My Hobby_1000字
i have many habits, but today i would like to share one of my habits to all of you. i like raising fish. one of my most important thing is feeding fish. every morning after i get up i usually go feeding my fish. first, i open a big box. next i open a small bottle in the box. then i open the bottle and take out a spoon of fish food and give the fish. after feeding one tank, i feed the other tank. i cannot feed too much or too less so fish won't be uncomfortable. another important thing is to change the water for fish. i usually change the water for fish once a week so that they will not get sick. sometimes my fish jumps out of the fish tank, so i have to use a net to catch them! i usually use the dirty water to water my plants because i can save water. it is good to our environment. that is my habit-- raising fish. it brings me much happiness. for example, my only koi fish, susie, is my lucky fish. it accompanies me for near four years! i love susie, i love my habit-- raising fish. can you tell me yours?
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i have many hobbies, but today i would like to share one of my hobbies with all of you.
i like raising fish. one of my most important thing is feeding fish. every morning i usually go feeding my fish after i get up. i cannot feed too much or too little so fish won't be uncomfortable. another important thing is to change the water for fish. i usually change the water once a week so that they will not get sick. and i usually use the dirty water to water my plants because i can save water. it is good to our environment. sometimes my fish jumps out of the fish tank, so i have to use a net to catch them!
that is my hobby-- raising fish. it brings me much happiness. for example, my only koi fish, susie, is my lucky fish. it has accompanied me for near four years! i love my raising fish. how about your hobby? can you tell me yours?
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