求一篇雅思范文 出国留学的利弊

With the rapid development of society, we have entered an era of information explosion. In order to acquire more knowledge, more and more people decide to further their study abroad. Studying abroad brings about many advantages. It widens students' knowledge and horizons, and meanwhile cultivates their independence and personalities.
Firstly, students can learn advanced knowledge and experience abroad. Since the reform and the policy of opening to the outside world, China has strengthened cooperation with many countries. As a result, the scientific and technological level has been improved very rapidly. However, compared with the developed countries in the world, we still have a very long way to go. Studying abroad provides opportunities to students, who can learn advanced knowledge and management experience, so as to enhance the scientific level in our country.
Secondly, studying abroad can cultivate students' ability to live independently and their characters. Students have to deal with many problems when they study abroad. They have to learn how to be accustomed to a new environment and how to get along with the teachers and classmates. During their study, they can acquire some interpersonal skills.
Finally, studying abroad can provide a good language environment to students and make it easy to pick up a language. Foreign language is a tool employed to communicate with each other. It can remove language barrier and make international cooperation much easier.
However, "Every coin has its two sides" Studying abroad also brings about many disadvantages. Firstly, students will be confronted with so many psychological problems. They often feel lonely and helpless in a new environment. Furthermore, the tuition is very high, which is a very heavy financial burden to the average people.
To sum up, the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages greatly. We encourage students study abroad. When they accomplish their curriculum, they can make more contributions to the construction of our society. (313 words)
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People’s living standard has been improved and parents tend to pay attention to their children’s education. Therefore, more and more young people choose to go abroad to pursue their higher education. Frankly speaking, studying oversea has both advantages and disadvantages.
Critics argue that there are many good reasons why student should not go abroad to study. For one thing, living far away from home, students will suffer from loneliness and homesickness. Overseas students often feel disoriented and depressed for lack of adequate knowledge and understanding of local customs and lifestyle. For another, many overseas students don’t want to return to their native country because they want to seek a comfortable life and a brighter future overseas, which may result in a serious brain drain and our country will inevitably incur a huge loss of talents.
Proponents claim that overseas study has so many advantages. First of all, it can broaden students’ vision. They get a chance to experience a quite different culture. The knowledge of social custom acquires in the other countries helps them to become more open-minded. Secondly, there are academic advantages. Students can learn advanced technology and science. They will receive a different education. The book resources are more up-to-data. The professors are ware of the latest development in their fields. That is to say, the standard of teaching is much higher. Thirdly, when they finish their study broad, they will have more choices for their future career. All the above merits are conducive to their self-betterment and self-realization.
In my opinion, while overseas study has its drawbacks, the advantages are also obvious. It can broaden one’s horizon. Students have easy access to the first-rate facilities and the latest development in the science and technology. When they finish their study, they will have more job opportunities. Therefore, as long as it is financially feasible, an overseas study may do a person more good than harm.
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