彼岸，灯火阑珊

彼岸，秦桑低绿枝，燕草碧如丝。或可满载一船秋色，平铺十里湖光，看那水面清圆，一一风荷举，闭上眼睛，便可小揖轻舟，梦入芙蓉浦。

on the other side, qinsang has low green branches and swallows are as green as silk. or can be loaded with a boat autumn, flat ten miles of lake light, see that the surface of the water is clear and round, 11 wind and lotus lift, close your eyes, you can small bow to the boat, dream into lotus pu.

昌黎先生曰：“天街小雨润如酥，草色遥看近却无。”所以，朋友们，就让这一切在脑海中联翩，请不要试图去登上彼岸，因为：美啊，是距离成就了你。

mr. changli said: "the sky street dries like crispy rain, but the grass color is not near from afar." so, my friends, let all of this come together in your mind. please don't try to get on the other side, because: beauty, distance makes you.

美国阿拉斯加州有一个叫杰普的小镇，旅游业十分繁荣，该镇只有一个景点，就是一个湖心小岛。它的参观方式十分奇特：“游人只准站在岸边眺望，而不可以登岛旅游。”远远望去，小岛笼罩在一片紫霞中，风吹过，舞起万千藤萝，美极了，让不少游客流连忘返。其实，那只是一座荒芜的小岛，上面长满了野生植物。美国人用距离造就了它的美丽。

there is a small town called jep in alaska, the united states. the tourism industry is very prosperous. there is only one scenic spot in the town, which is an island in the middle of a lake. its way of visiting is very strange: "visitors are only allowed to stand on the shore and look out, not to visit the island." looking from afar, the island is shrouded in a purple haze. the wind blows and thousands of vines dance. it's so beautiful that many tourists forget to return. in fact, it's just a deserted island full of wild plants. americans make it beautiful by distance.

其实美国人如此，我们中国人又何尝不知晓此理呢？

in fact, this is the case in america. why don't we chinese know this？

“中庭月色正清明，无数杨花过影”，那张先亦知晓落花须有月色的距离方显隐约之美。“疏影横斜水清浅，暗香浮动月黄昏”，那林和靖亦明白透着黄昏才可欣赏的朦胧之美。“合掌白莲花未开，隔岸杨柳月如霜”，便是那含蓄之美亦须隔着婵娟才越显婉约。

"the moon in the atrium is clear and bright, and countless poplars have seen shadows." that picture also knew that the falling flowers must have the distance of the moon to show the faint beauty. "the shadows are slanting, the water is clear, and the fragrance is floating on the moon at dusk." lin and jing also understand the hazy beauty that can only be appreciated at dusk. "when the white lotus flower is not opened, the willows and willows are like frost on the other side", it is the implicit beauty that must be more graceful and graceful through the chan.

彼岸，永远灯火阑珊。

on the other side, the lights are always dim.

可如果我们试图登上彼岸呢？

but what if we try to get on the other side？

两只相爱的刺猬想要走得更近去欣赏对方，结果却被彼此身上的刺扎得伤痕累累。当距离消减的时候，美也随之消减了。

two love hedgehogs want to go closer to appreciate each other, but they are hurt by each other's thorns. when distance decreases, so does beauty.

耶稣得道以后，回乡布道。许多人都从四面八方赶来，成为他忠实的信徒。人们都把他当做高高在上的神之子。可后来有人认出他是木匠的儿子后，众门徒一哄而散。因为失去了距离屏障，人们对美的敬畏也就荡然无存了。

when jesus got the word, he went back to preach. many people came from all directions to become his faithful followers. people regard him as the son of god. but when it was later recognized that he was the son of a carpenter, all the disciples fled. because of the loss of the distance barrier, people's awe of beauty is gone.

现今有不少人在考据蒙娜丽莎的原型。可我想问，如果人们知道了原型，那蒙娜丽莎的微笑还那么迷人吗？如果人们知道了断臂之因，维纳斯还那么流行吗？如果人们知道了一切，楼兰古国还那么美妙吗？

nowadays, many people are studying the prototype of mona lisa. but i want to ask, if people know the prototype, is mona lisa's smile so charming？ if people know the cause of the broken arm, is venus still so popular？ if people know everything, is loulan so beautiful？

美啊，是距离造就了你。彼岸，灯火阑珊。

beauty, it's distance that makes you. on the other side, the lights are dim.

【名师点评】

[comments on famous teachers]

考生都知道，著名学者王国维在高中课文《人间词话》中论述了治学的三种境界：“昨夜西风凋碧树，独上高楼，望尽天涯路”，此为第一种境界；“衣带渐宽终不悔，为伊消得人憔悴”，此为第二种境界；“众里寻他千百度，蓦然回首，那人却在，灯火阑珊处”，此为第三种境界。文章以此为立意点，挖掘出了美得让人惊讶的思想与情感清泉。

candidates all know that wang guowei, a famous scholar, discussed three realms of scholarship in the high school text "the words of mortal ci": "last night, the west wind withered the green trees, went to the high buildings alone, and looked at the end of the world road", which is the first realm; "the dress belt gradually widened and never regretted, so that people were haggard for iraq", which is the second realm; "when people look for him, suddenly look back, the man is in the place where the lights are dim." , this is the third state. based on this point, the article digs out the surprising spring of thought and emotion.

写作是灵感的闪现，是情感的抒发。若是为赋新词强说愁，再美的文字也会黯淡无光；只有情动于心，方可笔墨动人。作者将“蓦然回首，那人却在，灯火阑珊处”作为立意触发点，以“彼岸，灯火阑珊”为题，并围绕这一话题逐渐展开，立意高远，角度不俗。不管是古今中外的诗词典故，还是物种人情，考生均是意到笔随，信手拈来。开篇以画入境，颇得诗词古韵；中间连引诗词为证，语言美不胜收，观点入木三分；荒岛景观、刺猬相爱及蒙娜丽莎故事，或庄或谐，妙趣横生。文章写得如此从容亮丽，令一般考生望尘莫及。(罗小军)

writing is the flash of inspiration and the expression of emotion. if we are forced to say sorrow for fu xinci, no matter how beautiful the words are, they will be dim; only when the feelings move in the heart, can the writing be moving. the author takes "suddenly looking back, the person is there, and the lights are dim" as the trigger point of his intention, and takes "the other side, the lights are dim" as the title, and gradually unfolds around this topic, with a high intention and a good angle. whether it's ancient and modern chinese and foreign poetry allusions, or species and human feelings, the candidates are all ready to follow the pen. at the beginning of the article, paintings are introduced into the country, which is quite ancient; the middle part is even cited poems as evidence, the language is beautiful, and the point of view is three-dimensional; desert island landscape, hedgehog love and mona lisa story, or zhuang or harmonic, are full of fun. the article is so leisurely and bright that ordinary examinees can't catch up with it. (luo xiaojun)