gre作文（1）
一、GRE作文出分之GRE作文什么时候出分
考试结束后10到15日，ETS将会公布写作部分的成绩。考生可以登录gre英文官方网站查看分数。
考试成绩单将会在考试结束后10-15日由ETS直接邮寄给成绩单收件人。请考生在报考填写个人信息时使用准确的个人地址，如果地址发生变更，请及时更新。
二、GRE作文出分之考完GRE多久出分数
gre考试改为机考后，成绩发布速度较快，一般考试结束后可以马上在电脑上看到自己的数学和语文成绩。
gre考试成绩查看方法：考完后，可以看到电脑页面有两个按钮，record and
cancel，点record就可以立即查看到语文和数学的成绩。
因为gre考试分为 语文、数学、作文三部分，所以作文的分数要等待一段时间，一般是在两周后官网就可以查看到自己的gre总成绩了。
三、GRE作文出分之GRE作文分数重要性分析
众所周知，GRE考试是作为一门研究生的阶段入学的综合能力测试而存在的，其考试的成绩可以被我们用来申请全美各大学校的大部分研究生专业和项目。理科项目一般都是不需要作文得分的。
理科更看重的是GRE总分和GRE数学部分的成绩。而文科的项目除了需要总分和语文部分成绩外，它对于作文也往往会提出一些专门的分数要求，在这一点上越是比较优秀的学校越是明显。而假如考生想要申请的是那些排名靠前，或者是在TOP20以内的顶尖文科名校，那么GRE作文至少也是需要考出4分以上的成绩才能够顺利的过关。
四、GRE作文出分之GRE作文两个部分是如何算分的?
首先新GRE写作两个部分在总分中的权重是一样的。新GRE作文中有两个项目，最后出的新GRE作文分数是一个，所以如何进行新GRE作文算分呢?
由于AA的写作不牵涉自己观点的展开，只须指出作者逻辑上的漏洞，因此在经过训练以后，写起来并不困难;而AI的写作需要自己展开自己设立的观点，不但需要逻辑上的洞察能力，还需要论证观点的能力，语言组织的能力，因此对于中国考生来讲比较困难，难以短期内有较大提高。
但是这两个部分在总分中的权重是一样的，因此考生的策略应该是尽量提高AI部分的写作能力而力保AA部分满分(或高分)。因为如果AA部分满分的话，AI部分只需争取在4分以上就可以保证整体作文分数在5分以上。
gre作文（2）
5, 159 & 173
The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island
北京新东方 万炜
"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped "
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the
步骤：夏天人口增多 + 摩托车是主要交通工具 → 到了夏天摩托车引起的事故会增多
假设：夏天增多的人口会造成严重的摩托车问题
反例：城市交通秩序好，摩托车司机都很职业，很守规矩，历年来都没出什么事故
补充证据：往年夏天的摩托车事故率
步骤：SV执行了摩托车禁令 + 之后SV的事故减少50% → 是禁令减少的事故
假设：没有它因
反例：道路拓宽;司机培训更严格;交通法规更严格;警察多了
补充证据：……
步骤：SV成功 → BI成功
假设：两城的租赁摩托车都是主要摩托车的来源;过去两城摩托车都能够租出去
反例：SV的摩托车都是租的，但是BI的摩托车都是私家的;SV的都租出去了，但是BI的本来就租不到每天25辆
补充证据：两城摩托车的主要来源;既往摩托车每天实际租赁量
步骤：BI成功减少夏天的事故→全年事故的减少
假设：夏天的事故是全年事故的主要来源
反例：夏天路况好，人多不是事故的来源。全年事故主要来源于冬天路面结冰。而冬天车辆没减少，所以事故不会减少50%
证据：全年的事故数量变化表。
gre作文（3）
大家在进行GRE(课程)作文写作时，往往会感觉有些词经常被用到，显得整个文章单调，其实GRE作文替换词很多的，为此新东方小编特进行收集，分享给大家，希望对大家有所帮助。
能够able→ capable, in a(ny) position
一直all the time→ continually, continuously, constantly, perpetually
许多地a lot→ noticeably, considerably, a great deal, substantially
许多的a lot of→ many, numerous, a wide variety of (themes), a whole range of, a wide spectrum of (problems, themes, etc),an abundance of (opportunities, sources )
总是always→ invariably
数量amount→ quantity
结果as a result→ consequently
本质上basically→ essentially, in essence, substantially
组成be, amount to→ constitute
下降become smaller→ be on the decline, be on the decrease, decline, decrease, diminish, dwindle, recede 等等
变糟糕become worse→ deteriorate
在 之前before→ prior to
开始begin→ commence
更好better→ superior
习惯于be(come) used to→ be accustomed to
严重的，重大的big→ major, significant, substantial
执行carry out→ conduct, execute, commit, implement
更改change→ alter, alteration, modify, modification
办理，执行do→ conduct, transact(business)
未能do not→ fail to, omit to
结果end→ conclusion (to bring to a conclusion)
充足的enough→ ample, sufficient, adequate (grounds, evidence, preparation, resources )
普遍的，透彻的everywhere→ ubiquitous(mistakes), pervasive (influence)
适当地fairly→ comparatively, moderately, reasonably
弄清楚find out→ ascertain (the cause of , the truth of , whether is true or not, what really happened etc); discern, discover (the cause of, factors behind )
适当的fitting→ proper, appropriate
憎恨hatred→ animosity
含有have→ contain, be equipped with, possess
假如if→ in the event of, in case (of)
最终in the end→ eventually, finally, ultimately
保持，一贯keep (doing)→ continue, continually, continuously, consistently, constantly, persist in
了解know→ be aware of, conversant with, familiar with
之后的later→ subsequent(ly)
越来越少less and less→ decreasing(ly)
准许let, allow→ permit
