2021年西宁中考英语作文题目预测 附高分作文秘诀

中考英语考试中，相信很多考生最头疼的就是作文了，虽说分值不是很大，但却是考核考生综合能力的一道大题；小编为各位考生整理了2021年中考英语话题作文题目预测及范文，供考生参考练习！

题目：李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。

提示词：give up concentrate on be (become)interested in

★ 范文

Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him。

Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon。

增加文采小窍门

如果说第一、二步骤是对文章的构思，第三、四步骤则是真正地“写”了，用词是否贴切，文法是否正确，句式是否多变，文采是否有生气，关系到写作者的语言功底和水平，但也有些窍门，以下这几点可以供你参考。

1.在整篇文章中，避免只是用一两个句式，要灵活运用各种句式。如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等。

2.使用不同长度的句子，通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。

3.改变句子的开头方式，不要一味以主、谓、宾、状的次序。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词短语等。

4.学会使用过渡词。如：

1)递进：further more, moreover, besides, in addition, then等等。

2)转折：however, but, nevertheless, after all等等。

3)总结：finally, at last, in brief, to conclude.

4)强调：really, indeed, certainly, surely, above all等等。

5)对比：in the same way, just as, on the other hand等等。

5.避免重复使用同一单词或词组。

6.注意运用固定词组、习语、谚语来代替一些词表达意思，以增加文采。