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12月31日的下午，李老师叫我们布置教室，说明天可以带吃的，因为明天是元旦。于是我们就早早布置好教室回家了。
第二天一大早，同学们就陆陆续续地来到了教室。在沈琪和华唯一的主持下，联欢会开始了。首先是赵世杰表演拉小提琴，他的琴声非常动听，赢得了一片掌声。接下来是沈琪表演朗读英语，她朗读得非常流利。轮到我上场了，我唱的是英语歌《If you are happy》，我上台的时候很紧张，唱着唱着就不紧张了，因为我渐渐投入到了自己的歌曲中，我唱完后下了台，同学们向我鼓掌，我感觉心里有一股勇气。接下来还有很多同学表演唱歌、跳舞、猜谜语……最后我们开始做游戏——踩气球。同学们先把气球系在腿上，互相踩气球，谁先把对方的气球踩完谁就是胜利者。
联欢会在同学们的欢歌笑语中圆满结束了，通过这次联欢会，我感觉到了同学们都是多才多艺的，同学之间的关系都很友好和谐，我爱我们这个大集体。
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【示例一】
①Judging from the pictures, we can clearly infer that the drawer’s intention is ________(主题句).② ________(扩展句).③For one thing/First of all/Firstly, ________(第一个层面). ④For another/Besides/Moreover/In addition/Secondly, ________(第二个层面). ⑤Thus/As a result/Therefore/Finally, ________(总结句).
【示例二】
①To begin with, the purpose of the drawings is to show us that ________(主题句),yet the symbolic meanings subtly conveyed should be taken more ② ________(扩展句)is naturally associated with, to be specific ________(第一个层面). ③Besides/Moreover/In addition, ________(第二个层面)。④As a result/Therefore, ________(总结句).
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【示例一】
①There are many reasons responsible for this phenomenon/case/instance and the following are the typical ②The first reason is that ________(理由一). ③The second reason is that ________(理由二). ④The third reason is that/A case in point is that/The typical example is that ________(理由三).
【示例二】
①There are many reasons to explain/explaining the ②The most contributing one is/the main reason is no other than ________(理由一). ③What is more, ________(理由二). ④ ________(理由三)also play a role in this
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【示例一】
①Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that ________(得出结论). ②The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that ________(给出原因).③It is high time that we ________(发出倡议).
【示例二】
①Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ________(结论). ②And with the above content, it will show more profound significance in ________(进一步总结).
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As far concerned 就而言 比如说：就我而言 As far as I concerned
It can be said with certainty +从句 可以肯定地说
As the proverb says 正如谚语所说的 可以用来引用名言名句
It has to be noticed 这可能是因为
It's generally recognized 它普遍认为
It's likely 这可能是因为
It's hardly 这是很难的
There's no denying the fact 毫无疑问，无可否以
Nothing is more important than the fact 没有什么比这更重要的是
What's far more important is 更重要的是
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A case in point 一个典型的例子是
But the problem is not so ,+句子(然而问题并如此简单，所以)
But it's a pity 但遗憾的是's a pity 遗憾的是
In spite of the fact 尽管事实 spite of 尽管
Further,we hold opinion 此外，我们坚持认为
However ,the difficulty lies +名词或者动名词 然而，困难在于
Similarly , we should pay attention to 同样，我们要注意
As it has been mentioned 正如上面所提到的(可以用来对前面所说的话进行补充说明)
In this respect 从这个角度上
However 然而
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① demonstrate常用于阐明现象，引出主旨。
② 提出观点，something must be done也可以用we should take measures代替。
③ 提出建议。corresponding laws and regulations, from均适用于解决问题类作文。用alcohol指代饮酒以避免重复。
④ wine culture“酒文化”，有中国特色的固定表达。
⑤ Only位于句首时主句采用部分倒装语序，注意从句采用正常语序。
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这是一个解释现象型的题目，探讨了电脑和互联网对于电影产业的影响，写作时应当围绕提纲进行构思：①第一段简要说明这一现象，第二段阐释各种影响及其原因，第三段提出自己的看法。②写作时注意语言做到准确流畅，可以适当应用复合句，使文章衔接更加自然。
The Influence of Computer on the Movie Industry
The movie industry is quite different from what it was It has become①even more so with the aid of Computers and the Internet have made many influences on the movie ②These, however，come down to the following
First，the development of computer graphics has enabled the movies to have more terrific③visual The digital technology can create vivid images④out of thin And the 3D picture is another breakthrough of visual Second，the development of personal computers and the Internet has made it easier to download piratical movies，thus the box office of movies will be However，it can also help promote movies by the wide spread of film reviews and
In my opinion，the further development of computer and the Internet may make more changes to the movie There may be more technologies to bring us⑤multi-dimensional Maybe one day we can have totally immersive impressions of movies with the help of
高分模板（9）
图画型作文包括漫画作文和图表作文。
漫画作文通常是指根据给出的一幅或几幅漫画或图片写出的作文。通常，所给漫画反映的是一定的社会现象或社会现实。这类作文难度较大，要求考生在认真分析图画的基础上，通过文字形式将图中所包括的思想内容准确地表达出来。
图表作文是指根据统计数据、表格、坐标曲线图、条形图、饼形图写出的作文。图表作文的特点是以图表作为信息来源，要求考生根据图表上的信息进行对比分析，发现规律，找出所反映的社会现象，并从中看出主要问题和发展趋势，再归纳出结论。
模板一
①The bar chart_______(给出图表的出处)reflects______(解释图表所反映的现象). From these statistics, it can be seen that______(具体说明这一现象).