喜欢like→ to be partial to , liking
喜好liking→ predilection for sth, partiality for
冗长的long→ extensive(coverage, footnotes, passages, scope), protracted (delay, negotiations), 长时间的prolonged(illness, interrogation)
look at→ consider, examine (argument, fact), explore, investigate (possibility), observe (behaviour)
money→ funding, funds, resources
more and more→ increasingly
much→ considerably, substantially(相当的，可观的)
need→ demand, require
next to→ adjacent
now→ at present, at this juncture, at this moment, currently
often→ frequent(ly)
quick(ly)→ rapid(ly), prompt(ly)
rich, wealthy→ affluent, opulent(society, life-style)
right→ appropriate, correct, proper
rough(ly)→ approximate, correct, proper
set up→ establish (a new state, a government, a business), institute (custom, inquiry, restrictions, democracy, rule, government)
sharp→ abrupt, drastic (rise and falls)
show→ demonstrate, evince, manifest
→ reveal, divulge
side→ aspect(of a problem)
small→ minor/insignificant (problems, differences etc), marginal (differences)
therefore→ consequently
thing→ element, aspect, object, factor, consideration
too→ excessively, inordinately, unduly
too many→ an excessive number of, a disproportionate number of
too much→ excessive(ly)
try→ endeavor, strive
understand→ appreciate
ups and downs→ vicissitudes (of war, history, fortune)
very→ extremely, in the extreme, immensely, intensely
yield→ produce(results)
以上就是GRE作文替换词的全部内容，大家如果感觉某些词用的太过频繁，不妨换个词，往往能够为文章增色不少，最后祝大家都能考出好成绩。
有的同学抱怨说，每次一写英语作文自己就只能想到那一小部分词汇，来来回回就是那几个单词，显得作文非常单调。GRE写作的难度较大，更是要求考生运用多样的词汇进行表达。
大家在进行GRE(课程)作文写作时，往往会感觉有些词经常被用到，显得整个文章单调，其实GRE作文替换词很多的，为此新东方小编特进行收集，分享给大家，希望对大家有所帮助。
能够able→ capable, in a(ny) position
一直all the time→ continually, continuously, constantly, perpetually
许多地a lot→ noticeably, considerably, a great deal, substantially
许多的a lot of→ many, numerous, a wide variety of (themes), a whole range of, a wide spectrum of (problems, themes, etc),an abundance of (opportunities, sources )
总是always→ invariably
数量amount→ quantity
结果as a result→ consequently
本质上basically→ essentially, in essence, substantially
组成be, amount to→ constitute
下降become smaller→ be on the decline, be on the decrease, decline, decrease, diminish, dwindle, recede 等等
变糟糕become worse→ deteriorate
在 之前before→ prior to
开始begin→ commence
更好better→ superior
习惯于be(come) used to→ be accustomed to
严重的，重大的big→ major, significant, substantial
执行carry out→ conduct, execute, commit, implement
更改change→ alter, alteration, modify, modification
办理，执行do→ conduct, transact(business)
未能do not→ fail to, omit to
结果end→ conclusion (to bring to a conclusion)
充足的enough→ ample, sufficient, adequate (grounds, evidence, preparation, resources )
普遍的，透彻的everywhere→ ubiquitous(mistakes), pervasive (influence)
适当地fairly→ comparatively, moderately, reasonably
弄清楚find out→ ascertain (the cause of , the truth of , whether is true or not, what really happened etc); discern, discover (the cause of, factors behind )
适当的fitting→ proper, appropriate
憎恨hatred→ animosity
含有have→ contain, be equipped with, possess
假如if→ in the event of, in case (of)
最终in the end→ eventually, finally, ultimately
保持，一贯keep (doing)→ continue, continually, continuously, consistently, constantly, persist in
了解know→ be aware of, conversant with, familiar with
之后的later→ subsequent(ly)
越来越少less and less→ decreasing(ly)
准许let, allow→ permit
喜欢like→ to be partial to , liking
