高考英语满分作文:2020年浙江卷2

2020年浙江卷

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Onefall，my wifeElliand I had a single goal:tophotographpolar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capitalof the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba，Canada.

Takingpicturesof polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-likeall wild animals-should be photographed from asafedistance. When I'mface to face with a polar bear，Ilike it to be through acamerawith a telephoto lens. But sometimes，thatis easier said than done. This was one of those times.

AsElli and I cooked dinner，ayoung male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed，andsmelled our garlicbread.

Thehungry bear followed his nose to our camp，whichwas surrounded by a high wirefence. He pulled and bit the wire. Hestood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.

Terrified，Elliand I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear，hitpots hard，and fired blank shotgunshells into the air. Sometimes loudnoiseslike these will scare bearsoff. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence withhis massive paws(爪子).

Iradioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way，butit would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this closeencounter(相遇)，Itook some pictures of the bear.

Elliand I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear'spunishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepperspray. The sprayburns the bears' eyes，but doesn't hurt them. So Iapproached our uninvited guest slowly and，throughthe fence，sprayed him in the face. Withan angry roar(吼叫)，thebearranto the lake to wash his eyes.

有一年秋天，我和妻子艾莉只有一个目标:拍摄北极熊。

我们当时住在“世界北极熊之都”——加拿大马尼托巴省丘吉尔镇外的一个研究营地里。

给北极熊拍照是令人惊奇的，但也是危险的。

北极熊——像所有的野生动物一样——应该在安全距离外拍摄。

当我和北极熊面对面的时候，我喜欢通过一个带长焦镜头的相机。

但有时，说起来容易做起来难。

这就是其中之一。

我和艾莉做饭时，一只在附近湖里玩耍的年轻雄性北极熊闻了闻我们的大蒜面包。

这只饥饿的熊跟着鼻子来到了我们的营地，营地四周有高高的铁丝围栏。

他咬了咬电线。

他用后腿站立，推着篱笆的木桩。

我和艾莉吓坏了，用尽了我们知道的所有熊的防御手段。

我们对着熊大喊大叫，狠狠地打了几枪，还向空中发射了空弹。

有时像这样的噪音会把熊吓跑。

不是这只北极熊虽然他一直试图拆除篱笆和他巨大的爪子爪(子)。

我用无线电向营地经理寻求帮助。

他告诉我一架直升机已经在路上了，但还要30分钟才能到。

做最好的亲密接触(相遇),我拍了一些照片。

艾莉和我担心围栏撑不过熊惩罚的30分钟。

营地经理建议我用胡椒喷雾。

喷雾剂会灼伤熊的眼睛，但不会伤害它们。

于是我慢慢走近这位不速之客，穿过栅栏，朝他脸上喷了一枪。

与愤怒的吼吼叫),熊跑到湖洗他的眼睛。

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One possible version:

Para 1:

A few minutes later, the bear headed back toour camp. Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more, forhe seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. Myheart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elligrabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. Itworked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread. But it wasn't longbefore he ate up all the bread and cameback again.

Para 2:

At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.“Thank goodness we are saved!" EIli cried out. Once the helicopter landed,we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on thehelicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torndown the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out thecamera and photographed the rare scene - we were robbed by a polar bear! (续写 词数: 153)

一个可能的版本:

帕拉1:

几分钟后，这只熊回到了我们的营地。

然后我们意识到，浪花只会让它更加愤怒，因为这次它看起来更凶猛了，像疯了一样猛烈地推着栅栏。

我的心狂跳着，不知道该怎么办。

在这个关键时刻，艾莉抓起几片蒜蓉面包扔过了栅栏。

它工作!

熊停止了攻击，跑向面包。

但是没过多久他就把所有的面包都吃光了，又回来了。

Para2:

就在那时，直升机赶到了。

“谢天谢地，我们得救了!”

EIli喊道。

直升飞机一着陆，我们马上就上了飞机，既兴奋又放心。

当我们安全的坐在直升飞机上时，我惊讶地发现熊终于撕毁了围栏，向我们留下的食物跑去。

我迅速拿出相机，拍下了罕见的一幕——我们被一只北极熊抢劫了!