②Generally speaking, _______(分析这一现象产生的几点原因)factors have contributed to this one thing, _______(第一点原因). For another, ______(第二点原因).
③As far as I am concerned,______(发表个人看法). First,_______(其中一条解决办法). Second, _______(另外一条解决办法).
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①The two charts reveal the striking changes in______(引出图表揭示的现象). From the charts we can see that the percentage of _____(其中一项变化)is growing steadily, and the percentage of______(另外一项变化)rises from _____ to ______(通过具体数据加以说明),
while the percentage of______(第三项变化)
decreases dramatically from_____ to _____(通过具体数据加以说明).
②The changes are chiefly due to the following To start with,_______(第一点原因). Besides,______(第二点原因).Furthermore,_______(第三点原因).
③With the above analysis, we can conclude that_______(对以上分析加以总结). What’s more, _______(进一步提出解决方法)
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①As is vividly revealed in the picture, ______(描述图片内容). The picture reminds us of an old Chinese saying— ______(进一步说明图片表明的含义).
②Undoubtedly, the symbolic meaning conveyed in the picture is ______(揭示图片的深刻含义). First, ______(分析第一条含义).More often______(进一步阐述隐含的深刻含义). Therefore, when it comes to the key to success, the most important thing lies in
______(总结深刻含义).
③In a word,_______(总结全文，提出建议). Only in this way can we _______(强调主题).
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①As is vividly depicted in the picture, ______(简单描述图片). Nevertheless, ______(描述现状).
② We can benefit a lot from______(做某事). To begin with, ______(优点一). Furthermore, ______(优点二). Lastly, ______(优点三).
③In conclusion, ______(结论).
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As is vividly shown in the picture, …
It is clearly depicted in the picture that…
This picture depicts a thought-provoking scene of…
According to the figures given in the chart, …
The chart above provides a series of essential figures, illustrating the changes taking place in a time span of…
The graph demonstrates that the number is growing/declining rapidly
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There is no denying that… will continue increasing/decreasing in the better/worse
Undoubtedly, the tendency reflected from the chart will undergo a continuous increase/decrease in the near
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1、It is high time that we put an end to the (trend). 该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。
"It is high time" 打头，为该句增色。注：that 后跟虚拟语气，后跟动词的一般过去式，表示“是某人做。的时候了”或者“是某人不做。的时候了”
2、It is time to take the advice of and to put special emphasis on the improvement of 该是采纳……的建议，并对……的进展给予非常重视的时候了。
去掉一个"high"，画风完全不一样，不用过去式，只需用"to do"来替代。
3、There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of 毫无疑问，对……问题应予以足够的重视。
"there is no doubt that"+被动还是蛮经典的组合。
4、Obviously, If we want to do , it is essential 显然，如果我们想做某事，我们需要……
这句有些老生常谈，稍微不“常”的就是"essential" 替代了"important"。
5、Only in this way can 只有这样,我们才能
Only+倒装，经典万能句式，还能看出点水平呢。
6、It must be realized 我们必须意识到
把人人都会的"I realized"升格为被动语态，省略了主语，监考老师绝对会眼前一亮的!