喜好liking→ predilection for sth, partiality for
冗长的long→ extensive(coverage, footnotes, passages, scope), protracted (delay, negotiations), 长时间的prolonged(illness, interrogation)
look at→ consider, examine (argument, fact), explore, investigate (possibility), observe (behaviour)
money→ funding, funds, resources
more and more→ increasingly
much→ considerably, substantially(相当的，可观的)
need→ demand, require
next to→ adjacent
now→ at present, at this juncture, at this moment, currently
often→ frequent(ly)
quick(ly)→ rapid(ly), prompt(ly)
rich, wealthy→ affluent, opulent(society, life-style)
right→ appropriate, correct, proper
rough(ly)→ approximate, correct, proper
set up→ establish (a new state, a government, a business), institute (custom, inquiry, restrictions, democracy, rule, government)
sharp→ abrupt, drastic (rise and falls)
show→ demonstrate, evince, manifest
→ reveal, divulge
side→ aspect(of a problem)
small→ minor/insignificant (problems, differences etc), marginal (differences)
therefore→ consequently
thing→ element, aspect, object, factor, consideration
too→ excessively, inordinately, unduly
too many→ an excessive number of, a disproportionate number of
too much→ excessive(ly)
try→ endeavor, strive
understand→ appreciate
ups and downs→ vicissitudes (of war, history, fortune)
very→ extremely, in the extreme, immensely, intensely
yield→ produce(results)
gre作文（4）
GRE作文成绩从哪儿查?本文主要就网上成绩查询方法做简单的介绍，希望可以供大家参考。
第一步：进入ETS的GRE页面;
第二步：点击右上角“MY GRE ACCOUNT”，注册新用户，填写本人基本信息和考试信息;
第三步：在SERVICES栏中点击view scores online，就能直接查找到自己的GRE成绩了，写作、语文和数学都有，还有要寄送成绩的学校部系等，很详细。
gre作文（5）
The?University?of?Claria?is?generally?considered?one?of?the?best?universities?in?the?world?because?of?its?instructors'?reputation,,,,,?because?of?the?reputation?of?its?faculty,
',?the?English?department?at?the?University?might?actually?be?as?internationally?renowned?as?mentioned?but?due?to?the?lack?of?names,,?in?the?mind?of?the?reader,,?due?to?the?notariety?of?the?Nobel?Peace?Prize,?it?would?have?been?beneficial?to?the?article?if?the?writer?would?have?at?least?given?the?particular?field?the?two?anonymous?winners?received?their?prize,,
Commentary??
The?University?of?Claria?is?generally?considered?one?of?the?best?universities?in?the?world?because?of?its?instructors'?reputation,,,?many?of?the?faculty?from?the?English?department?are?regularly?invited?to ,,?because?of?the?reputation?of?its?faculty,
gre作文（6）
"According?to?a?recent?report?from?our?marketing?department,,?the?contents?of?these?reviews?are?not?reaching?enough?of?our?prospective?viewers;?so?the?problem?lies?not?with?the?quality?of?our?movies?but?with?the?public'"??
The?argument?presented?above?is?relatively?sound,?however, helpful?one,,?it?may?be?necessary?to?advertise?more?in?order?to?increase?sales,?however?that?could?be?due?to?many?circumstances?such?as?a?decrease?in?the?public's?overall?attendance,?an?increase?in?the?cost?of?movies,
,?then?he?may?still?be?out-profiting?his?competitors,,
,,?advertising?could?be?very?helpful,
Finally,,?it?is?important?that?the?films?appeal?to?the?populus,,
There?is?no?reason?that?silver?screen?should?not?spend?more?on?advertisement,?however,?there?is?reason?to?continue?to?invest?in?diverse,,
Commentary??
Although?the?response?begins?by?stating?that?the?argument?"is?relatively?sound,"
--?the?fall-off?in?attendance?might?be?industry?wide?
--?the?general?state?of?the?economy?might?have?affected?movie????attendance?
