My school_550字
i have a large school.it is on my hometown. it is very beatuiful. there are many flowers , trees and grass there. there is a plastic track,too. i'm in class 3 ,grade 6.the one grade has three class in my school.there are seven lessons every day.we must get up at 5:30,because our school bus come here at 6:30.we get to school probably at 6:55.we class begin at 7:50.we eat lunch at school at 12:00. at 3:30,school is over.so we go home very early.after school,i do my homework at home.some times,i play football with my friends.we are all very happy. this is my school!
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my school is big and beautiful. it is in my hometown. there are many flowers, trees and grass there. there is a track on the playground, too. i'm in class 3, grade 6. in my school, every grade has three classes. there are seven lessons every day. we must get up at 5:30, because our school bus comes at 6:30. we get to school probably at 6:55. our class begins at 7:50. we eat lunch at school at 12:00. we finish school at 3:30. so we go home very early. after school, i do my homework at home. sometimes, i play football with my friends. we are all very happy. this is my school!
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