英语四级作文高分(集锦8篇)
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2024-01-07 02:26:25
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英语四级作文高分(1)

有关题目

题目写或不写,不会作为作文的评分依据。但是如果在写题目时就已离题万里,势必会影响阅卷人对作文的期待和判断。

有关跑题

由于图片或题目说明中均有主题的提示,考试除非完全没有看到题目,所以,在往年阅卷中,考生作文基本都和主题沾边,当然,相关的比例可能会有不同。如上表所示,只要基本切题,如四级谈到信息科技或技术与生活的关系,六级谈到幸福、能力、解决问题等等,也可能获得四分。

有关字数

官方规定四级写作120-180词,六级写作150-200词。阅卷老师不会也没有时间去数几个单词的差异。一般在正负20词内都可以接受。字数可以再超一些,但是不可以再少。

有关字迹

评分标准中无关于字迹的说明,只要清晰可辨,就不会影响分数。但是更加美观整洁的卷面在相同条件下一定会获得更好的分数。所以,小伙伴们在考试中一定要注意自己的卷面哦。

有关内容和语言

两者会被同时关注,但是由于大部分同学的写作内容相对类似,所以语言质量显得更加重要,可能成为得分关键,要熟悉外国人的说话、思考方式,学习他们的语言习惯,这样才不会出现中国式英语。


英语四级作文高分(2)

无论是名言警句还是漫画作文都要坚持「由表及里,由浅入深」的原则,将话题和某一社会现象、问题联系,或者论述某一重要素质的重要性(例如坚强意志力、好奇心等)。

漫画作文首段描述图画,不做论述;二段从原因、利弊、重要性方面论述,并加以具体例证。尾段重申观点,并提出建议措施。

文字形式的作文首段破解文字内涵,将抽象的名言或警句具体化。二段是将话题联系现实生活论述相关的社会问题或者能力素质的原因、现象、背景、重要性、利弊等。尾段再次重申观点加上建议措施即可。


英语四级作文高分(3)

网络对人际交流的影响

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180

首段:图画联系主题

Apparently, this cartoon can be naturally associated with the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate: Internet makes our communication convenient, but if individuals intend to maintain close and harmonious relationship with others, it is not advisable for them to chat merely by the

二段:现象+危害

In contemporary society, it has become a trend for a host of youngsters to spend much time in playing PC games, QQ and Meanwhile, an increasing number of parents find it rather difficult to have opportunities to chat with teenagers face to face, because of A case in point is the guy and his parents: he seldom sees his parents, and when his computer crashes, he will come downstairs to see his It is the Internet that does not enable teenagers to spend adequate time in caring about parents and significant As a matter of fact, intelligent people in large numbers have come to realize the negative influences of Internet: cold or indifferent

尾段:观点+结论

As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to strengthen our communication in real Do bear in mind: electronic communication can never replace face-to-face (200词)


英语四级作文高分(4)

开放式话题作文较以往的作文形式更加趋向于灵活,主题比较开放、自由,所给话题是考生非常熟悉的,文体不再局限于议论文,而是各种文章体裁的夹杂和糅合,更加注重考生作文的语言质量和书面表达能力。

模板一

① There are a variety of _______(主题)which_______(用定语从句介绍主题). It goes without saying that_______(指出该主题的影响).

② As far as I am concerned,________(就该主题发表个人观点,指出其对自身的影响). In the first place(第一点原因). In the second place,________(第二点原因). Last but not least,________(第三点原因).

③ In general, ________(总结全文). But it is________(主题)that________(重申主题对自身的影响).

模板二

① I’d like to recommend to you______(主题), which______(通过定语从句介绍主题).

② First,______(其中一点原因). Moreover, _______(另外一点原因).

③ In a word, ________(总结全文)


英语四级作文高分(5)

模板一

Dear_______(称呼)。

①_______(主办单位)will organize ______(某项活动)aiming at______(活动目的).

②The arrangement of this cativity goes as Frist, ______(安排一). Second, ______(安排二).Third, ______(安排三).

③Any student who______(报名条件)is contact us at______(电话)or send an e-mail to______(邮箱)

_______(主办单位)

模板二

Dear_______(称呼)。

①When it comes to_____(引出话题),I assume ______(就该话题提出个人看法/建议).To begin with,______(原因一/优势一).Most importantly,_______(原因二/优势二).

②______(达成该建议需要满足的条件).For one thing,______(条件一). For another,______(条件二).

③As far as the preparation is concerned, ______(达成该建议需要做的准备). I hope you will find the suggestions

Sincerely yours,

______(署名)


英语四级作文高分(6)

1、Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion 把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论……

很完全的答法,"take sth into consideration"短语的应用,加分。

2、Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion 考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论……

"Take into account sth"短语似乎又比上句的"take sth into consideration"提升了一个层次。

3、Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion 因此,自然我们得出以下结论。

"Hence"一词用在文章中大气吧,但别平时口语中用,否则即使老外也用一种看老古董的眼神看你。

再特意提一句:"we'd better"在这里不是“不得不”或“最好”的意思,而是一种自然而然,水到渠成的得出结论。

4、There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as 毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点。

短语"there is no doubt that"上线,同时运用我们的老朋友"as well as"增加看点。

5、All in all, we cannot live But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would 总之,我们没有……是无法生活的。但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题。

这句话一般用于作文结尾,属万能句式,句式较为简单,方便操作。


英语四级作文高分(7)

1、It is high time that we put an end to the (trend). 该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。

"It is high time" 打头,为该句增色。注:that 后跟虚拟语气,后跟动词的一般过去式,表示“是某人做。的时候了”或者“是某人不做。的时候了”

2、It is time to take the advice of and to put special emphasis on the improvement of 该是采纳……的建议,并对……的进展给予非常重视的时候了。

去掉一个"high",画风完全不一样,不用过去式,只需用"to do"来替代。

3、There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of 毫无疑问,对……问题应予以足够的重视。

"there is no doubt that"+被动还是蛮经典的组合。

4、Obviously, If we want to do , it is essential 显然,如果我们想做某事,我们需要……

这句有些老生常谈,稍微不“常”的就是"essential" 替代了"important"。

5、Only in this way can 只有这样,我们才能

Only+倒装,经典万能句式,还能看出点水平呢。

6、It must be realized 我们必须意识到

把人人都会的"I realized"升格为被动语态,省略了主语,监考老师绝对会眼前一亮的!


英语四级作文高分(8)

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In my opinion, this computer is different from that one you

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As far as we know, it took him more than a year to write the

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What is more important, the agreement they have negotiated is being carried

We will be successful as long as we

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Our goal must be Our goal can unquestionably be

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