--?movie?goers?"rarely?trust?movie?reviewers"??
Each?of?these?points?is?developed;?together?they?are?presented?within?the?context?of?a?larger?idea:?that?while?spending?more?money?on?advertising?may?be?helpful,?the?company?should?"continue?to?invest?in?diverse,"??
This?is?a?smoothly?written,
gre作文（7）
As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your
Essay Response — Score 3
There is no current proof that advancing technology will deteriorate the ability of humans to On the contrary, advancements in technology had advanced our vast knowledge in many fields, opening opportunities for further understanding and For example, the problem of dibilitating illnesses and diseases such as alzheimer's disease is slowing being solved by the technological advancements in stem cell The future ability of growing new brain cells and the possibility to reverse the onset of alzheimer's is now becoming a This shows our initiative as humans to better our health demonstrates greater ability of humans to
One aspect where the ability of humans may initially be seen as an example of deteriorating minds is the use of internet and cell In the past humans had to seek out information in many different enviroments and aspects of Now humans can sit in a chair and type anything into a computer and get an Our reliance on this type of technology can be detrimental if not regulated and regularily substituted for other information sources such as human interactions and hands on I think if humans understand that we should not have such a reliance on computer technology, that we as a species will advance further by utilizing the opportunity of computer technology as well as the other sources of information outside of a Supplementing our knowledge with internet access is surely a way for technology to solve problems while continually advancing the human
Reader Commentary for Essay Response — Score 3
This essay never moves beyond a superficial discussion of the The writer attempts to develop two points: that advancements in technology have progressed our knowledge in many fields and that supplementing rather than relying on technology is "surely a way for technology to solve problems while continually advancing the human " Each point, then, is developed with relevant but insufficient In discussing the potential of technology to advance knowledge in many fields (a broad subject, rife with possible examples), the writer uses only one limited and very brief example from a specific field (medicine and stem-cell research).
Development of the second point is hindered by a lack of specificity and The writer creates what might be best described as an The writer cites a need for regulation/supplementation and warns of the detriment of over-reliance upon However, the explanation of both the problem and solution is vague and limited ("Our reliance can be If humans understand that we should not have such a reliance we will advance further"). There is neither explanation of consequences nor clarification of what is meant by "" This second paragraph is a series of generalizations that are loosely connected and lack a much-needed
In the essay, there are some minor language errors and a few more serious flaws (, "The future ability of growing new brain cells" or "One aspect where the ability of humans may initially be seen as an example of deteriorating minds"). Despite the accumulation of such flaws, the writer's meaning is generally Thus, this essay earns a score of
gre作文（8）
【考试流程】
考试在10点开始，要求考生最晚在9:30进入考场。
Secret1: 和TOEFL一样，你10点到，10点之后考试仍然没有问题，每个人开考时间不同，中途休息时间不同，结束时间也不同。
到考生等候室核对身份证领取钥匙在小柜子里存包，填写考生保密协议,签名。
Secret2：尽量快速完成抄写保密誓词，不能带水入场，上好厕所。
检查证件，用机场和地铁的扫描设备扫你，看你有没有携带作弊工具，之后坐在椅子上拍半身照，电脑摄像头，之后电脑随机安排考位。
Secret3: 不鼓励，但如果你心理素质好，可以携带非纸质类的作弊工具4:每个考生桌子上放着三张草稿纸，有三种颜色：惨红，惨绿或者是惨黄，和一直两头都削好了的铅笔。
Secret4: 草稿纸不够可以无限续杯，但要一张就要还回去一张，手中一直保持3张。
正式考试界面登录之后就是模考软件PP2上的界面一模一样了。 。先是两个作文的部分，一个Issue一个Argue，各30分钟，写够字数基本上就是满屏左右。因为每行屏幕能写12个单词左右。每个Section结束后可休息1分钟。两个作文部分结束后，进入到语文或者数学部分。
Secret5: 一开始的页面是询问你考试数则信息是否正确，然后问你的专业，完全可以skip跳过，这段没有任何意义。
Secret6: 考场中没有摄像头，尤其没有直接对着你的摄像头，老师也不会盯着你看，所以如果你带纸质的模板参考的话，被抓到的可能性不大，但你要自己慎重考虑。
正常的考生会遇到V-Q-V-Q-或者是Q-V-Q-V，一定会有一个加试，可能语文可能数学每个考生不一样,在两篇作文和两个Section之后会有十分钟休息。
Secret7: 休息不止10分钟，如果没有老师来你座位上输入授权码，考试到时间也是不会自动开始的，可以出去吃东西喝水
gre作文（9）
"According?to?a?recent?report?from?our?marketing?department,,?the?contents?of?these?reviews?are?not?reaching?enough?of?our?prospective?viewers;?so?the?problem?lies?not?with?the?quality?of?our?movies?but?with?the?public'"??
