幸福岛的沉没

传说，在很久很久以前，有一个美丽富饶而不知名的海岛。岛的四周被碧绿的海水环绕，气候温和，绿树成荫。对了！还有许多珍禽异兽呢！像袋鼠啦、犀牛啦、鸵鸟啦……真是应有尽有。岛边的海水特别清澈，水中成群地游着五颜六色的鱼。

it is said that there was a beautiful, rich and unknown island a long time ago. the island is surrounded by green sea water, mild climate and tree lined. by the way! there are also many rare animals! like kangaroo, rhinoceros, ostrich it's everything. the water near the island is very clear. there are many colorful fish swimming in the water.

早晨，薄雾绕绕，清风唤醒了岛上的动物和植物，新的一天开始了！全被花草覆盖的地面在阳光的照射下，像缀满珍珠、玛瑙的地毯，显出一道道五光十色的彩虹。噢！原来是花草上挂满的露珠还没落呢！树上的叶子青青的，经雾气清洗，一尘不染，一阵风吹过，它便欢快地跳起舞来。鸟儿们走出房门，有的站在枝头叽叽喳喳地练嗓子，有的飞向空中练羽翅。瞧他们，忽左忽右，忽上忽下，多么自由，多么轻俏，那羽翅像锦缎一般的美。整个海岛就像是点缀在大洋中的碧玉。

in the morning, mist around, the wind awakened the island's animals and plants, a new day began! under the sunshine, the ground covered with flowers and plants looks like a carpet covered with pearls and agates, showing a colorful rainbow. oh! it turns out that the dew on the flowers is still falling! the leaves on the tree are green. after being washed by the fog, they are spotless. when a gust of wind blows, they dance happily. the birds came out of the house. some of them were standing on the branches, chirping and practicing their voices. some of them were flying to the air to practice their wings. look at them, left and right, up and down, how free, how light, and how beautiful their wings are like brocade. the whole island is like a jasper in the ocean.

一天，一支船队在无边的大海上迷航了，顺着风向，船队来到岛边。船员们下了船、贪婪地呼吸着岛上新鲜的空气，欣赏着岛上优美的景色，仿佛置身于仙境一般。他们惊呼道：“啊！我们这是到了天堂了吗？”“不，这不是天堂，这是我们发现的新大陆。”插话的是这个船队的总指挥，这是一位知识渊博的老船长，所有的船员都很敬重他。老船长接着又说：“让我们给这个上帝恩赐的宝地取个名吧！”后来，大家一致同意给这个海岛取名“幸福岛”。

one day, a fleet was lost on the boundless sea. following the wind, the fleet came to the island. the crew got off the ship and greedily breathed the fresh air on the island, enjoying the beautiful scenery on the island, as if they were in a fairyland. they exclaimed, "ah! are we in heaven？ " "no, it's not heaven. it's the new continent we found." it was the commander-in-chief of the fleet who interposed. he was an old and knowledgeable captain. all the crew respected him very much. then the captain added, "let's name the land of god." later, everyone agreed to name the island "happy island".

人类的到来给这个海岛带来的只是灾难。他们伐倒了岛上大约一半的树木，致使鸟儿们无家可归，又加上他们大量捕食，岛上鸟类几乎灭绝。剩余的树木没有鸟这个“医生”，受尽虫害折磨。他们还将大量废水、垃圾随意倒入海中，污染海水。没多久，这个岛就大变样了：花草枯萎了，鸟兽迁走了，取而代之的是一座座被油烟、毒气熏烤着的工厂，人们的体质日益下降。由于工业污染导致细菌大量繁殖，气温逐日增高，空气污浊不堪。随着时间的推移，这个曾给人们带来希望的幸福之岛变成了污浊之岛。终于有一天，恶劣的环境使海岛沉没了。

the arrival of mankind has brought disaster to the island. they cut down about half of the trees on the island, leaving the birds homeless. in addition, they ate a lot of food, making the birds on the island almost extinct. the rest of the trees do not have the "doctor" of birds, suffering from pests. they also pour a lot of waste water and garbage into the sea at will, polluting the sea water. before long, the island changed dramatically: flowers and plants withered, birds and animals moved away, and instead, factories were roasted by oil smoke and poisonous gas. people's health was declining. as a result of industrial pollution, a large number of bacteria multiply, the temperature increases day by day, and the air is dirty. with the passage of time, the island of happiness, which once brought hope to people, has become an island of filth. finally one day, the bad environment sank the island.

朋友，你听了这个故事，一定深受启发吧！是的，毁灭人类生存的环境，就等于毁灭人类自身。让我们一起来保护环境吧！保护人类赖以生存的环境，就是保护人类的自身。

friend, you must be inspired by this story! yes, destroying the living environment of human beings means destroying human beings themselves. let's protect the environment together! to protect the environment on which human beings live is to protect human beings themselves.

在此，我要大声疾呼：保护环境，势在必行。

here, i would like to speak out: it is imperative to protect the environment.

点评：

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本文选材、构思都很奇特。这是科学幻想的文章吗，既是也不是，因为这是用幻想的方式来写当今极严肃的客观现实，发人深省。文章的前半部极力描绘“幸福岛”环境的优美，后半部对照写了环境遭受污染后的荒凉，令人怵目惊心。结尾的“疾呼”，铿锵有力，震撼人心。全文想象丰富，不但构思了发现幸福岛及其沉没的故事，而且构思了犹如仙境般的、完美无缺的大自然环境，读后令人无限向往，从而引起对环境保护这个严肃主题的深刻理解。

this article is very strange in material selection and conception. is this an article of scientific fantasy, neither is it, because it is a thought-provoking way to write today's extremely serious objective reality. the first half of the article tries to describe the beauty of the "happy island" environment, while the second half contrasts the desolation of the polluted environment, which is shocking. the end of the "cry", sonorous and powerful, shocking. the full text is rich in imagination. it not only conceives the story of discovering the happy island and its sinking, but also conceives the perfect natural environment like a fairyland. after reading it, it makes people yearn for it infinitely, which leads to a deep understanding of the serious theme of environmental protection.