Hug In Spring_1200字
spring is coming.flowers growing.everyone is very very happy. spring is nice and warm.we can do many things: i can go fishing, the ice is melting. i can go climbing, the weather is sunny. i can play outside with my friends,the weather is not cold outside. i can go hiking with my family,the sun is warm. . in the spring,farmer is very busy,beacause they must do farmer work.they grow vegetables,too. spring is interesting.i like it,like its nice,like its warm,like its animate.ha!ha!
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spring is coming. flowers are blooming. everyone is happy. in spring, the weather is nice and warm. i can do many things. the ice is melting, so i can go fishing. the weather is sunny, so i can go climbing. i can play outside with my friends for the warm weather. i can also go hiking with my family. in spring, farmers are very busy, because they must plant crops. they grow vegetables, too. spring is interesting. i like it very much.
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