,'
Commentary???
This?fundamentally?flawed?response?is?characterized?by?three?essential?deficiencies:??
--?It?contains?a?pervasive?pattern?of?errors?in?grammar?and?usage?that
Where?the?language?makes?sense?and?looks?controlled,,,
gre作文（10）
情商的定义及其四大内涵
Emotional intelligence defines EQ, which stands for emotional quotient, is a fairly new concept in the scientific community, yet it has become one of the most controversial For thousands of years, people have thought that IQ is destiny, but it has turned out to be not nearly as much as we Daniel Goleman, a psychology professor at Harvard, wrote a ground-breaking book about the EQ His book argues that our view of human intelligence is far too narrow, ignoring a crucial range of abilities that matter immensely in terms of how well we do in To be emotionally intelligent relies on many factors, which include knowing one?s feelings and using them to make life decisions they can live
Being able to manage one?s emotional life without being hijacked by it—not being paralyzed by depression or worry, or swept away by
Persisting in the face of setbacks and channeling one?s impulses in order to pursue their
Empathy—reading other people?s emotions without their having to tell you what they are
Handling feelings in relationships with skill and harmony—being able to articulate the unspoken pulse of a group, for
自尊与情商
Self-esteem, like optimism, is essential in order to maintain a healthy emotional People who have confidence in themselves, their ideas and views, and what they are all about tend to be more emotionally stable than people who lack Being self-confident gives people the impression that you are reliable and Studies have showed that children who lack self-esteem are more likely to have emotional problems such as depression, violent fits and suicidal People who have high self-esteem are less likely to be affected by any negative comments; they know that it?s what they think of themselves that
Teaching a child to have self-esteem is very Children?s expectations about their abilities begin at If parents show confidence in children?s behaviors and judgments, children are more likely to set a higher standard for themselves, in their social and personal Developing a child?s self-esteem through constant praise and reinforcement, as advocated for many years, may actually do more harm than Helping a child feel good about themselves works only if those feelings are attached to specific
情商与成功
The excitement over the concept of emotional intelligence begins with its applications for raising
and educating children, but extends to its importance in the work place and virtually all human Studies show that the same EQ skills that result in your child being perceived as an enthusiastic learner by his/her teacher, or being liked by his/her friends on the playground, will also help him/her twenty years from now in his/her job or In many studies, adults do not appear to be that different from the children they once The extent to which EQ skills can affect the workplace is still A study found out why scientists were performing poorly at their jobs in spite of intellectual and academic intelligence equal to their high-achieving The researchers studied the E-mail patterns of all the scientists and found that the employees who were disliked because of poor emotional and social skills were being left out by their colleagues, much the same way as the nerd was left out of games on the EQ is as important as IQ when it comes to
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题目：
The only responsibility of corporate executives, provided they stay within the law, is to make as much money as possible for their
公司的经营者们唯一的责任就是在法律规定范围之内为他们的公司赚尽可能多的钱。
As long as staying within the law, is the corporate executives' only responsibility is to maximize the profit for companies? I don't think Making money is a fundamental aim of the executives, and creating as much social benefits as possible is also their Furthermore, only staying in the range of law is not