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1：People's views on……vary from person to Some hold that……However, others believe that……(人们对……的观点因人而异，有些人认为……然而其他人却认为……)
2：People may have different opinions on……(人们对……可能会持有不同见解)
3：Attitudes from person to people hold different attitudes (人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异)
4:There are different opinions among people as to……(对于……人们的观点大不相同)
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1：It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).(该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了)
2：There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of……(毫无疑问，对……问题应予以足够重视)
3：Obviously ,if we want to do something … it is essential that……(显然，如果我们想要做么事，很重要的是……)
4：Only in this way can we ……(只有这样，我们才能……) 5：Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)
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小时候，爸爸就教育我，要做一个有道德的人。一直以来，我对道德的理解一知半解，不是很具体，只知道德与文明相伴，一个有道德的人一定是个高尚的人，是个被人尊敬的人。直到听了爸爸讲的一个故事，道德的含义在我的脑子里才渐渐地清晰起来。
故事是这样的，我出生在北京，一岁多的时候，爷爷奶奶千里迢迢从浙江温州来到北京看我。爷爷奶奶长期生活在乡下，没见过大的世面，爸爸决定带爷爷奶奶四处走走。有一次，爸爸带着我和爷爷奶奶坐公共汽车去北京动物园。车上的人很多，根本找不到坐的位置。不料，身边的一对中年夫妇从座位上直起身子，招呼着爷爷奶奶。爷爷奶奶听不懂普通话，不知其意，等到爸爸“翻译”后，才明白那对夫妇是给他们让座。于是一番道谢后，爷爷奶奶坐在了位置上，我坐在了奶奶的腿上，而那对夫妇一路站到了动物园。从此以后，“北京人真好”这句话就挂在了爷爷奶奶的嘴边，经常说起，回到浙江乡下后，更是如此，逢人便讲。就这么一件在城里人看来再平常不过的让座行为，在爷爷奶奶的内心烙下了深刻的印记。
爸爸说，有一种解释，“道”就是明事理，“德”就是付出，合起来讲就是有素质的意思。有时候，偶尔的一件事、一句话，就能看出一个人甚至一个地方的文明水平和道德水准，就能完全改变他人的看法，因此，一个公民必须把自己看做一张名片，一张写着道德斯文的名片，一张写着礼仪之邦的名片。你生活在国内，你就是一个乡村或一个城市的名片;你走出国门，你就是国家的名片。如果人人都拥有这样的名片，那么一个乡村、一座城市乃至于一个国家的美名将远扬四方。
是啊!每一个人都应该是一张精美的名片，对于我们小学生来说，不仅要学好文化知识，还要养成良好的道德习惯，这样才不会愧对“国家的未来”这个称号。在此，我不禁联想起社会上还存在的一些丑陋现象。比如随地吐痰，随处丢垃圾，开车闯红灯，破坏绿化……有一次，我出去散步，刚走到楼梯口，一阵零零星星的“叶子雨”飘落下来。我抬头一看，原来是几个调皮的小男孩搞的鬼。当时我纳闷了，这么多的碧绿的叶子是从哪儿弄来的呢?那几个男孩从楼上跑了下来，还一边跑一边喊“太好玩了!再去多采一些回来。”他们朝着一棵枝叶茂盛的树直奔而去。我顿时恍然大悟，他们撒的原来是从那棵树上摘下来的树叶啊!我看不下去了，就跑过去对他们说：“保护绿化是每一个人的责任，你们把树摘得光秃秃的，还折断了树枝，难道不感到心疼吗?”他们哑口无言，不好意思地低下了头。
道德是一双洁白的手，它能打开那被封锁已久的心;道德是一扇明亮的窗，窗外望见的是美好的天空;道德是一片辽阔的天空，它会孕育出无数美好、纯洁的心灵。让我们人人都做一个有道德的人，这样，我们的社会才能变得更加美好。
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最近，我惊喜地发现一位平时大大咧咧的朋友变得有点小心翼翼，问其原因，答：因为有一天他在驾车时想往车窗外扔果皮，他读小学的女儿在车后座说：“如果你把果皮向外扔，你就把道德与文明一起扔掉了!”我听了哈哈一乐，对他说：“君子以厚德载物。”
听了朋友的故事之后，我在心中深深地引起了共鸣，想起了儿子与我自己的一些变化。
儿子就读椒江区实验小学，学校不但重视知识教育，也很重视道德文明、生活自理等全方面的教育。记得儿子有一天带回作业，要求与家长一起做《学校行为规范》，这里面有很多的涉及平时的学习态度、文明礼貌、生活细节，在与儿子的答题过程中，每一道题目都让我们接受着教育，引导我们树立正确的生活学习方式，我觉得学校里这样的教育方式很好。做了题目之后，我对儿子加强了一些教育，并让他记住一句话：细节决定成败。
对于一个小学生来说：道德存在于平时生活中，要做到从小事做起，从细节做起。
在家的时候，我们对儿子进行了一些教育：首先是要孝敬长辈，学会感恩，懂得关心父母的感受。经常在吃水果的时候，儿子会主动递上一块说：妈妈你吃，这个时候，总是让父母感动。其次是生活自理独立，从小时我就培养他独立自理的生活方式，自己起床穿衣服，自己刷牙洗脸，少让父母操心。三是不挑吃穿，学会理财，尽管不要求他艰苦朴素，但还是经常给他说一些大人们以前的生活方式，也算是一种忆苦思甜吧，学会不乱花钱，自己的小钱自己处理，买零食要用自己的钱。
在社会上的时候，一是根据儿子自己的特点，要求他少诘问人，少埋怨人，多请教人，做一个有文明礼貌的孩子，也许是平时受一些父母拌嘴的影响吧，儿子有时候喜欢埋怨别人，或是遇上一些坎坷，就埋怨人，这个时候，就要帮助他树立正确的人生观，凡事先从自己身上找问题，分析原因，勇敢面对。二是可以活泼一点，但不能放纵，当父母觉得过了头提醒之后，要懂得收敛自己。三是要懂得尊重别人，班主任陈老师给学生们寄语：学会倾听，懂得尊重。每个人都有自己的想法、尊严，都有希望表达自己想法的要求，这个时候，学会倾听，懂得尊重，就是一个有道德的人。
