英语作文建议（1）
●适当放慢进度，留出思考时间
●反复训练重要、易错知识点
●指导方法
●减少作业量以保证质量
●给予更多鼓励
注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;
3. 词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。
Dear Mr. Wang,
We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.
In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation.
______________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________
范文(One possible version)
Dear Mr. Wang,
We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.
In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.
By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.
英语作文建议（2）
Here are some suggestions to keep healthy. Firstly, we should keep a good mood. Keeping a good mood can make us healthy and wealthy. Secondly, we should have enough sleep every day. Don't stay up late at night and get up early in the morning. Thirdly, we should develop a good eating habit, namely eating more fresh fruits and green vegetables, less meat and no junk food. Besides, make sure that eat at regular intervals. In addition, we should change our clothes as the season goes. What’s more, when we are at home, we should open the windows to keep the air clean. Last but not least, do the exercise every day to strengthen our health. Do please pay attention to these points, keeping a healthy body.
这是一些保持健康的建议。首先，我们应该保持一个好心情。保持良好的心态可以使我们健康和富裕。其次，我们每天应该有足够的睡眠。晚上不要熬夜，早上要早起。第三，我们应养成良好的饮食习惯，也就是要多吃新鲜水果和绿色蔬菜，少吃肉，不吃垃圾食品。确保定时吃饭。此外，我们应该随着季节的推移变换我们的衣服。更重要的是，我们在家的时候，我们应该打开窗户以保持空气清新。最后但并非最不重要的是要通过每天锻炼来加强我们的健康。请注意这几点，保持一个健康的身体。
英语作文建议（3）
I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some will feel dizzy or tired, some will suffer from lack of sleep, and some will lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.
First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a fight attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.
Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.
(We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)
英语作文建议（4）
优点：1. 话题广泛;
2. 图片丰富;
3. 有助于提高学习兴趣。
建议：适当降低词汇难度。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。
满分作文
Dear Editor,
As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.
In my eyes, these books have a lot of advantages. To begin with, there are such a wide variety of topics in the books that they can satisfy students’ curiosity better. In addition, the pictures in the textbooks are very interesting and attractive. Not only can they draw students’ attention, but they can also arouse our interest in learning English. In short, we have benefited a lot from these books.
However, in my opinion, there are still some shortcomings in the textbooks. We find some words are a bit difficult to remember. Therefore, I suggest that you can make them easier to understand.
Best regards,
Li Hua
亲爱的编辑。
作为学生的读者，我写了一个关于你家出版的英语教材的作文。
在我的眼里，这些书有很多优点。首先，他们可以更好地满足学生的好奇心，有这样一个各种各样的主题的书籍。此外，在教科书中的图片是非常有趣和有吸引力的。他们不仅能吸引学生的注意力，而且能激发我们学习英语的兴趣。总之，我们从这些书中受益匪浅。
然而，在我看来，教科书中仍有一些不足之处。我们发现有些话是有点难以记住。因此，我建议你可以让他们更容易理解。
最好的问候。
李华
英语作文建议（5）
I am writing to express my views concerning_____(对象). In the first place, I would like to say thank you for the help and everything else you have been offering to us. Meanwhile, I also want to make some suggestions .
Firstly, we have found that_____(建议一). Secondly, we want to______(建议二) . Finally, we hope that _______(建议三).
I am looking forwards to your consideration about my proposals. Thanks in advance.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
作文要点点拨
concerning 关于，论及，就…而言：
the help and everything else you have been offering to us
你一直向我们提供的帮助及其它事情。
proposals 提议，建议
in advance 预先，提前
建议信写作建议
首先，要表达你一直关注着某件事情，这件事情给你带来了那些好处，同时针对不足，你想给出一些建议。 (这样第一段基本上就完成了)
然后，针对具体的问题，给出具体的建议，一般是给出二到三建议就行了。(这里真的只能是具体问题具体分析，没有看到作文主题，老师也无能为力，提前帮你弄好。只能靠自己了，加油。)
最后，还是套路，希望认真考虑你的建议，表示感谢。
英语作文建议（6）
提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车;
2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳;
3.饮食要健康;
4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。
要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑;
2.80—100词左右;
3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
【例文】
Dear Dad(Mum),
You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d better take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better.
Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy!
Your loving son (daughter)
Tom (Mary)
【翻译】
亲爱的爸爸(妈妈)。
你每天这么忙，以至于忽视了健康。我始终对你的健康感到担心。我想给你一些建议。我听说走路是最好的运动。您的公司里离家并不远，不是吗?为什么不步行到办公室吗?你最好每周至少锻炼一次，如在健身房打网球。去游泳也是一个不错的选择。更重要的是，记得吃健康的食物。尽量不要熬夜太晚。有足够的睡眠可以让你的大脑工作得更好。
爸爸，请接受我的意见。我真的希望你健康!
您的爱子(女)
汤姆(玛丽)
高中英语作文范文带翻译：美丽的回忆
Beautiful MemoryWhen I was small, I lived in my hometown, it is a small village, but the scenery is so beautiful, the trees are so green and the water is so clean. But when I went to primary school, I moved to the city with my parents, I missed the time in my hometown so much. When I was in my hometown, I woke up early in the morning, some people took a walk and some were doing their farm work. I would always go to the mountain with my grandma, we took care of the fruit trees. The little dog would come with me, when my grandma was doing her work, I played with the dog, how happy I was. Sometimes I would go to the river with my friends to catch the fish, I saw the fish clearly. These are beautiful memory for me, I keep it all the time.
当我还小的时候，我住在家乡，那是一个小村庄，但是风景很美，树木很绿，水很清澈。但是当我上初中的时候，我随父母搬到了城市，我很想念在家乡的时光。我在家乡的时候，我早上起得很早，一些人在散步，还有一些人在干他们的农活。我总会跟我的奶奶去山上，我们在料理果树。小狗会跟着我，在我奶奶干活的时候，我和小狗在玩耍，多么开心啊。有时候我会和朋友到河边抓鱼，我能清楚地看到鱼。这些对于我来说都是美丽的回忆，我一直都铭记着。
高中英语作文范文带翻译：高考冲刺
The Sprint in College Entrance Exam
The period of high school stage is the preparation for college, all the students work hard in the purpose of the better future. In this stage, they hold the same target, fighting for the College Entrance Exam, especially in the third year, the sprint is very important. There are some suggestions for a better sprint. First, students should take a regular work schedule, it is very important to sleep in time, so that students can wake up early in the morning and then work with efficiency. Second is to keep the balanced diet. Students should pay attention to what they eat, the nutrition should be enough, so they can keep a better mind, thinking in a quick way. The last year of high school life must be hard and tedious, the one who keeps hold on will gain what they want. If they do as the mentioned suggestions, they can work better.
高考冲刺
高中阶段是为大学做准备的阶段，所有的学生都努力学习，希望能有个好的将来。在这个阶段，他们都有同样的目标，为了高考奋斗，特别是在第三年，冲刺是很重要的。为了更好的冲刺，一些建议被提出来。第一，学生应该按时作息，按时睡觉很重要，这样学生就能早点起来，同时也能有效率的学习。第二，保持平衡饮食。学生应该注意他们吃的，营养要充足，这样能保持良好的精神状态，思维运转得快速。高中生活的最后一年肯定是很艰苦和乏味的，谁能坚持下来，谁就能实现他们想要的。如果他们按照上面提到的建议做，他们的效率更高。
高中英语作文范文带翻译：信息爆炸的影响
The Impact of Information Explosion
信息爆炸的影响
In an era of information explosion, people can easily be distracted by irrelevant information. It is particularly well-known that a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention.