In the first place, the corporate executives' primary aim is earning as much profit as possible for the The companies are built to earn money, without this aim,the modern society, which is pushing by the accumulation of capitals, would not develop in such a The modern industry world is based on the value that making as much money as possible at lowest Holding this value, the executives have to try their best to maximize profits of the corporations, otherwise, they will fail in the competitive business So in order to make corporate improving and keep the position of all the employees, the executives' most important responsibility is to earn Of course, it could also ensure their own good Making more and more money, the lives of whole corporate workers' will be better, the tax incomes of the nation will raise, the business market will be active, and the society will develop , making more economical benefits is the aim of the corporations, and the responsibility of
However, although making profits is the primary purpose of executives, it does not equal to that making profits is the only At the same time, making social benefits is also important for Corporations’ money is not only gained by the efforts of the executives and employees, but also by the help of the whole Without the society's support, companies could not get so many benefits from Therefore, it is important for executives to return something to Take Bill Gates for the biggest company of the world, Gates never forgets to create social benefits for the Up to now, he have donated more than 3 billion dollars to respond the world’s He help poor country deal with some serious diseases,support scientist to research on human bodies, fund the welfare of the nation, help improve the education, and donate to various kinds of charity The rewards of such behaviors are obvious and The Microsoft may gain a better reputation,and the whole market condition may thrive in the long rung, either of which will defintely make sense for the lasting profits of Seeing all those mentioned above, it is clear that executives should help society to reach balanced improvement just as Gates
Besides the restrain of social responsibilities, the executives should also act within a range which is wider than Law is merely the most basic limit of people; also,there is morality for individuals and groups to As corporate executives, people should also keep a high level of morality, for they are the representatives of the companies, and the public person who noticed by ordinary So being honest,respect others, helping people as they could are all necessary regulations for That could help the corporations and the society keep In addition, laws are not always There are often some holes among them, since the laws could not react as soon as the newest changes of the world For instance, the laws of the internet are not consummate yet, so there are a lot of behaviors which have not been And executives have the responsibility to keep away from those behaviors which could lead to unfair competing or damage to the society, even if they might bring corporations big economical
In conclusion, the economical and social benefits, which are significant factors for social development, both should be pursued by corporate And those behaviors which are towards any purposes should within the limits of morality rather than basic
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找朋友帮忙批改
相信不少正在发愁GRE作文怎么打分的考生都很少会考虑这个方法。如果要找人批改，大家肯定都会更倾向找那些更专业权威的人士来帮助，比如大学教授，或者专业英文作家等等。但是，有时候来自朋友的帮助却也能收到奇效。旁观者清，许多你自己注意不到的拼写错误、语法错误和文章结构上的问题，在他人的眼里却是再明显不过。如果你的朋友中有谁具备一定的英语读写能力，那么寻求他们的帮助来批改作文也不失为一个好办法。
当然，既然是找朋友帮忙，自然可以提出一些特殊要求。你不妨告诉他们这篇文章是在30分钟内写完的，因此批改时不要太过纠结于高水准严要求，只要找找语法结构、逻辑问题或者举例上的错误即可。批改的最终目的还是以找到一些比较明显的问题为主。
参考范文做对比
虽然找人批改不容易，但GRE高分范文还是很容易找到的。只要花费些许时间在网上搜索一下，想必大家都能找到不少高分满分的GRE作文范文。而由于GRE作文题目相对比较固定，大家可以找一些题目相同的高分范文，和自己的作品做一些对比，通过比较写作手法结构用词造句等各个方面，应该能发现一些问题和不足，也是一种不错的自我批改途径。
其他批改资源
另一种比较简单省事的批改途径，也许很多人都没注意过，那就是WORD。把你完成的作文复制黏贴到WORD里，各种拼写语法错误瞬间在小绿线的提示下显露无疑。当然，这种方法只能用来修改拼写和语法等基础问题。但GRE作文评分中同样有对于这些基础的评分要求，而且往往会有到1分的分值。因此，如果对自己的基本功没有太大把握，或者因为写作时间紧张容易出现手误，那么求助WORD，同样是值得考虑的选择。
由此可见，其实给自己改GRE作文的方法还是有不少的。希望大家能够从中找到一些批改途径，练好GRE作文，在考试中写出满意的文章。
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虽然GRE考试对于作文字数篇幅从来没有提出过明确要求，但根据官方公布的各类高分范文来看，一般来说字数在400-600字是最佳范围。这是因为篇幅过短的文章，容易给考官留下考生写作能力不足，无法表达出自己想法的印象，但篇幅太长同样会给人留下啰嗦累赘的感觉。因此把文章的篇幅字数控制在400-600字是最为合适的做法。
重点考察考生有针对性地对具体考题做出反应的能力，而非要求考生堆砌泛泛的文字。
具体说来，这些重点关注的能力包括：清楚有效地阐明复杂观点，用贴切的事理和事例支撑观点，考察/验证他人论点及其相关论证，支撑一个有针对性的连贯的讨论，控制标准书面英语的各个要素。
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gre写作宝典(第一版)
评注：第一版尽管粗糙，但是素材全，练习好，同时今天的许多重考题都在该书范围内，尤其是占全书1/3之多的“写作工具箱”属于准备写作一个最大利器。
《新gre写作官方题库与范文》
《新gre写作官方题库与范文》不仅完整收录了新g考以来的所有写作题目，同时撰写的高度是与官方标准的范文符合的，原汁原味，流畅地道，变成了大部分考生的杀g必备!
