《童年趣事》
我的童年是五彩缤纷的,在我的童年里流淌着纯真和甜美,总会使人产生难以忘怀的回忆。
my childhood is colorful, flowing with innocence and sweetness in my childhood, always making people have unforgettable memories.
记得在我5岁的时候,一个春光明媚的星期天,我正在房间里自由自在地玩耍着.忽然,从大厅传来一阵“嗡嗡嗡”的响声,我闻声赶过来,只见爸爸坐 在沙发上,架起二郎腿,手里拿着一件奇形怪状的东西在剃胡子,我睁大眼睛,迷惑不解地问爸爸:“爸爸,这是啥东西?”“噢,你问这个是吧?这是专门帮爸爸 剃胡子的小助手!”话音刚落,爸爸又眉开眼笑地剃着胡子,那样子真让人羡慕。我呆呆地站在那儿,若有所思.
i remember when i was 5 years old, on a sunny spring sunday, i was playing freely in my room. suddenly, there was a "buzzing" noise from the hall, i heard it and rushed to my father's seat on the sofa, i set up my legs, and i was shaving with a strange thing in my hand. i opened my eyes wide and asked my father in bewilderment, "dad, what is this?" "oh, you ask that, don't you? this is a little assistant who helps dad shave! " as soon as the voice came down, dad shaved his beard with a smile on his face, which was really enviable. i stood there in a daze, thinking
第二天早晨,我起床后,无意中发现我家的小白狗的嘴边长着几根长长的胡子,顿时我眼睛一亮:嗨,用爸爸的“超级武器”帮小狗整理一下“发型”。我为自己的 小聪明而手舞足蹈。说干就干,我环顾“四周”,觉得非常安全,我便采取了行动,我蹑手蹑脚来到爸爸房间。哈,不费吹灰之力就找到了那个怪东西,我又蹦又跳 的,甭提有多高兴了!来到院子,我抓起小白狗,不管三七二十一,三下两下就把小白狗的胡子剃得一干二净了。我看着自己的“杰作”非常开心,心想:爸妈回来 后,肯定会好好夸奖我一番的.更多:关于童年趣事的作文
the next morning, when i got up, i found that my little white dog had several long moustaches on his mouth. my eyes lit up: hey, use dad's "super weapon" to help the dog tidy up his "hair style". i'm dancing for my cleverness. say do it, i look around and think it's very safe, so i take action, i tiptoe to dad's room. ha, i found that strange thing without any effort. i jumped and jumped again and again. how happy i am! when i came to the yard, i picked up the little white dog. no matter what, i shaved his beard completely. looking at my "masterpiece", i was very happy, thinking: when my parents come back, i will definitely praise me. more: composition about interesting stories of childhood
夜幕降临,妈妈终于下班了,我嬉皮笑脸地向妈妈讲述了今天发生的事,妈妈听后,被我那天真的举动弄得哭笑不得,我真是丈二和尚—摸不着头脑。妈妈语重心长地对我说:“狗的胡子对它有极大的帮助,不能随便乱剪帮助。等你长大后,自己去查资料就会明白。”
when night fell, my mother finally got off work. i told my mother what happened today with a smile on my face. after listening to it, my mother was bewildered by my innocent actions. i was really the second in law monk - i couldn't understand. my mother said to me earnestly, "a dog's beard is of great help to him. you can't cut it casually.". when you grow up, you'll find out by yourself. "
随着岁月的流逝,这已是我心中一个曾让我细细回味的音符了。每当想起这件事,我总会捧腹大笑。这也是我心中布满欢乐的“日记”。
with the passage of time, this has been a note in my heart that i have been savoring. whenever i think about it, i always laugh. this is also my heart full of joy "diary".
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1.小作者向我们讲述了他童年时曾做过的一件荒唐事—在好奇心的驱使下,用“剃须刀”为小狗理了新发型,本是好意,怎知是违背规律办了错事。故事情节具体生动,结构完整。
1. the little author tells us about a ridiculous thing he did in his childhood. driven by curiosity, he used a "razor" to get a new hair style for the dog. it was a good idea, but how could he know that he did something wrong against the law. the plot is concrete and vivid with complete structure.
2.文章对人物神态及动作描写生动形象,对话符合人物身份。“我”0的心理活动也刻画的真实准确,将一个天真可爱的孩子形象生动地展现在我们面前。
2. the article describes the characters' expression and action vividly, and the dialogue conforms to the characters' identity. the psychological activities of "i" 0 are also true and accurate, which vividly displays a naive and lovely child in front of us.
3.语言自然流畅,条理清晰,充满生活气息。
3. the language is natural and fluent, clear and full of life atmosphere.