在这个信息膨胀的时代，人们很容易受到不相干的信息的困扰，众所周知，过于丰富的信息反而导致注意力的缺失。
Admittedly, a consideration amount of information expands our horizon and gives us convenience. Just with a simple click, we can get a plenty of information from the Internet. We are so skilled at searching information online. Nevertheless, we seem at sea of information invariably when we open webpages for which the information is too abundant and much of them turn out to be useless. How can we avoid being lost in a wealth of information?
可以肯定的是，一定量的信息可以开阔我们的眼界，给予方便。只是简单地敲击按键，我们就能从网络上获得大量的信息。我们是如此的熟悉搜索网络信息。尽管如此，当我们打开网页浏览这大量的信息时候，我们好像处在信息大海之中，而这些内容很多都是无用的。我们如何才能不迷失在这海量的信息之中?
First of all, ensuring what information you want and make a list of them. Then you can save useful webpages which get you out of the time-consuming information. Last but not least, we should be self-control and never be attracted by the distracting information. As long as you follow those tips, you will get what you want efficiently.
首先，确定好你想要找的内容并做好清单。然后你可以保存好那些有用的网站，这样你就能摆脱不相干信息的干扰。最后同样重要的是，我们要自我控制，不被那些转移注意力的信息给吸引。只要做到这几点，你就能有效地找到你想要的信息。
高中英语作文范文带翻译：春天
Spring
When you look around, you will find that the spring is coming. The breeze is gently brushing your face. The blue sky is above you. After raining, the flowers are blooming in the garden. The living beings start to grow. Everything is full with vigor and fragrance. The best season of this year, you cann’t miss it and you will love it.
The spring is coming, it brings green to the trees and grass, pink and yellow to the flowers. Activeness to the animals. Hopes to the human beings. The birds start to sing, the farmers begin to plant crops in the fields. In spring, everywhere is full of hope. People usually say that a good beginning is half done, while spring is the beginning of a year. So we should appreciate it and make the most use of it. Try the best to spread seeds in spring and you will get a good harvest in autumn. Then you will see how important spring is and how lovely it is.
春天
当你环望四周，你就会发现春天来了。微风轻拂你的脸颊。湛蓝的天空在你头上。春雨过后，花朵在园子里开放。生物开始生长。所有的一切都富有活力和香气。这是一年中最好的季节，你不会错过它，更会爱上它。
春天来了，它把绿色带给了树木和青草;把黄色和粉色带给了鲜花;把活力带给了动物;更把希望带给了人们。小鸟开始唱歌，农民开始在地里耕作庄稼。在春天，一切都充满着希望。人们都说好的开始时成功的一半，那么春天就是一年的开始。所以我们更应该好好珍惜春天，过好每一天。在春天的时候努力播种，秋天时便会有所收获。然后你就会看到春天是多么的重要，多么的可爱了。
高中英语作文范文带翻译：出名趁早
To Be Famous in the Early Age
Today, as the media develop fast, people can find the famous people everywhere, they are in the commercial, in the TV and the movies. The mass media provide so many chances for people who want to be famous. Many years ago, the age of being famous is about 23, but now, we can find a lot of stars getting famous in the early age, now the average age is 17. It is the age for teenager, many people believe that the early to be famous, the better, because the youth passes away quickly. As for me, I think being famous in the early age means the teenagers have to give up their study, they need to accept the company’s training, for the purpose of making their career perfect. Most people don’t have the chance to being famous, as they don’t get high education, so they live a hard life. I think teenager should focus on study first.
出名趁早
今天，随着媒体的快速发展，人们可以随处发现名人，他们出现在广告里，电视里和电影上。多媒体给那些想出名的人提供了很多机会。很多年以前，人们成名的年龄大约是23岁，但是现在，我们可以发现很多明星出名的年龄很小，现在平均出名的年龄是17岁。这是出于青少年的年龄，很多人觉得越早出名，越好，因为青春稍纵即逝。对于我来说，我觉得年少成名意味着青少年要放弃学业，他们需要接受公司的训练，为了让他们的职业更加完美。大多数人没有机会成名，因为他们没有接受高等教育，因此他们过着艰苦的生活。我觉得青少年应该专注于学习。