智课小编表示书中结合ets公布的最新官方题库，根据考生在备考过程里所面临的实际难题出发，针对怎么写作issue和argument进行了详细的讲解，同时还给大家精心解读最新gre写作题库，点拨题目特点，分析成文思路和脉络。题库中的每道题目都提供了由美籍名师精心撰写的高分参考范文，考生可细细研习，学构思、品词句，体会把所学习的方法巧运用到真正的写作中去，最后才能够做到举一反三、触类旁通。
此外，书中还为考生提供了issue题库以及argument题库的交叉索引，方便考生查阅。在附录里提供的经常使用连接词有助于大家在写作时增强文章的逻辑性，使文章更加连贯流畅。
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(1) complexity:事物的两面性(同一事物有优点就有缺点，相比较的事物有各自的优缺点)，从多角度分析事物(分析不同领域中，不同情况下)。论点一边倒的文章论述得再好也只能得5分。
(2) insightful position：在有全面深刻理解的基础上，观点最好新颖独到(对ets来说)，但必须保证能自圆其说。
(3) conveys meaning skillfully:可用于论证的一切技巧(估计老美自己用起来也得费点心思)。比如文章的行文方向，起承转合不用明显的标志词(first, second, however, on the other hand, the second example illustrating my point)，而是依靠论述的内在脉络(只可意会不可言传)自然而然的引到下一块内容。
(4) compelling reasons(reason就已经够令人头疼的了，有加了个compelling)：这是最重要的一个得分点。
(5) persuasive examples：用来支持reason的，使抽象的reason更具体，更易被读者理解，从而产生共鸣，或使其更可信，更有说服力。可用的例子有自己的经历，引言。
(6) well-focused:简单说就是不跑题。中心论点明确，全文不跑题;各段主题句明确，围绕主题句论述。
(7) well-organized：文章采用的论述结构，分几个部分论述，每部分有几段，各部分、各段间的关系是什么。
(8) connecting ideas logically：using transitional phrases起承转合词，过渡句，或有此种作用的句子，总之起到help organize the ideas and move the argument forward。
(9) 跟着感觉走没错。
(10) 不要罗嗦，表达简洁。但如果以上几点做得好，这缺点可以忽略不计。
(11) 基本上挺难，但不影响大局，为避免重复大胆的用你想用的词，阅卷人能理解。
(12) sentence variety：最好长短句结合，ets藐视总用短句的人：Since most of the sentences are short and choppy, the ideas they try to communicate are also
(13) 还有语法错误等等，小毛病，先把上面的问题解决好在理它吧。
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一. 背景介绍-----万能123的诞生
它的优势在于：让你用最快的时间找出攻击点，不仅解决攻击语言还解决攻击顺序，还能节省你考试时列提纲的时间
我刚开始复习时也是很苦恼，但是当我对着北美范文写了十几篇并日日思索之后，发现了一个万能找茬法。它的精髓就在于教你写一套属于自己的万能123模板，这个模板不仅解决你语言，攻击顺序，更你提高你的效率，即给你一个找茬的火眼金睛，又给你一个呼之欲出的思路。
我考前一天把我自己的模板背了又背了一遍，考的那篇文章我虽没写过，但是我在issue和argument 中场休息的1分钟之内把我的万能123找茬写在草稿纸上，题目出来后仅仅花了1分钟在万能123找茬勾出题目中题目中的错误点，这样连提纲都省了，还非常有条理。
我考之前把这个提纲发给我一同学让她好好背。现在拿出来和大家分享，还准备发一份给那个作文老师，以提高他的教学质量。
二. 精华部分---万能123找茬
从整体来说：开头结尾不是最重点，中间部分才是重中之重
就中间部分来说：具体的语言不是最重点，攻击思路才是重中之重
结论就是，攻击思路是重中之重，所以万能123找茬才是重中之重，比万能123模板(语言文字)及开头结尾给重要。
三.精华部分的注释
这里是注释：(对照序号看)
① 一 因为此调查或研究没有提到样本sample，所以可以攻击其样本可能不具代表性，例如1。样本太小不具代表性2。样本特殊不具代表性
