和草一动不动，像等着什么事情发生。几分钟之后，我看到闪电撕开云层，听到随之而来的雷声。突然，大雨倾盆，风也起了。草在风雨中倒伏。随着雨下成了雾状，天空开始放亮，我深吸了几口气，舒服多了。

大雨下了三个小时，下课的时间停了，空气那么新鲜，天气那么晴朗，我感觉像换了一个人似的。

赏析英语（5）

national day is coming,and we can have a family are going to 's a good seaside are staying there for a we are going to the beach and going swimming in the 're visiting tianya haijiao,wanquan river and many other beautiful think we'll have a good time

国庆节来了，我有七天的假期。我们一家去海南。那是一个美丽的海滨城市。我们在那里待上一个星期。我们去沙滩，还在海里游泳。我们游览“天涯海角”，菀泉河还有别的许多好地方。我想我们在那里会玩得很开心。

赏析英语（6）

it is known to everyone:oct,1st is our national this day i went to street and saw i will tell you!

at 8:00 i got up and went bus station with my mother .o my god there were so many people!with difficult we got up the bus and felt very traffic was so bad too!i cost nearly 1 hour that we arrived the center of

what were worse there were even more people!in my opinion it was not very interesting to come out at this day!nest time i prefer to stay at home and study! the night of sthe national day hanghai has never appealed to city born and city bred, i've got tired of the brightness of neon signs and the grandeur of skyscrapers in

but on this year's national day, i spent a whole night roaming nanjing road and the bund the symbol of the modern material shanghai, with my it's the first time that i went out with with the huge amount of tourists, we could only wander with the cluster of people, having no in the crowd, we entertained ourselves singing, joking and chatting, leaving all the worries, pressures and unhappiness behind,until mid tired as we were, we still felt very my roommates were quite impressed by the beauty, prosperity and the liveliness of but for me, all these were none of my what i treasured was the time i shared with them though that night shanghai was so charming that she seemed to be one of the leading cities in the

赏析英语（7）

in the autumn of october, in the joy of the harvest season, in this twenty-first century tenth fall, once again we ushered in a grand festival -- 62anniversary of the founding of the national day celebration, china, china god chau as cheerful as a

looking back 62years, from scratch, from weak to strong, the growth of the republic as the new saplings, although suffer the baptism of wind and rain, is still standing; even after suffering, but see more

in the past 62years, china produced the change we turn the world upside down with advanced agriculture, developed industry, we have the world's cutting-edge science and technology, in the world of sport can enjoy chinese athletes won the gold and silver bright and brave, the "sick man of east asia" stigma has gone for ever, replace is" the world sports power " of the

mother, we have made great achievements and proud, for in your arms and proud, we love you that 9600000 square kilometers wide, love you the next thousand years of long, love you love you the wonders of the world the great wall, the roof of the world, pearl mu lang, love you running information of the yellow river of the yangtse river, love you through civilization "silk road", love you towering erect high mountains, love you beautiful beautiful china is our home, we love china!

today, stand under the flag, as the blood red color, passion of our blood, the magnificent singing andirritate our since we can not use language to express your love, that will allow us to use action to show it, we will use wisdom hands to depict the country in twenty-first century of the grand blueprint for the motherland tomorrow, to create brilliant!

赏析英语（8）

i still remember the atmosphere of that evening. all the students who could not go back home assembled in our classroom, having a party to celebrate this traditional festival. we tried our best to show our own enthusiasm. as an ethnic minority, i performed a peacock dance, which received warm applause. after the two-hour party, we went out to the playground and sat together to appreciate the moon because it is a tradition on mid-autumn day. we ate moon cakes, played cards, and listened to romantic poems recited by one of our classmates. in that harmonious atmosphere, nobody felt lonely or homesick even though we were far away from our homes.

赏析英语（9）

请以Good Health为题写一篇文章。

【参考范文】

GoodHealth

The desire for good health is universal. Especially nowadays, the possession of good health is regarded by nearly everyone as essential to a happy life as well as a successful one. Only in good shape can you expect to live comfortablyorwork effectively.

How to keep healthy, then? First, enough time should be set aside for persevering in exercises in addition to sleep and rest. Second you must give up the habits that damage your health, such as smoking and drinking too much alcohol. Finally, be sure to have your physical check-up regularly.

As for me, I have always been taking care to have proper sleep and relaxation. In my spare time I like running, swimming, and playing table tennis. So, I can keep fit and have a good life.

【名师点评】

本文层次清楚，逻辑分明，第一段讲好身体的重要性，第二段讲保持身体健康的种种方法，第三段讲就“我”而言，“我”如何加强体育锻炼。本文语言地道，亮点颇多，如：First… second… Finally…三个词分述三种方法；The desire for, …is universal, Especially nowadays, the possession of, is regarded by nearly everyone as…, Only… can we expect to….How to…then? As for me, I have always been taking care to… so, I can…等，这些短语的运用使得文章错落有致，多姿多彩。

赏析英语（10）

the celebration starts on the night before chusok and ends on the day after the holiday. thus, many korean families take three days off from work to get together with family and friends.

the celebration starts with a family get-together at which rice cakes called "songphyun" (蒸糕) are served. these special rice cakes are made of rice, beans, sesame seeds, and chestnuts. then the family pays respect to ancestors by visiting their tombs and offering them rice and fruits. the koreans visit the graves of their ancestors to bow and clean the area for the coming winter. in the evening, children wear their favorite hanbok (traditional korean clothing) and dance under the bright moon in a large circle. they play games and sing songs. like the american thanksgiving, chusok is the time to celebrate the family and give thanks for their blessings.