人之常情

危难之际，共和国总理站在废墟上安慰悲痛欲绝的百姓要“好好活着”，把人之常情传递到了极致；灾祸临头，军队子弟兵临阵受命，用挑战极限的付出与承受，鼓舞着“活着就有希望”的决心，把人之常情升华到了信念；苦痛肆虐，不甘命运摆布的坚强国人勇敢无畏，珍惜“还能活下来”的生命，以坚韧不拔的人之常情感动了世界。

at the time of crisis, the prime minister of the republic stood on the ruins to comfort the grieving people to "live well" and pass on their common feelings to the extreme; at the moment of disaster, the army's children and soldiers were ordered to challenge the limits of their pay and bear, inspiring the determination of "there is hope in life", and sublimating their common feelings to faith; the strong chinese who suffered bitterly and were unwilling to be manipulated by fate were brave fearless, cherish the life of "still alive", and move the world with perseverance.

因为能够“活了下来”，在强悍的自然面前，人们以超然的姿态表现出悲伤而不愤怒，痛苦而不压抑，无奈而不绝望的冷静，让一个最普通的人之常情——“活着真好”，闪耀出人性的纯真与坚强。从生存的特殊时期悟出“活着”的生命意义，得以重拾起生活的初衷，痛悔往日的红尘喧嚣给我们的污染，仿佛一个昼夜就让我们站到了成人行列。

because we can "survive", in front of the fierce nature, people show sadness without anger, pain without depression, helplessness without despair, calm, let the most common human sentiment - "it's good to live", shine the innocence and firmness of human nature. from the special period of existence, we can realize the meaning of "living", pick up the original intention of life, and regret the pollution caused by the noise of the past, as if a day and night makes us stand in the ranks of adults.

曾经计较过那么多的不情愿，让自己生活在患得患失的怨恨中，因为出身卑微，花十二分的努力才达到他人三分工夫所达到的境地；因为长相平平，尽管心地善良却总得不到异性的青睐……如果不是这场灾难的降临，我可能会终生徘徊在这人生阴影中，因为我不懂“活着真好”这份人之常情的真正含义。

i used to care about so much unwillingness and let myself live in the resentment of worrying about gain and loss. because i was born in a humble family, it took 12 points of hard work to reach the position that others had achieved in three hours. because i was plain in appearance, although i was kind-hearted, i couldn't always get the favor of the opposite sex if it wasn't for this disaster, i would probably linger in the shadow of my life all my life, because i don't understand the real meaning of "it's good to live".

人之常情最能创造奇迹的原来是“活着真好”！

it's true that "it's good to live" is the most miraculous thing in human nature!

“活着”的信仰已不是满足肉体的衣食所需、物欲享受，而是战胜悲哀，走出落寂的挑战。

the belief of "living" is not to meet the needs of the body for food and clothing, but to overcome sorrow and get out of the challenge of silence.

生活路途不会一帆风顺，荆棘与风雨摧残着我们的躯体和意志，金钱和利益侵吞着我们的灵魂和情感，背负着太多的期待，已经举步维艰，未老先衰了。“感谢”苍天给了我一个认识自己的机会，洗刷了内心的污垢和情感的杂锈，明白了真善美的源头出处。

the road of life will not be smooth, thorns and wind and rain destroy our body and will, money and interests encroach on our soul and emotion, bear too much expectation, have been struggling, not old. "thank you" heaven gave me an opportunity to know myself, to wash away the inner dirt and emotional rust, and to understand the source of truth, goodness and beauty.

“活着真好！”给了人生一次重新再来的豪情。“艰难困苦，玉汝于成”，功名利禄不过是南柯一梦，荣华富贵亦是镜花水月，曾经斤斤计较的东西竟然是那般虚幻而浅薄。抹去羞愧的泪水，睁大不再迷茫的双眸，给自己加油：“活出一个新的自我！”

"it's good to live!" it gives life a chance to come back. "hard work and hardship make you a success". fame and wealth are just a dream. prosperity is also a mirror image. the things that used to be fussy are unreal and shallow. wipe away the tears of shame, open the eyes that are no longer confused, and cheer yourself up: "live a new self!"

懂得了自尊，学会了坚强，拥有了信念，活出能震撼世态常情的人生。

know self-esteem, learn to be strong, have faith, live a life that can shake the world.

“好好”地活着，你相信我吗？

do you believe me to live "well"？

【名师点评】

[comments on famous teachers]

本文在选材上很值得借鉴。汶川地震灾难之后写情感，多数会引人重新陷入还未摆脱哀伤的圈中，反而会使选材过于集中，而忽视文中其他亮色。但此文作者非常机智，既以“5·12”地震为题材，又选取其他题材，将二者紧密结合在一起，使文章既具时代特色又不至于过分集中到某个题材上，造成考场上选材的撞车。

this paper is worth learning in material selection. after the wenchuan earthquake, writing emotions, most of them will lead people to fall back into the circle of sadness, but will make the selection too concentrated, and ignore other bright colors in the article. however, the author of this article is very witty, not only taking the "may 12" earthquake as the theme, but also selecting other themes, combining them closely, which makes the article not only have the characteristics of the times, but also not too much focus on a theme, resulting in the collision of materials in the examination room.

文章以排比段开头，以“5·12”地震为题材，将人之常情与“活着真好”连接起来，引出话题，又扣住了题目，给文章写作定了位，将抽象的题目具体化。主体部分，采用层层深入的方式揭示“活着真好”的内涵：先写非常时期悟出“活着”的生命意义，再写平常时期自己不能懂得“活着真好”这份人之常情的真正涵义，形成对比，揭示“活着真好”的涵义；在此基础上，作者进一步指出“活着”的信仰已不是满足肉体的衣食所需、物欲享受，而是战胜悲哀，走出落寂的挑战，上升到哲理、人生探求，使文章主题深刻、高远。结尾问中有答的余味又为文章增添了一笔精彩，把成熟之后的思考表现为将付诸行动的誓言，尤其是“好好地”寓意深刻。(李广元)

the article begins with a line-up section and takes the "may 12" earthquake as the theme. it connects human feelings with "it's nice to be alive". it leads to the topic, and then holds the topic, sets the position for the writing of the article, and concretizes the abstract topic. in the main part, the author reveals the meaning of "it's good to live" in an in-depth way: first, write the meaning of "it's good to live" in an extraordinary period, and then write the real meaning of "it's good to live" that you can't understand in an ordinary period, form a contrast, and reveal the meaning of "it's good to live". on this basis, the author further points out that the belief of "living" is not satisfied the physical needs for food and clothing, material desire to enjoy, but to overcome sorrow, out of the challenge of silence, rise to philosophy, life exploration, so that the theme of the article is profound, high. the aftertaste of the answer in the closing question adds a wonderful touch to the article, which shows the mature thinking as the oath to put it into action, especially the profound meaning of "well". (li guangyuan)