二 有了样本仍然可攻击样本没有代表性，例如1。样本太小不具代表性2。样本的倾向性问题，即某类人群比其他多数人更愿意参加调查或研究
三 没有论据的声称其实是很万能的，多用于攻击一些不是调查也不是研究的论据(具体可参照我的例文)
② 一 这个嘛虽然被某些新东方老师分为3大类，其实本质还是一样的，就是一个群体的特征推到另一个群体身上。大家注意体会。
二.三不解释了
四.这也是个万能，原因有二：1。它包罗万象，有推理一定有错误!其中有几个常见的例子：现在(过去)推未来，能胜任甲工作不一定胜任乙工作。对于常见的可以准备几个自己的模版，只要你高兴尽情准备吧。2。其实说白了②这一大项里全都可以看作②四(错误推理)，只不过有些最常见的(比如以小推大和错误类比)被拉出来自立门户了。所以对于那些不常见的只要套用你自己写的错误推理模版，再加上几个反例就perfect。
③ 一。二。都是用来攻击结论的万能攻击。记住，它们是万能的，建议性的文章在一，二里绝对能找到一个可以用的。(一般关于最终目的是盈利的可以用二，其余的文章可用一)
★ 当然有一种文章是不能用万能③，发现了没?那就科普性文章。除了科普性文章，凡是建议类文章都可用③。
补充注释：
关于反例：反例很重要但不是最重要，它是起锦上添花的作用的。每个攻击点处写最少一个，最好2~3个反例。但是记住找到攻击点后再写反例，不要盲目的为了写反例而写(那个作文讲师就是为了反例而反例，我的新东方听课笔记上抄全是反例，没个像样的攻击点，满目疮痍惨不忍睹)
关于攻击攻击顺序：按照①②③的顺序进行攻击。
其中①里有且只能选择一个攻击点(没有先后次序的烦恼)
②里可能有一个以上的攻击点，比如说是甲和乙。如果乙是以甲的推论结论为前提，那先甲后乙。如果甲乙是平行关系，一般按题目中的出现先后顺序进行攻击
③ 对于建议性文章有且只能选择一个攻击点(没有先后次序的烦恼)
不能攻击科普性文章
四.准备自己的万能123模版
看完了我的万能123找茬思路之后，就可以找手准备属于你自己的万能123模版了
步骤：
把你以前写的习作找出来，对应着万能123找茬把你已经写过的段落作成自己的模版，只要把涉及文章信息的内容挖掉就好。如果对应不起来那就自己动手写拉(其实我是拿北美范文改出自己的一套模版的，你也可以用北美范文呀，但是一定要改成自己的语言，不能雷同)
其实写完了你发现总共只有9个段子。但这9个可是万能的。
平时就反复用这9个段子练习写作，等到考试前一天稍微背背就可以上考场了
考试时利用中场休息把万能123找茬默写出来，等题目出来只要在相应的条目上勾勾就行了。提纲都不用列了。
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在每一段开始的第一行，最好能明确地表达你想说什么，也就是中心句。
这做法虽然死板，但往往有奇效。特别是对自己逻辑推理不是很有信心的各位，说清楚了，没说全面总比说都没说清楚要好。
第二，写作这个东西其实是相通的
我们中的很大一部分在高考结束后恐怕很少再写这么长的，同时主题又相对深刻的文字。英文只是一个表达方式，而论证过程则和中文没有任何区别。如果实在觉得难以上手，不妨先试试写一篇自己认为很深刻的中文文章看看。在逻辑和思想方面，这样的训练方式会有奇效，同时对于心理是一个不小的鼓舞。
第三，有关范文
范文是一定要看的，看什么。我建议，开始的时候，不要纠结于某某单词的某某用法，大不了你写的时候不用就是了。要大略的看，看作者是怎么展开题目，从哪几个方面入手，各自怎么论证的。
很重要的一点是，不要迷信范文。没有任何证据表明你看到的这篇范文出自一位逻辑学大师的手，即便确实如此，对于同一问题有不同的见解这是再正常不过的事情。思路可以借鉴，但千万不要僵化。
与此本质相同的另一个方法是，请别人改作文，就观点改或就文字改，按个人情况取舍。
第四，专门练习句子
如果真的想兼顾文字，不如在练逻辑练累的时候(我知道很容易累，很枯燥)，专门拿出一点时间去写一些句子，效果更好。
如果说模版的话，这样就足够了。模版这个东西，背太多没好处，太容易局限思维，还有雷同的风险。
第五，培养找到错误的能力
还要说明一点，以上是针对整个AW而言。对于argument，特别需要注意的是培养找到错误的能力。
具体方法是，阅读一定量的题目。
这样的好处有二：
一、通过阅读题目，只找错误来训练。
二、没有谁能保证argument里面不会出现一个你不认识的单词，万一是个关键词，那可就……
argument其实和issue也是想通的，锻炼一者的同时另一者一定也会提高，所以不要纠结浪费时间的问题。
第六，关于机经
我的意见是，反正写什么都是写，不如按照机经写。当然，如果能写很多很多，那我的意见没有什么参考价值。
综上所述，要想获得新GRE满分作文，掌握正确的复习方法是很重要的，各位考生可以结合自身的具体情况，参考以上这六种经验总结来帮助自己获得新GRE写作高分。