意大利诗人但丁说得好：一个知识不全的人可以用道德去弥补，而一个道德不全的人却难以用知识去弥补。其实道德就在我们身边，就存在于平时的生活中，有时候举手之劳就得到了道德，有时候，一句不经意的话就失去了道德，因此我们要从小事做起，从不经意时做起，成为一个有道德的人，让我们一起努力吧!
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题目
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Nowadays, children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smartphone, video games, for fun and entertainment; Playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for the children's
Use specific reasons and examples to support your
范文1：Argument 1 (for)
Children today rely too much on technology for If children played with simple toys or spent time outside with friends, they would be physically healthier, be better at social interactions, and would have a working basis for many practical
分论点1:有助于健康 Probably the most obvious benefit of stepping away from technology and into the outdoors is an increase in physical activity, which directly transfers to increased studies have shown that excessive sitting and watching a screen leads to obesity, heart disease, and other disorders(不运动的坏处). If kids are restricted in their use of technology, they will have to move They will have better eye-hand coordination from manipulating toys and throwing balls; they will have more muscle tone from running and riding bicycles or balancing on Increased activity directly translates into increased physical health(运动的益处万能句).
分论点2:有助于社交Another reason that children should be encouraged to use less technology is so that they increase their social If children interact, they naturally learn basic skills such as sharing and taking turns(社交的益处万能句1). In addition, their compassion and understanding will also grow(社交的益处万能句2). Children who interact with each otherbecome more articulate in speaking and expressing a wide range of ideas(社交的益处万能句3). Such opportunities do not exist when the child is hidden inside the house playing video games; such interaction is only possible Therefore, children should be encouraged to play with each other rather than entertaining themselves using
分论点3：有助于积累经验 A final benefit of using simple toys is that children get a wide range of experiences that form the backbone of later study about sciences such as physics and By playing with blocks, bicycles, and balls, kids learn about balance, velocity, and Of course, the kids are not mastering the math behind the However, they are developing a sound working knowledge that will help them understand the concepts in a way that they cannot do in the unreal world of video games where magic and fantasy are
Playing with friends and simple toys, children become physically fit, develop social skills, and create a foundation for later study of the Therefore, children should be encouraged to spend more time doing such activities rather than entertaining themselves with
step away from
远离，摆脱
eye-hand coordination
手眼协调
take turns
轮流，依次
become articulate in _X
在 _X 方面变得清晰
form the backbone of _X
构成了 _X 的基础
in a way that YYY
以一种 YYY 的方式