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2022-10-27 03:59:28
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假如你是李华,最近你从报纸上看到一家涉外酒店招聘暑期兼职工的广告,请你根据下列要点提示写一封应聘信。

1.李华,女,18岁,身体健康。

2.擅长英语,口语流利。

3.性格外向,交际能力强。

注意:

1.词数100左右。

2.书信格式已经给出,不计入总词数。

3.可以适当拓展。

Dear Sir or Madame,

Yours。

Li Hua

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Dear Sir or Madame,

I am writing in response to your advertisement in the newspaper. My name is Li Hua and I am 18 years old. I think I will be fit for the job as a waitress in your hotel thi s summer vacation. My advantages are as follows:

Firstly, I am healthy and strong. I can work for long hours in summer. Secondly, my English is excellent. I can speak English fluently and have no difficulty communicating with foreigners.

Finally , I am outgoing and good at communicating with others. As a result, I am popular among my classmates and teachers.

I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your hotel. Im looking forward to your reply.

Yours。

Wang Hua

【解析】

试题分析:假如你是李华,最近你从报纸上看到一家涉外酒店招聘暑期兼职工的广告,请你根据要点提示写一封应聘信。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】I am writing in response to your advertisement in the newspaper. 开头表明自己的目的,一目了然;I think I will be fit for the job as a waitress in your hotel this summer vacation. 运用宾语从句;I can speak English fluently and have no difficulty communicating with foreigners.运用固定句式与高级词组结合;同时运用连接词,使文章连接自然,如Firstly首先,Finally最后等,I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your hotel. Im looking forward to your reply.此句式为文章增色,显得文章很有档次。